Five
Chapter 5 of 6
blue artemisSeventh Year, the final battle, and what does Molly think of all of this?
ReviewedSeventh year was a blur. The Horcruxes were found with help from Severus. Hermione had been able to convince Harry to tell him what was going on. They were lucky that they did so, because deep in the Malfoy library, Severus found a potion that would remove a Horcrux from a living being. He thought this would only be useful on Nagini if she did turn out to be a Horcrux and so put it out of his mind.
The basilisk venom was quite useful to destroy the Horcruxes. Severus was almost drooling when he saw the well-preserved carcass of the basilisk in the Chamber of Secrets. When Harry told him that he could have whatever he harvested, that destroyed any last pretense Severus had of Harry being anything like James Potter. The elder Potter would never have been so generous.
As they had decided, Hermione cast a spell over the Horcruxes to make sure that they had the correct items. The spell, as created by Severus and Hermione, would make any Horcrux glow with a purple light. They were horrified once they cast the spell to notice that Harry’s scar was also glowing. They were dismayed, almost unable to function with the pain of the thought that Harry would have to sacrifice himself, when Severus remembered the potion. They were able to brew the potion successfully, and Harry was no longer carrying a Horcrux.
They trained as well as they could, and when Voldemort finally attacked Hogwarts, all the older students, including those Slytherins who did not want to be associated with the Dark Lord, took their places.
When Voldemort saw Severus fighting with the students, against him, he targeted him almost immediately. Severus fell and was taken to the hospital wing. No one knew if he would live or die.
As distraught as Hermione and Harry were when Severus fell, they continued to fight. And when the chance came to kill Nagini, Neville managed it, with a garden hoe. And Ron saw this, and ran over with the potion to remove the Horcrux. He had just poured it over the snake when he was struck by a curse cast by Bellatrix. When Ron fell, Molly Weasley ran over and cast the Avada Kedavra at the insane witch. She then picked up her son and Apparated to the hospital wing.
By this point Severus was awake and asked how things were going.
“It is down to Harry and Voldemort,” Molly replied. “Ron was struck pouring the potion over Nagini.”
At that moment a great cheer went up. Molly rushed to the window and said: “Oh, thank Merlin. Harry is victorious!”
“And Hermione, Molly, can you see her?” Severus asked almost desperately.
“No, no, oh, yes, there she is. She looks bloody, but alive.” Molly turned to Severus and smiled. “You truly care for her, don’t you?”
“Yes, Molly I do. I realized back in her third year that she was exceptional. Each year, her courage and heart amazed me. Last year when we worked together, we became friends. I said nothing of further feelings this year, because so much was going on, but she has become everything to me.” Severus thought Molly would be disgusted by his confession.
“That is wonderful, Severus. I gave up on the idea of her and Ron after Lavender last year, but I was afraid she would just get lost in her books. I’m glad to see that you and she were able to find something deeper.” Molly declared this more cheerfully than one would have expected, but for all her faults, Molly had raised seven children quite well. She had to have a bit of realist in her.
Hermione had walked in during Severus’s statement. She walked over to his bed and asked him, “Did you mean it? Do I really mean that much to you?”
“Yes, love. Had you died out there, I would have gone, too. You mean the world to me.” Severus’s simple statement caused more than one heart to sigh.
Hermione bent down and kissed him as though nothing else in the world mattered. And you know what? Nothing really did.
Many, many thanks to Annie Talbot for the beta!
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Latest 25 Reviews for Professor Lupin is a What?
40 Reviews | 6.08/10 Average
It's absolutely wonderful. Exactly all I love in a perfect SSHG world.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
This was my wishful thinking story. Thank you!
Awwwww! I'm sighing too. *curling toe* I adore it.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
It's so cute of him to comfort her. *smile*
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Very sweet. I know everyone who noticed really saw how much he thought of her. Thank you!
That girl has ever been very clever. And not one to mess up with.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Not at all, and it certainly has made Severus pay attention. Thanks for reviewing!
While cleaning up my mail box I discovered that I forget to read this. And as ever I do something like that (not the first time unfortunately) I deeply regret my lack of organisation.Thank you for being such a wonderful writter.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thanks, sweetie! I was wondering what had happened.
