Wow. Amazing. I love the fatalistic view you've taken. How intriguing. Can't wait for more!

At the begining i thought you were using 'Severus' for one and 'Snape' for the other. but it turned out it was from younger Snape's POV and you used both names for him in a short time, confusing me a bit.other than that bit, I had no difficulty in keeping them straight.very interesting.  I don't have time to write about theories of time travel right now, but it is interesting.  in stoping things from happening they way they did 'before', who knows what older Snape has done to the time line?Old fart must’ve added an inch to his boots… hysterical

O love this!  I enjoy time travel stories when they are well thought out, and this looks like a brilliant one!  Oh, I am so happy there is another chapter to read!

I guess things in history do not change that much. This time the older Severus hurts Hermione. Uh Oh that might be hard to explain. Good job and I will await the update.

Different but the same -- interesting take on time travel.  I like what you have done so far and look forward to seeing how this is all resolved.  Thanks for posting, JoAnne

God, what else is supposed to happen? 

Aiiiii, no! Hermione!Younger Snape is a bastard, moreso than old Snape! Yikes!

Oh that is rich! And Oww! Hahaha, please keep writing, this story is too fun to read!

That was painfully beautiful. You made me feel, everything really. Thank you for writing so adeptly and movingly. Thank you.~Mia

Holy shitaki mushrooms, batman!!!!!!!!!! Eep. I am now going to read the  start of the next chapter whilst peeping through my fingers.Poor idiotic sod.~Mia

This is absolutely brilliant. Thank you so very much for directing me here. I could cry in happiness.This chapter is stunning. Graceful and articulate, razor's edge of dangerous and the perfect combination of peaceful bliss and devilish sexuality.Thank you, again. I wish I had your way with words and could express exactly and how much this thing makes me feel. The closest I can come is that it makes my heart pound and my breath catch and my stomach to clench and my sentences to run on.~Mia   (

Wow! Amazing story!

beautiful =)

ha! he tricked himself because he knew he would change his mind!!!perfect.now he came back to his time, a changed man. and un-resting. knowing he has to wait wait wait and suffer a lot.It's so good, we don't know what awaits us. but in his case, it is good he knows something so worthwile awaits him. after much hating and detesting.futur will tell.not the end. just a new beginning?

oh no such a mess. but she keeps her head on.she knows, that this had to be. but not the way junior uses it in the end. can not wait, this young impossible over eager time traveller.never mess with your old self. can not be good for you.

I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOOON.

It's "Dual" meaning two, not "duel" meaning fight  between two, in Paragraph 2. And the comma in paragraph 3 is misplaced and not even necessary.Aside from that, great chapter!

I had this story bookmarked, but when an update arrived I couldn't get around to reading it. Once I did, though, it recaptivated me completely - again. It's so different from my usual fare, but so, so good!-~*~-Whenever Junior opens his mouth to put foot in it, Hermione should remind herself that he'll live to confront his assumptions with reality and is going to be thoroughly mortified by his previous actions. Can't imagine a better revenge.Of course that will only work for Hermione. Senior can't derive any pleasure from that thought, as he was the one living trough that very mortification himself. One more reason Junior gets on his nerves so much, I guess.

Wow, this is so clever and well written. Love it!

This was a funny chapter. Please update soon.

The scenes in this chapter I could see so clearly in my mind's eye. Well written.

This is good - I am getting a bit confused as to who is who but that is okay. LOL

Oh ho, I loves that Sev(Junior) had a hard time listening in on his older self making love to Hermione. Poor boy. They are so diferent. I'm so amazed that you are able to keep them so different and in character. Ron's little stunt was obscene - well written and funny - but the S.O.B. yuck! I loved how Sev came in and 'assisted' Hermione.  Young Sev is going to learn a lot wether Severus wants him to or not.

One would have to wonder if with the younger doing something like this at the end of the chapter, that the elder does not suddenly become aware that it is happening ... like remembering something that hadn't been before.  It would tend to be confusing at first, until he figured out why there was a sudden memory in his head.  [Did that make sense?]

'The apprehension that you might never recover from your sick addiction to Hogwarts’ populace of Muggle-born seventh-year girls...'Is this just an insinuation by elder Sev that this younger one might crave his Muggle-born seventh-years, or is it a revelation that elder Severus himself used to have this addiction??Either way - wicked!  And would the Mrs know this about her husband?