Three
Chapter 3 of 6
blue artemisFifth year brings even more things to consider.
ReviewedHermione ran back to the castle after leading Madame Umbridge out to the centaurs. She was hoping that they had put the fear of God or Merlin into her. She was such a horrible woman after all, causing all that pain and hardship. And poor Harry's hand. Hermione wanted to ask Professor McGonagall what she knew of the Blood Quill. After all, Harry was ready to go haring off after Sirius, and no one was sure what was going on.
When she returned to the castle, Harry was talking to Kreacher on the Floo. Hermione happened to see his face when he told Harry that Sirius was gone.
"Harry, he's lying. Look at him!" Hermione exclaimed.
"Are you?" Harry demanded. "Are you lying?"
"Like Kreacher would tell the truth to the half-blood. Or would he?" Kreacher cackled to himself.
At this Sirius was roused from his drinking to find out what the noise was. "Harry, what is going on?" Sirius was worried.
"Oh, you are okay. That is wonderful. Voldemort gave me a fake vision. I thought it was real, like the one of Mr. Weasley." Harry was relieved.
They settled that Harry would stay in the school and Sirius would contact Dumbledore.
Harry, Hermione, Ron, Ginny, Neville and Luna were all talking in the Gryffindor Common Room. No one was sure how Luna managed to be there, but they chalked it up to her being Luna.
Professor McGonagall walked in to speak to them. "Well done, children. Dumbledore was able to prevent Voldemort from gaining access to what he was looking for, and no one was injured. I'm glad you did not go off on your own!"
"Professor, did you know that Madame Umbridge was using a Blood Quill for her detentions?" Hermione demanded of her Head of House.
"WHAT?!?" McGonagall was horrified. "Why didn't you tell me, Mr. Potter?"
"Why would I? You told me to keep my head down, Ma'am. There was no reason to tell you." Harry replied so matter-of-factly that Minerva's heart broke.
"You poor child. I've failed you, haven't I?" Minerva McGonagall quickly recovered her composure then turned to the room at large. She pointed to her throat and said Sonorus. She then called all of Gryffindor House down to the Common Room.
She found the other students with scarred hands, then ran off to speak to the Ministry. She wasn't letting Albus get in her way. Due to her diligence, Madame Umbridge was put to trial before the entire Wizengamot for her torture of the students.
After they questioned her under Veritaserum, Umbridge not only admitted to using the Blood Quill, supposedly under Ministry sanction, but to setting the Dementors on Harry Potter during the previous summer. Cornelius Fudge, seeing that he was really going to be under fire for this, tried to mitigate the damage by asking for the harshest sentence.
After all of this, the professors were all grouped around the headmaster when Severus Snape noticed Potter, the two youngest Weasleys, Granger, Longbottom and Lovegood all huddled together. Hermione (when did he start thinking of her like that?) was laughing and gesturing, apparently amusing the others.
Severus turned back to the headmaster just in time to hear, "...and without Miss Granger's question, we would never have been able to get rid of Madame Umbridge so decisively. She was also quite ingenious in her method of getting her out to the Centaurs."
Severus thought to himself that Hermione was also quite ruthless. He rather admired her for it. He smiled to himself, although it must have showed on his face in a quirk of his lip because it resulted in a couple of frightened Hufflepuffs.
Many thanks to Annie Talbot for the beta!
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Latest 25 Reviews for Professor Lupin is a What?
40 Reviews | 6.08/10 Average
It's absolutely wonderful. Exactly all I love in a perfect SSHG world.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
This was my wishful thinking story. Thank you!
Awwwww! I'm sighing too. *curling toe* I adore it.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
It's so cute of him to comfort her. *smile*
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Very sweet. I know everyone who noticed really saw how much he thought of her. Thank you!
That girl has ever been very clever. And not one to mess up with.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Not at all, and it certainly has made Severus pay attention. Thanks for reviewing!
While cleaning up my mail box I discovered that I forget to read this. And as ever I do something like that (not the first time unfortunately) I deeply regret my lack of organisation.Thank you for being such a wonderful writter.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thanks, sweetie! I was wondering what had happened.
