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Malfoy Manor Heavy Lies the Crown
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Heavy Lies the Crown

1: Door Number Three

2: Comfortably Numb

3: Such Great Heights

4: A Day's Work

5: Machinations

6: Conversations with Other People

7: Winds of Change

8: Hero in Her Skies

9: Hold Your Breath, Little Lungs

10: The Game is Afoot

11: Chimes at Midnight

12: What the Heart Wants

13: Calm Before the Storm

14: The Beauty of the Rain

15: Winning You With Words

16: Do This With Me

Heavy Lies the Crown

floorcoaster

83 Reviews   |   83 Ratings, 0 Likes, 86 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Romance Malfoy Manor 118,104 Words 16 Chapters WIP
Draco Malfoy Hermione Granger

The seconds ticked by, and with each one, he felt his spirits lift. His expression remained impassive and his position statue-like, yet Draco felt like laughing at the irony: he had never in his life been so happy at the thought of seeing his father.

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Chapters (16)

Chapter 1: Door Number Three

Chapter 2: Comfortably Numb

Chapter 3: Such Great Heights

Chapter 4: A Day's Work

Chapter 5: Machinations

Chapter 6: Conversations with Other People

Chapter 7: Winds of Change

Chapter 8: Hero in Her Skies

Chapter 9: Hold Your Breath, Little Lungs

Chapter 10: The Game is Afoot

Chapter 11: Chimes at Midnight

Chapter 12: What the Heart Wants

Chapter 13: Calm Before the Storm

Chapter 14: The Beauty of the Rain

Chapter 15: Winning You With Words

Chapter 16: Do This With Me


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10/10

Pagemistress83

I love this fic! I hope you update soon!

10/10

mascarpone

Hi! Really great story, I appreciate it a lot, please update soon. Of course, I could not miss the offical begging.

You quickly destroyed my first suspect, (it was Pansy), so now I am utterly clueless. You got me cornered, obviously, I am not Hercule Poirot-type.

I really adore it, when somebody got the talent to invent and then tell a captivating story, and you have that, so congratulations.
But, you are killing me with this hole UST, in a good way, of course, but still.... when are they going to have a proper first kiss finally?????? Not to mention the other stuff....hmm?

Good job, anyway, hoping for more soon.....

0/10

Blaze Shaddowstar

Yea!! I was so happy to find another chapter of this story in my inbox. I absolutely love this story. I would have reviewed sooner, but I had to go back and reread since it has been so long and I could only remember bits...sucks having a crappy memory! LOL This chapter was great, although I wish that there had been a little more romance! I can't wait to read more...hopefully the next chapter will be out soon!! Keep up the awesome writing!!

10/10

MollysSister

I am guessing that Pansy's mysterious lover is either the blackmailer or Ron.  Why was she so tight lipped about it?

Hey arent you about ready to have yourself a baby? Tell me things!

10/10

MollysSister

"No one ever promised it would be fair.” Aww Floo you should have said "No one ever promised me a rose garden" Okay okay Draco would not have made a muggle reference. Still it would be funny if he did. Oh the dispair! I wish Draco would realize she is truly over Charlie.

0/10

sara lady dalian

I am so glad to see this again!  This chapter was wonderful. 

0/10

JENGEORGE

Yeah!  I hope this means more updates are on the way!  I really enjoy this story, and have missed it.  You have done well creating a budding romance as well as an exciting mystery.  I can't wait to read more!!!!

0/10

mock_turtle

thanks for quoting that song at the beginning; I just went and listened to it.  quite nice :)

0/10

Bettina

I love how you combine mythologies.

The scars-reminiscense was probably a favourite scene of mine.  You picture the rich businessman very well.

It would really be nice to get some background by now.

0/10

Bettina

Hi,

  > I’d love to hear any and all theories you have so far on what’s going on.
Righto, here we go: Harry (or Ron) owes Hermione, and she asked to connect her with Draco.
Hmm, that leaves several people out, but I cannot see how else they'd have tolerated Malfoy being late and then chatting with Hermione.

