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Back for Good
LiteraryBeauty122 Reviews | 7.77/10 (122 Ratings, 0 Likes, 58 Favorites )
Hermione risks a part of her soul to bring Sirius back from the Veil. Will her sacrifice be for nothing? And what exactly has she given up, as Sirius finds himself amongst the living once more?
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Reviews for Back for Good
Hopefully this lessens with time or it will make life very complicated.
Well, so far so good. Sort of.
Well, Harry took that well. I don't know whether to expect this to be dark, or whether his return will be a good thing. Somehow I suspect the former.
Oh dear! I hope he's back in a good way. It can't be that easy though, can it?
This is scary stuff she is dealing with. I admire her for it, but it also seems foolish. It makes me feel a little better that someone else knows and really made her understand the enormity of what she is about to do. Gulp!
This is not one of her finer (smartest)moments, but I can see her becoming obsessed with his return and plunging ahead just because she can. Yikes! What more will it cost her?
Worth the time!
P.S. I love your Snape. Everybody should have one.
Good fic so far, but I think there's a continuity problem in this chapter. Hermione's day seems less than 2 hours long, including the time it took her to dress in the morning. In the morning, Hermione woke up and went to a 20 minute interview where she had a cup of tea. Afterwards, she comes home exhausted, chats with Snape and Harry for 5 minutes, and heads to bed because she has to work the next day. There was no mention of meals or the passage of time doing anything except talking to 4 men.
i was reading the last bit of this chapter while listening to "you'll be in my heart" by phil collins, and the moment was too perfect not too mention
I've been a fan of the Sirius/Hermione ship for a while now. I'm not sure how I missed this story, but omg am I glad I found it!! Back For Good has found its way onto the very short list of my absolute favorite SB/HG fics!
Thank you so much for writing such a fantastic story!
I love Hermione ans Sirius' children. They are all such a great mix of each of them. I like how they are able to just live their lives and go on, not obsessing about why the veil sent him back.
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
I'm so glad you liked them! I had a blast creating them (and their star names :D ).Thanks for being with me on this journey!
You have n epilouge in mind, I hope!
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
Yep, it's up now!
Such a beautiful wedding. So perfect to show all their friends and any doubters just how in love with each other they really are. Perfect.
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
Thank you so much. I love weddings.
I don't know what else to say but - AWWWWWW!!! I'm literally melting in happiness and warm fuzziness from this chapter. My brain is mush and I can't think of anything more constructive to say. Absolute perfection
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
Thank you so much! So glad to hear it.
Makin' babies! That's a great idea. Are we close to the "happily ever after" part now?
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
One more chapter and epilogue!
I love it when this softer, more tender side of Sirius comes out. For all is swaggering and posturing, he really is insecure when it comes to his relationship with Hermione.
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
Exactly! Sirius is really just Hermione's age, what with Azkaban and then the Veil. He needs to grow up, and who better to help him?
Ok, so I was right. He has frikkin lost his gobstones! He is completely prepaire to have sex with his SISTER just to have her back. Now I want to know what he did to the veil that made it react like that? Excellent chapter. I like how Sirius semi-apologises.
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
Yep, Frankenhodge was severly damaged in the head.Hope you enjoy the update!
Yay! Everything's going to be okay. I wonder what Jimothy did to the Veil though? I was thinking Frankenstein's monster or something freaky like that. Of course, it did take a week for Sirius to come back so maybe something freaky will happen here too.Anyway, I'm glad they were reunited and realized that small things shouldn't get in the way in a relationship.
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
You're the second person to catch the Frankenstein allusion (Frankenhodge...). :DSo glad you liked the update!
Uh oh. Mischief is afoot!
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
It is, at that!
Oooh, I knew Frankenhodge was up to no good. He is definately got himself involved in something not good.
Although Sirius knew Hermione's feelings about House Elves, he still thought she would kinda eventually be ok with it. Men!
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
Frankenhodge is definitely dealing with some issues.Yeah, Sirius was of the "maybe if I don't say anything, she won't notice" creed. That never works. Just ask my husband. *g*
I have a bad feeling a whole new set of problems are about to arise. This guy, Mr. Frankenhodge, seemed a bit too nice last time and now he's freaking me out. And I never pictured Draco coming into play at all. I wonder what the future holds for this troubled couple. I look forward to more.
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
I couldn't leave Draco in the cold. It just seemed like Draco had no one, and Sirius is so big on family... Plus I just love Draco.
Brilliant chapter as always - but, gah! You can't end it there!!! The fight was brilliant as each would definately be that stubborn over any issue and I really liked the Draco/Sirius exchange. But what the heck is up with Frankenhodge?! *goes into a trance a la Trelawney* I see danger...terrible danger...Can't wait for the next update
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
I self-flagellated a lot of this cliffie, but the next chap is LOOOONG. I'm glad you liked the Draco/Sirius moment. I adore Draco (reformed/damaged Draco, not canon!Draco LOL).
I wonder what Frankenhodge wants now. He is way too interested in this story. I am so glad Harry is supportive of the two of them. It makes all the difference in the world.
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
You're right about Frankenhodge. I love a supportive Harry. It's too easy to make him angry and resentful, but I think he'd be happy, once he got over the shock!
So it seems like it goes beyond the bond... Its actually fate. Very interesting.
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of Back for Good)
Fate forged the bond. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!