Calm Submissive State
Chapter 3 of 9
HechiceraRead the warnings, folks--it's Sirius Black, so you KNOW where this is going!
ReviewedA/N:
Many thanks to my beta RedSkyAtNight, who in addition to all her other wonderful attributes apparently has a strong stomach.
And my apologies to César Millán for the title, but I couldn't resist.
It fell to Amber to look after Sirius Black, and she was not especially happy about it.
It wasn’t the man himself, she thought, as she showed him into the candlelit bedroom. He was nice enough, and quite good-looking. And really, if you came down to it, there was just that one little sentence on his card that put you off.
He reached for her and drew her to him, sliding his hands down her back to her buttocks and kissing her neck.
“It’ll be all right this time,” he said. “I’ve got it under control, I swear.”
She knew this was not true. He said it every single time, and yet when the moment came, he invariably lost control. And to tell the truth, that didn’t bother her either. It was kind of exciting, really, and certainly not as objectionable as many of the things that clients wanted her to do.
She unbuttoned his shirt and ran her hands over his chest and down his flat belly. “You know I don’t mind, sweetheart,” she murmured softly.
And truly, she didn’t—especially since he had long ago agreed to a whole list of conditions, which were also written out on the card: No blowjobs. No kissing on the mouth. No scratching. No biting. Plus that one other proviso that she had added after the first time they were together: one condition that was an absolute deal-breaker for her.
She was wearing a simple white T-shirt and jeans, because that’s how he liked his women to dress; and nothing underneath, because that was also how he liked them.
She unbuckled his trousers and slipped her hand down into them. He never wore underwear either—at least not when he came here—and she took his cock in her hand and squeezed it gently.
“Yes,” he said, and pushed her T-shirt up over her breasts, leaning down to kiss them. His tongue flicked lightly over her nipple, and she sighed and leaned into him.
She couldn’t say that she minded this, either.
He undressed quickly. He always did this—took a brief time-out to get his kit off—and she waited until he was finished before slowly unzipping her jeans and sliding them down over her hips, then stepping out of them, watching his eyes widen in appreciation.
He reached a hand between her legs, pushing one finger into the cleft between her lips, and she groaned aloud.
“You like that?” he said, as he always did.
“Oh, babe, yes,” she replied, as she always did.
It was the truth, too: she did like it: this was absolutely not the part she didn’t like. His finger flicked across her clit, and she moved against his hand, warming up, hungry for more. “Touch me,” she said, and took hold of his cock again, stroking along the underside of it with her thumb.
He pushed her down on the bed and spread her legs apart, dipping his face between her thighs and sucking her clit into his mouth. She arched up against him and heard his breathing coarsen, felt an exquisite tickling as he moaned against her tender flesh. He was rubbing his cock rhythmically against her leg as he tasted her, and she thought, here it comes.
He gave a sudden loud groan, and there was a crackling in the air as he changed: one second he was there between her legs, the tangled curtain of his hair obscuring his face as he licked her—and in the next the man was gone, and in his place a large black dog lapping hungrily at her.
And oh, Christ have mercy, she thought, this was not the bad part either, no, dear god, no: no man on earth had a tongue like that, Jesus and all the angels. It must be six inches long, and quick, the surface a little rough; it felt unbelievably good, nuzzling into her cunt, the nose cold and wet against her pubis and the warm, wet tongue licking, and licking, and licking.
He lifted his head and began to growl low in his throat, and she turned obediently over and got onto all fours and presented her arse to him.
He was on her in a flash, his forelegs clasped around her and his hips pumping rapidly as he penetrated her over and over again. And she never minded this either, getting fucked hard and fast this way, so different from anyone else. “Come on, fuck me, make me come,” she gasped, and he did, growling and pounding into her like no man she had ever had, and it was good, oh god, it was so good to feel his hot come flooding into her as he thrust against her, and she gave a hoarse cry and her legs trembled underneath her.
Then he was finished; she felt him relax against her, his breath warm against her neck.
And then came the part she did hate.
Twenty minutes. Twenty minutes stuck together like a rusty nut and bolt, with his full weight on her until she thought her legs would collapse, and she would go absolutely out of her mind with boredom and discomfort.
Which was why she had insisted that he agree, in writing, to let her keep a stack of magazines and a bottle of nail varnish by the head of the bed.
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Haha awesome. If i had to beta this, I'd have been giggling too much to get any work done on it. Thanks for not taking the pwp too seriously!!
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Funny you should say that. This chapter was the last straw in a permanent rift between me and my beta, who objected to its unrealistic portrayal of journalism.
" I can't belive it's not pussy" ??! I really wish i hadn't had a mouth full of tea when I read that
This is the best story ever. I mean, this chapter alone. Riiiight up my alley!!
I love teh fact that she writes like it's a romance novel! I could so see her doing that.
These are so funny, I hope you intend to write more. I really do wonder why those girls were fighting, a ploy to get the men's attention or was it real? I also would love to read about Mrs. Malfoy and what trouble she casues. *lol*
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
They were fighting because one of them was not Malavi--it was Bruce, who had used the hair Malavi gave him a few chapters back to make some Polyjuice, which he thought would turn him into a perfect replica of Snape for his appointment with Narcissa. But because Malavi had substituted her own hair for Snape's, he got a big surprise.
Very interesting... I love where this is going! The last line caught me off guard... I wonder why he's never indulged further? Great start!
