Chapter 6 - Mercury's Wings
Chapter 6 of 11
ancientgirlHermione begins the task of trying to sell hers and Severus' book.
ReviewedAll canon characters belong to JKR. This story is based on The Ghost and Mrs. Muir.
Thank you to June for her help and for being my beta.
Chapter 6 Mercury's Wings
Hermione spent the weekend thinking on Severus' words. He didn't show himself to her for the rest of the weekend, and she thought that perhaps he wanted to be alone. She kept herself busy by reading over a few things in the book that she had made notes to herself to go back to. Every so often, she would hear Viktoria in her room, talking to her dolls. She had taken to giving them tea parties as of late.
Monday morning, she dressed Viktoria warmly and dropped her off at Harry and Ginny's. She knew that her book would never make sense to Muggle readers, so she decided to peddle her and Severus' combined efforts to wizarding society. There were three publishing houses that seemed to be the most open to new writers, so she thought it would be best to approach those to begin with. At the first house, she waited in a small room with several other would-be authors; she left after waiting over two hours. Hermione decided to try her luck with another firm just down the street, where she waited three hours. Hoping that the third time would be a charm, she Apparated to the last firm on her list, which was just a ways down the street from the Three Broomsticks.
Mercury's Wings was a small publishing firm. It was located in a building that looked as though a weak wind could blow it down to the ground. Hermione walked into the building, and found a balding chubby man sitting behind a very old desk, reading that day's copy of The Quibbler.
"Do you have an appointment?" he asked gruffly, not even bothering to look up from his paper.
"No, sir. I don't." She looked around the small room and saw that she was the only person there other than him. "Do I need one?"
The man looked over to her and set the paper down. Just then, another man walked through the door. He looked at Hermione and tipped his hat. He reminded her of Bill Weasley, except he had dark brown hair instead of red.
"Good afternoon," he said as he smiled.
Hermione smiled, and then heard the man behind the desk clearing his throat.
"You can't be seen without an appointment," he said.
"Can I make one now?" she asked.
The man rolled his eyes and opened up a wired book that had been closed. He took his quill and dipped it in ink.
Hermione looked down at the book and noticed that there were no appointments made for the entire day.
"Fine, for when," asked the gruff man impatiently.
"I would like an appointment for December eighteenth at two o'clock."
The man frowned and looked up from his writing.
"That's five minutes from now."
"Yes, it is," she agreed.
"You can't make an appointment for five minutes from now."
"Wilfred, stop giving this lovely young lady such a difficult time. Just have a look at what she has. It isn't as though you have anything better to do," said the man behind Hermione.
"You stay out of this, Reg. It's enough I have to deal with you hanging about; the last thing I need is more no-talent dimwits waltzing in here, thinking they have written the next Merlin's Chronicles," huffed Wilfred.
Hermione narrowed her brow and stepped forward.
"How dare you say that. You haven't even given me a chance to show you what I have."
"At least allow the lady to show you her work." The younger man took a step forward and looked at Hermione. "I must apologize for old Wilfred here. As you can see, he's in a rather nasty mood today. I gather he's lost last week's profits after the Chudley Cannons' loss yesterday." Wilfred crossed his arms and pursed his lips. "My name is Reginald Warren, aspiring best selling author," he said as he bowed slightly and took Hermione's hand. He then motioned to the chubby man. "And that cranky old coot is Wilfred Mercury.
Wilfred mumbled beneath his breath, "All I need, another bloody romance novel."
"Pleased to meet you, Mr. Warren. I'm Hermione Krum."
Wilfred's face then brightened suddenly.
"Krum? Were you related to the Quidditch player, Viktor Krum?" he asked.
"Why, yes, he was my husband," said Hermione quietly.
"Well, perhaps I can have a look at what you have," said Wilfred.
"Really?" said Hermione, excitedly.
"Oh, now you're interested," shot Reginald.
Wilfred ignored the other man and reached out for Hermione's manuscript.
"Just what sort of book is this?" Wilfred asked, hoping it really wasn't another sickeningly sweet romance novel. He turned it to face him, and his eyes opened wide as he read the cover. "Death Eaters?"
Hermione smiled. She knew that was the last thing he expected to see.
"You wrote a book about Death Eaters?" asked Reginald.
"Not just any old Death Eaters. This is about Severus Snape."
Wilfred looked up at Hermione, like a child opening up a Christmas present. "Wait! You used to be Hermione Granger."
"I still am. I'm not dead, sir," she said, still standing but now with her hands on her hips.
"I mean, you also fought in the war. You knew him? You know Harry Potter?" Wilfred asked excitedly.
"Yes, I knew Professor Snape. And I do know Harry Potter."
Wilfred moved the book closer to him and read the title fully.
"From the title, I gather this is a tell-all book, but Severus Snape has been dead for years. He died in the war. Where did you get the information for this book?" he inquired.
