The Final Curtain Call
Chapter 5 of 5
cocoachristyHermione's Christmas cheer falters when she sees a melancholy Snape. No one should spend such a happy holiday alone. My take on the How It Could Be Christmas Challenge issued by Southern Witch 69 over at her Yahoo!Group, Potter Place.
ReviewedDisclaimer: All things Harry Potter belong to JKR. I make no money from this.
A/N: Many thanks to my wonderful beta, the one and only, Southern_Witch_69.
Chapter 4
The Final Curtain Call
As Hermione sat reading the Daily Prophet, a familiar owl swept in the window. She smiled because she knew what was in the letter from her daughter.
"Severus, we have an owl from Tabby!" she called. "You know what she will ask."
Coming into the sitting room from his lab, Severus told her, "Yes, I do, and the answer still remains no. I will not have my daughter spend the Christmas holidays away from home. I want her here with us."
"Yes," she agreed. "As do I. Besides, I know that Draco, Harry, and Ron will insist their children go home as well." Hermione still could not believe that Tabby had been sorted into Slytherin with Serpens, although he was in his seventh year while Tabby was in her fifth. Hermione knew, as Severus had not a clue, that Tabby and Serpens were a couple. Lily and Charlie had both been sorted into Gryffindor and were both sixth years. Phillip Potter was currently in Auror training.
"They shall see each other enough during the holiday. It will not kill her to spend time with her parents." Severus hated the fact that his baby girl was no longer a baby. As of late, he had been wishing for another child. He doubted Hermione would have another, as their daughter was fifteen now.
"I agree, love." Hermione smiled at her husband. "How about a trip to Muggle London before she returns?"
Severus sighed. "Hermione, you have gone back to that place every year since that year we saw our futures. Neither the building nor the ticket man have ever reappeared. What makes you think either will do so now?"
"I just don't want to miss it if it does! Besides, there was that one year I found the photograph."
"Ah, yes, the year you were contemplating my marriage proposal. I had given you a ring a year to the day that we were at that blasted theater, and you said you needed time. Broke my heart, you did."
Rolling her eyes, she said, "Oh, please! You were so smug! 'Take all the time you need, my dear. I shall be here when you return.' You knew exactly what my answer would be. But had I not gone to think, I would not have found that photograph. I treasure it." She'd had the picture framed and put up in their bedroom. It was of the two of them, after many Decembers had passed, sitting on their porch in matching rockers. Her shockingly long, white hair was worn loose, as she suspected Severus preferred, and his salt and pepper locks were still about the same length and style as he wore them now. They held hands as they rocked, still looking at each other every so often with obvious love in their eyes.
"I treasure it also," he admitted. "More so, because I believe it helped you to make your mind up fast and quell any doubts you might have had."
"Quite," she admitted. "Not that I had many," she quickly said. He chuckled. "So," she asked again, "are you coming with me?"
"No, I have not in the past seventeen years, and I won't start now. Besides, I think you like the time alone." He raised an inquisitive eyebrow.
"I suppose I do," she allowed. She walked over to him and kissed him goodbye. "I won't be long. I may do a bit of shopping while out."
"Okay, I want to finish up my potion. I shall have dinner ready when you return."
"Thank you, Severus."
** ** ** ** **
As Hermione walked the path she knew the theater to be, she sighed. Severus was right. She would never see that theater again. The only other time she'd seen anything after that night when they'd viewed their futures was when she'd had been mulling over whether to accept his proposal or not. She had nothing on her mind now. Except the fact that you know Severus wants to have another baby.
Hermione had been thinking about that for a while. Fifteen years was a long time to wait to have another baby. Well, I am not dead set against it. I just need to weigh all the pros and cons. My age would not matter. I am barely forty, not even close to middle aged. Even Muggles have babies at this age.
As she was pondering, she suddenly spotted another photograph on the ground. This one had her in a hospital bed in St. Mungo's, holding an infant son. Tabby and Severus were on either side of her, both grinning like fools. Oh! A son! I wonder if having a son is important to Severus. He never mentioned a son specifically before, she mused. Of course it is! Most wizards would like a son. Smiling, she decided to Apparate home and give her husband the good news: She did want one more child.
** ** ** ** **
Tabby grinned at her parents when she spotted them waiting for her on the platform. Her father stood so stiff and proud while her mother was grinning and waving madly. She spotted Draco and Gabrielle Malfoy, Serpens' parents, standing by her parents. She didn't immediately see Charlie or Lily's parents.