I've really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
Aw, that last line was beautiful!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
And that's why essay-writing skills are extremely important! You never know what doors they will open for you... Thanks for not only giving Hermione and Severus their happy ending, but also for keeping other important people alive like Remus and Sirius! Very satisfying indeed.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thanks for sticking with me!
I've killed a snake or two with a garden hoe myself! But they were very little snakes compared to Nagini... I can just see it now, a giant statue of Neville Longbottom standing tall and defiant over the decapitated form of Nagini, a garden hoe in his hand like a spear! Can't wait to see how things go in the aftermath for Severus and Hermione.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thanks for the review. I've always thought Neville could be heroic even without the Sword of Gryffindor.
Awww. that's so sweet. I've enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
Neville killed Nagini with a garden hoe! Loved that!I also appreciated some of the Slytherins staying to fight and not slythering away like cowards.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Yes, I can't believe ALL the Slytherins would be cowards. And doesn't Neville have a hoe more often than a sword? Thanks for the reviews!
I'm confused by this sentance - "Dumbledore wanted potions to help keep the Death Eaters on their guard while fighting, some for strength, some for mental acuity." Don't you mean the Order members? I mean why brew strenght and mental acutiy potins for the enemy? WOuldn't the Order members be using the potions?And I love the fact Severus was comforting Hermione at the funeral and that Dumbeldore died from his cursed hand - not from being killed.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
I meant that the Death Eaters would be on their guard because the potions were for the Order. I guess the sentence was a bit confusing. Yes, I am writing my wishes with this story.
Glad she heard him. He'd have probably never told her otherwise.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Probably not. But since she did... Thanks for the review!
What a concept... having Dumbles die from complications of the curse. A much better outcome, especially with Hermione letting herself grieve in Severus' arms. I don't quite get the last line, though. Does that mean he's going to start a relationship with her, or is he comparing his relationship with her to a past time? Sorry, I hope I didn't miss something blatantly obvious. it's late and I'm tired. I did enjoy this better version of book six.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
He's been trying to stay professional because she was too young. She is now 17, so in his mind, they can start a friendship with a possibility for more. She is still a student, but he doesn't have to study her from afar. (I said a whole lot with one little ambiguous line, didn't I?)Thanks for the review!
I like this ending to book 6 better.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Me too! Thanks for the review!
was that the end?
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
No. Chapter 5 and an Epilogue are in queue. Thanks for asking!
This is SWEET. Thank you for letting the curse kill Dumbledore.Fizzabella
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
LOL:0 I can picture Hufflepuffs scurrying off like the Hedgehogs in "Alice in Wonderland"! What a wonderful image your words have conjured up:)Not that I have anything against Hufflepuffs or anything:) I'm sure they're lovely people, but your words made me giggle:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thanks, Bella! I think Hufflepuffs are lovely people, also, but really, the images are funny.
I'm so glad that in this version of things, Severus never had to give the appearance of betraying everyone by killing Dumbledore. With the Order all working together as one, I'm sure that victory will be assured in any event.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
No, I wanted Severus to be able to be his own man, and killing Dumbledore would totally ruin that. Thank you for your review!
I like the story; however, shouldn't it be that Dumbledore wanted the Order to be on the guard and not the Death Eaters? Why would he want potions for mental acquity for the Death Eaters? Maybe I read the sentence wrong?? Otherwise great story!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
I re-read that sentence and I see how you could take it. The brewing was entirely for the Order, to keep the Death Eaters on their toes by improving the acuity, strength and wily-ness of the Order. Thanks for the review!
Ah, what a different picture you paint. I like your picture. It's beautiful. Too bad JKR didn't see it that way.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you! This is definitely my wishful thinking story.
huumm different as it didn't have much interaction with Severus and Hermione, but I'm looking forward to more.
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
Nice, way too short, really enjoyed it
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
This was one of the first things I ever wrote. Apparently, I think in drabbles.
Ahhh very intreguing :)
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thank you!
I'm intregued and looking forward to the next chapter. Nice start!
Response from blue artemis (Author of Professor Lupin is a What?)
Thanks! As soon as I get the chapters back from the beta, I will put them up.