I've really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
Aw, that last line was beautiful!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
And that's why essay-writing skills are extremely important! You never know what doors they will open for you... Thanks for not only giving Hermione and Severus their happy ending, but also for keeping other important people alive like Remus and Sirius! Very satisfying indeed.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thanks for sticking with me!
I've killed a snake or two with a garden hoe myself! But they were very little snakes compared to Nagini... I can just see it now, a giant statue of Neville Longbottom standing tall and defiant over the decapitated form of Nagini, a garden hoe in his hand like a spear! Can't wait to see how things go in the aftermath for Severus and Hermione.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thanks for the review. I've always thought Neville could be heroic even without the Sword of Gryffindor.
Awww. that's so sweet. I've enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
Neville killed Nagini with a garden hoe! Loved that!I also appreciated some of the Slytherins staying to fight and not slythering away like cowards.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Yes, I can't believe ALL the Slytherins would be cowards. And doesn't Neville have a hoe more often than a sword? Thanks for the reviews!
I'm confused by this sentance - "Dumbledore wanted potions to help keep the Death Eaters on their guard while fighting, some for strength, some for mental acuity." Don't you mean the Order members? I mean why brew strenght and mental acutiy potins for the enemy? WOuldn't the Order members be using the potions?And I love the fact Severus was comforting Hermione at the funeral and that Dumbeldore died from his cursed hand - not from being killed.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
I meant that the Death Eaters would be on their guard because the potions were for the Order. I guess the sentence was a bit confusing. Yes, I am writing my wishes with this story.
Glad she heard him. He'd have probably never told her otherwise.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Probably not. But since she did... Thanks for the review!
What a concept... having Dumbles die from complications of the curse. A much better outcome, especially with Hermione letting herself grieve in Severus' arms. I don't quite get the last line, though. Does that mean he's going to start a relationship with her, or is he comparing his relationship with her to a past time? Sorry, I hope I didn't miss something blatantly obvious. it's late and I'm tired. I did enjoy this better version of book six.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
He's been trying to stay professional because she was too young. She is now 17, so in his mind, they can start a friendship with a possibility for more. She is still a student, but he doesn't have to study her from afar. (I said a whole lot with one little ambiguous line, didn't I?)Thanks for the review!
I like this ending to book 6 better.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Me too! Thanks for the review!
was that the end?
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
No. Chapter 5 and an Epilogue are in queue. Thanks for asking!
This is SWEET. Thank you for letting the curse kill Dumbledore.Fizzabella
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
LOL:0 I can picture Hufflepuffs scurrying off like the Hedgehogs in "Alice in Wonderland"! What a wonderful image your words have conjured up:)Not that I have anything against Hufflepuffs or anything:) I'm sure they're lovely people, but your words made me giggle:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thanks, Bella! I think Hufflepuffs are lovely people, also, but really, the images are funny.
I'm so glad that in this version of things, Severus never had to give the appearance of betraying everyone by killing Dumbledore. With the Order all working together as one, I'm sure that victory will be assured in any event.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
No, I wanted Severus to be able to be his own man, and killing Dumbledore would totally ruin that. Thank you for your review!
I like the story; however, shouldn't it be that Dumbledore wanted the Order to be on the guard and not the Death Eaters? Why would he want potions for mental acquity for the Death Eaters? Maybe I read the sentence wrong?? Otherwise great story!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
I re-read that sentence and I see how you could take it. The brewing was entirely for the Order, to keep the Death Eaters on their toes by improving the acuity, strength and wily-ness of the Order. Thanks for the review!
Ah, what a different picture you paint. I like your picture. It's beautiful. Too bad JKR didn't see it that way.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you! This is definitely my wishful thinking story.
huumm different as it didn't have much interaction with Severus and Hermione, but I'm looking forward to more.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
Nice, way too short, really enjoyed it
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
This was one of the first things I ever wrote. Apparently, I think in drabbles.
Ahhh very intreguing :)
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
I'm intregued and looking forward to the next chapter. Nice start!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thanks! As soon as I get the chapters back from the beta, I will put them up.