Act III: The Grand Finale
Chapter 4 of 5
cocoachristyHermione's Christmas cheer falters when she sees a melancholy Snape. No one should spend such a happy holiday alone. My take on the How It Could Be Christmas Challenge issued by Southern Witch 69 over at her Yahoo!Group, Potter Place.
ReviewedDisclaimer: All things from the Harry Potter world belong to JKR. Nothing belongs to Cocoachristy, unfortunately.
A/N Many thanks to my wonderful beta, the one and only, Southern_Witch_69!
Chapter 4
Act III: The Grand Finale
Severus was afraid to watch anymore. He had no idea what was going on, but he intended to find out. He desperately wanted to leave, but Hermione seemed very interested in what was going to happen next. "Hermione, are you sure you wish to stay?" he asked uneasily.
"Yes, I really do, Severus. For some reason, I feel it's important we finish this."
Severus sighed. "Very well, but when this is over, I aim to speak to that man."
Before Hermione could answer him, the movie began. They both watched as their faces appeared on the screen. This time they were together.
They were in Severus' laboratory in his home. She was helping him brew his potions as she told him of her day at the orphanages. Things were finally looking up there, and most of the children were being adopted.
Harry and Ginny, she told him, had decided against adopting a Muggle child, as it would be rather awkward, but instead, they had decided to help her find homes for the Muggle children. It seemed that they were harder to find homes for.
After finishing the potions, they decided to have a quiet meal at home. We look so cozy and content sitting there, Hermione thought wistfully. Could life really be that way for us? She looked at her former professor, and he seemed to be intently watching the screen.
Severus was watching the scene with bated breath. I actually look happy and content there. Could it be possible that there could actually be a witch--this witch--that could make me happy?
Suddenly, the scene changed, and they were in Malfoy Manor. As before, Draco was pacing the floor. Severus was standing with Lucius, helping to reassure the boy. This time, however, when Fleur Weasley came out holding the newest heir, Hermione was close behind her. She walked up to Severus and wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed his cheek.
Hermione whispered in his ear, "They are going to name that poor boy Serpens."
He chuckled and whispered back, "Better hope he makes Slytherin then." As he looked at her, he bent down to lightly kiss her lips. "I think the time has come to start working on a Snape heir. What say you?"
"I say yes!" she happily exclaimed.
Severus took his eyes off the screen to see how Hermione was reacting to this. Her eyes seemed transfixed on the screen, as if she didn't want to miss one thing. I am starting to wonder what life would really be like with her. Dare I hope she is wondering as well?
Hermione felt herself yearning for that life with this man. I would have never thought that Severus Snape could ever look at me without contempt, but seeing this makes me... want to think I was wrong. The soft expression on his face as he looks at me now leads me to think that perhaps he could someday feel something for me. She chanced a glance at him and caught him staring at her. He quickly looked back at the screen. Was that a blush I saw? Surely not!
Suddenly, their screen selves were back at their home. They had started kissing in the kitchen and worked their way to the bedroom, pulling off robes and clothes as they went. Once they got to their destination, Severus cupped her face with his hands.
"You are very beautiful to me, Hermione Snape."
"You are very biased, my love. I know I am not beautiful, but as long as I am beautiful to you, I am very happy indeed."
"I can make you much, much happier," he purred in that voice he knew she loved.
"Prove it," she challenged, eager for him to love her.
He started slowly, kissing every inch of her face as he backed her to the bed and laid her down gently. When they had first arrived home, he thought they would have a frantic coupling, but as he looked at her now, he only wanted to make love to his wife. Slowly.
As Hermione watched the couple on the screen, she felt an ache. Severus had let go of her hand earlier when he started to leave, and she found herself reaching for it once again. He didn't seem to mind as he linked his fingers with hers.
Hermione watched as her counterpart whimpered on the screen. Severus started trailing kisses down her neck, nibbling just behind her ear in that tender spot that makes her moan. "You like that, do you?" he asked, knowing his voice was as much of a turn on to her as anything else.
"Yes! Severus, please!" she begged.
He chuckled as he nibbled at a lower spot on her neck to her collarbone, kissing all the way across and then lower still to her right breast. He laved her nipple with his tongue before he nibbled the sensitive underside.
Hermione arched up, trying to ease the ache between her thighs. He took pity on her and lifted his knee between her legs. She started grinding herself against his knee, searching for release, as he attacked her left breast in much the way as he had done her right one, determined to take his time.
