Chapter Two: Gaining Experience
Chapter 2 of 2
notsosaintlyWhat happens when the girls are "discovered" finding Hermione's style? (warning: incestuous thoughts, voyeurism)
ReviewedDisclaimer: Okay, so JKR would have never done this to her characters. It's a children's book, so I would hope not. But since we're all adults here, I've taken the liberty to satisfy the older and more imaginative readers who enjoy a bit o' smut to read at the end of the day.
Author's Note: I suppose I should warn you now. A reviewer for the first chapter (which had been a completed one-shot) inspired me to edit the story (quite a bit) and to go on to answer the question, "What did they do to Ron?" So, Arabella Bloodgood, here is your answer. To all, read the warnings please. I marked 'incest' for incestuous thoughts; there is no incestuous touching or sex. If it bothers you, and if your curiosity doesn't get the better of you, turn back now.
Gaining Experience
The look on Ron's face was priceless. Ginny had never seen him so speechless, so incoherent, so... well, so hard. In all fairness, she had seen all of her brothers sporting stiffies in the morning as they ambled down the hallway to use the bathroom just outside her door. To be honest, it had become a kind of obsession to watch for them approaching the bathroom soon after they had woken up. It didn't really bother her, just sort of amused her. She'd heard both Fred and George occasionally in the mornings, after one or the other had gone into the bathroom, moaning softly behind the door. She had sent an Extendable Ear beneath the door one of those times and had heard the meaty thump-thump of flesh meeting flesh and the near-silent hiss of profanities as the thumping slowed and then ceased. It had been fantasy-fuel for a few years, and more than one orgasm had been achieved with merely the remembered sound of her brother wanking.
Having seen her brothers, any of them, really only at half-mast and always through clothing, she had been unaware of any of their true sizes. Ron's, even though she was viewing his through a layer of nylon shorts, was pretty darn impressive.
Ginny decided to play it up a bit, and Hermione seemed comfortable and willing to continue as one of her hands continued to caress Ginny's hip. Ginny had brought her legs together, out of self-awareness more than decency or any concern for the state Ron was in, but one of her hands ascended to fondle Hermione's breasts. Ron stood there as though Petrified. Almost like a Greek statue with a rock-hard erection, she thought, and way too many clothes.
"Do you like what you see, Ron? We could continue, you know... I can continue; can you, Hermione?" she asked, looking at her friend.
Hermione uttered an "Oh yes" before dipping her head forward to capture Ginny's lips with a not-so-chaste kiss.
The groan from the doorway was sheer agony, and Ginny loved it and deepened their kiss even more. Hermione seemed more eager now than before, which really had Ginny wondering about her friend's proclivities. She liked to be watched, apparently, though Ginny suspected being watched by Ron, whom Hermione had been secretly lusting after for a long while, had a lot to do with it.
Ginny already had Hermione's nipples tweaked to a state of hardness that rivaled Ron's, and she could feel Hermione's thighs, which were flush up against hers, rhythmically pressing against each other. Yes, Hermione was definitely turned on by all this. The hand on Hermione's breast began its descent toward the curls that covered her more intimate parts. Once it reached its destination and fell into a casual rhythm of slide and circle, Ginny broke the kiss.
As Hermione's head fell back to the bed, an look of utter bliss upon her face, Ginny glanced at Ron, who was now leaning against the doorframe for support, one hand rubbing his erection over his shorts. A wet spot had appeared on the fabric where it was repeatedly being stretched over the tip of his hardness, and his eyes were glued to what Ginny's hand was doing.
So, feeling a bit naughty and wanting to tease Ron as much as she possibly could, she coaxed Hermione's legs wider, bending her knees so that they would fall to either side and expose the folds of her sex.
"Like what you see, Ron?" she asked as her bewildered brother seemed to drink in the scene before him. "Have you ever done this to a woman? It feels so lovely, you know, to be touched this way... But this feels even better."
At that, Ginny stopped circling Hermione's clit and slid a finger up and down a few times, gathering moistness, before pressing a finger deep inside so that it disappeared completely. Hermione's back arched, and Ginny thrust her finger in and out for a minute before having a second finger join the first.
Ron whimpered at the doorway, and both girls looked toward him now. Ron had his entire cock fisted through the thin, sheer nylon fabric and was pumping it determinedly. Hermione's eyes were heavily lidded, but she forced herself to speak through her increasing lust. "Curl your fingers a bit, Gin. Ah!" she shouted as her friend complied and apparently hit the right spot. "Again! Oh!"
