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Harbinger
Bambu179 Reviews | 6.72/10 (179 Ratings, 0 Likes, 151 Favorites )
Severus Snape has been pardoned by Ministry decree, but not everyone is pleased that he has returned to teaching at Hogwarts.
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Bambu
Member Since 2005 | 27 Stories | Favorited by 542 | 117 Reviews Written | 1,029 Review Responses
I have loved the written word since watching my mother’s fingers trace the lines of a book, luxuriating in riveting tales and well-turned phrases. Many a night I read until dawn, a plastic flashlight hidden under the covers to light the pages as I raced the rising sun to finish my latest must-read.
Since joining the HP fandom, I've been privileged to receive more than 50 awards, including Best Author (Quill to Parchment Awards) and Best Classic Author (Most Potente Passions). Among others, my stories have won awards for Best Hurt/Comfort (Spoils of War, Morning Has Broken), Best Novel Length (Calling Card, Guard…Check…Mate), Best One Shot (A Beach in Ireland), Best WIP (Saving a Death Eater, The Summoning), Favorite Overall Story (Complexities), and Readers’ Choice (A Quest of Paladins).
Aside from a judicious polish for formatting and egregious typos, I don't plan on revising my early work. Those stories are the stepping stones of my writing journey. Please note some stories contain adult content. None is more graphic than equivalent scenes in the television shows True Blood or Game of Thrones, and age appropriate warnings are posted.
I no longer write fanfiction prolifically. Like many fanfic authors, my focus has shifted to original work. A member of the Romance Writers of America and the Southern California Writers Association, I write under my name: Lin Thornhill.
My original story Verisimilitude published in Thoroughly Modern Monsters (Story Spring Publishing, 2013) reached the top 100 fantasy anthologies and broke into the top 10 in the UK the first month of release. Ben and Christine’s story will continue in 2016.
Fixation, my latest short story, slated for publication in J. Aldis’ anthology Immanence, with a winter 2015-2016 release, is particularly exciting as it anchors the Messengers of Inari novel series I’ve been developing for the past year.
9/2015
Reviews for Harbinger
Plasma? But what about the red cells? :)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Eeep. Damn. You're right. I was so busy looking for a second choice of a word to use, I completely forgot about what the word meant. Eeep. I suppose I have a little more editing to do. ::headdesk::Thanks for pointing it out.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I thought you must have had a reason for using plasma instead of whole blood, and I had missed it completely! :)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I wish I had been that clever. Really. I was just scrambling not to use the word blood four times in three sentences. You're very gracious to think there was a loftier purpose. In general, there would have been, but not this time.Thanks again.
Another brilliant chapter.I love the banter between Snape and Hermione via Patronus. And that it took Harry to make her realize that she fancies him. So funny.So much info here. I love a good mystery. This fic just keeps getting better.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
You've made me blush. Thank you.I'm so pleased you're enjoying the story. I really wanted to show an adult, mature, and perceptive Harry. I didn't want his 'death and rebirth' to have left him without some material change. That would be just too disappointing.
i thought that ginny had already told hermione that theyre having a boy? but i digress. i am so far tremendously enjoying this story. :) it is so far only the second 'snape is a vampire' fic that i've managed to read through the first chapter.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Eeep. If Ginny told her earlier -- I thought it was just that they were pregnant -- I'll have to fix it there or here. Thanks for mentioning it.I'm utterly tickled that you're enjoying the story, especially as it's a vampire fic. I've never written this scenario before, but I didn't want to slip down ground already covered, and covered beautifully in literature. I wouldn't want Bram Stoker to come hunting me from beyond the grave!Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review.
I like it very much up to now. Nice mystery/procedural. Thank you!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
A conflagration even! :)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Oh, I definitely think there might be some fire there.Thanks!
The missing Snape file is suspicious.:)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I think so, too, and it just goes to show that he will always have enemies.How sad for him.Thanks for leaving me a comment.
Snape needs a few allies. :)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I couldn't agree more, and for that I thank you.