She turned to her boyfriend. "Serpens, promise you will owl me everyday! I will miss you so much!"
With his grey eyes smiling down into her dark chocolate ones, he promised, "Everyday. I will miss you, too. Thank God you will be over tomorrow!" he said, laughing as he kissed the tip of her slightly large nose.
She smacked his chest lightly. "Don't tease me, or I shall not give you your Christmas gift!"
This time, he kissed her lips softly. "I am not teasing. I am very happy you will be at the manor tomorrow."
When the train stopped, they got off to greet their parents. "Hi, Mum! Hi, Dad!" she called as she walked towards her parents.
Raising an eyebrow, Severus said, "Is that the best greeting you have for your father?"
Laughing, Tabby stood on her toes and kissed her father's cheek. "Is that better?"
"Much," he confirmed, turning to the platinum-haired boy at his daughters side. "Hello, Mr. Malfoy."
"Hello." Turning to Tabby, he lightly kissed her lips and told her, "Until tomorrow." Then, he walked off with his parents after they had said their goodbyes to Tabby and her parents.
After she watched him walk away, she turned towards her parents to see her dad eyeing her speculatively. "What?" she asked.
"Is there something you wish to inform me of, my daughter?"
"Oh, you mean that kiss Serpens gave me? Well, he is my boyfriend!"
"I see," was the only answer she got. Tabby smiled because she could tell he was not upset by the news, just surprised.
** ** ** ** ** ** ** ** ** **
Hermione was happy to be back home from the Burrow and Malfoy Manor. She just wanted to spend time alone with her family.
She remembered how happy Severus was when she told him she wanted to have another baby. He suggested they start right away, to which she agreed.
As they sat in front of the fire, each perusing their own thing, Hermione looked to Severus. He was reading the newest Potions Today magazine while having a brandy. Suddenly, he looked up and into her eyes. She smiled. He'd felt her eyes on him.
I am so happy I ran into him all those years ago in Diagon Alley. My life could have been so empty now but for him and Tabby. Thank you, Albus Dumbledore, wherever you are, for I know it was you who showed us the way.
As Severus looked to his wife and then his daughter, he thought of his life and how fulfilling it was now. Not a day went by that he did not thank whatever deity there was for this gift. Instead of ending up bitter, he was now blissfully happy. He often wondered about Albus and his part in things. The old, meddling fool still pointed him in the right direction... even in death! Severus chuckled. Well done, Albus. Well done.
Christy's Notes: Well, there you have it! The end to my little tale! Happy Christmas, belatedly, to all and Happy New Year! Thanks for the reviews!
Southern's Notes: What a very sweet ending! I suppose it could have been worse for Snape. His little girl could have gone home and announced that in a couple of years she'd be Mrs. Phillip Potter...or a future Weasley! HaHaHa!
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62 Reviews | 4.89/10 Average
Love the set up. Makes me think a bit of the carnival ride tale where they end up in the tunnel of love together, only this time we get to see the outcome of the story. :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you! I'm happy you liked it.
Well done Albus indeedAlbus being Christy in this case Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
LOL! Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Me too! I bet he will Avada himself in his. Poor bugger. Obviously they'll live happily ever after once this is over. It IS cute! *****
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
THANKS!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
THANKS!
I.M.A. Prince? subtle. haha.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
LOL! Thanks!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
LOL! Thanks!
Great original idea to hint that Dumbledore had something to do with the theater from the beyond. Also good concept that she should find both of those pictures when thinking of major life decisions about marriage and a second child. Good story.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you! I had to have the meddlesome man in there! ;-) Glad you liked it!
The grand finale was good - the writing was wonderful - you had their eyes open and gave the reality they would want if they only knew that they could get it.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it!
Severus's life was even worse than Hermione's. It was so horrible that I cringed through it - that should wake the man up to what his life is becoming.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you! Yes, I thought it would take something more horrible for Severus to take notice. I hated writing it, too.
What a wake-up call to give Hermione and Severus is up next. Brillantly written and shocking.... that is enough to get at least her attention that she needs to open her eyes and her heart.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks! Yeah, and to see it on big screen... She needed something such as that to make her take notice.
Good first chapter - so like Severus to think something is up. I am happy that you had her ask him to dinner. He is more compatiable to Hermione than either of them know.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you! I'm glad you like my start!
Here I sit drenched in sweat after mowing the lawn and I bring up a Christmas story. All I can say is that I'm thrilled I did. It's so sweet. I love how they came to be together and both enjoyed their time so much that they didnt' want it to end. The "movies" were great too, but of course the fluffy icing on the cake was the beautiful outcome of it all. I loved it all and it even cooled me off some!! ^.~ Very well done.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
! I am glad you read and enjoyed my fic. Yeah, call me Miss Fluff! Tee hee! Glad to cool you off!