Hermione was diminished to cries of joy as Ginny continued to thrust her fingers just the way her friend liked it. One look at Ron told her he was losing control. He had a maniacal look in his eyes, wild, like he needed to find a place to put his aching cock and it pained him not to do so. Still able to tease Ron through her own rising passion, Ginny spread her legs and with her other hand started stroking her own clit frantically.
"Gods, yes, Hermione! Come for me, love. Come on," Ginny chanted. "Look at Ron. Watch him!"
That encouragement was all Hermione needed, and within seconds of raising her head to watch Ron pumping his thick cock through his damp shorts, she was coming, gripping Ginny's fingers forcefully.
Ginny couldn't care less anymore if her brother was standing there wanking off or not, she was now whimpering uncontrollably while her finger busily worked below. "Oh, oh, oh, it's too much. I need more. Please, oh gods, I..."
She looked up suddenly as her fingers were pushed away and watched as Hermione's head plunged downward, her mouth connecting with and enveloping her clit. The most blessed feeling overcame her as Hermione's lips and tongue set up a rhythm of licking upward, twisting, pulling, and sucking, then starting the whole process over again. It left Ginny in a kind of limbo, enjoying the intense sensations.
Her eyes opened to see Ron had stepped farther into the room, still stroking his now exposed cock, having pushed his shorts out of the way. Ginny's eyes widened at his length and his girth... and the redness of it all. He stood behind Hermione and watched as Hermione's tongue performed its magic between Ginny's spread legs. Then, he suddenly seemed to realize that Hermione's arse was directly in front of him as she knelt before Ginny and bent forward to tend to her friend's needs. The groan that escaped his lips was ragged and raw. His pent-up lust pushed him forward the last couple of steps that separated him and Hermione, and he cried out as he grabbed Hermione's hip with one hand and spent himself across her back with the other.
Ginny's eyes had been glued to Ron's cock the entire time. Her breathing started to come quicker as Ron's hand started pumping faster. She urged Hermione to stop licking and remain at her clit, telling her to suck and pull and flick her tongue, yes, just like that. Oh! And as Ron's semen pulsed from his cock and landed across her friend's back, some even getting into her hair, Ginny came so forcefully she could feel her orgasm liquefy and gush from her body.
As the three friends came slowly down off their high, Hermione lifted one hand to gather her hair and pull it over her shoulder, feeling the stickiness of Ron's come in her hair. She licked a bit off in experimentation, and that had Ginny sitting up to turn her friend around so she could help clean off her back.
She was distracted, however, as Hermione, who was now facing Ron and his rather diminished member, took Ron's hand and licked the come off his fingers, paying attention to each finger and between each finger. By the time she had his hand cleaned off and reached for his cock to start cleaning that as well, he had already started to harden again.
Ginny, knowing it was her turn to watch, completely forgot about the white streaks now drying on Hermione's back and eased backwards on her bed to get comfortable while Hermione started to suck Ron's cock deep into her mouth. And once again, her fingers sought to satisfy the ache that was building deep in her core....
Later that evening, after the three of them had cleaned up and gone down to dinner with the family, and where there seemed to be no end to the ribbing Ron received from his brothers for looking so smug, Ginny and Hermione lay in their respective beds in Hermione's room, staring at the ceiling, and talking.
"So," Ginny said and paused a moment. They hadn't spoken of what had occurred earlier that afternoon yet, and she was eager to tease her friend a little. "Do you think you have discovered your style yet, or do you think some more experimentation is in order?"
Hermione turned her head toward Ginny and looked at her across the moonlit room. "I think I may have found a style I'm quite fond of," she replied honestly, "actually a couple, to tell you the truth. Still... I think perhaps some, erm, revision may be in order. I mean, I wouldn't want to forget anything."
"Afraid someone's going to test you?" Ginny chided, knowing exactly what Hermione was trying to get at but deciding not to make it easy. If playing hard to get worked on the boys, it had to work on the girls.
"No! It's not that!" Hermione responded, quickly falling for Ginny's bit of a joke. "It's just I...well, you see..."
"Hermione," Ginny stated firmly now. "You've kissed me. You've made me orgasm more times than I can count...and, yes, I'm counting the ones I gave myself when I was watching you and Ron. Hell, you've even had your mouth on me down there. And you're going to tell me that you're still too shy to tell me what it is you want?"
Hermione sat up in bed, back straight, and stared at Ginny, who didn't move a muscle and didn't even dare to breathe. "Fine!" Hermione shouted. "I want you to make me come with your mouth. It seems I'm the only one who hasn't had that particular pleasure today."
