Chapter 4
Chapter 4 of 11
HermioneWeasley1972They find a secret spell that can change everything, but is it worth it?
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Hermione walked with Ron and Harry out onto Enchanter's Way. Her friends seemed just as immediately impressed by the display and organization of the shops as she was. To her, it felt like the first time she'd stepped onto Diagon Alley.
“Welcome to Enchanter's Way,” a witch said as they entered the street. “I was told that there would be three new people coming to visit us. Here are maps of the street and coupons for each of you. The coupons can be used for twenty percent off your purchase at any of our stores.”
“Thank you,” Hermione replied with a smile. “Okay, let's see. I know you two are going to want to go to ‘An Itch for Quidditch.' How about I go to ‘There's No Place like Tomes’ and meet you at ‘How Sweet It Is’ in half an hour?”
“Alright,” Harry said.
Ron grinned at Hermione. “Leave it to you to choose the two stores that we will spend the most time in.”
“I didn't spend all that time with you two in Diagon Alley for nothing. Okay, half an hour,” Hermione said, setting her watch. “See you then!”
Knowing that her time was limited, Hermione hurried down Enchanter's Way and was soon entering the shop. A smile crept over her face as she saw that the layout of the shop was similar to a library.
“Welcome to my shop,” the witch behind the counter said to her. “Please take your time and look around, and be sure to ask me if you need any help.”
Looking through the shop, Hermione knew that this was where her coupon was going to be used. There were so many different spells and so much information that she wouldn't have known about if she hadn't come to the States.
She was browsing the history section when she heard someone come up behind her.
“You aren't from around here, are you?” the shopkeeper asked her.
“No, I'm here on holiday with my two friends. We're from the United Kingdom.”
“I've always wanted to go there. Didn't you guys have some trouble with that dark wizard there a few months ago?”
“Yes, you could say that,” Hermione answered ruefully.
“Fortunately we never had anything like that happen here,” the witch said, knocking on the door jam. “By the way, I'm Abigail,” the witch said, holding out her hand.
“I'm Hermione.” After shaking the witch's hand, she glanced at her watch and her eyes opened wide. “I told my friends that I would meet them in five minutes. I'll take these books now and come back again later.”
“Please do,” Abigail replied. When she rang up the order, she handed her back her coupon. “Save it for the next time you come in.”
Harry and Ron were waiting at the door of ‘How Sweet It Is’ when she got there. Ron had a new broom, and Harry was tossing a new Snitch as she approached.
“Nice broom, Ron,” Hermione said with a smile. “Is that all you bought, Harry?”
“Actually, I got a Quidditch set. It's being sent to the room,” Harry replied.
“Yeah, now we can have a proper game of Quidditch,” Ron said with a grin. “And with this new broom, our team is going to be unstoppable this year.” Suddenly, Ron's face fell, and Hermione put her arm around him. She knew that he was thinking of his brother.
“Fred would have been proud of you, Ron.” Reaching up, she gave him a tender kiss on the cheek and a small smile.
Out of the corner of her eye, Hermione saw Harry watching them closely with sadness in his eyes.
Pulling away from Hermione, Ron looked pleased, but embarrassed at the same time. “Let's go see what kind of sweets they have in here.”
They found that ‘How Sweet It Is’ was a shop very much like Honeydukes back in Hogsmeade, but with different types of candy.
“Hey, Ron, look! They have things like our Chocolate Frogs,” Harry said, holding up one of the wrapped foil packets.
“Feels kinda heavy, doesn't it?” Ron said, taking one. “Fudge Eagles,” he read on the wrapper. “With a collectable coin inside.”
“Those are one of our best sellers,” the wizard who owned the shop stated. “Everyone seems to love collecting the coins. Where are you from?”
“We're from the United Kingdom. We have Chocolate Frogs there with Famous Wizard cards inside. Here, think I gotta couple with me,” Ron said, reaching into his pocket and showing them to the shopkeeper.
“Cool! Think the owner of your candy store might be interested in doing some trading?” the shopkeeper asked, looking at the cards that Ron had given him. “By the way, I'm Drew.”
“Don't know. Maybe,” Ron replied with a shrug.
“You have a lot of these cards at home?” Drew asked, handing the cards back to him.
Hermione chuckled. “Thousands, more than likely.”
