New Chapter for Heavy Lies the Crown
Heavy Lies the Crown
floorcoaster83 Reviews | 7.07/10 (83 Ratings, 0 Likes, 86 Favorites )
The seconds ticked by, and with each one, he felt his spirits lift. His expression remained impassive and his position statue-like, yet Draco felt like laughing at the irony: he had never in his life been so happy at the thought of seeing his father.
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the picture at the end of this chapter is stellar. I often ignore pictures if they don't line up with my mental image of the characters, but the end picture is very well done here.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
I'm glad you liked the image!! The artist did a stellar job with it, for sure. :)
wow. it's so funny, seeing malfoy's proposition being offered from hermione's point of view. we know what's going on in malfoy's head from past chapters, but he just can't put it into words and he seems arrogant and official... ha! i thought it was quite funny. the "are you seeing anyone" question was just priceless.and honestly? I love the malfoy stationary :)
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
Thanks for the great review! I figured Draco's POV for this chapter would be boring and repetitive--let's see what Hermione's thinking during the whole thing! :)Glad you like the stationary!
very nice! love the twists and turns and attention to detail all the way! THanks so much for all of yoru hard work
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
Thanks for the review! More twists and turns to come! :)
Squeeeee I just love all the extras in this chapter, I mean the letter from Narcissa and the note from the journal. They are so cool. Tell me this: How can Draco offer her unlimited funds for her reasearch when it sounds like he is short on cash? Draco must really be paranoid if he is even monitoring the time it took him to "ask her to tea" He thinks this blackmailer is omnicent doesnt he?
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
I totally got the idea for those extras from a fic in the last ss/hg exchange. Unlimited funds: the funds will only be available if/WHEN they discover the blackmailer. If he's not being blackmailed, he'll be fine. The business is doing really well, but things are still tight. He really does, in a way. he has no idea where the person is, how much the person sees. Not a fun place to be.
As always I adored the chapter. You have set the stage for so many things I cant tell where one plot point starts and another ends. I am hooked! I am not pleased with Miss Bell or Mr. Ron Weasley. I wanted Draco to ask Hermione out but I figure thats a bit premature. ((pouts))
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
"I wanted Draco to ask Hermione out but I figure thats a bit premature. ((pouts))"ROFL. Yes, slightly. Much angst and UST to come before anything like that happens. :D But then, that's the fun in these stories, right?
Yeah! Matchmaker Draco! :-) Hey, really enjoying your tale - you've done a great job with the reveal of the back story and kept the plot moving while totally unpredictable! Thanks so much for your hard work - can't wait to see the next chapter!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
LOL! Yes, he dabbles a bit in trying to set up his friends. It's a great way to get Pansy off his back, no? :)Thanks for the review!!
This is my first chance to read some of your work and I am loving it! Nice pacing here - some good reveal into DM and LM relationship and plot hints. Really like your writing style - can't wait to continue!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
I'm so thrilled you're liking this so far!! And I'm happy you found my stuff! I'm afraid not everything I've posted on this site is complete, but this one will be for sure. I'm posting just as quickly as I can to get caught up. :)
so draco invests in WhizzHard books, does he? :)OMG that letter!! can't wait for next chapter...
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
ROFL. That cracked me up for some reason!! :D Thanks for the review!
I think it could be "dear" uncle Lestrange & CO doing the blackmailing. they would have the knowledge of various malfoy misdeeds, and they need money, being on the run and allgreat story, BTW
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
Thank you for your guess! I'm thrilled you're enjoying this so far!
drawn from an inherited well of hate and intolerance very eloquent your Draco is. I am glad Hermione accepted his appology. I am impressed with your creativity that Hermione would be exempt from the dark magic due to her blood status. Blackmailer? A Weasley for sure.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
Thank you! I played on the arrogance of generations past, assuming that muggle-borns were inferior based on the "impurity" of their blood. It's only natural they'd make a mistake at some point. :)"very eloquent your Draco is" -- Very Yoda-like your comment is!
I like the idea of Charlie and Hermione on and off again. Especially how it doesnt appear to bother Ron. Whew! Pansy is a lot smarter than I think Draco gives her credit for. I hope she meets someone who hates purple too.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
Haha, it doesn't seem to bother Ron ANYMORE. More on that to come. :)And LOL at Pansy meeting someone who hates purple. That's awesome.
interesting interesting!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
Thank you so much! Hope you continue to like! :)
I enjoyed this chapter very much. Looking forward to the next one already!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING
and also, I adore the artwork for this chapter.
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Wah! Too long! I cannot wait for the next chapter@!
Incredible update! You never fail in making each chapter thoroughly enjoyable, from beginning to end! I love the dynamic you have created with these two. And especially the angst! Cannot wait for an update!
Thanks for the great long chapter. I am telling anyone who will listen to read this story. Not my favorite pairing (I prefer Draco/Luna but nobody writes that one) but I love this story and can't wait for more. I won't beg though 'cause you update regularly. I also finally figured out how to find the playlist. I will be getting into that next. I love the art, too. Cheers, GryffKat
Please update!!! It's killing me! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! :) xxx
I never imagined Malfoy gardens as the pictures showed, but now I KNOW they are perfect!!!
I wonder if Draco will keep his feelings of carrie guilt when he sees Hermione and Charlie on the cover of the Prophet?
You know I squeal each time Im notified you have updated right? I do!!!
I really love this story. I really love Hermione and Draco together, too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and to when they each realize the other is as caught up as they are.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
Thank you! I'm pleased to hear you're enjoying the story so far. I love them together too! Now if they'd just open their eyes and SEE what's in front of them. LOL. :)
I had to put my sleeping shih tzu down to type a reply, but you're worth it. I think you are on a good pace with your writing and the insights into both minds is pleasant and complete. I find your characters very human and your writing engaging. Looking forward to more.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
Aww! I feel honored! :) Thank you so much for the kind words!
have you read "Sorcery and Cecelia, or, The Enchanted Chocolate Pot" by Patricia C Wrede and Caroline Stervemer? I just realized during this chapter that there is another case of a convenient relationship to fool others, which ends in true love (of course)! If you haven't read this book, you should. It's a combo Regency Romance and Fantasy book.As always, I love your writing and cannot wait for more!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
I haven't read the book! I'll have to check it out. Thanks for the suggestion! Thanks again!
nicely done - really enjoying your secondary characters and your plot line! Thanks so much for taking the time to post!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
Thank YOU for taking the time to read and review! Glad you're enjoying it so far!
So something did happen between Greg and Pansy. I never would have thought Greg wouldnt be a kiss and tell kind of guy... No more filler chapters young lady give me Draco and Hermione horiztonal! Im kidding I know thats at least 40 chapters off. First we have to solve the mystery!!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
ROFL! Horizontal? You don't want to know how many chapters away from THAT we are ... :DThanks so much!
It's hard to know if Lucius' words are true. He seems very good at double talk, as all Slytherins are I suppose, so I'm wary of his denial in the participation with the LaStrange's. We'll see...A grown man now instead of a spoiled child. It's nice to see his new maturity. Looking forward to draco's interactions during Quidditch.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)
Lucius is excellent at double-talk. LOL. Thanks for the review!