I'm enjoying this story very much, and the letters chapter is excellent. Umbridge is spot on. Viktor is more farcical than IC, but I suppose that's the point :)

Update, please?

Please, update soon. You're doing a wonderful job, I'm really enjoying this story. I think this is the first story (that I can remember anyway) where Snape gets a petion as well. What is Umbridge up to, anyway? I hope we find out. And Hermione should hurry up and accept Severus' petition - She won't want to sit around and have kids. Not that there's anything wrong with that....but still. You're doing an awesome job, and I can't wait to read more. So please, UPDATE SOON! *Offers cookies*

Thank you for a new chapter.  good as always.  waiting for more. p

Hmm, is Marcus really a Death Eater?  If he's "at large," then how could she contact him?  Still not sure why Viktor would choose Hermione over a Bulgarian miss.  So Ginny won't give Severus advice on how to snag Hermione?  I wonder if it would help Severus if he told Hermione that she would be saving him from marriage to Umbridge...  Thanks for the cute bit about Hermione trying to set his robes on fire!  Smart Severus, to be prepared for everything.

Lol, I love it but poor Hermione!!