What – no raging hormones ;-) ?

An interesting start. I can't wait to see where you take them on their trip. And will it have excitement? Hmmmmm. Good job!

It's a good start. I can understand Harry not wanting to be a part of the ceremony. He's always been that way, but I think he should understand that Ron's grief isn't less than his because it was only a sibling--probably worse having known Fred all his life. But anyway... sometimes we think odd things. Looking forward to more.

Very nice beginning. I'm curious as to where you'll have them go on vacation?

Interesting start, I look forward to read more.

Sounds intriguing. :)

This is a good start. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I feel bad for Harry, but I think he sold Ron's grief a little short.  Harry lost his parents in the most horrible way, but Ron has grown up with Fred as an older brother and probably someone he admired to some extent.  I think he's fallen into a bit of his 'woe-is-me' attitude that he dwells in sometimes.  I'm eager to see what his idea for escaping the ceremony is.  But it doesn't sound like that's the 'adventure' of which you speak.  Or does that all tie in?

Great beginning. =] Can't wait to see what turns you've got in store.

Ooh, interesting. 

Ron *sigh* This boy is just a stomah on legs. But in wirld upside down, i suppose it's good to know some things never change. Hope for more soon.

Harry never did like all the attention that came his way as the Boy-Who-Lived, so it stands to reason he'd want some time away after Voldemort was gone. Interesting premise, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

Some things will never change. Ron loving sweets, Molly cooking, the ministry being insensitive ...I'm rather curious what mystery is awaiting them on their trip.