As for the box, I suppose there's a lot with it, but I cannot put my finger in.

As well, I'm leaving for a holiday tomorrow and want to read on now. It's such a nice story!

10/10

JENGEORGE

I noticed that its been a while since there has been an update.  I'm rubbish at posting reviews, but wanted to let you know how much I enjoy this story, and hope that you are planning on continuing with it.  You have a great plot and your characters are very realistic and well fleshed out.  Keep up the good work!

9/10

Jessikitty

I love this story. I love the tension and the angst that come with every chapter. I tend to read updates on my phone, so I usually go back and re-read the chapters on my computer just to see the art. Simply amazing. Looking forward to a new chapter. :)

0/10

mock_turtle

I love the picture of charlie but find hermione's face jarring...that said, still a great magazine cover!

10/10

Battle of Lissa

Excellent update! I loved every moment, especially the angst. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

0/10

Blaze Shaddowstar

I'm trying to figure out what to say, but I just keep staring at the cursor blinking. Hmmm...


I would really like to reach into the computer and knock both their heads together and tell them to get a clue.


Your story is extremely well written, I just wish the chapter had had a more positive note. But...I understand that it's gotta be a struggle between the two of them, or they would be totally and completely out of character. I can't wait to read more!!

10/10

MollysSister

"Friday night, since I know you’re free." I hooted with laughter when Hermione said that. SAdly Draco let irony slip on by him. I have a feeling its going to take some sort of extream situation before they will both confess their true feelings. Am I right to be worried about the drop?

10/10

Blaze Shaddowstar

I just discovered your story yesterday and find myself wishing I hadn't, 'cause now I don't want to WAIT to read the rest!! I absolutely LOVE this story!! Hopefully Hermione will take her own advice and tell Draco how she is feeling. As for the blackmailer, I am dying to find out who it is. I keep trying to figure out who it is  and have several theories, but keep coming back to Greg. I guess because Draco has always had everything that he wants...Pansy, money, women throwing themselves at him, etc. Also, because he is one of the people you want to overlook because he is Draco's friend. I'm sure I'm way off, but I can't wait to find out who it is!! Can't wait to read more!! I hope you update soon!!  

10/10

MuseAmusant

Ooops. I had a feeling that something like this was about to happen.

Draco screwed up bigtime by not canceling his "appointments" with that floozy altogether, which even he realized he should have done. And so now Hermione thinks he was just using her, even though it's pretty obvious Draco does have real feelings for her. What a mess!

Draco better whip out the mega-size pooper scooper and get down to business if he wants even half a chance to salvage his budding relationship with Hermione. Even so, I think there had better be some serious groveling involved....

10/10

Battle of Lissa

Excellent update, filled with all the entertaining drama foreshadowed in previous chapters. I do hope we get to see Draco's jealousy regarding Hermione's date with Charlie. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

10/10

Battle of Lissa

This fic is incredible. I read it all in one go and didn't want it to end! I'm very excited to see that this has been recently updated. So much tension and angst without being overly dramatic or depressing. I love it! Cannot wait for the next update.

10/10

potterbrat

Uh-oh!!  I have a feeling there's going to be something in the paper!!  I didn't even really want to read this chapter yet.  I'm going to be on pins and needles waiting for the next one. 

By the way, I've changed my black-mailer to Caleb.  There's something about him!!  It's always the quite ones.

10/10

potterbrat

“In my experience, it’s good to confess your feelings. Either way, you can move ahead instead of being stuck in the limbo of not knowing.”

I would LOVE it if she would take her own advice.  WIMP

Great chapter.

10/10

MollysSister

Ginny states that Draco has "signature moves" elaborate please.

Im glad Hermione got some closure with Charlie and yet all those flash bulbs are going to be pictures showing Draco she was out with another man. That will hurt him.

More please!

10/10

potterbrat

Angsty!!  I'm loving this!

10/10

potterbrat

Oh goodness... I wonder??  Pansy maybe?  I hope it's nobody I like.

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