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Harbinger
Bambu179 Reviews | 6.72/10 (179 Ratings, 0 Likes, 151 Favorites )
Severus Snape has been pardoned by Ministry decree, but not everyone is pleased that he has returned to teaching at Hogwarts.
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Bambu
Member Since 2005 | 27 Stories | Favorited by 542 | 117 Reviews Written | 1,029 Review Responses
I have loved the written word since watching my mother’s fingers trace the lines of a book, luxuriating in riveting tales and well-turned phrases. Many a night I read until dawn, a plastic flashlight hidden under the covers to light the pages as I raced the rising sun to finish my latest must-read.
Since joining the HP fandom, I've been privileged to receive more than 50 awards, including Best Author (Quill to Parchment Awards) and Best Classic Author (Most Potente Passions). Among others, my stories have won awards for Best Hurt/Comfort (Spoils of War, Morning Has Broken), Best Novel Length (Calling Card, Guard…Check…Mate), Best One Shot (A Beach in Ireland), Best WIP (Saving a Death Eater, The Summoning), Favorite Overall Story (Complexities), and Readers’ Choice (A Quest of Paladins).
Aside from a judicious polish for formatting and egregious typos, I don't plan on revising my early work. Those stories are the stepping stones of my writing journey. Please note some stories contain adult content. None is more graphic than equivalent scenes in the television shows True Blood or Game of Thrones, and age appropriate warnings are posted.
I no longer write fanfiction prolifically. Like many fanfic authors, my focus has shifted to original work. A member of the Romance Writers of America and the Southern California Writers Association, I write under my name: Lin Thornhill.
My original story Verisimilitude published in Thoroughly Modern Monsters (Story Spring Publishing, 2013) reached the top 100 fantasy anthologies and broke into the top 10 in the UK the first month of release. Ben and Christine’s story will continue in 2016.
Fixation, my latest short story, slated for publication in J. Aldis’ anthology Immanence, with a winter 2015-2016 release, is particularly exciting as it anchors the Messengers of Inari novel series I’ve been developing for the past year.
9/2015
Reviews for Harbinger
so now the budding relationship between hermione and severus need to be built. and something needs to be explained; like how he can essentially live forever and hermione cannot. :/
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
True. He won't live forever, but he'll be long-lived. I suspect the benefits of having Hermione in his life will outweigh the potential future.Thanks for leaving me such a thought-provoking comment. I really appreciate it.
Wow! That was awesome! wow wow wow!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Awww! Thank you so much!
Sweeeeeeeeeeeet! Kingsley comes through in the pinch. Are we on to happily ever after, now? Or is there more trauma for our favorite couple?
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
I quite like Kingsley coming through in the end. As for happily ever after, there is a short epilogue coming up. I do hope you like it!Thanks so much for your kind words!
Ooh! Vector is a much nastier villian than I would have predicted! But they got her in the end!Great chapter!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Why thank you so much. I'm absolutely thrilled you thought so. You have such a fine tuned sense of these things, your comment is especially welcomed.
Excellent story, Bambu. Have I told you how much I like this story? The mystery had me going for many chapters. I never suspected Vector. You did a great job hiding the clues.I understand the justice delivered. Vector apparently hadn't harmed anyone (that we know of) until she attacked Hermione, who didn't want the incident to become public knowledge and therefore harm Severus. Hermione was confident that Vector could be punished without revealing Snape's secret, so his position at Hogwarts was not in jeopardy. Right?
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Thank you very much. I've loved reading your comments as I've posted the story -- there's still one, short epilogue to come later in the week.As for Vector and the justice delivered, well, you've pretty much nailed it on the head. While she might have killed Hermione on the beach, she didn't. While Minerva might have become ill in the snow, she, too, didn't. As for the rest, it all fell within the realm of harrassment, which is a job-losing offense, but not a lot more.Thanks again.
A memory Charm??? You've got to be kidding? What kind of consequence is that for extreme bad behavior and multiple counts of attempted murder (ie I count leaving Minerva to freeze and biting Harry as well).How far back does the memory charm go? 20 years? It needs to be of Lockhartian proportions to do any good. Will she forget she is a teacher? Headmistress? What about everyone else? Won't they wonder why she isn't at Hogwarts? You can't memory charm them all.Her claim that "it's my word against yours" doesn't work because Harry can penseive his memory of her attacking Hermione. It will show her tale to be a lie.She can't be left at Hogwarts. If she has been searching for centuries for her mate, temporarily forgeting that she found him won't last. Eventually, she will notice Severus again and the whole thing will start over. If he is connected with Hermione by then, it won't stop someone who has been searching for centuries and feels entitled to get what she wants.I don't know. I think when good vampires go bad, it is time for a providential stake-through-the-heart. You know, that accidental slip and fall and impalement on a handy tree branch or fence post or piano leg.Good job working in a foot massage for Hermione. That makes almost anything worth it.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Wow! You're so harsh. There is a little more to it than a simple memory charm. Vector, and there is an epilogue still to come. She may have been searching for centuries for 'a' mate, not 'her' mate; and while it's splitting hairs, or infinitives, if you will, there is a distinct difference. I don't think Kingsley is a hack at what he does, but at the most egregious, Vector has been guilty of abduction and assault, but not attempted murder. I supsect her plan was to talk Hermione out of coming to the school to work, but then when she noticed the vial of blood, her game plan changed.Boy, I'm rather surprised you were distressed by this outcome. Thank heavens for foot massages. And thank you for your thought-provoking comments. I do appreciate them.
