Chapter 3
Chapter 3 of 3
luvsevAlbus Severus Potter goes back in time to save two lives and ultimately bring them together.
Reviewed'Crucio!'
Severus crumpled to his knees as brilliant points of vibrant yellow and green light exploded behind his eyes. Painful tremors wracked his fragile body before the curse ended. Darkness was closing in, and the only light was from Voldemort's long, thin wand, which appeared to be made of bleached-white bone.
Voldemort pointed his wand at Severus's masked face. 'You. Must. Suffer. Crucio!'
Screaming, Severus writhed upon the frozen ground, shards of jagged rock stabbing into his back, adding to the blistering fire in his nerves. 'E... En...' he moaned.
'Enough?' Voldemort laughed maniacally. 'Never! Sectumsempra!' He aimed the curse at Severus's scarred, bare chest, ripping along it as though it were ancient papyrus. 'How does it feel to have the curse you invented used on you? Hurts, doesn't it? Rather like... betrayal,' he added, seeming amused, a dark smirk curling his upper lip.
'I'd do it again, you evil bastard!' Severus rasped, his voice growing more ragged with each breath.
'Now, is that any way to talk to a father figure, Severus?' he hissed. 'Too bad I'll not allow you to live to learn the lesson!'
'No!' Severus gasped, fighting to staunch the blood flowing from his wounded chest with his hands.
'You will fail every time you attempt to defeat me, Severus. I am immortal, and you, regrettably, are not,' he said, his tone snide. 'Avada...'
As the darkness closed in on him, he felt a feathery-light weight touch his hand and a bubble of warmth envelop his body, comforting him, easing him downwards.
***
Severus's eyelids flicked several times before finally opening to take in his surroundings. The hospital room was empty except for him and one other: a young, dark-haired man with bluish-purple shadows under his eyes, who occupied a pea-green-coloured chair.
Soft voices sounded in the distance, and dim light from the overcast sky filtered in from a nearby pale-blue-curtained window, illuminating the stark white walls and making the metal tray at his bedside glint. A deep-blue, pealing-at-the-edges plastic bowl filled with tan-coloured liquid sat near a pitcher of water, and he looked longingly at the pitcher before once more resting his gaze upon the hunched over form of the boy.
'I knew you'd survive, Professor,' Albus Severus announced when he saw Severus look across the room at him.
Severus lifted his weak, shaking hand to his throat and felt a large patch of gauze covering the wound. He then opened his mouth and tried to speak, but only a soft 'oomph' escaped.
'Don't try to speak just yet. Nagini's venom affected your vocal cords, so the healers have devised a potion that will ensure your voice will be in working order soon.' Albus Severus approached the bed and sat down on its edge. 'I know you must be wondering why I'm here.'
Severus nodded in assent. If he knew I'd survive, why did he come? Perhaps he wasn't so sure of his potion after all. I knew he...
'Have a little faith in my abilities, Professor.' Albus Severus glared at him. 'I wouldn't be a very good researcher if I hadn't checked up on you. Besides, what's an hour in the grand scheme of things? It's wise to make sure I'd not have to use an alternate plan to save you.'
Indeed, Severus thought.
'The letter I gave you... I want you to read it when you're stronger. My presence, among other things, will make sense once you do.' He paused. 'Potter and McGonagall have a copy as well. They'll use it along with other evidence in their testimonies to free you.'
Severus rolled his eyes and huffed. You're deluding yourself, boy, if you think either of them are going to help me... even after the memories I gave.
'Trust me, Professor. They'll do right by you.'
Severus clasped the boy's shoulder and looked at him for a moment, uncertainty in his eyes. The young man smiled and gave a reassuring nod, disappearing without saying a word.
He has an unfortunate habit of disappearing when I can't ask questions. It's either a talent for evasion or he has excellent timing.
***
The Forest of Dean, he thought, looking at the glittering icicles dangling...a few precariously so as the wind picked up...from the barren branches. I hope she's still here and that she is alone. If she's not, that could complicate things quite a bit.
