It's wonderful to have you writing again.  You MLC story is one of the first I ever read and is still one of my favorites.  This story is starting out great as well.  Will be eagerly awaiting more.

Wow!  Neat start!  Looking forward to more.  GG

oh wow!!!!!! i love this story so far........ and am thrilled to see that the updating is done pretty regularly......... i cant wait for the next chapter ...i love your stories and you are one of my favorite authors!!!!!!!!!!!  keep up the fantastic work and give the muse an extra chocolate for the plot bunnies.........lol

Oh good you are posting this here I have only been going to ff to read this much easier to get here

Lovely second chapter. I must tell you that this is a dang good idea. If you ever feel like making a challenge of it, let me know! Adorable. Can't wait to see what's next. Cheers

Very cute.  Looking forward to seeing how you develop this story.

-Applauds- That was very good! I cannot wait until the next chapter comes along. I am interested in knowing what will become of young Carly, and if they will some how find a way of helping her. Bloody Brilliant!

I like how they both found children that they have something in common with. It will interesting to find out the exact terms of their arrangement.

This a very unique idea. I must say, I do like it very much! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon, as I will be looking forward to it.

Oh wow, what a lovely story!  I love how they both found children that touched them in a certain way.  I'm really looking forward to more of this.

I love this story.  I especially love how each found a child to whom they could relate.  I am so looking forward to more!

oh, how cute. I like this! can't wait to read more

The last chapters were great

I love it! Good addition! Makes my mouth water. That is soo cool to see the two of them working together. I do hope they can find a way to help remus! I would hate to think of something bad happening to him.

Ewww, even the thought of Hermione and Percy is enough to turn me off of sex forever.  I hope that Severus and Hermione can find a cure for the lycanthropy.  I like that they seem comfortable around each other.

I am simply loving this story. I can't say that I've heard of this challenge before this, but it's a good one. I like that Hermione defended Snape to Lupin... grrr, and isn't that good of Snape to be working on a cure for the wolf? Great chapter.

Excellent! I loved it! That chapter is very wll done, like the previous ones. I eagerly await more!

Thanks for posting a new chapter.  I've been looking forward to it.  I thought that Severus told Hermione that Carly spoke via Legilimency though.  I'll have to go back and read again.

I like that she and Carly are able to communicate. I did feel very sorry for her when she sort of cried after hearing what Percy thought. It's a sad thing to be lonely. Now... muahaha... I hope Snape soon notices these qualities in her. Teehee

Thanks for sharing your mini epilogue.  If u marked it complete more readers will come? 

Your life is angsty eh... well..  my Father loves each of us. Just come to Him. 

I usually leave a review at the end of the fan fic but to with hold more reviews for such a good author would make me an unfair ingrate. You deserve more bouquets!  

You are a precious author. Very precious indeed. 

ah, what an entertaining read!

Yeah, Percy makes me shudder too!Interesting story.