Squibs and Souljars
Chapter 3 of 4
DoomsparkSequel to Invictus, with more puzzles, problems, solutions, and such. Rated "M" for safety's sake.
NOTE: Not compliant with Canon after GoF.
ReviewedThe Daily Prophet's headline was sufficient to cause several members of the Order of the Phoenix to convene at Grimmauld Place as soon as they'd seen it.
"How the hell did Lucius Malfoy manage to escape from Azkaban?" Kingsley Shacklebolt asked for the eighth time. "Don't tell me he's an Animagus like Black was!"
"According to the report," Rita Skeeter answered cautiously, "he was able to identify and exploit a weakness in the wards that allowed him to leave his cell. For some reason, he was not stopped by the Dementors, and as it was evening, there were no human guards around. Malfoy would simply have to walk to the shore and Apparate."
"With no wand?" Ron Weasley scoffed. "He had to have had help."
"It is much more likely that someone met him there with a Portkey," Bill pointed out. "And I don't like it that he found a weakness in those wards. They've been in place for centuries."
"None of the Death Eaters have had any visitors since their new trials," Rita replied. "I checked as part of the story. In fact, most of them are in rather ill health." She paused for a moment. "They reminded me very much of Mr. Potter's godfather."
"We'll have everyone here this evening," Alastor Moody grumbled into the silence that had followed Rita's statement. "Or at least, more of us. Can't take the Headmistress of Hogwarts and three of her teachers away during the middle of the day without causing a ruckus."
Bill brought his feet down off the table where they'd been propped with a thump. "Do we still have McGaven's notes, or did those get turned over to the Ministry?"
"Harry had them last I knew," Ron answered. "What're you getting at?"
"There's something in there about Malfoy. We didn't follow up on it at the time because we were more concerned with rescuing Albus and Black. And I can't remember now exactly what McGaven said."
"Mr. Potter can find them for us tonight," Kingsley said. "I'll remind him."
~*~
The shrilling whistle of a teapot woke Lucius Malfoy out of the best sleep he'd had in months. Being imprisoned in Azkaban was second on his list of experiences he'd rather not repeat, just under Being Soulstruck. Without help, he'd still be there. Come to think of it, he still wasn't entirely sure who'd been responsible for his restoration. He rose, wrapping his over-sized cloak around him for warmth and stepped out into the kitchen of the small house. His cohort in crime was there, as promised, with food and tea.
"You've surpassed yourself," Lucius said appreciatively taking the cup that was offered. "What plans have you for today?"
"I've been thinking about how to get a wand for you, sir. Dumbledore had a box of unregistered ones in his office, and I was thinking to, ah, liberate one."
Malfoy raised an eyebrow. "You have more talents than I gave you credit for. I don't suppose those talents extend to breaking into Ollivander's? No? It was but a thought. One of those unregistered wands will do magnificently."
The other man poked the fire carefully, releasing more heat into the room. "It'll be tricky. When I bring your dinner tonight, I'll let you know more. I'd like to get a house-elf to take care of this place for you, but that could be a problem. You know how they like to gossip."
"Definitely." Lucius looked around the room again noting the pile of blankets, the double layers of carpet on the floor, and other non-magical ways of retaining heat within the building. "Once I have a wand again, this place will become much more habitable." He paused a moment. "I've not properly thanked you for helping me. You'll be well rewarded."
The other man gave him a grim smile in return. "I'm counting on it. If some people knew what I'd done, I'd be dead and you'd be back in Azkaban before you could say Dementor. And there's not many around who'd stick their necks out for you like I did."
"Then it's in our best interests to make sure no one finds out," Lucius replied, tacitly acknowledging the truth of the other's words. "You'd best be getting back to Hogwarts before you're missed, Argus."
~*~
"I don't think it worked," Hermione said as they met for lunch in their rooms.
Snape looked at her blankly for a moment, allowing the Daily Prophet to fall into his lap. "What?"
"Last night. The breaking of the Amorata." She stared back at him. "Don't tell me you've forgotten already!"
"I plead distraction," he replied. "I've spent most of the morning wondering how Lucius could have escaped from Azkaban, and the rest of it trying to pound sense into the dunderheads I'm teaching." He took a mental inventory of his thoughts and feelings. "Why don't you think it worked?"
"I'm here meeting you for lunch, instead of eating with everyone else in the Great Hall," she answered promptly.
"That's ridiculous! We always have lunch together."