Pleased that she had made her friend finally say what was on her mind, Ginny sat up, swung her legs off the bed, and padded over to Hermione. They stared at each other for a few seconds, as though sizing each other up, and then Ginny pushed Hermione backwards with one hand, forcing her to lay back on the bed. She crawled between Hermione's half-spread legs and drew her knees upward. Then she pushed the already short nightgown up past Hermione's hips.
When Ginny saw Hermione wasn't wearing any knickers, a sudden warmth spread throughout her core, and she liked her lips in anticipation.
"You knew this would be happening, didn't you?" Ginny asked her friend, who smiled up innocently at her.
"Well, I figured you wouldn't be able to resist. And if you did resist," Hermione shrugged, "at least I wouldn't have to be dealing with my knickers. They get in the way, you know."
"Why you little tart!" Ginny exclaimed, laughing.
"You're one to talk," Hermione said, joining in the laughter, but she sobered up quickly and commanded, "Now, get down there and eat me till I come."
"And such language too," Ginny teased before complying with much enthusiasm.
~ fin (and I mean it this time)
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25 Reviews | 7.96/10 Average
While I have nothing to judge by, the slash and minage-a-trois was quite ummm, ... you know...yeh, that! The idea of Ron and Ginny watching each other was not disturbing though I suppose it should have been for proprieties sake. However, since nothing her was proper I shall not worry too much about that. I must say that the idea of them watching each other was pretty, well, you know...the same!! I must be very naughty to like the entire thing very much. If I were to imagine such activity I would say you did a really good job!
Oh goodness. Well, not exactly incest, but a interesting threesome! Gads, the girrls were insationable!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
LOL I know. I should have a warning that says 'not-quite-incest'. But there was a sister and brother both in the same room and I think some people might be a little squicked by that.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
LOL I know. I should have a warning that says 'not-quite-incest'. But there was a sister and brother both in the same room and I think some people might be a little squicked by that.
Oh goodness! Well the lesson on how to kiss surly went well. I think she's got it down now.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I'd say. I think the problem would be finding a guy who kissed as well. Ginny may well have spoiled her.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I'd say. I think the problem would be finding a guy who kissed as well. Ginny may well have spoiled her.
Here's hoping that in three years, we'll find out exactly how much Hermione enjoyed Ginny's enthusiasm. ;)Well worth a three year wait!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Oh, another one who doesn't believe that I've truly ended it. *lol* Yeah, well, I plead momentary insanity, writer's prerogative, um ... story confusion? Not buying it? *shrug* Yes, well, I have found never to believe myself when I say it's over. Isn't that right, self? Yup. Yeah, we agree.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Oh, another one who doesn't believe that I've truly ended it. *lol* Yeah, well, I plead momentary insanity, writer's prerogative, um ... story confusion? Not buying it? *shrug* Yes, well, I have found never to believe myself when I say it's over. Isn't that right, self? Yup. Yeah, we agree.
Thanks love. That answered any and all questiona I had or might have had. Your a genius.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
*bows* Glad to oblige. Nothing like getting an author to revive an old story just to answer your question, eh? Erm... can you release the Imperius now? LOL
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
*bows* Glad to oblige. Nothing like getting an author to revive an old story just to answer your question, eh? Erm... can you release the Imperius now? LOL
"fin (and I mean it this time)"?? Come on!! You're good at writing this. How about adding another third party, someone outside the family? I mean, there would be nothing wrong with a Gryffindor Sandwich for a change, eh?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Actually, a Fred and George sandwhich has always appealed to me. But I think I did that one already. Though that story also needs a bit of editing.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Actually, a Fred and George sandwhich has always appealed to me. But I think I did that one already. Though that story also needs a bit of editing.
Oh my, looks like I missed out on something not readig femmeslash. That has to change! Now!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Normally, I don't read it. But Ginny and Hermione, I don't know, they're just begging for it.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Normally, I don't read it. But Ginny and Hermione, I don't know, they're just begging for it.
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What, exactly, do you mean by, "fin (and I mean it this time)", because I am unsure. LOL.
Ginny and Hermione femmeslash is awesome. I think I will agree with you and say that it's the people involved--like anything. For example, I like het, but I can't stand reading about Harry with any girls. I just don't care for Harry.
This read as entirely plausible to me and oh so effin' hot. I wasn't even hoping that Snape would make a sudden, unannounced visit, and that's saying a lot!