The sun hung low in the grey, overcast sky. Pure white snow crunched under his hiking boots as he made his way deeper into the heavily wooded area. The happy chirp of birds could be heard, as well as an unidentifiable rumble in the distance. He spared a glance at his compass and then to his watch. He was headed in the right direction as far as he could tell, and he was making good time, as it was still daylight.
He stopped for a moment, watching his breath form smoky circles in the wintry air. The tent will be invisible, and I won't be able to hear her either. I will have to wait for her to appear...she'll have to emerge at some point. He leaned against a tree and closed his eyes, but as soon as they drooped shut, he heard a tree branch snap and feet stomping in the snow.
'Why, why must he be such a pain in the arse? Doesn't he know that going off alone is dangerous?' she screamed, her voice shrieking through the trees, awakening sleeping animals.
Albus Severus approached her. 'Au...Hermione?'
Hermione turned around, her foot catching on a branch, causing her to fall onto her arse. 'A hand up, perhaps?' she asked, dusting the snowflakes from her black pea coat.
He extended his hand, and she took it, rising. 'Who are you and how do you know my name?'
'How I know your name is not important. I'm here for a particular purpose, and that's all you need to know.'
She withdrew her wand and pointed it at his face. 'You'll tell me who you are and what you want from me, or I'll...'
'You're just as feisty as I thought you'd be.' He chuckled. 'I assure you, I intend no harm.'
Lowering her wand, she noted his pink cheeks, bright-blue eyes, and messy, black hair. 'Wait, do I know you?'
'No, but I know you.'
'Then how do you know me?'
'It's a long, complicated story.'
'Then uncomplicate it and give me the short version,' she retorted.
'You make it sound so simple...'
'Because it is, or rather, it could be.'
'Hermione, stop. You're distracting me. I have something to tell you, and I need you to listen.' He took off his cloak and laid it on an icy log, then gestured for her sit.
She lowered herself gingerly, her bum still aching from the fall. 'All right, then. Go ahead.'
'I'll need you to try to trust me. Will you do that for me?'
His arms were uncrossed and hanging loosely at his sides, his stance was comfortable, and he was looking into her eyes...not over her head or elsewhere. He had a friendly, welcoming smile as well.
'I'll listen to you, but I won't promise to trust you.'
'That's all I need.' He breathed to steady himself. 'I'm unsure of how to tell you this.'
'Look, why don't you sit down,' she patted the covered, hollow log, 'and start from the beginning.'
'You... like Ron Weasley, yeah? As in more than a friend?'
Hermione's cheeks reddened and she looked away. 'What does that have to do with anything?'
'Ah, so you do.' He smiled knowingly. 'Perhaps you might want to reconsider him, Hermione. He's not the one meant for you.'
'How do you know this exactly? What makes you so sure he's not?' She raised her eyebrow at him.
'He's just not. In the future, you and he are unhappy together. You waste away as if you have lost all of your reasons to live, to love. Of course, there're no physical scars of your relationship...it's emotional. The things you were never allowed to do because you were catering to him and his desires, leaving yourself and your dreams in the dust. It's the look in your eyes when you see old friends. There's no spark, no real desire for life.'
Looking crestfallen, Hermione reiterated, 'How do you know?'
'Because... I've lived it with you. I've seen the disappointment nearly every day of my young life.'
'It can't be. He and I have our problems now, but surely that will change over time.'
Albus Severus sniffled. 'You'd think so, but time does not always change everything. If you don't believe me, Hermione, I have proof...something you can see and judge for yourself.' He withdrew a miniature package from his trouser pocket and brought it to full size.
'You brought a Pensieve?'
'Yes. Like I said: proof.' He pointed his mahogany wand to his temple, drawing a thick, silvery-white strand of memory from his mind. He then added it to the stone bowl and directed her to view the contents.