"It is not either ridiculous! The only reason I eat lunch with you is because you insist on it!" Her voice was rising.
"That's only because I enjoy your company, you insufferable Gryffindor!" His voice rose in response.
"Let me just remind you that this insufferable Gryffindor saved your sorry arse!" Now she was shouting.
"How do you feel?" he asked mildly.
The complete non-sequitur took her by surprise. "What? I... I feel fine!"
"Hermione, we've just roared at each other. I don't have the beginnings of a headache. If you don't, then I believe we've broken the compulsion."
She opened her mouth and closed it again as the sense of what he'd said sank in. "You're right. But why do I still want to spend time with you?"
He pulled out a chair for her and sat down across the table just as he had for the past several months. "I can only guess that we have become friends as a result of our recent shared experiences."
"That makes a certain amount of sense," she said as she took a sandwich from the platter between them. "But where do we go from here?"
He pointed with an elbow at the Prophet still lying on the sofa. "First things first, Hermione. I suspect we'll be meeting with friends tonight."
"The Order. Yes, I would expect so." She took a bite of sandwich. "Hopefully Arthur can get an accurate idea of what exactly happened." Another bite and she changed the subject. "Minerva gave me a copy of that odd message Albus sent to her."
"Oh? What do you make of it? I admit that I've done nothing but read it the once. It..."
"It reminds you of McGaven's puzzles," she finished for him. "I can see the resemblance. It's very old; it's been under a Stasis spell for centuries. I'd very much like to know where Albus got it. That might provide a clue."
"Send him an owl and ask. You'd think the meddling old codger would think to include such little tidbits of information." He put down a mostly eaten sandwich and reached for the tea.
"I think the meddling old codger is regretting his retirement and looking for an excuse to come back to Hogwarts in some capacity," Hermione returned. "I didn't think he would stay in southern Italy forever, even with a War Hero stipend to live on."
"The owl came from London, not Italy, so Minerva told me," he replied. "I suspect your hypothesis is correct."
"I'll ask when I owl him about the parchment," she said with a grin. "If I phrase it so that I know he's coming back, he might even answer."
"Are you sure you weren't supposed to have been Sorted into Slytherin?" he asked. "That is not the kind of tactic a Gryffindor should think of."
"I think you'll find that I'm not a typical Gryffindor."
"Thank Merlin!"
~*~
Aberon looked at the blank wall in front of him. "Are you sure there's a doorway here? I certainly can't see it." He gingerly pushed one finger against the painted surface. "It feels solid."
"It's right here, see?" Leech replied, stepping into the wall and disappearing. His voice came back distorted. "I've got a lantern here. Now come on."
The wizard considered. "Did Fudge ever say anything about how the door worked? All I see, all I feel is wall."
Leech reappeared. "Well yeah, he had this little thing he always said. Let's see... oh yeah. Nil nisi bonum." He chuckled. "The Aurors never thought to ask and I wasn't going to volunteer."
"Nothing but good," Aberon muttered to himself. Then facing the wall, he spoke the Latin phrase wondering what would happen. Before him, the wall twitched and faded into non-existence, revealing a well-lit flight of stairs descending into a soft pool of darkness below.
"Nice!" Leech stepped through again and took the lantern from its hook next to the doorway. "Mind the stairs; they're kind of steep."
McGaven followed him down nearly a hundred stairs. Obviously this was wizard-work rather than Muggle construction. At the bottom, Leech threw open a door with a flourish. "And here, sir, our fortune awaits!"
Cautiously, expecting there to be wards or other booby-traps, McGaven entered the room. It was definitely a laboratory, with well-filled bookshelves filling one wall, racks and racks of potions ingredients, several cauldrons of different sizes neatly stacked one inside the other, and a diamond-topped workbench that had to have cost a fortune. Sitting on the workbench in neat rows were dozens of dark blue glass jars a bit bigger than his fist. He counted them automatically there were forty-two. For some reason the number stuck in his head.
"Leech, did Fudge keep any personal notes here?"
"Not that I know of." He pointed to the jars. "Those things there what are they?"
"They're important. They're very important," McGaven replied. "I know I used to know what they were. It's part of what they took from me!" He stared at the jars for a long moment. "They're called Souljars... I remember that much."
"No kidding!" Leech rubbed his chin. "What about those cauldrons? Any idea what they'd be worth?"