Response from mikimoto (Reviewer)
I think you view Vector with too much sympathy. You did not write her that way.She left an old lady weakened, away from town and help, wandless, and unable to help herself. That she expected Minerva to succumb unto death is not a stretch of the imagination. Perhaps depraved indifference if not attempted murder.She attempted to overpawer and rip the throat out of a young man. Attempted murder. Her fangs were not set on stun. He goal was to win not subdue.She premeditatedly took another witch's wand so that her illegal actions would not be traced to her. This indicates that her plans did not change in the apartment as you suggest but that she came prepared to damage Hermione and fully intending to. It also shows she knows her actions to be wrong and needing to be covered up. That premeditation is the key to why I see it as attempted murder and not as some impulsive, rash act arrived on at the spur of the moment.And then there is her action in the apartment. Just what was she going to do when she broke through all of those bonds? Run? I don't think so. Join them for Chinese food? I don't think so. Create havoc and leave no witnesses only a scapegoat? Definitely. I mean, if she were as innocent as she claims, why struggle to be free? The authorities would have freed her.I don't quite understand your point between her mate and a mate. Wouldn't any mate be her mate? In either case, you have written a powerful motive to account for her actions - one that hasn't gone away for centuries and isn't likely to go away for centuries more. That plus her single-minded fixation is what to me makes her most dangerous.Sorry if I misinterpreted what you wrote or the motives of your characters. You wrote a character who is deadly, unrefusable, unethical, amoral, and overpoweringly strong. She is not merely cranky. She is a threat that can not (will not?) be reasoned with.
This is a really cool story. Is there more? An epilogue, perhaps? *fingers crossed*
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Thank you, and there is an a epilogue to come.
I normally don't like vampire stories, but I've loved this one.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Thank you so much. I don't normally like vampire stories either, but it was one of my recipient's requests.
i'm with mikimoto on this one. A memory charm? She is right, Harry can just show his memories from a penseive. He is just respected as she is if not more. Anyway, that being said, fabulous story. I have been hooked and I have liked it even better that it hasn't went on for 162 chapters. I like those stories as well, but not as aWIP. I hope the epiloque is nice and long and will answer our pesky questions. Hope to see more exciting adventures from you.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Wow, you're both so harsh about her punishment. There is indeed an epilogue, but it's not horribly long, although I hope it answers some questions you might have.I'm delighted you've enjoyed it, especially as it isn't 163 chapters long!Thank you.
That's a particularly cruel cliffhanger!Chosen mate, hmmm? This gets more and more interesting by the turn!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
::grins::Well, I shall be posting the next chapter in just a few minutes, so it's not too, too cruel.Thanks so much for reading and letting me know what you think.
Vector is one nasty piece of work! :)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Not very nice, is she?Thanks!
I find it interesting that Vector doesn't seem to take the hint to change tactics to win her "gentleman-fair." If my attempts to court had been interpreted by the object of my affections as worthy of calling the cops, I think perhaps I might change my tack. She seems less intent on "winning" him and more intent on "possessing" him. Perhaps she feels she can convince him with words once she reveals her interest, but I can't see that happening. She has overlooked the important fact that Severus likes to be the instigator, not the pursued, not the pawn.I think it is also odd that she chose to pursue the owl in him. What man really thinks a dead mouse is an appealing gift? Why not gift him with a book or a trip to a conference, something that would indicate she admired the man? Instead she brings him a gift that says "I picked this up while I was out hunting and I thought of you (after I sucked it dry of course. I didn't think of you over me. But it is the thought that counts, right?)."Vector has tipped her hand to such a degree that Hermione is doomed. There is no way she can let her go with what she knows. Still that seemed to be her intention from the beginning or so says the foe glass. She didn't need to admit anything to Hermione; she could have killed her right off. So this shows Vector to be the type that likes to play with her food.Hermione in peril. My least favorite circumstance to contemplate. I look forward to seeing how you thwart Vector's meal plans and have her removed as headmistress. I am rooting for a providential stake-through-the-heart administered in some ironically appropriate method.Glad your arm is improved.
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Wow! What a thought-provoking review.You make a very good point about Vector's possession v. winning strategy. I'd say more, but the next chapter will have more information, not necessarily directly about this aspect, but more in general about her choice. I can't say more about the owl form, although your comment does bear thinking about, but I don't want to give anything away.Your stake-through-the-heart scenario isn't quite the direction I take, but you made me laugh. Thank you for the review, and for remembering my wounded arm. It is better now.
oooh, nice cliffhanger. WOW. Excellent!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
::smirks:: Thank you very much!
