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Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 Reversing the Veil
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Reversing the Veil

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4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

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8: Chapter 8

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10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

Reversing the Veil

HermioneWeasley1972

138 Reviews   |   138 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 13,092 Words 11 Chapters WIP
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley

They find a secret spell that can change everything, but is it worth it?

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11


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Member Since 2007  |  125 Stories  |  Favorited by 26  |  270 Reviews Written  |  225 Review Responses

I am in my 40s and I recently had two books published - Mike and the Deaf Student and Crayons - Color My World. They are both on Amazon and Barnes & Noble. 

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kimjo2

interesting update.  i look forward to seeing what the american school looks like.  thanks so much

10/10

beaweasley2

LOL Harry playing for an American team! Whoot!! 
It's cute how 'Fred' voice gave Ron a kick in the arse and he took her on a real date, but did Hermione know the significance of it, I wonder?

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh when the wizards said - LOL I wasn't expecting the "youngest seeker" thing any more than Harry was!  That was really cute.

9/10

beaweasley2

Aw, I was hoping you'd've explored the history a bit. Oh, well, the pillow fight was fun.

9/10

beaweasley2

What an insightful look at Ron. I can now understand his reluctance to enter the shop - missing Fred so much, and all.  Nice chapter. I'm glad he sent a not to his mum, about time he did so she wouldn't worry about him.

10/10

apisa_b

For a moment I was thinking that Patrick guy was hitting on Harry :-)
So Harry as a Quidditch pro - yes that fits. I'd think he had a enough of dark wizards for a lifetime.
But I guess you have something different in mind, eh?

10/10

apisa_b

Now romance comes into the game? I kinda expected Ron and Hermione to get together from the onset of this story, but what's this Patrick guy up to? I'm really curious. Thankfully there's still a chapter to read :-)

9/10

apisa_b

At least they have wands - I'd hate to have to clean that room without one :-)

10/10

sinbad

Interesting, it was nice to see Hermione and Ron on an actual date and Harry's statement about the new choice/opportunity available to him makes me wonder what road this story will take.

10/10

makaem

I was afraid he was going to hit on Harry. Quiddich, huh?

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kimjo2

oh ho!  so it wasn't a gay asignation!  great update.  altho i am the founding member of the abr (anybody but ron) club i like your ron.  thanks so much

10/10

debjunk

A lovely date.  It seemed they both enjoyed themselves.  It was nice to have Fred involved. 
It's hard to tell whether Harry wants to play Quidditch or not.  So much for a relaxing vacation.

10/10

BrenaMarie

Hey There! I'm usually not a fan of RW/HG. But it was nice actually seeing him try to impress her and grow up a little. It made me think of my husband back when we were in our teens. No one ever thought he'd grow up and be responsible. :-) I was curious as to one thing though, since they are in America wouldn't they get carded for alchohol? I know that liquor laws in the UK are different but they're only 19 and Hermione was drinking wine? Sorry for being nit-picky it just really jumped out at me. I'm anxious to see what's going on with Harry and this Quidditch opportunity. Please update again soon. Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

FlittterKat

Good for Ron, he needed Fred to jump start him before he lost any chance of a relationship with Hermione. Can't wait to see what Harry decides to do about O'Donnell's offer.

0/10

kimbee73

Oh there's a twist I wasn't expecting.
Hmm.....does Harry really want to play Quidditch for a career.
Ron and Hermione's date was nice. Glad to see him get off his tail end and do something.

Update soon!

10/10

snitchette

Professional Quidditch player *ponders* so much for anonimity. I guess Ron will have to find his future carreer on his own for once. That is if Harry accept O'Donnell's proposition of course.

10/10

arianwen

Eh, I had a feeling Harry's dinner with O'Donnell would turn out to be a business pitch. Harry doesn't sound terribly enthused, but I suspect it's more because he's afraid of going off on his own without Ron and Hermione. God knows they've been practically joined at the hip for half their lives, it must be unnerving to think of that changing for any of them, but most especially Harry at the thought of being separated from his surrogate family.


But it sounds like Ron's ready to finally make a move in Hermione's direction, even if it took a little brotherly nudging to get him off his arse. But I'm curious, was Fred's advice just a figment of his imagination or something more? I can't wait to find out!

0/10

sunny33

An offer he can't refuse? :)

9/10

BrenaMarie

Hey there!  I'm very anxious to see where this is going!  I'm really excited about the plot and can't wait to read more!  Very good idea putting in Lee, and having Ron face some of his losing Fred issues.  It was a great addition without being a real downer.  Please update again soon!  Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

LovesRickman

I am greatly enjoying this. Keep up the great work!

Missy

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kimjo2

lovely non-prat ron-ness.  loved how he sent the note to his family.  great update.  thanks so much

10/10

snitchette

Poor Ron (and I mean it for once). Loosing a brother must be trully heartbreaking.

10/10

snitchette

That woman in the bookshop shouldn't be tempting the fate. Fortunately Harry's here to save the world. Again.

10/10

debjunk

Oh, that last line had me tearing up.  I like your Ron.  Unfortunately, a terrible tragedy had to happen for him to become mature.  I'm sure he's got a lot of grief to work through.

10/10

sinbad

With the name 'Reversing the Veil' I'm thinking of Serious, but there is a lot of hint towards Fred.

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