McGaven considered, going over to the items in question and making a show of inspecting them for damage. "Two hundred galleons for the set, more or less." He walked over to the bookshelves. "There's easily a thousand galleons in books alone. Probably another thousand in equipment and ingredients. And," he added, "A lot of those ingredients would get the owner sent to Azkaban just for having them around." He pointed. "Hand of Glory, graveyard earth, powdered human bone, all things that have no use other than Dark potions."
"I'll take everything down to Knockturn Alley tomorrow. I'm sure Borgin and Burkes will be interested."
"If you sell all this at once, you'll draw a lot of attention to yourself," Aberon pointed out carefully. "It would be better much better to sell off a few things at a time to different shops. If we worked together, we could probably dispose of everything in two or three months."
"Damn! I was hoping to be rid of it all in a week at most!"
"You'd need to find a wealthy dark wizard," McGaven replied. "Very wealthy. One who needs a lab." He looked around the room again. "A fully-stocked lab and a library."
"How hard would that be?"
"Not hard to find one, I wouldn't think but finding one you could trust not to kill you after the sale would be harder. They'd almost certainly want to guarantee that you wouldn't report them to the Ministry. And obviously, you can't report them if you're dead."
Leech grumbled to himself for a minute. "What about this? Can you tell what's Dark and what isn't?"
"Yes..." Aberon wasn't sure where this was going.
"I'm thinking we could sell all the books and equipment that's not dark all at once."
"Still risky. The Aurors searched the house. If they notice that you're selling things, they may come back and search it again."
"Damn it, McGaven! Are you trying to queer this up?"
"Not at all! I don't want to be sent to Azkaban!" He forced his voice to become reasonable. "If we're patient we'll be free and wealthy in a few months. Isn't that better than being broke and imprisoned?"
"All right, all right. You're right about that, at least." Leech stood beside him looking at the massive tomes that graced the shelves. "Pick out two books, give me a price, and let's get started."
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38 Reviews | 8.03/10 Average
Uh, oh. Trouble looms on the horizon. So many tangled webs in this one. There are some really good mysteries afoot.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
Glad you're enjoying it. I'm working on the next chapter.
I'm so thrilled to discover that you've started a sequel to Invictus--I just finished re-reading it so that everything would be fresh in my mind before starting this tale, and I'm already hooked! I gotta say, though...what happened to Hermione's brain??? She's supposed to be brilliant, what is she doing coming up with a hare-brained idea like that? Shouldn't that be Harry's job? I like the little touches placed throughout the chapter, such as the Scottish song title used for the password to the Headmistress' office and the name for Hermione's new Kneazle kitten. Our orange kitten was a shoulder climber as well, and I hated breaking her of the habit but it had to be done for our own safety (there's nothing quite like an adult cat attempting to scramble up your body)...More puzzles! Excellent! I'm crap at puzzles, but I love reading them anyway. Great chapter, and I'm off to the next one!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
I have three cats, so yeah, I know about shoulder-climbers. My tomcat weighed nearly 20 lbs at his heaviest.Glad you're enjoying the story.
Yet another intriguing tale from Doomspark. I take it you are one of the few males that write for this site. How brave of you. I like romance as much as the next lady, but a good mystery always gets me hooked.
Thanks for sharing your stories with us.
Hello, It's Shivette from PI. I have read your work before! You're quite an excellent author! Keep on writing, and I'm glad to know there are other people with as wide and crazy interests as I have.
Interesting turn of events. I am not suprised Hermione and Snape are still attracted to each other. Hopefully, there will be more from that corner.
I think my issue with this story and its prequel is the lack of dramatic tension. All the problems are just solved so very easily, really. In the first one, for some inexplicable reason, there was almost no one guarding the Ministry. And instead of dealing with Fudge, he just gets easily offed, and that's that. The Amorata is taken care of off-handedly as though it was never a problem at all. Everything works the first time. The puzzles are actually pretty obvious and once solved they make a relatively simple plan and it works every time without a hitch. I have no reason to be emotionally invested in a story where I know ahead of time that nothing bad is going to happen and it'll all work out too easily. I mean, it's vaguely interesting in a bland sort of way, but it's all too coincidental and just very, very easy.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
In the four years since Invictus was written and posted (here and on Ashwinder), you're the first person to ever say that my puzzles were "pretty obvious". The Amorata isn't central to the plot of Golden Gain, so I didn't give it center-stage treatment. I'd also like to point out that quite some time has passed since the end of Invictus and beginning of GG - and they make references to at least one failed attempt to break the compulsion.All that said, I do appreciate your opinion. Politely phrased concrit is always welcome even if I don't agree with it.