Great chapter. I loved the flirting between Hermione and Snape. I really like Charley in this story; we see so little of him in canon. And your portrayal of him is terrific- he's like a less volatile version of Ron with the way he is protective of Hermione and an affable friend/big brother. And he's no dummy--he recognizes the tenor between our two principles...As to the mystery, well, I have my suspicions about who the stalker is, but I'll wait for more clues. Let me just say that the perpetrator has unparalelled acess to Snape's office/classroom/etc.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Thank you, thank you, thank you.I had so much fun writing the Snape/Hermione banter, and it brings a real smile to my face that you liked it. As for the protectiveness of Hermione's putative Weasley brother, I suspect he's a lot smarter than many give him credit, and he does think of her as a little sister ... mostly. You know, the difficulty in writing for an audience whose as well-versed in canon and fanon is keeping any nuances from them. I dont' think I can comment on about the stalker ... cause you're far too quick and perceptive not to know if I do.
Another fabulous chapter. The clues just get curiouser and curiouser. And I'm guessing that next time Snape wakes up with a boner, he won't have to think quite so hard for some imagery to finish it off with.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I'm so happy to have piqued your interest. And yes, I imagine Snape's 'dream girl' has morphed into something far more gratifying and easily to hand (as it were.)Thanks for leaving me a review.
Ooops! I accidentally posted the following in the wrong spot after re-reading Chapter One. Sorry about that. I loved Severus' line: "Willful ignorance is a far greater crime than simply parroting the opinion of others.” So true. And it definitely applies to more than just the thoughtless students it was directed at. Several members of Hogwarts staff are just as guilty of such behavior. But I've noticed, IRL, that age does not necessarily denote wisdom.As for Hermione's Strix research, the memory I think she was reaching for was of the morning she and Harry went back for Snape's body, only to find a bloody owl. Was the owl really a Strix? The reference to metamorphosis suggests that the owl was someone in Animagus form... Severus? I'm also wondering if, as some had speculated was the case in canon, that Madam 'Pince' is really Madam Prince, and Severus' mother. And could they both be genetic Sanguinarians as well? Either could explain why Pince has an Incognito file at the MoM. But I'm wondering what is up with the sudden lull in Severus' "gifts"... is the person coming up with something big, or are they deliberately toying with his mind? Whatever the intention, what Severus is going through definitely qualifies as psychological torture. As if he hasn't been through enough of that sort of thing already!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I know I've responded before, and thanks for reposting to the right chapter. It just means I get to read your review twice. ::grins::Pince's backstory will be coming out in the near future, and I can hardly wait for your reaction when it does. It's so gratifying to have intelligent readers.Thanks again!
Well, much to ponder. Pince is acting weird, but I guess that's nothing new.But what's with Charlie? Does he like Hermione? And I love the way Snape and Hermione flirt with each other.The plot thickens.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Funny you should mention Madam Pince's reactions. I actually went back to some of the earlier HP books to see how she behaved. She doesn't say much, but I tried to keep her in character and extrapolate her with some plausibility. I do hope you find her interesting.Isn't the courting behavior of the greater know-it-all fascinating? I had so much fun writing it!Thanks so much for reading and your encouraging comments.
This chapter was a little confusing, which is I think why I enjoyed it so much. My mind is whirling trying to figure out exactly what is happening. There are still so many pieces of the puzzle to figure out. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to more.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
There was a lot going on here, wasn't there? Writing a mystery is so much harder than it looks. I remember worrying about too many or too few suspects, and then whether the clues were in the right place, or if the pacing was too slow or too fast. Whew! I'm thrilled you thought it all worked in this chapter. Thanks so much for the review.
I loved Severus' line: "Willful ignorance is a far greater crime than simply parroting the opinion of others.” So true. And it definitely applies to more than just the thoughtless students it was directed at. Several members of Hogwarts staff are just as guilty of such behavior. But I've noticed, IRL, that age does not necessarily denote wisdom.As for Hermione's Strix research, the memory I think she was reaching for was of the morning she and Harry went back for Snape's body, only to find a bloody owl. Was the owl really a Strix? The reference to metamorphosis suggests that the owl was someone in Animagus form... Severus? I'm also wondering if, as some had speculated was the case in canon, that Madam 'Pince' is really Madam Prince, and Severus' mother. And could they both be genetic Sanguinarians as well? Either could explain why Pince has an Incognito file at the MoM. But I'm wondering what is up with the sudden lull in Severus' "gifts"... is the person coming up with something big, or are they deliberately toying with his mind? Whatever the intention, what Severus is going through definitely qualifies as psychological torture. As if he hasn't been through enough of that sort of thing already!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I couldn't agree with you more; I know any number of adults who are as juvenile as teenagers. I suspect their ability to think critically is woefully undernourished.I'm thoroughly enjoying your speculations about the whys and wherefors, and I do hope you continue to enjoy the story, and it's explanations when they come.Thank you very much for your wonderful comments.
