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Malfoy Manor Heavy Lies the Crown
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Heavy Lies the Crown

1: Door Number Three

2: Comfortably Numb

3: Such Great Heights

4: A Day's Work

5: Machinations

6: Conversations with Other People

7: Winds of Change

8: Hero in Her Skies

9: Hold Your Breath, Little Lungs

10: The Game is Afoot

11: Chimes at Midnight

12: What the Heart Wants

13: Calm Before the Storm

14: The Beauty of the Rain

15: Winning You With Words

16: Do This With Me

Heavy Lies the Crown

floorcoaster

83 Reviews   |   83 Ratings, 0 Likes, 86 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Romance Malfoy Manor 118,104 Words 16 Chapters WIP
Draco Malfoy Hermione Granger

The seconds ticked by, and with each one, he felt his spirits lift. His expression remained impassive and his position statue-like, yet Draco felt like laughing at the irony: he had never in his life been so happy at the thought of seeing his father.

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Chapters (16)

Chapter 1: Door Number Three

Chapter 2: Comfortably Numb

Chapter 3: Such Great Heights

Chapter 4: A Day's Work

Chapter 5: Machinations

Chapter 6: Conversations with Other People

Chapter 7: Winds of Change

Chapter 8: Hero in Her Skies

Chapter 9: Hold Your Breath, Little Lungs

Chapter 10: The Game is Afoot

Chapter 11: Chimes at Midnight

Chapter 12: What the Heart Wants

Chapter 13: Calm Before the Storm

Chapter 14: The Beauty of the Rain

Chapter 15: Winning You With Words

Chapter 16: Do This With Me


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Reviews for Heavy Lies the Crown

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10/10

Mazzy

I've said this before when I've stumbled across particularly well-written Dramione fics, but it deserves repeating here: I seem to forget how much I enjoy Draco's character, delving into the Malfoy family's dynamic, and Dramione in general until I read it again (almost exclusively reading SSHG nowdays). I look forward to this journey you will take us on, and to getting reaquianted with a few characters that I found most fascinating in the HP series, but were sorely lacking in exposure and depth during the books.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)

I'm so thrilled you decided to try THIS Dramione fic. :)  I totally agree that these characters didn't get enough exposure in the books. Especially Draco, but Hermione as well. Though I suppose JKR could only do so much in 7 books. Still, more Draco would have been nice. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

10/10

MollysSister

Holy crap that banner is just perfection! It took awhile to get a straight answer out of Lucius didnt it? Even now he phrased things so he could worm his way around if he wanted. Damn the man. Poor poor Draco

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)

Isn't the art PRETTY? I LOVE art. I would marry it if I could. Ah, Lucius. He can be quite slippery when he wants to be. Thanks so much for the review! Next chapters in the queue!

10/10

MollysSister

yIPPPEEEEEEEE!!! we have ourselves a saga to follow fangirls! Squeeeee!!!! I of course have a million questions you wont answer. What would Draco rather be doing than running Malfoy industries? Why are they short on money? they arent really going to have DE over for dinner are they? why did Harry have a Malfoy box? Where the hell is Hemrione? Waiting no so patiently for the next update you big tease.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)

HAHA, hello! I love your reviews. You're totally my TPP fan. LOL. Questions, questions. Actually, I'll answer ALL of them![1] Lots of things![2] You'll see![3] Mwahaha, yes![4] You'll find out![5] In upcoming chapters!*snickers at own cleverness*:D

0/10

mock_turtle

I am uber-excited.  Always glad to see another story from you here; i've been on the lookout.  Thank you, and this looks like it'll be an awesome story!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Heavy Lies the Crown)

Thank you! You've been watching? I'm flattered! I need to finish the other 2 stories I started posting here. I'll add it to my to-do list...Anyway, I hope you enjoy this story! :)

Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)

Of course I've been watching.  in a totally non-creepy way.  I like your writing.  It has pairings I like, you've got a good style, you have original plots, you don't use overused words, you imbue your characters with "their own" emotions rather than using them as your emotional toys to manipulate.  or that's how it seems to me.  your stories are a pleasure to read.  I know you work on Livejournal a lot but I like it when you update here, because I do not have a livejournal and I like leaving reviews.  and yes, I am enjoying this story.  very much.  :)

10/10

Delayed Poet

*sigh* While I certainly don't blame Katie, I do see where Draco is coming from. He was young and desperate, and the desperate generally don't make well thought out decisions, and when you add in the inexperience of youth, it is almost always disasterous. And, I do think that Draco truly, to the core, understands that what he did during those years was wrong, and he really does have a deep, honest regret for them.

I've never really bought into the idea of Hermione being a potions researcher, as she didn't seem to have a natural affinity for it in the books. Yes, she could follow the instructions set before her and brew the potion 100% correct, but it always seemed to me that she didn't have that deeper connection with the art of potions-making. I do love that she's the Arithmancy Professor, and I'm very amused that she's Head of Slytherin House, and that Blaise is Head of Gryffindor.

I look forward to seeing how this continues to develop, but it's time for a break from reading, for me to get some writing of my own done!

10/10

Delayed Poet

*sigh* crap! I was so hoping it wasn't blackmail! Poor Draco. Why do I get the feeling that Harry knows a lot more about this than he let on? Somehow, this blackmail has the feel of someone on the dark side, or perhaps within the Ministry. I look forward to finding out!

10/10

Delayed Poet

Oh thank goodness, I do hope that's the end of Pansy trying to marry Draco! It's amusing to me that she can't tell the difference between a man not kissing her back and a man being a bad kisser.

The interraction at the quidditch game was... interesting. I do like that Draco and Charlie seemed to hit it off well enough, though I'm with Draco -- Harry is definitely not being completely honest. I really want to know what's in that box, and I hope it won't be too much longer before we get to find out!

As for Hermione, I'm really glad that he was drawn to her right away. It does make sense that he would feel the deepest regret to her, for standing by while she suffered at the hands of his deranged aunt.

All in all, a great chapter!

10/10

Delayed Poet

It's so sad to me that you have so few reviews for this fic! In just these first two chapters, you've pulled me in, and I can't wait to keep reading through the rest! I can't guarantee I'll review every chapter, but I'll certainly try *grin*

You've painted a very clear picture of the life Draco has built since the end of the war, and I do love how Lucius has bounced back since prison. He's treading a very fine line, but he's had many years' practice finding his balance there. I do hope he was honest with Draco about not restarting the DE's, but I wouldn't be terribly surprised if he lied. And, Pansy is very annoying. I do hope that she will be dealt with, and soon. Though I imagine she'll be very difficult for Draco to shake off.

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