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Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 Reversing the Veil
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Reversing the Veil

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2: Chapter 2

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4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

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8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

Reversing the Veil

HermioneWeasley1972

138 Reviews   |   138 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 13,092 Words 11 Chapters WIP
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley

They find a secret spell that can change everything, but is it worth it?

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11


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HermioneWeasley1972

Member Since 2007  |  125 Stories  |  Favorited by 26  |  270 Reviews Written  |  225 Review Responses

I am in my 40s and I recently had two books published - Mike and the Deaf Student and Crayons - Color My World. They are both on Amazon and Barnes & Noble. 

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10/10

sinbad

Poor Ron, I bet he just got smacked with some grief looking at that joke shop.

10/10

sinbad

In my neck of the woods what they are doing would be called a mall crewel.  Sounds like they are enjoying themselves.

9/10

sinbad

Where is here precisely?  I wonder what they will do for fun?

10/10

sinbad

Interesting prompt.  I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it.

10/10

apisa_b

Ron has grown up - a war does that to someone, I'd think.
I liked how he was so considerate to send a message back home.
Keep up the good work!

10/10

apisa_b

Very inventive!
And even when they are abroad, there are reminders of what they've lost everywhere. They can't really escape their past, can they?

0/10

sunny33

Nice to see Ron growing up. :)

10/10

FlittterKat

I don't usually like Ron, but you've written him so well that he's likeable. I feel for him. It was nice to see Lee Jordan again.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

cute shop names. I look forward to more.

10/10

MollysSister

I hope Enchanter's Way has everything their hearts desire!

10/10

MollysSister

Are you saying there was no sex in the tent? How depressing is that! Hermione jump those boys!

10/10

MollysSister

Imagine having the $$ to just pop off on a vacation like that. Makes me wish!

9/10

Southern_Witch_69

The chapters are very short. I would love to see more. I like the idea of spells changing with guests (kind of like the key cards changing). It's a cool addition. I like the name Enchanter's Way and hope to see some description of what it holds in the next chapter.

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

Moving right along. I hope to find out more about this historic place.

0/10

kimjo2

so is this going to be gay!harry?  a fling?  great update.  thanks so much

9/10

kimbee73

What will they find in Enchanter's Way? Hmmmm....update soon!

0/10

kimjo2

i love salem, tho i've never been there during halloween time. they do make a big deal out of it and there are plenty of witchcraft type shops there for muggles. delightful update. thanks so much

10/10

snitchette

So, now that they're settle, I suppose something will happen. It can't just be nice vacations, right?

0/10

snapesslavegirl

Cant' wait to read what Enchanter's Way holds. Sound great

0/10

snapesslavegirl

So far this is giving more depth to Harry's character and I really like that. Great job

0/10

sunny33

They assumed Ron had found a sweet shop! LOL :)

0/10

debjunk

Can't wait to see what they find in Enchanter's way. 

9/10

beaweasley2

Really nice. I wish you'd have added a bit of Salem's color, descriptions of things, but oh well. Enchanter's Way sounds cool.

9/10

apisa_b

Staying in a hotel instead of a tent? How will they cope with that difficulty?

"... I can't remember the last time the three of us laughed like that ..." This sentence alone in a mostly playful chapter brought the horrors they had to live through to the forefront.
Good for them to be off and able to be just teens again for a while. I wonder how long it is going to last.

10/10

PiperSnape

Loved the update, I can't wait to see where their journey takes them and who they might meet along the way.

It's great to see Harry, Hermione and Ron able to relax and enjoy themselves for once, without fear of being hunted down like animals.

But how long will it last?

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