Are the dates on the summary supposed to be 2005 or 2006?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
2005, I wrote it last year!
Cheese is my least favorite food. Author's Response: LOL, Not even with crackers? TeeHee. I know, most my fics have fluff--I can't seem to help it. Try Southern_Witch_69's Yultide Revolations, you'll like that I bet!
Deputy Headmistress's Response: There's nothing wrong with fluff, but there is definitely something wrong with someone leaving a smart-arsed review like this. I thought she was playing at first, but I've seen a snide review she left for someone else, saying the story had "cheese issues." How insulting to say such a thing and not lay out exactly what's off about it.
So don't feel badly about it, doll. I know how soft hearted you can be. Your story is great, your grammar is in top form, and you have many other great reviews to prove you are doing something right. I really liked this premise (bwahahaha, not that I'm biased or anything).
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Well, I knew that she was saying she didn't like it, but I didn't realize it was a flame. Right, she should be more specific with what exactly she didn't care for, other than it was cheesey.~smirk~ Actually the premise was brilliant!
Response from Elen_Sila (Reviewer)
It wasn't a flame, I simply thought that there was too much fluff. The author took the comment just how I intended it to be taken, as a joke. Elen
Ah, this was a great read for Christmas Eve! Thanks so much, I'm glad I stumbled across it! :D
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it!
Oh, what a sweet story!? ?Yeah, I'm a sappy sort and I cried in the earlier chapters, so I'm glad all worked out well in the end.? Also like the second-generation Snape-Malfoy possibility.? Thanks for the Christmas (or whatever winter holiday you celebrate) treat!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks! I can't believe a story of mine brought tears! wow! Glad you enjoyed it!
Anonymous
Flurry sweet silly fun cute adorable fluffy...oh, said that already.
jolly good fun :) nice change after the angsty stuff i've been reading!
Author's Response: Thanks, jracklesfan77! So glad you enjoyed it!
Sweet Story
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
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excellent ending...loved the vignettes from their married life...Now, had Severus gone with Hermione could they have possibly found the theatre? Would it require both of them to access it?? hmmm, something to think about.. :P...congrats on a job well done. I enjoyed reading this story...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
! Hmmm that is something to think on! Maybe I can write a sequel next year with Tabby and Serpens going! Glad you enjoyed it!
Very sweet and a nice Christmas present. You did a nice job with the challenge.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
! Glad you liked it!
I enjoyed your little Christmas story, actually all your work. Your descriptions of the path each might take apart were very believable. Hermione never quite fitting in, feeling lonely in a room filled with friends and their families, knowing what you want out of life, but not how to obtain it. And, Severus staying in the shadows, isolating himself, drinking alone, realizing what he wants in life, but feels he is not worthy of love. It's a Wonderful Life is my favorite movie. I think your story was a nice adaptation.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
! I appreciate your kind words! Its one of my favorite movies too!
Oh so sweet and what a lovely ending.
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Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
!!
Nicely done! Now, go write some more (of another story), please! ~Lotm
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks, Lady! Working on that now!
LOL, yes having a Malfoy as a son in law is certainly better for Severus.I loved this story. Thanks so much for sharing.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
! (I agree with you there!) So glad you enjoyed it!
OH, what a perfect way to wrap up this Christmas fic!!! You and Sun are so BAD!!! Almost as bad as me! ;D Maybe next year you could have another Christmas fic, one where Hermione gives birth to their son. Maybe catch Serpens really sneaking our ot Tabby's room. Such a sweet fic. Warms the cockles of the heart. Okay, everybody. On the count fo three. 1...2...3.. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwww. Truly a sweet little fic.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks much, my dear! I may write a sequel next year indeed! Good idea!
Sounds like she'll be taking a trip to Diagon Alley every year, to maybe get a new photo! Hmm... Serpens and Tabby.... don't tabby cats eat snakes? (Sorry, couldn't resist! ) Thanks for Severus and Hermione making the right decision, and the lovely glimpse of their married lives.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks June! LOL Tabbys do at that! Glad you liked it!
Response from June W (Reviewer)
I must say that I love this feature on this site - I'm enjoying the "sequel" otherwise known as SW69-Christy review tag!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
LOL We are having us a bit of fun...but it will have to continue tomorrow. Sun has gone to bed!