Now, about the next part of the Virgin's Primer...
Author's Response: I knew someone was going to say something about Tutoring Session, which I've severely neglected. Hmm... I think I'll have Molly teach me the spell that packs boxes.
I was a little disappointed that this chapter ended up being only (barely) 2,000 words. But I didn't want to overdo it, and there's always that danger where I'm involved.
I'm pretty sure if it's Weasleycest, it can't be wrong...Did I just say that? I did. Hot. And cute.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yes, I think there's a law written somewhere to that effect. At least, in my world there is. (Thank you!)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yes, I think there's a law written somewhere to that effect. At least, in my world there is. (Thank you!)
Talk about developing a "taste" for it!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Well, you have to admit, at least there's no choking something down your throat. (That is the only plus I can think of seeing as I have never experienced it ... oh, and the fact that at least a woman would know what the hell to do!)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Well, you have to admit, at least there's no choking something down your throat. (That is the only plus I can think of seeing as I have never experienced it ... oh, and the fact that at least a woman would know what the hell to do!)
I love Ron coming in. Bet he doesn't know whether to be ashamed he is turned on, grateful, or just plain embarrassed!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
LOL I'm thinking a male at that age (and I left it ambiguous as to the age) is most likely very, very, very grateful.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
LMAO! Indeed!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
LOL I'm thinking a male at that age (and I left it ambiguous as to the age) is most likely very, very, very grateful.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
LMAO! Indeed!
I held my breathe through the whole thing. lol. My only ? is what did they do to Ron?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I actually read through it again just now, and I think I could improve on it a bit. I don't know what they do to Ron. That would be bringing in a whole other warning, now, wouldn't it? (Not that I haven't explored that in a story before.)
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
This story kinda reminds me of a friend I had a long time ago. Something similar happened to us. The kissing lessons anyway. Not else or someone coming in on us. Hot never the less. What is the title of this little diddy?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
The other story? Oh, I thought you read it already. Maybe it was someone else. It's called First Times at the Weasleys or something like that.
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
Oh I feel stupid now. Yeah I read that. I don't know what is with my mind lately. Forgive me.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yeah, you did. You can always go re-read it though ...I am so tempted to give this one another chapter. I have ti open on my desktop now. But I'm afraid RL is about to beat me over the head and I may need to take a few days "off". But the muse is very, very active.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yoo-hoo, Arabella dear. I've written another chapter just because you asked that question so nicely... let me know what you think.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I actually read through it again just now, and I think I could improve on it a bit. I don't know what they do to Ron. That would be bringing in a whole other warning, now, wouldn't it? (Not that I haven't explored that in a story before.)
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
This story kinda reminds me of a friend I had a long time ago. Something similar happened to us. The kissing lessons anyway. Not else or someone coming in on us. Hot never the less. What is the title of this little diddy?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
The other story? Oh, I thought you read it already. Maybe it was someone else. It's called First Times at the Weasleys or something like that.
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
Oh I feel stupid now. Yeah I read that. I don't know what is with my mind lately. Forgive me.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yeah, you did. You can always go re-read it though ...I am so tempted to give this one another chapter. I have ti open on my desktop now. But I'm afraid RL is about to beat me over the head and I may need to take a few days "off". But the muse is very, very active.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yoo-hoo, Arabella dear. I've written another chapter just because you asked that question so nicely... let me know what you think.
Very hot! Great story. Too bad it wasn't Harry, ready to jump in and join them. ;)
OMG, this is so awesomely well written. I love it. Though, I don't think Ron would react like that when he sees his little sister shagging Hermione ... or being shagged by Hermione? Hehe
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Probably not, but one can hope! *smirk*
the entire time i was reading it i couldnt help but htink how perfect it would be if a guy saw it. The guy i had in mind was actually Ron, too! hahah!. Perfect. loved it. TMI, but this reminds me exactly, almost down to the last detail, of my first... ahem... endeavor with a... um... girl. I guess what im trying to say was that this was very very well written.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Well, I'm very happy then that I portrayed it realistically because this came entirely from my imagination. Thank you!
I'm not much a fan of femmeslash but this sure pulled me in--sure wasn't expecting that surpise viewer at the end. Eeeek. Though teen boy, wouldn't take much, sister or no.