Moving slowly down her body, Severus started kissing her belly. Because as he went lower, he had to move his knee, so he started to work her nub with his fingers and thumb. He knew it was a slow torture for her, and he reveled in the fact that he could make her as crazy with desire as she did him. She cried out as his mouth suddenly found her mons.
As Severus watched himself on screen, he couldn't help but be a little smug. This certainly makes up for the brothel scene! But damn, I truly want to taste her now. I wonder if this is disgusting to her? He looked at the witch beside him and smiled. She was breathing heavily and looked flush. That's right, my dear. Watch and see what I can do to you! The only problem was, he was becoming aroused as well. As he heard his wanton witch crying his name out on screen, he quickly looked up.
Hermione's head was thrown back in ecstasy as she was pulling his hair and grinding herself in his face. "Ohh, Sev...er...us! Love you, want you, need you...NOW!"
He moved back up her body, placing his hardened cock at her entrance. "Open your eyes, and look at me whilst I take you!" he commanded.
Her eyes snapped open as he slid into her moist, welcoming heat. "Oh, yes, Hermione! God, woman, you feel so good."
She lifted her legs and wrapped them around his waist, meeting him thrust for thrust. He wanted her to have pleasure once more before he found his release, so he moved his fingers down and stroked her clit in time with his thrusts. Soon, she was calling out to him again. "GODS... YES! Oh, Severus! Love you!"
Feeling her tighten around him as she climaxed again, he let himself go and came long and hard inside of her. "Hermione," he purred and felt satisfaction when she shivered in response.
After they caught their breaths, she cheekily said, "Well, I say that's a fine start on making our Snape heir, eh?"
"Damn straight," he agreed, pulling her close to hold her while they slept. "Night, love."
Hermione watched the scene unfold and was surprised that she was not embarrassed. Right now all she could feel was longing. Longing for the man beside her and the life she was watching. Could he ever feel anything for me? Does it sicken him to think of loving the resident know-it-all that way?
The scene changed again. This time, they were at St. Mungo's. Harry and the whole Weasley clan were pacing the floors. Authur came and patted Severus on the back. "It isn't every day your baby girl gives birth," he said, bursting with pride.
"Too right," Severus agreed, watching Hermione rub her growing belly. Soon, they would be back for her to give birth.
A squealing child caught everyone's attention. "Daddy! Daddy! Is the baby here yet?" Phillip Potter, adopted son of Harry and Ginny, came running down the hall with his uncle Ron and his fiancée, Luna.
Harry laughed and lifted his son high in the air. "Soon."
When the wail of a baby surprised everyone, Harry took off for the room with his son. As he cracked the door open, the Healer said, "Come in, Mr. Potter, and meet your daughter."
He went in for a few moments and then asked everyone to come in and take a look at Lillian Molly Potter.
Severus looked at the baby on the screen and felt his chest tighten. Good Lord, but that baby looks just like Lily with her red hair and green eyes. She would be so proud. Wherever she is, I hope she has found peace.
He looked at Hermione and found her watching him. She smiled beautifully at him, and the tightening in his chest lightened as he smiled back. Why have I not noticed her beauty before?
For the next scene, they were in the chapel at Ron and Luna's wedding. Hermione was very round with child. After the wedding, everyone headed to the reception hall. It was difficult, but Severus held Hermione tightly to him as they swayed to the music. She tired easily, so he was careful not to keep her on her feet too long.
As the scene changed, they were in St. Mungo's once more. This time it was Severus' turn to pace the floor while surrounded by Malfoys and Weasleys. "Calm down, old chap," Lucius said. "Your wee one will be here before you know it. All will be well."
"Too right," Authur reluctantly agreed with Lucius. He still hated that man, but he wanted to put Severus at ease.
After a few hours of pacing and nail biting, the Healer called for Severus to enter the room. He cautiously went in and relaxed as he saw a beaming Hermione. "Well?" he anxiously asked.
"Come and meet your daughter, love," she excitedly told him.
As Severus and Hermione watched themselves, they were both getting choked up. Severus suddenly put his arm around her and squeezed. In return, she laid her head on his shoulder. Without thought, he kissed the top of her head as they continued watching.
"Are you still determined to name her Tabitha?" he teased.
"Yes," she said. "Tabitha Jane Snape. Tabby for short... after Minerva."
"I don't think everyone will understand Tabby is after Minerva, love."
"Those who know her well will," she argued. "Her Animagus form is a tabby cat, and those who are close to us will know. That is all I really care about anyway."