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Thanks!
This fic was actually a kind of spinoff from my OFC fic Soroche, so this Snape is my "Soroche Snape."
My theory is that this is Snape's way of remaining symbolically "faithful" to Lily while still getting his needs met occasionally.
I came across this on random story search. I read it back in the days when I was lurking, and not reviewing. So I read it again and really had a good time. Sometimes stories that are labeled "humor" really aren't all that funny. You on the other hand have made me laugh. I hope that you periodically continue this. It isn't like it has such a raging plot that it must be updated frequently, but I think there are plenty of characters left who are just dying for a chance to shine. Plus, you can't just leave us hanging as to whether anyone EVER gets the jar money. He has to have a breaking point, doesn't he?!
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Thanks so much! I don't really know when/if I'll continue this story--sadly, its interruption is inextricably linked to a very painful event in my life, and so far I've been unable to get past that connection. So we'll see.
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Oh, I am so sorry to hear that. RL really doesn't always go how we want it to, does it? I won't hold it against you if you can't finish it. Of course you could always just write something else completely different, but fantastic and that would suffice. I'll think happy thoughts for you ;)
Ew, ew, ew, eeeewwww! BRILLIANT!! 111% Rita!
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
*bows deeply and heads off to the shower*
ROFL. Hoops! That is so funny! :)
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Glad you liked!
LOL. Poor old Perce! :)
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Yeah, he's a bit of a dweeb, isn't he?
That's the purplest prose I've read for a long time. Good effort! Can just see Rita writing that LOL. And I thought she was a beetle, not a mosquito... :P
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
You are the ONLY person who has picked up on "Anopheles." Fifty points to your House! I did it because of "Skeeter."
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I did travel medicine for years. I can recognise a damned malaria carrier when I see one LOL! :)
That'll make the Polyjuice taste funny! :)
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Yes. Not to mention the unanticipated result.
Nekkid Rita Skeeter... oh the HORROR... bring the brain bleach, STAT!!!But Rita's description of her "sacrifice" on behalf of her duty as a journalist is truly beyond the pale. Urgh. *Staggers off for a shot (or three) of Pepto*
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Heh heh heh. A shot or three of tequila probably wouldn't hurt either.
It's no wonder she write for the Daily Prophet. Her use of vocabulary for the woman anatomy is absolutely dreadful.But her card is absolutely gorgeous. How can you make it look like a real paper is beyond me, and I'm admirative.
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Thank you! Those cards are fun to do.
Geez! I think that killed my libido for at least a week! Rita is truely 'shudder-worthy.' Her card is pretty funny, though. Will we ever see someone succeed at fucking the Potions bloke?
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Wait and see....
"my hot, wet grotto of romance", that is just so, utterly cringeworthy and she would totally write it that way too.*cringes, shudders and giggles, all at once*
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Yes, I had to take a long shower after spending that much time with my Inner Rita.
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
I will never ever get over that sentence, you realise. It is just so amazing If I dared I would use it on my husband, but I am to frightened I would put him of sex for the rest of the year.
I loved the way you had them undress! Perfection. You captured the twins exuberance perfectly.
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Still haven't decided who gets the smoking lube...
Do we get to see what Bruce does with this hair? Very hot pool scene!
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Yeah, I wish I could get in that pool with him...where was I? Oh, yeah, the hair. That's the source of the second Malavi in the Value for Money chapter.
She's perfect. And I can so see Filius being completely attracted to her.
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
I'm glad you like her. I had fun writing her!
Oh man, I can see Percy being just this uptight - until he sees the value in women rolling around on the floor! LOL.
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Ha ha, thanks. Not one but two "Personal Areas" to gaze upon...
I can perfectly see RIta writing this article and this description. Perfection.
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Wow, that was fast! Thank you! You can see Rita's card on my Deviant Art site--I'll put a link in the story.
Response from timestep (Reviewer)
Actually, I've been reading and reviewing on OWL, but really think it's so fabulous I wanted to make sure you are getting proper reviews/story rating here too!
ROFL!! I hadn't expected that explanation about Filius' nickname. Brilliant job again.
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Thank you kindly.*bows*
“Dribbles some before he shoots.”
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
*bows*
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
I just need to say this; I really liked the New Orleans bit. To me, New Orleans have always felt magical. I have always wanted to go there rather then New York or any other place in America where my countrymen tend to visit.
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
Thank you. I'm feeling reeeeeally self-conscious about having introduced an American character into this fic, but NO is in a class by itself, I think. And so brothel-y.
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
Victor Krum and Fleur Delacour wasn't exactly Londoners either, so why not? The divine JK Rowlings brought in non english people in her world so all you are doing is following tradition...well...following tradition to a certain extent anyway...
I never thought that a story about a whorehouse would make me chuckle through a whole chapter. This is just so delightful! Love it!Ehm, yes, I did get out of the pool eventually, shrivelled up like a dried plum :P
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
OMG!!! This is fabulous! I once read the memoirs of a madam from a brothel in Bowling Green, KY, Miss Pauline Tabor I believe her name was, and her tales read very similar to this. You ought to give it a try to see if you can find something on her. She was a pistol! Might give you a lift if you need it for this story. Sara
Response from Hechicera (Author of The Wayward Wand)
I will definitely look for that!I'm glad you like the story, thanks!