"I have recently purchased a home he once lived in. I found several journals and notes written on parchments. I arranged them all by date and began to write this book. Everything in there is documented in his own writing," answered Hermione hopefully. She could see the man becoming more interested by the minute. For a brief moment she considered taking him to meet Severus but pushed the thought from her mind. Severus was not an ordinary ghost like the ones at Hogwarts. He made it clear to her from the beginning that he wanted to be left alone. He would appear only to Hermione.
"Those journals must be something," said Reginald.
"They are quite fascinating, actually. Professor Snape was a brilliant man. There is so much about him that is misunderstood, and many unwarranted rumors," answered Hermione, smiling.
"All right, Mrs. Krum. I'll have a read. Come back Wednesday afternoon."
"Do you think it's something you can sell? Would people be interested in reading something like this?"
"Are you kidding me? Next to nothing is known about what true Death Eaters were all about. All other Death Eaters are dead or were given the Dementor's Kiss. If this book is what I think it is, then you have yourself a goldmine here, Mrs. Krum ... a goldmine."
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Hermione stepped out of the building with an extra spring in her step. She couldn't wait to get home to tell Severus that Mr. Mercury was incredibly interested in the book. She felt a drop of rain and looked up into the sky. At that very moment, there began a torrential downpour. As she was going to turn back into the building, she bumped into Reginald, who had just opened a rather large umbrella.
"I'm sorry, I was going to go inside and cast a rain repellant charm."
Reginald laughed.
"But umbrellas are much more fun, don't you think?" he smiled, then realized he had his arm around her waist.
Hermione realized it too, and moved away from him slightly, yet kept herself under the umbrella.
"And may I ask where you procured this very Muggle item?" She thought it interesting to see an umbrella being used in Hogesmead, only ever seeing wizards and witches keeping the rain off of themselves by way of charms.
"My mother is a Muggle. She gave this to me several years ago for Christmas. Would you like to accompany me for some tea? I would love to hear about your book."
Hermione was flattered to be asked to tea. She never dated much as a teenager, and only had a brief relationship with Ron; Viktor was the only other man she had dated. She also felt a slight tinge of guilt. What would Severus say if he knew she was having tea with some strange man? Why would Severus think anything? He would probably be pleased a nice man had shown interest in her. Still, she hesitated.
"I really should be getting back home. I have to pick up my daughter. I left her with some friends of mine, and I don't want to get home too late."
"Oh, please, I promise I'll only keep you a short time. I really would love to hear about your book."
She thought back on the stories Severus told her. But she could certainly not live her life wondering if every man that approached her was out to attack her. She smiled and nodded.
"All right. One cup of tea, then."
They walked down the street together under the umbrella.
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I hope you enjoyed this chapter. I'll try to have more some time this week. Thanks to all of you who have read so far. I'm very happy you are enjoying it.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Ghost And Mrs. Krum
129 Reviews | 7.85/10 Average
it was snappy reading. hope it wasn't truncated without your consent. you can be proud of this... especially the ending. wonder if ghosts can come back to life?
better eplogue than jo's
better eplogue than jo's
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Thank you! I was heavily disappointed in the final book.
Very well written. I really enjoyed reading it. The Ghost and Mrs. Muir is one of my favorite movies, and I feel you definitely did it justice in this story. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Thank you. I'm glad to hear it's a favorite of yours and especially that you enjoyed my take on it.
I loved it. thank you!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Thank you for taking the time to read it.
Very sad that Hermione had to wait a hundred years before she could see him again, sad that he couldn't reverse what he'd done to her memory. More so even that talking it over with her duaghter did not cause it to reverse itself. Glad that they did finally manage to become a couple, even if it was in the spirit realm. Love that the house became a shrine. Nicely done.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
It is a very sad story. I saw the Ghost and Mrs. Muir for the first time when I was around 8 or 9 and I've always loved it. I always cry at the end. If you've never seen the movie, I highly recommend it! I tried to remain as close to it as possible with this story.Thank you for taking the time to read this.
~wipes tears~ this was both sad and beautiful I love your work.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Thank you. It helped here that the story I based it on is absolutely beautiful. I tried to be faithful to that.I appreciate you taking the time out of your day to read this.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Thank you. It helped here that the story I based it on is absolutely beautiful. I tried to be faithful to that.I appreciate you taking the time out of your day to read this.
I feel sadness for Severus not being able to enjoy Hermione's success. I wish Reg would trade places with him. If only in my dreams.
He now gets to act like a child. lol. And he smiled. Be still my heart. Oh yeah, I haven't watched said movie but I will look for it. Yeah Reg just happened to be around. The golddigger. But his coming to dinner, good Severus can have a go at him. This should be fun.