Severus faked thinking on it. He would not deny her this or anything else. "All right...if you insist, that is."
"Yes, I do. Now, invite the lot in so we can show off our daughter."
They sat watching scene after scene: Christmas breakfasts at the Burrow, Christmas dinners at Malfoy Manor, birthday parties, Sunday gatherings, and even the birth of Ron and Luna's daughter, Charlotte Ginevra.
I see another trio in the making, Hermione thought with pride. A trio with happier times ahead than we had!
When the screen faded to black, they noticed they were alone in the theater. They sat quietly a few moments when Severus turned to her. "Hermione, I hardly know what to say."
"Don't say anything... except how that made you feel." She turned to him shyly. "Did it repulse you?"
"No. In fact, it had quite the opposite affect on me, truth be told. What about you?" he asked, wanting to know her feelings.
"It made me feel... a longing that I have never known before. Would you care to come back to my flat and discuss things?"
He sighed with relief. "Yes, I would like that very much."
They got up to leave the theater, hurriedly walking out the door. About halfway down the block, Severus stopped. "Hold on. I want to talk to that ticket man. Despite the last act, I want to know how this happened."
"Yes, I agree. How was so much of our private lives known? Like the name Tabby? I have wanted to use that name for a long time!"
Severus grinned slightly. Tabby indeed!
They turned to go back and speak to the man. When they got back to the theater, it was gone, replaced by an old, abandoned building. "What in the world?" Hermione asked. "Where is the theater?"
Severus walked all around the building, finding nothing. "This is strange. Do you feel okay, Hermione?" He was starting to wonder if some spell had been placed on them.
When she didn't answer, he looked to see what was troubling her. She was holding her ticket, looking surprised. "What is it?" he demanded, becoming worried.
Saying nothing, she handed him her ticket. On it were the words, Somebody had to meddle! Look where you would have ended up otherwise!
"If I didn't know any better..." she started.
"I would say that is the work of Albus Dumbledore," he finished.
"Impossible, right?" She looked in his eyes.
"It would seem, but how else could this have happened?"
"Does it matter, Severus? We're here now, and I would really like to go talk about this. Do you still feel the same?" she asked uncertainly.
"Yes, I do. More than anything. I think you are exactly what I have been missing in my life," he admitted to her.
Taking his hand, she said, "Let's go then." Instead of walking back, they Disapparated, impatient to get on with the rest of their lives. Together.
Christy's Notes: Well, only the epilogue left. I should have that ready before Christmas! (Hey, I like the name Tabby! LOL)
Southern's Notes: Lovely! I adore this. I can't wait to see how they end up. Poor kid. (Tabby! Snicker... Here kitty, kitty.)
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62 Reviews | 4.89/10 Average
Love the set up. Makes me think a bit of the carnival ride tale where they end up in the tunnel of love together, only this time we get to see the outcome of the story. :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you! I'm happy you liked it.
Well done Albus indeedAlbus being Christy in this case Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
LOL! Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Me too! I bet he will Avada himself in his. Poor bugger. Obviously they'll live happily ever after once this is over. It IS cute! *****
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
THANKS!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
THANKS!
I.M.A. Prince? subtle. haha.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
LOL! Thanks!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
LOL! Thanks!
Great original idea to hint that Dumbledore had something to do with the theater from the beyond. Also good concept that she should find both of those pictures when thinking of major life decisions about marriage and a second child. Good story.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you! I had to have the meddlesome man in there! ;-) Glad you liked it!
The grand finale was good - the writing was wonderful - you had their eyes open and gave the reality they would want if they only knew that they could get it.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it!
Severus's life was even worse than Hermione's. It was so horrible that I cringed through it - that should wake the man up to what his life is becoming.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you! Yes, I thought it would take something more horrible for Severus to take notice. I hated writing it, too.
What a wake-up call to give Hermione and Severus is up next. Brillantly written and shocking.... that is enough to get at least her attention that she needs to open her eyes and her heart.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks! Yeah, and to see it on big screen... She needed something such as that to make her take notice.
Good first chapter - so like Severus to think something is up. I am happy that you had her ask him to dinner. He is more compatiable to Hermione than either of them know.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you! I'm glad you like my start!
Here I sit drenched in sweat after mowing the lawn and I bring up a Christmas story. All I can say is that I'm thrilled I did. It's so sweet. I love how they came to be together and both enjoyed their time so much that they didnt' want it to end. The "movies" were great too, but of course the fluffy icing on the cake was the beautiful outcome of it all. I loved it all and it even cooled me off some!! ^.~ Very well done.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
! I am glad you read and enjoyed my fic. Yeah, call me Miss Fluff! Tee hee! Glad to cool you off!
