You do write a lovely, tittilating tale. Thanks for sharing your talent, Fervesco. :)

HA!  That was fun.

Nice. I liked the storyline. Severus was very in character as well...you did a wonderful job with him. Again, great job!~Jen

any chance of adding more chapters?  *blush*this is one of my favs...

Wow I never knew gittedness was a word before now. I love it.

This is my favorite type of Snape.  A hard crusty exterior and a damaged needing interior.Erica

I think I had read this a while back, but I think it ended with him telling her to leave.  I'm glad you added that last little bit.

very moving.  I felt every ripple, every movement...

More please! 

Wicked

Wow, that was really interesting. I read "Dear Diary" a while ago and therefore could compare the two stories very well. You really learned a lot as a writer during the time between those stories. This one is much more introspective. We learn what Snape and Hermione think and feel. It's also much less brutal this way (the first one was a simple PWP with really no plot anywhere). This time there is an outlook to the future. They are somehow more human due to us knowing their feelings.So keep on writing.

Read once again. Yes,yes,Yes! Good job.....very good job! First one very good. But this, (sigh) more satisfying than first incarnation, however. Definitely to be filed in the favorites drawer for future enjoyment as needed.  I was actually so distracted that I completely forgot the painful peripheral neuralgia while I read it. I love you Fervesco!

Ahhhh,  So glad you went ahead and made a few changes.  I did enjoy this second one oh so very much.  Thanks again for a wonderful escape.  Sigh

Merlin ! How hot!!!Great read!

Good story, to the point.  I would like more 'picture' drawn with words.  Classromm interaction and looks. Nicely done itimate scene.

Love it! Well done.