I certainly could relate to the part about experiences being kissed--the good, the bad, and the way too ugly to ever want it repeated.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Thanks, harmony. I'm not much of a femmeslash fan myself. But there was a discussion going around, and I wondered if I could write it. I'm glad it pulled you in ... I really need to go back and read this one myself. *lol*
Ron? Hot? ahahaha.... yeah, for a whingy 16year old brat... yuck... i'm into the dark and brooding men..not the pests!southern_witch_69's response: this was in response to cocoachristy lol
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Ron may not be dark or brooding or... *cough* a man, but I'm sure he's got something pretty nice hidden beneath those robes. Mwahahaha!
Whoops! Is he still jailbait?
southern_witch_69's response: UH HUH hehe... don't worry, your secret tastes are safe with me....for the first time. you did great.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
LOL... well, thanks.
Well well well! Nice of Ginny to lend a helping "hand" to her friend in need...The only think that freaked me out was Ron at the end, because Gin is his sister. Although I realize it was watching Hermione be sexual that turned him on...Poor Harry, missing all the fun!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yeah, if I was caught by a family member, I'd be mortified. Though, there is something about Ron... and he just keeps popping up in my stories.
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
Personally I think Ron is hot...although I am probably one of the few...;)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I love Ron too. In fact, Melisande wrote a Ron story for me you might like to read, if you haven't done so already.
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
Thanks T!
Umm... wow? Great first foray into femmeslash! The only thing that squicked me was Won Won getting a stiffy over his sister... *shudder* Hopefully he was just watching Hermione. That and he's a teenage boy... it doesn't take much! I'm surprised he didn't stain his shorts! Great job, and I hope you have to purge more demons soon!! *grin* GG
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Ron got a "stiffy" over seeing two girls together. I don't know what it is about men and watching two women. *shakes head* Heehee. Squick? You want squick? Oh, I could direct you to squick. ROFLMAO!! (I'm in a crazy mood; ignore me.)
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Reviewer)
Now... squick for squick's sake is fun and often entertaining... *evil grin*
It's just that that was a hot and steamy scene between the girls, and that twist at the end just made me go, "Yipe! The Perve!!!" *grin*
Seriously, I hope you write more femme slash in the future! You've got a real knack for erotica, I think. Well, you've made me sweat, anyway...
*kisses!* GG
Naughty, Ron! Will he and Harry join in at some stage? Or will this be strictly "girls only"? :)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
It totally depends on the response. This is my first foray into femmeslash of any type. These archives have a heavy female readership, so this should be interesting. And anyway, I'm supposed to be putting my brain on Tutoring Session next... though had to purge a demon first with this one.
Muahaha! Man, I loved this. It so makes me want to call up my little Kristie. lol... **zips lips** Brilliant. I eagerly await what you might do next with this. I can just see Ron there... "That's my sister that Hermione's doing... but bloody hell! Those cries and moans... wicked!" ~Snicker~
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I just may have to incorporate that bit of dialogue, since you put it so... wickedly. LOL!southern_witch_69's response: teeeheee... Lavender never excited him that much, poor bloke! lol
I am really impressed with how you eased by the whole possiblity of incest. (Not a squick of mine, but I know it does bother some) Very, very well written.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Thank you.Actually, it isn't exactly ease with the concept of incest. I read a book once that I was unprepared for that involved incest between a father and daughter, and I literally tore the book in pieces before throwing it in the garbage. If I could have, I would have burned it. And it's funny, because when I was in Borders yesterday I unwittingly saw that book on the shelf, and I thought, "It must have been a sick mind who wrote that." Of course, it simultaneously occurred to me that I have written incest a couple times (though NEVER father/daughter).I think it is the Weasley children that make it comfortable for me. Just like I do not particularly enjoy slash (male or female) unless it is between the right people. The "right" people meaning that in my mind it just feels that they're right together. I am a picky person that way. *lol*
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Thank you.Actually, it isn't exactly ease with the concept of incest. I read a book once that I was unprepared for that involved incest between a father and daughter, and I literally tore the book in pieces before throwing it in the garbage. If I could have, I would have burned it. And it's funny, because when I was in Borders yesterday I unwittingly saw that book on the shelf, and I thought, "It must have been a sick mind who wrote that." Of course, it simultaneously occurred to me that I have written incest a couple times (though NEVER father/daughter).I think it is the Weasley children that make it comfortable for me. Just like I do not particularly enjoy slash (male or female) unless it is between the right people. The "right" people meaning that in my mind it just feels that they're right together. I am a picky person that way. *lol*
I bet Ron is sooooo confused. I can't even begin to put myself into his shoes.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
No kidding. *lol*
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
No kidding. *lol*
damn!