I was getting a great chuckle out of elder Sev treating the younger like a misbehaving younger brother.  It was all rather funny until --- Ow - didn't see that coming! Hermione getting slammed with the door, or the glass; that's gonna hurt.

Lissa - just found an update notice for this story at Wicked and could not resist since I was just about to read a story by the same name about Sirius!  Your first chapter - absolutely fascinating!! The possibilities for this prompt stagger the imagination and I can't wait to read the rest, and catch up to the sequel, to see what you've done with it.

I really enjoyed this story!  Having Junior and Senior interacting was so unique and smart.  Thanks for sharing!!

Oh this just gets better and better. adult/Severus really has a bur up his when it comes to his younger/sev-self. Oh, you do show the differences in their character and personalities. Oh, and I loved Hermione's reaction.

Oh, I like it. I like it alot. Need more soon. :)

this is so much fun.I'm glad one took this promt and gave it a start.it is so funny to read this mind hopping from Snape to Snape from past to future. he can't even threaten his younger self, as it just dawned on him.But why did he have to warn him not to meddle with Hermione of the past?And now we know why Hermione could warn Harry, and knew how important it was not to be seen by the other self!! because there was one nosy teacher who had done this already.

Wow....an intriguing start. Can't wait for an update. Snape jealous of himself...hmmm.

VEry good one!!!I really like it ... a lot!!Can you please up date soon??I'll wait.

Now, this is a premise par excellance. You certainly have me hooked firmly, and your story has secured a place in my bookmark folder. I hope this will continue in this highly entertaining way in future chapters. Good luck with the challenge.

Too funny, past Severus has current Severus over a barrel. Maybe he should remind himself ~laughs~ that if doesn't want another to touch HIS wife in the future, he'll keep his hands to himself. Nah, past Severus would prolly do it for spite. ~Now, I'm confused~ Look forward to the next chapter, well done.

OOO great start! I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Heheee – gotcha!

This love-triangle is every girl's fantasy, I tell you. In between a Snape, and more Snape? Yes please!

This better be only the first chapter....and you've got a lot of explaining to do!

Oh, wow. good start. This could really turn into a mess. Or really work in his favor.

Interesting begining. looking forward to reading more.

This has such an interesting twist.  Now I am eagerly waiting to see what will happen next.  Obviously, Snape knows something he doesn't want to happen again or would have never intercepted himself.Very good way to drag the reader in... hold them down... tie them up.  tee hee.

Oh, I love that Snape is jealous ... of himself! It seems you've got the prompt spot-on, and it's an interesting and unique use of the time-turner. Looking forward to more!

Very good start.  Can't wait to see what the two Snapes get up to.  Two thumbs up for a good start.

Oh I love it!However this didn't work for me: "...You hate waiting for me when I shop for books.” "...I don’t hate anything you do… You can certainly become insufferably irritating at times…”Because the subject of the first sentence is SS, not H.  The way the sentence reads it is he who hates waiting, not her book shopping.  It just took me out of the story for a moment while I tried to figure out what you meant.And the idea of a an older S who's jealous of his younger self is just too wonderful!  Can't wait to read more.

ooooooohh...neat-o!!  excellent start!  i look forward to the next chapter.  thanks so much

Oh, wow!  I'm chuckling at the younger Snape's shrewdness.  It sounds like his trip to the future did not go well, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happened and how the older Snape tries to change whatever it is.  Okay, it's hard to say much of anything knowing so little right now.

I really like what youj've done here! I can't wait to see what goes on next. Bwahahahaha!

Oh, what a promising start not only to your story, but to the whole challenge!The premise is very original - I don't think I've read a time-turner story where someone was stranded in the future. I'm very curious about what's going to happen.

Oh holy crap on a cracker. No, he wouldn't be able to have a wife, would he? Yikes! Severus invented the time-turner? Oh my.