Oh my goodness! Heart pounding stuff!!! And now a cliffie!!!So UNFAIR!!! Actually, I love to write cliffies, so it is my karma to suffer through them at the hands of others.So now we know who the culprit is. When she was first described I thought she sounded strange. Then when she was not one of the original five who knew, I thought about her as well. For some reason though, I did not put two and two together until this chapter.And I love the anagram Irma Pince = Im a Prince. I wonder if that was intentional on JKR's part. Tom Marvolo Riddle = I am Lord Voldemort, so why not?GREAT JOB!!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Heart pounding? How wonderful. Thank you for that terrific compliment.I'm so tickled you enjoyed what I did with Irma Pince, and even though you'd thought Vector a little odd, you didn't actually think is was she. Just tickled!
ARRRRG! Evil, evil cliffie!Can I gloat now? From the earliest scene containing both Vector and Hermione, I suspected Vector. Her access to Snape's classroom, her casual interposition between them all seemed significant. And the other clues seemed to pile up and point to her as well. I really like the idea of Irma Pince being Eileen Prince, too. Your plot has been so well concieved and spun out--it' great. The tension in this chapter was so amazing. Still- it's an evil, rotten place to leave us hanging! Please, say you will update very soon (pretty please? with chocolate on top?)
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Gloat away, you deserve it. I'm not terribly surprised that you did catch on to its being her. I imagine you do this when you read most mysteries ... I do to, in general.As for the cliffie, I'm grinning like a mad bandit. I'm so happy to have dropped it into the mix, and it just seemed like the right thing to do in this case. When Vector ... oops ... I can't say that. It's part of a conversation in the next chapter. ::shrugs:: I'll tell you next time!Thank you very, very much for the compliment about the plot. It's one of the most plot-heavy stories I've written, even though I play with plot all the time. The mystery component necessitates a little more precision, if you will, in the rolling out of the plot points. It's been a great exercise.As for the next chapter, well, I do like chocolate (and it happens to be finished, so expect it Monday morning.)
Response from orm irian (Reviewer)
Monday? Excellent! That should brighten up the start of the work week.
Wow!! What a thriller!! This story is brilliant!!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
You've made me blush, and smile, and then blush again. Thank you very much.
WOW! What a place to leave the chapter! I love the way you're pacing this, and I love this story. Yeah, I didn't figure it out until you spelled it out. (Pun intended.) I hope you have the next chapter close to done!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
::giggle:: I loved your pun. May I tell you how happy you've made me by not knowing it was Vector until now? Thank you very much.The next chapter is done, tweaked and polished and ready to post Monday morning.Thank you so much for your review.
Wow! What an incredible chapter!! I thought something was up with Vector, but hadn't gotten that far. Uh, a cliffie!!!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Thank you very, very much. I'm delighted you thought it might be Vector, but weren't quite certain. I don't generally write cliffhangers, but this story really called for it, don't you think?
Vector has been my number one suspect right from the beginning... although the evidence was purely circumstantial, from my POV, Vector made the best suspect due to timing, her position, and her first-rate knowledge of the castle as well as her swift loss of interest in hiring Hermione as the investigation and Hermione's friendship with Severus progressed.I do hope Harry got Hermione's message, but, if he did, I wonder what's keeping him? It's not like Harry to leave Hermione hanging in such a situation. Unless Vector found some way of ensuring Harry would be kept occupied as she made her move against Hermione.Hopefully, Harry and/or Severus can get to Hermione before Vector does something horrible to her younger rival. *Nibble fingernails anxiously*Oh my God, Bambu, what an EVIL CLIFFIE!!!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Points to your house for catching on so quickly. I worried about the clues being too blatant, but figured I had enough plausible possibilities to obscure the fact it was her.I promise not to make you wait too long for the next chapter. In fact, it's done and waiting until Monday for it to post. See. Not an evil author after all!Thank yuo again for your wonderful review.HermioneDiggory's response:
Thank you, most gracious non-evil author Bambu!!!*Offers Bambu a huge basket loaded with fresh fruits, Godiva chocolates, and HD's signature miniature turtle cheesecakes out of sheer gratefulness*
Wow, what an awesome chapter. I was riveted to every moment. I loved the reveal of yet another Snape secret and the final confrontation at the end. You've left me grinning from ear-to-ear in anticipation of what happens next.This is brilliant work you're doing here. Well done!!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
What a great compliment. Thank you!I'm so pleased you're enjoying the story so far; it was challenging and so much fun to write.
It's really getting exciting now..I wonder what Vector is going to do with Hermione..here's hoping Severus flies in and saves the day!!!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Thank you so much.I don't think Severus will be idle when he finds out what's happened. Not at all.
Where's that bloody Harry?
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
You'll see. His reason for not arriving poste haste is actually a good one, but he'll get there.Thanks for reading and enjoying ... and leaving me a note.
This is incredible!
Response from Bambu (Author of Harbinger)
Reallly? How wonderful you're enjoying it so much. Thank you.