Immediately, she was drawn inside the memory of a small, black-haired boy. A woman with a worry-lined, frowning face placed a silver tea service on a claw-foot table. Her feet dragged as she greeted her redheaded husband. He dispassionately bussed her lips and walked away. Another memory: she was crying as he...Ron...raged at her. From the look on her older face, Hermione could tell that argument had been one of many. She walked through more unhappy memories, watching opportunities pass by in a flash. Perhaps this boy at her side was correct. If these memories were any indication, it would be best she not change the friendship with Ron.
She came out of the memories breathing heavy. 'This is me, isn't it? The life I'm doomed to live if Ron and I...'
'Yes, I'm afraid so. This is why it's best if you Ron just stay friends and not pursue anything further.' He stood, stretching his long legs from their cramped position on the log.
'May I ask you something?' she asked, touching his freezing cheek.
'Anything, Hermione.'
'Who are you really? That little boy in the memories looks like a younger version of you. And you resemble my best friend, Harry. Your eyes are the only thing unlike his.'
'I was that little boy, Hermione, and Harry and Ginny are my parents. If you marry Ron, you will be my aunt.'
Her mouth opened, but before she could speak, he hushed her. 'I know you have questions, but I can't answer any of them. What I have done already changes events.'
'I understand.'
'Will you do something for me?'
'Certainly. What do you need?' she replied.
'At the end of the Final Battle, check the Shrieking Shack a second time.' He tugged at the golden chain around his neck and started to turn it between his fingers. 'Oh, and one more thing: in the months ahead, please keep an open mind and remember that not all things are as they seem.' With a final turn, he disappeared from sight.
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I want Albus Severus to rewrite book 7 :) Good story, thank you!
Response from raj (Reviewer)
...even if it's been abandoned, it's still good!
I never gave much thought to Harry's children before, and I suddenly feel as though previously undiscovered chapters of Harry Potter have been unearthed for a select few. :D Wonderful first chapter; I can't wait to read more!
nooooo, please continue!
Anonymous
Can't wait for the rest. :D
Author's Response: :) There'll be another installment up soon.
Anonymous
I mean, not that I ever thought Severus died that night. But good story, I really enjoy reading this.
Author's Response: Severus would have had a back up plan for that night. I mean, come on. He's a Potions master for heaven's sake. I still can't believe JKR expected us to believe he died.
I'm pleased that you think this is a good story and that you're enjoying it.
Anonymous
Yay Albus Potter. I like this kid, he's pretty resourceful. Plus he hates Albus, and that's always a plus with me.
Author's Response:
Albus Severus sees Dumbledore for who he was, and he dislikes him for all those he used.
Ahhhhh... all the pieces of Albus Severus' plan are now in place, and I can't wait to see how this story plays out!Having him use a Pensieve to show Hermione what she could look forward to if she married Ron was a brilliant way to gain her trust in what he had told her. It is she who returns to the Shrieking Shack to find Severus alive and get him to the hospital.I'm looking forward to the next chapter.Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Yes, now he just has to wait for them to listen and for his plans to play out. I thought the way Albus Severus's looks along with the Pensieve would help Hermione to see that he didn't mean any harm and that she could trust him.
Yey! Severus has survived Nagini's attack! I really like the way you turned canon on it ear, and I like this one much better!!!Bella was her usual bitchy self, always jealous of Severus and willing to seize any opportunity to focus the Dark Lord's displeasure on him.We don't yet know who came back to see if Severus had survived, but I'm thinking it has to be Hermione. I'm hoping anyway.Another great chapter!Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
I couldn't not let Severus survive that snake attack - it just wouldn't be right. After all, Arthur survived. Bella couldn't stand that Severus was higher in Voldemort's regard than she, and she had to find a way to bring the attention upon herself.
This is a great first chapter, and I'm enthralled with the concept. I love Time-Turner stories so I can't wait to read more! Well done.Only one question: how old is Albus Severus Potter when he goes back in time to let Severus know that he can help him?Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thank you. Albus Severus is right about 16 when he goes back in time.
Another good chapter. I can't wait for the next one! :) Very good story.
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Aww, thanks! I'll try to have another up soon.
