He glowers, yet he's lovin' it.

 green icing - for a Slytherin  and he didn't know what it was!  She had every right to shove it in his face!   Man is Severus thick!!

How ungrateful he is. She even chose the perfect icing color for him. *grin*

LOL touche! Nicely done.

Oh good - H seems more heartened here - a worthy match for S's derision - excellent - thank you for your time and effort in writing - so enjoy your work!

LOL Oh my gosh!  The banter in this is WONDERFUL!!  Very nicley done.

adorable!  thanks

I somehow missed this chapter in the flurry of email updates that flood my box.  I loved her suggestion to be lonely together!

*rolf* "alliteration competition" indeed! ;o)

He's such a romantic flirt. Is it any wonder that she's so faithful? I love it!

I love how you say so much with so few words. 

Watch yourself, Severus.  We wouldn't want to catch you smiling at Hermione.  ;-)  That was a charming addition!  I really liked the interaction between them.

*sweet smile* They're so cute like that.

Poor Severus, he would hate being helpless and dependant on another. Can't wait to see what he says to her the next time.

I don't know if I'd have the strength to keep coming back when he doesn't say a word.  Good for Hermione for doing so.

LOL. The way to a man's heart... :)

so enjoying this - please keep up the great work - can't wait to see more

what evocative ficlets.  thanks so much

beautifully written.  thanks

She finally knows when to stay quiet. :)

It's sad that Severus is so accustomed to giving over to everyone's needs and wants. He needs, deserves to have his wishes observed.

wonderful job with your characterization - I'm so enjoying your work -- can't wait to see more!

beautiful!  and what a wonderful quote at the chapter's start - lovely work!  Thanks!

I hope he's going to say something at one point.

She's very patient and seems to know him well.  I'm sure he appreciates that.