excellent story so far. I really am enjoying. I'm glad someone is willing to stand up for Snape.I'm not sure Pavlovian repetition is the right thing to say here. Pavlovian conditioning has to do with getting dogs to salivate when a bell is rung by giving them food and ringing a bell at the same time and then removing the bell. What Hermione is doing is Operant conditioning, I believe. She has walked through the same space many times even in the dark and she probably has bumped furniture in the past which would be a reinforcement of some sort. She would increase her behavior toward taking a particular path that would help her avoid bumping furniture. It helps that she lives alone because nobody is likely to move objects around which would cause her to run into or trip over them.Anyway, this is my perspective as a psychologist. LOL. If not for my training I'd ignore the "pavlovian" thing.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I'm delighted you've enjoyed the story thus far, and thanks for letting me know.With regard to the Pavlovian/Operant conditioning issue, I appreicate your perspective. I will probably do a little research to satisfy my curiosity respecting the nuances and differences, and then I'll most likely change the line. Thanks for keeping me on the straight and narrow.
That was odd. Not the story, it's wonderful. What's up with Irma's file? and why didn't Charlie answer her question?
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
::preens:: I'm delighted to have intrigued you. Truly delighted. Thank you.
excellent chapter! loved hermione's view of 19 years later and married to ron! right on, woman!! as the founding member of the ABR (anybody but ron) club i can appreciate it. very intiguing plotting. thanks so muchly!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Can I join the ABR? Wait. I think I'm already a member -- non-card carrying though it may be.Thanks very much for the review. It really made my day.
Your characterizations are great. I can just *hear* the banter between Snape/Rickman and McGonagall/Smith ("Really, Severus, there’s no need to be so dramatic.”I've very intrigued as to where this story is going.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
You've brought a huge smile to my face. One of the aspects the recipient of this gift exchange fic wanted most explored was Snape's friendships on the staff, and I've really played with them. I'm so pleased you're enjoying it. Thanks!
Each chapter gets better than the last. This is one of the stories I most look forward to seeing updates on, because it gives me so much to think about! I have several theories, but I don't feel I know enough yet to "make an arrest", so to speak. Charlie is just too easy. He wears his heart on his sleeve and makes no secret of his dislike for Severus. Very unlikely he's the one, the way things stand right now. Vector makes me raise an eyebrow or two... she saw the boar and immediately jumped to the conclusion that it was meant as a positive gift--"impressive", to use her words. But she could be a red herring as well. A third possibility is that it's Severus himself. Under someone's control, perhaps--the controller is the true culprit, but is using Sev's body to carry out the deeds so that nothing can be traced back to him or her. Finally, the owl! What is up with the owl mentioned in the Prologue? Now the owl droppings and abandoned cage in this chapter! Is it that same owl?Finally, I absolutely love that Madam Pince has a secret high-security file at the Ministry! You have taken a throw-away character and made her rock. I cannot wait for the next chapter of this!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
What a great review to find when I've just come back from vacation. I love all your speculations; in fact, I'm grinning!Thank you so much, and I've posted the next chapter just now. I do hope you enjoy it.
'Be very careful if you choose to proceed with production. They will certainly make you rich, but they might negate the next generation of little witches and wizards entirely.'LOL! :)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
::curtseys:: Thank you.
Hmm. The plot thickens! :)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
It does, it does.I'm so glad you're enjoying this. Thanks.
Mellors - good choice of name! :)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Thank you very much. I wish you could see the grin on my face.
I suspect the Headmistress. I don't recall if she officially knows about Severus' condition, but I'm thinking she doesn't, in which case her demonstrating this would be a way of her saying "I know about you". Also, if she's *also* a vampire, then it could be some bizarre sort of mating ritual, or threat, or something. She was too blase when she was called to his office, too dismissive, and she also cast out that "on the discretion of the Headmistress" a little too casually. Especially if she's Headmistress, she's got a reason to be persnickety about not knowing about a serious condition of one of her staff members. And it's got to be someone who would have reason to know where her staff are at all times, to know when it's safe to do something like that.Failing that, I suspect Charlie. But that's kind of a long shot.LOVED the "in someone's deluded imagination" slap at the epilogue!!!Also, I know that Jo gave Dawlish his first name after John on PotterCast, and I have to say I detest him. Are you modelling your Dawlish after him? ;)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I'm not actually modeling my Dawlish after the PotterCast John... never having seen/heard PotterCast. ::is woefully ignorant:: But I'm glad you think he fits into that mold.As for who it might be or not, I can't really comment other than to say you make some very good points and are quite astute. Charlie? You think he's a longshot? Hmmm. I think I'll go make some notes.Thank you very much for the wonderful review.