I know Albus did a lot of research before going back in time to correct the wrongs, but how sure is he that he is not making a big mistake. Rose and Hugo will no longer exist (not that Hermione deserves to be tied to an intelectually inferior man), and there is the possibility of what Hermione and Severus' future children could do. It boggles the mind!
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
He's fairly sure that repairing two wrongs won't cause too much damage. Even if he wasn't, he would have still taken the chance to save Severus.If Hermione and Severus ever did have children, they would be powerful and exceptionally intelligent.
~dun dun dun~ :) Yay! Moving on now to the next...
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
:) I'm glad you're enjoying it.
What a great start and quite original. Thanks so much for posting this! :) ~goes to next~
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thanks!
A very intriguing story so far.How did it come to pass that Bella was present in the forrest of Dean and recognised Snape's Patronus?So Albus Severus is a potion's progidy. Interesting. And one with a good heart full of courage, to boot.I'm lookinh forward to the next update.
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
In my mind, Bella was out hunting for the trio and just happened to see Severus's Patronus. She could have gone directly to the Dark Lord, but it suited her goal to wait to tell him.
I very much like that Albus Severus feel closer to the man that is his middle name more than the man he was named after. And it makes it interesting that he enjoys Potions. It seems he grew up idolizing the man most other people disliked. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thanks. I like to think Albus Severus understood all of what Severus had to do, which explains why he thought so highly of him.
This looks great and I am excited to see what happens next! More please!
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
I'm glad you're enjoying this tale.
Hey there! This is such a great start! I can't wait to see where this is going! I love how bold young Albus was when confronting his namesake, and the idea that he's really into potions is awesome! Please update again soon. Much Love ~Brena
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thank you! Albus Severus had sort of a score to settle since viewing the memories from his father's pensieve, and he wasn't the least bit afraid to say what he needed --a trait I loosely base off of one I have. As for Albus's obvious talent and desire to work with potions, I thought it'd be nice to have him take after his other namesake, Severus.
Interesting twist of canon you've given us. I like this reasoning much better actually. Dying over a wand seemed a bit insane to me. Will Albus save Fred now?
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
You're right, dying over a wand was pretty stupid... it can't possibly be a real reason to kill someone, especially since Voldie already had his suspicions about Severus to begin with, at least that's what JKR led us to believe.
Well, finally someone decided to fix that wrong! Interesting start.
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thank you. I think it means more for Albus Severus to change things because he's Harry's son, and Harry was too late in his own time to do anything about Sev's death.
This is really fascinating. I love the idea of Albus Severus telling Dumbledore off.
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thank you! I loved the idea of having someone from the next gen calling Dumbledore on his manipulative behaviour.
She cared enough to go back and find him! Will he remember this as a kindness, or will he dismiss it as just another Gryffindor trait? Excellent update. :D
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
Thanks! You'll find out in the coming chapters as to what his reaction will be on the the person who took him to the hospital.
So has enough been changed, or will we see Albus Severus again?
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
There's still more that needs to be changed, so Albus Severus will be making another appearance or two in the coming chapters.
So Hermione saved Severus? I wonder where Albus Severus is now. Thanks for the new chapter, but you must realize that we are all eager for the next chapter already!
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
It may have been Hermione, though I'll not say at this point. :) Albus Severus will make another appearance soon, I promise.
Good potion, Albus! :)
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
I'm sure he thinks so, too.
A slightly different spin on how Severus supposedly died in DH... Bellatrix would have been delighted with the opportunity ensure Severus' agonizing demise if she had any proof about her suspicions of his disloyalty to her precious Dark Lord. So Severus is relatively safe now, with Voldemort believing him dead.I'm guessing that the other person Albus means to save is Hermione... but from literal death or death of the soul after accepting a life sentence as a Weasley broodmare and housefrau?Love it, can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from luvsev (Author of Amending Time)
I see Bella as someone who would ultimately do anything for Voldemort, and if that means making someone else suffer for their "betrayal", so be it. As for whether or not Hermione is the other is saved, the coming chapters will reveal if it is indeed she.