Are the dates on the summary supposed to be 2005 or 2006?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
2005, I wrote it last year!
Cheese is my least favorite food. Author's Response: LOL, Not even with crackers? TeeHee. I know, most my fics have fluff--I can't seem to help it. Try Southern_Witch_69's Yultide Revolations, you'll like that I bet!
Deputy Headmistress's Response: There's nothing wrong with fluff, but there is definitely something wrong with someone leaving a smart-arsed review like this. I thought she was playing at first, but I've seen a snide review she left for someone else, saying the story had "cheese issues." How insulting to say such a thing and not lay out exactly what's off about it.
So don't feel badly about it, doll. I know how soft hearted you can be. Your story is great, your grammar is in top form, and you have many other great reviews to prove you are doing something right. I really liked this premise (bwahahaha, not that I'm biased or anything).
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Well, I knew that she was saying she didn't like it, but I didn't realize it was a flame. Right, she should be more specific with what exactly she didn't care for, other than it was cheesey.~smirk~ Actually the premise was brilliant!
Response from Elen_Sila (Reviewer)
It wasn't a flame, I simply thought that there was too much fluff. The author took the comment just how I intended it to be taken, as a joke. Elen
Ah, this was a great read for Christmas Eve! Thanks so much, I'm glad I stumbled across it! :D
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it!
Oh, what a sweet story!? ?Yeah, I'm a sappy sort and I cried in the earlier chapters, so I'm glad all worked out well in the end.? Also like the second-generation Snape-Malfoy possibility.? Thanks for the Christmas (or whatever winter holiday you celebrate) treat!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks! I can't believe a story of mine brought tears! wow! Glad you enjoyed it!
Anonymous
Flurry sweet silly fun cute adorable fluffy...oh, said that already.
jolly good fun :) nice change after the angsty stuff i've been reading!
Author's Response: Thanks, jracklesfan77! So glad you enjoyed it!
Sweet Story
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
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excellent ending...loved the vignettes from their married life...Now, had Severus gone with Hermione could they have possibly found the theatre? Would it require both of them to access it?? hmmm, something to think about.. :P...congrats on a job well done. I enjoyed reading this story...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
! Hmmm that is something to think on! Maybe I can write a sequel next year with Tabby and Serpens going! Glad you enjoyed it!
Very sweet and a nice Christmas present. You did a nice job with the challenge.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
! Glad you liked it!
I enjoyed your little Christmas story, actually all your work. Your descriptions of the path each might take apart were very believable. Hermione never quite fitting in, feeling lonely in a room filled with friends and their families, knowing what you want out of life, but not how to obtain it. And, Severus staying in the shadows, isolating himself, drinking alone, realizing what he wants in life, but feels he is not worthy of love. It's a Wonderful Life is my favorite movie. I think your story was a nice adaptation.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
! I appreciate your kind words! Its one of my favorite movies too!
Oh so sweet and what a lovely ending.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
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Nicely done! Now, go write some more (of another story), please! ~Lotm
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks, Lady! Working on that now!
LOL, yes having a Malfoy as a son in law is certainly better for Severus.I loved this story. Thanks so much for sharing.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
! (I agree with you there!) So glad you enjoyed it!
OH, what a perfect way to wrap up this Christmas fic!!! You and Sun are so BAD!!! Almost as bad as me! ;D Maybe next year you could have another Christmas fic, one where Hermione gives birth to their son. Maybe catch Serpens really sneaking our ot Tabby's room. Such a sweet fic. Warms the cockles of the heart. Okay, everybody. On the count fo three. 1...2...3.. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwww. Truly a sweet little fic.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks much, my dear! I may write a sequel next year indeed! Good idea!
Sounds like she'll be taking a trip to Diagon Alley every year, to maybe get a new photo! Hmm... Serpens and Tabby.... don't tabby cats eat snakes? (Sorry, couldn't resist! ) Thanks for Severus and Hermione making the right decision, and the lovely glimpse of their married lives.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
Thanks June! LOL Tabbys do at that! Glad you liked it!
Response from June W (Reviewer)
I must say that I love this feature on this site - I'm enjoying the "sequel" otherwise known as SW69-Christy review tag!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Christmas Magic)
LOL We are having us a bit of fun...but it will have to continue tomorrow. Sun has gone to bed!