“Yeah,” Harry agreed, remembering when he had met Ron on the train during their first year.
“If you would be willing to sell me your spare cards, I'll make you a good deal on them.”
“Yeah, that would be great!” Ron couldn't keep the excitement from his voice.
“Here are a couple of my cards. Take them with you, and give one to the owner of your candy shop. If you can convince them to carry some of my stuff, I might send you some compensation for that as well.”
“Great!” Ron grinned and shook Drew's hand.
The three of them left a few minutes later, each carrying a bag of Fudge Eagles and assorted other sweets.
“Where to now?” Harry asked, looking up and down Enchanter's Way.
“Why don't we just walk along and see what there is to see? We can go in the shops that look interesting.”
As they made their way down Enchanter's Way, they went into ‘Robe -n- Hood,' ‘Boiling Mad,' and the apothecary. But as they came out of the apothecary, Hermione and Harry saw Ron standing in front of a shop.
The shop was a joke shop known as ‘Guffaw.'
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Ha. I love how confused Ron got at a girl hitting on Hermione. At least she found a subtle way to let her down. I wonder what is in that store that drew Harry to it?
No! I ran out of chapters! This was getting good, can't wait for more!
Poor Ron. I think he just has way too much pride to take handouts and be paid for. Great story so far.
Typical of Hermione to be interested in studying on her holiday. I wouldn't put it past her to still try and rope the boys in too.
Wow. Ron is really stepping out of himself. No more unrequited pining.
Interesting that Harry would have been recognised for something other than his scar. This trip will probably be quite beneficial to him.
Same old Ron. Stomach always first. I love the interactin between the three of them. They are finally able to act like three regular teenagers.
Mrs Weasley - the perpetual fusser. They are lucky she didn't insist on going with them!
Amaizing beginning. I can see how Harry would be struggling to cope with his survivors guilt after everything he had been through.
Poor Ron. Loosing a brother can be one of the hardest things to deal with. The person you grew up with, who you thought would always be there no longer is. It makes you grow up really quickly.
Yip. Just like the old days. That would be good for Ron if he can get some commission out of the chocolate frog deal.
I am glad Hermione has outgrown her House elf obsession. I can only wonder if Ron feels the same for Hermione?
Something is up! :)
oohh...what kind of change?!? great update. thanks muchly
I'm glad they'll have to resolve a new mystery. Else they might have been bored with all this vacation. *wink*
Hmmmm.....what kind of change?????
Nice chapter....
I think the pacing is beginning to drag a wee bit. Still an enjoyable chapter, but I would not like to see the pace get any slower.
Personally, I think that a couple of years of playing quidditch could do a world of good for Harry. He can always work in Law Enforcement later.
An interesting chapter. I have often thought professional Quidditch would be a good possibility for a post-war Harry. I think you handled the Ron/Hermione romance well.
I may not be a big fan of Ron and Hermione as a couple, but since they are not objecting, who am I to complain? :-)
Glad to see them taking in the sights. I suppose the house-elves in the Inn don’t mind mending pillows. Easier with magic!
I like this chapter for poor Ron. He so often gets left behind in fanfiction, made into a buffoon or a petulant child. Here you have him a simply a bloke on the cusp of adulthood.
A nice touch at the end, you bring all the lightness of the chapter down to earth with a crash.
I like your Wizarding Inn and Enchanters’ way. I must say that Hermione putting on make-up for sightseeing seems a bit OOC to me, but others will disagree. I wouldn’t think less of a story for a little thing like that, merely a matter of taste or opinion.
I like that you had them all laughing, perhaps even a bit hysterically. I am sure they need to unwind (for a few years) and that’s a start.
I love Molly’s voicing concerns over a dark American wizard and hotels in the same breath!
It reminds me of a conversation I had with my own daughter when her boyfreind visited her college. She called to tell me that he had arrived safely, and I said, “Good. Don’t have sex.”
When she protested my saying such a thing, I told her I was only saying what every parent thinks and I was honest enough to say.
Chocolate frog card is a good touch. Harry doesn’t realize that the loss of his parents is old and Ron’s loss is fresh and sharp. Also, Harry doesn’t even remember his parents. But they have all suffered horrible losses of friends and loved ones. I am glad to see that you are considering this, not just glossing over bereavement.
Glad to see Harry and Ron going back to finish school. So many stories have them moving on without it.