Amending Time
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Albus Severus Potter goes back in time to save two lives and ultimately bring them together.
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I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.
I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.
Reviews for Amending Time
I want Albus Severus to rewrite book 7 :) Good story, thank you!
Response from raj (Reviewer)
...even if it's been abandoned, it's still good!
I never gave much thought to Harry's children before, and I suddenly feel as though previously undiscovered chapters of Harry Potter have been unearthed for a select few. :D Wonderful first chapter; I can't wait to read more!
nooooo, please continue!
Anonymous
Can't wait for the rest. :D
Author's Response: :) There'll be another installment up soon.
Anonymous
I mean, not that I ever thought Severus died that night. But good story, I really enjoy reading this.
Author's Response: Severus would have had a back up plan for that night. I mean, come on. He's a Potions master for heaven's sake. I still can't believe JKR expected us to believe he died.
I'm pleased that you think this is a good story and that you're enjoying it.
Anonymous
Yay Albus Potter. I like this kid, he's pretty resourceful. Plus he hates Albus, and that's always a plus with me.
Author's Response:
Albus Severus sees Dumbledore for who he was, and he dislikes him for all those he used.
Ahhhhh... all the pieces of Albus Severus' plan are now in place, and I can't wait to see how this story plays out!Having him use a Pensieve to show Hermione what she could look forward to if she married Ron was a brilliant way to gain her trust in what he had told her. It is she who returns to the Shrieking Shack to find Severus alive and get him to the hospital.I'm looking forward to the next chapter.Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Yes, now he just has to wait for them to listen and for his plans to play out. I thought the way Albus Severus's looks along with the Pensieve would help Hermione to see that he didn't mean any harm and that she could trust him.
Yey! Severus has survived Nagini's attack! I really like the way you turned canon on it ear, and I like this one much better!!!Bella was her usual bitchy self, always jealous of Severus and willing to seize any opportunity to focus the Dark Lord's displeasure on him.We don't yet know who came back to see if Severus had survived, but I'm thinking it has to be Hermione. I'm hoping anyway.Another great chapter!Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
I couldn't not let Severus survive that snake attack - it just wouldn't be right. After all, Arthur survived. Bella couldn't stand that Severus was higher in Voldemort's regard than she, and she had to find a way to bring the attention upon herself.
This is a great first chapter, and I'm enthralled with the concept. I love Time-Turner stories so I can't wait to read more! Well done.Only one question: how old is Albus Severus Potter when he goes back in time to let Severus know that he can help him?Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thank you. Albus Severus is right about 16 when he goes back in time.
Another good chapter. I can't wait for the next one! :) Very good story.
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Aww, thanks! I'll try to have another up soon.
I know Albus did a lot of research before going back in time to correct the wrongs, but how sure is he that he is not making a big mistake. Rose and Hugo will no longer exist (not that Hermione deserves to be tied to an intelectually inferior man), and there is the possibility of what Hermione and Severus' future children could do. It boggles the mind!
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
He's fairly sure that repairing two wrongs won't cause too much damage. Even if he wasn't, he would have still taken the chance to save Severus.If Hermione and Severus ever did have children, they would be powerful and exceptionally intelligent.
~dun dun dun~ :) Yay! Moving on now to the next...
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
:) I'm glad you're enjoying it.
What a great start and quite original. Thanks so much for posting this! :) ~goes to next~
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thanks!
A very intriguing story so far.How did it come to pass that Bella was present in the forrest of Dean and recognised Snape's Patronus?So Albus Severus is a potion's progidy. Interesting. And one with a good heart full of courage, to boot.I'm lookinh forward to the next update.
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
In my mind, Bella was out hunting for the trio and just happened to see Severus's Patronus. She could have gone directly to the Dark Lord, but it suited her goal to wait to tell him.
I very much like that Albus Severus feel closer to the man that is his middle name more than the man he was named after. And it makes it interesting that he enjoys Potions. It seems he grew up idolizing the man most other people disliked. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thanks. I like to think Albus Severus understood all of what Severus had to do, which explains why he thought so highly of him.
This looks great and I am excited to see what happens next! More please!
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
I'm glad you're enjoying this tale.
Hey there! This is such a great start! I can't wait to see where this is going! I love how bold young Albus was when confronting his namesake, and the idea that he's really into potions is awesome! Please update again soon. Much Love ~Brena
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thank you! Albus Severus had sort of a score to settle since viewing the memories from his father's pensieve, and he wasn't the least bit afraid to say what he needed --a trait I loosely base off of one I have. As for Albus's obvious talent and desire to work with potions, I thought it'd be nice to have him take after his other namesake, Severus.
Interesting twist of canon you've given us. I like this reasoning much better actually. Dying over a wand seemed a bit insane to me. Will Albus save Fred now?
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
You're right, dying over a wand was pretty stupid... it can't possibly be a real reason to kill someone, especially since Voldie already had his suspicions about Severus to begin with, at least that's what JKR led us to believe.
Well, finally someone decided to fix that wrong! Interesting start.
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thank you. I think it means more for Albus Severus to change things because he's Harry's son, and Harry was too late in his own time to do anything about Sev's death.
This is really fascinating. I love the idea of Albus Severus telling Dumbledore off.
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thank you! I loved the idea of having someone from the next gen calling Dumbledore on his manipulative behaviour.
She cared enough to go back and find him! Will he remember this as a kindness, or will he dismiss it as just another Gryffindor trait? Excellent update. :D
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thanks! You'll find out in the coming chapters as to what his reaction will be on the the person who took him to the hospital.
So has enough been changed, or will we see Albus Severus again?
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
There's still more that needs to be changed, so Albus Severus will be making another appearance or two in the coming chapters.
So Hermione saved Severus? I wonder where Albus Severus is now. Thanks for the new chapter, but you must realize that we are all eager for the next chapter already!
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
It may have been Hermione, though I'll not say at this point. :) Albus Severus will make another appearance soon, I promise.
Good potion, Albus! :)
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
I'm sure he thinks so, too.
A slightly different spin on how Severus supposedly died in DH... Bellatrix would have been delighted with the opportunity ensure Severus' agonizing demise if she had any proof about her suspicions of his disloyalty to her precious Dark Lord. So Severus is relatively safe now, with Voldemort believing him dead.I'm guessing that the other person Albus means to save is Hermione... but from literal death or death of the soul after accepting a life sentence as a Weasley broodmare and housefrau?Love it, can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
I see Bella as someone who would ultimately do anything for Voldemort, and if that means making someone else suffer for their "betrayal", so be it. As for whether or not Hermione is the other is saved, the coming chapters will reveal if it is indeed she.