Darling Victoria talking to her dolls at a tea party. Hmmm. I believe something is up there. I don't like this Reginald character. He seems to be up to no good. I hope Severus scares the shit out of him or something.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Ooooo, I'm guessing you've never seen The Ghost and Mrs. Muir? I won't tell you then. But I really recommend you seeing that movie if you can get your hands on it. It's wonderful.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Ooooo, I'm guessing you've never seen The Ghost and Mrs. Muir? I won't tell you then. But I really recommend you seeing that movie if you can get your hands on it. It's wonderful.
No you are one hell of a storyteller. Bluebells huh? His mother!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Ah, thank you thank you. Yes, his mother.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Ah, thank you thank you. Yes, his mother.
My goodness AG you have such a way with words that the story comes to life just from your writing.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Thank you so much. This is one of my favorite stories I wrote, mainly because I love the movie I based it on. This chapter was very important to me.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Thank you so much. This is one of my favorite stories I wrote, mainly because I love the movie I based it on. This chapter was very important to me.
Could you imagine if JKR had wrote a book just like this one of Severus' memoirs. The fangirls would go crazy. I love that we get an insight of his background.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
I have a feeling she would have screwed that up like her last book too. :(
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
I am so sorry I even brought her up, I didn't mean to make you frown.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
LOL, you know I'm over it. I figured, she did 6 really wonderful books. They can't all be great. Besides, it's not like she's suffered for it, so why should I. :)
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
I agree, I didn't like DH either.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
I have a feeling she would have screwed that up like her last book too. :(
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
I am so sorry I even brought her up, I didn't mean to make you frown.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
LOL, you know I'm over it. I figured, she did 6 really wonderful books. They can't all be great. Besides, it's not like she's suffered for it, so why should I. :)
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
I agree, I didn't like DH either.
I can't believe she got upset over grumpy and not secretary. I would be like I got your secretary right here buddy and then sock him upside the ghostly head. lol
A ghost huh, gives new meaning to cold shivers. lol. I hope thats not the last we see from the old hags. They seem like alot of fun to screw around with. This is going to be a great story. Onto the next chapter.
Oh no now I'm going to cry. I can't say any more, I'm too upset.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
It's always darkest before the dawn. Don't fret too much.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
It's always darkest before the dawn. Don't fret too much.
Well the bastard. His wife should leave him and take him to the cleaners. I hope Severus comes back.
crap, woman! you keep making me cry. that was one of my favorite movies and you adapted it beautifully. thanks so much!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
I'm so happy you know the movie! It's also one of my favorite movies of all time. I found the DVD at Target for a great price and had to have it! I'm especially happy you enjoyed my adaptation of it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
I'm so happy you know the movie! It's also one of my favorite movies of all time. I found the DVD at Target for a great price and had to have it! I'm especially happy you enjoyed my adaptation of it.
What a wonderful story and I'm not embarressed to say that I cried at the end. I felt bad that Hermione never found anyone else, but was happy that Snape waited for her. I'm definitely adding that movie to my list!Thanks!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
I sort of cried at the end too.
You really should see this movie. I gaurantee you, that it will become a favorite of yours, and you'll cry at the end again too!
If you get a chance to see it, drop me a line. I'd love to know what you thought about it.
Thanks for reading this and leaving me a review.
Yes, I like the additional information at the end--sappy, but ever so sweet. It was a very nice story. I must admit; for some reason I like Severus-as-a-ghost stories. Good job.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
I like Severus as ghost stories too, sometimes. I thought the movie that this story was adapted from worked well for him. He really resembles the Captain. LOL.
Thanks so much for reading this and reviewing.
That's just beautiful. I foung myself misting up throughout the story, particularly at Severus' memories of only having been shown love very briefly as a child, but the ending had me sobbing. Wonderful story. I love the way it parallels the original; good, good, good job. Thanks for posting it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Thank you so much for your review. The movie I've adapted this from has always been my favorite movie since I was a child. I wanted very much to do it justice and I wanted it to be a beautiful story for this pairing.
I'm very happy you liked it. Thanks again for taking the time to read it and review.
You brought tears to my eyes. Lovely, really quite lovely. Thank you for taking the time to write and post this story hear!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
I'm happy you enjoyed this. I thought this would be a lovely subject to make into a fic for these two. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and review.Thank you.
That show was one of my favorites years ago. You have made a wonderful job. This story is beautifully romantic. The characters are true to themselves, I love the way you wrote Snape.Thank you for sharing.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
I remember the show, but never saw it. The movie has always been my favorite though. It makes me cry at the end every time.Thank you for reading this. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for the comment on Snape. I think every one who writes him tries to get a bit of JKR's Snape in there, while trying to write him as a person who can love and feel for others.I appreciate you taking the time to review.
Nice Story. It was great idea to a base a story on,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked this. I thought it was a nice idea too.
Beautiful. I've only seen bits and pieces of The Ghost & Mrs. Muir but now I'm definitely going to have to see it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Ghost And Mrs. Krum)
I'm glad you liked it, and have sparked you interest in seeing the original movie. I think you will enjoy it a lot. I tried to stay pretty close to the movie. I have always loved it.