My dear, brilliant tale! I am on the EDGE of my seat and wonder how many others think that 'ol' Seven the Headmistress is acting oddly...interesting thoughts she has on the tribute left to Severus not to mention HER protectiveness (?) of Severus in terms of his livlihood, etc.As for the RW/HG relationship, I also agree that JK dropped the ball. While, I could see them as high school sweethearts, I can't see them lasting past graduation. Ron isn't just set in his ways, he is MOLLYcoddled to the nth degree (pun most definitely intended!!) Hermione needs someone strong enough to withstand her personality...I say this from experience...I was the 'know-it-all' and thank heavens I found someone who can stand up to me and be my equal...Again, wonderful job...I can't WAIT to read more!!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I'm absolutely basking in the light shining off your enthusiasm, and I can't thank you enough.The headmistress does seem overprotective, doesn't she? But then again, I always thought Dumbledore was very protective of his staff, especially keeping them from Ministry or Board interference. And poor Ron isn't a bad guy, he's just not right for Hermione. Ever ... well maybe a really robust sort of shag or three.
Response from sandlapper (Reviewer)
I don't review very often unless something just strikes me and you have struck!! I am a voracious devourer of SS/HG and have enjoyed my excursions into the worlds you have created for them!! Keep those tales coming!~Shell
Hmmm. This story grows curiouser and curiouser (and better and better). It seems as if Snape may be the culprit here. Could he be unconciously stalking himself? I find the idea of Snape being a sanguinarian a bit odd on top of all of his other issues but I'm rolling with it. It's fun trying to figure out why you decided to add this problem when he had enough issues to fill several volumes already. Anyway, this is a great story that has me deeply fascinated - and impatient for more.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
What a thought-provoking comment about Snape being the culprit. If I comment, however, I'm afraid I might give something away, and I hope to keep you interested until the end.I wrote this story for the SS/HG Gift Exchange on Live Journal, and my prompts were to make Snape a vampire, and to write a gen fic where we see him interacting with this colleagues at Hogwarts. Within that framework, I decided to create a mystery (never having written one before.) I'm thrilled it's fascinated you. Thank you.
At this point, I am thinking that both Severus and his stalker are Sanguinarians and the offerings might represent the latter's attempt to 'woo' Severus. And, judging by what was done to Hermione's coat, I think the stalker sees Hermione as a both a rival and a potential threat. If the offerings are indeed part of a courtship, the stalker is likely also offended by their 'thoughtful' gifts being perceived as cause for a criminal investigation. BTW, I thought Hermione's words to Harry about why she decided to walk away from Ron made a lot of sense. Ron would always storm off and refuse to speak to them. But with Hermione, Ron also tended to go all out to deliberately hurt her any way he could. He didn't just use Lavender in sixth year, he also publicly mocked Hermione's enthusiasm for learning, such a big part of who Hermione is. Which, to me, means he could neither truly understand or respect her. Hermione did lash out at Ron at times... but never without prior provocation. While Ron had no problem using Hermione's brains to avoid doing his own work and improve his grades, he also seemed intimidated by her intelligence and was even openly derisive of Hermione's love of books and learning. I can't help but think that, if Ron and Hermione had actually gotten married, that Ron would have expected her to leave her books and dreams behind to become a proper Weasley wife by morphing into a younger version of his mum. Which is so not Hermione at all.Just in case I haven't already said so, I am enjoying every single chapter of this story very much. Bambu, you're one heckuva writer with a real gift for suspense!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I just love having articulate, thoughtful, and perceptive reviews like yours. It makes writing for an intelligent audience incredibly rewarding. Regrettably, I can't comment on some of your points without giving things away.I do, however, completely agree with you about Ron. He's not a bad guy at all, and with the right woman, the right job, and some time to grow up, he might end up being as terrific a man as his father. Having said that, in any event, Hermione is the wrong woman!Thank you so much for your review.