Response from michiruwater (Reviewer)
That's just the thing, though - they make a reference to a failed attempt, but we don't see it. We just see the one that does work, so, therefore, no real dramatic tension.That said, I appreciate your equally polite response. And I will probably keep reading; it's interesting to see, at least, what sort of puzzle you choose to introduce next, even though I do think Severus, Hermione, and Minerva especially would be able to figure them out in about 30 seconds each ;)
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
I'll see if I can invoke more dramatic tension in GG. It's a somewhat more involved tale than Invictus.
Well, it seems that the Amorata is broken. That's a good thing, especially since Severus and Hermione still want to spend time with each other. Argus was a surprise. Can't wait to see where that's going. Now, McGaven is being smart in wanting to sell everything slowly. I wonder how much of his mind will be jogged by all of the things he uncovers.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
I'm glad you're enjoying the tale and I'm working on the next chapter.
And the plot thickens! I can't wait to see what else you have planned. :)
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
puzzles, potions, prophecies, problems, plausibile plotting, and poisons...
a wealthy dark wizard - as wealthy as Lucius? and then there is the greedy Filch; I only hope Severus has warded his rooms against Filch, whose usefulness to Lucius is limited and thus his days are numbered. can I blame part of this on Albus? thanks for the new chapter!!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
*grin* Lots of questions! You'll have to wait and see!
Severus' and Hermione's reaction to the " breaking of the Amorata" compulsion made me laugh. I'm so happy they still want to spend time with each other.With Lucius Malfoy's escape from Azkaban, the Order will be on high alert and very busy.As for Lucius' new found freedom, I was totally shocked to find out that it was Argus who helped him. I did NOT see that coming! Oh Lordy! And Argus is going to get an unregistered wand for him... after that, it's only a matter of time before Lucius won't need him anymore. What will happen to Argus then?And something tells me that Leech and McGaven are going to end up in trouble if not dead. Hummmm... Maybe Lucius will figure into their attempts to sell Fudge's Dark Magic paraphernalia.Great chapter! Beth
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
I'm glad you're enjoying the tale. I'm working on the next chapter.
Filch? Why would he help Malfoy? And what's Dumbledore planning? Can you tell I'm ready for your next chapter?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
Very good questions! Let's just say that Lucius made Filch an offer he couldn't refuse... and Dumbledore is being a meddling old codger.
Leech. Good name! :)
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
Thanks! Glad to see you're still reading!
Uh oh... on a couple of fronts. I do hope that Severus and Hermione are successful. As she said, it would be nice for her to not HAVE to spend time with him.
Lucius has escaped?!?! So that's where the Ministry put him after Fudge died. I wonder if his Soulstriking punishment was somehow weakened after Fudge was dead. I don't remember reading anything that would make me think that Fudge had restored his soul to him... but with Fudge, you never know...
So if our heroes and heroine find Lucius, they could break the Soulstriking curse and restore his soul, but he would be slightly more powerful restored than he was before being Soul struck. If I remember correctly, Not was not a very powerful wizard.
Maybe Lucius just found a way to "walk-away" from Rastaban.
Poppy is beginning to get on Severus' nerves sooooo bad! I have to laugh about it. I think she may feel embarrassed by her behavior of late if she is dosed with some of the Heliax potion. Hee hee!
The meeting between McGaven and Leech was kinda creepy. What will happen when he sees the lab in Fudge's home? Will his memory be jogged? Will he remember what he had been forced to do by Fudge?
I can't wait to see how all this works out. Great story, BTW!
Beth
Oops. Not the stuff to get into the wrong hands!
Anonymous
Wonderful chapter! It's nice to see Snape unwind, and the both of them obviously getting along. The McGaven-part gives a good, skin-crawling supsense to it - it would have been too nice without some doom behind the horizon, wouldn't it? ;o)
argh!!! doesn't the Ministry have folks watching the baddies? what else do the Aurors do - play Tetris?? well, at least Gingersnap is happy. thanks for the new chapter!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
HINT: go reread Invictus and look for what happened to Lucius.
ooo... interesting stuff! I loved Invictus and I'm so glad you haven't left it hanging. I admit to pondering why Hermione and Severus want to break their bond... unless they want to just be together because they want to be, not because they have to be (sounds like a reason not to marry, actually!) Anyway - love it so far.
I can't wait to see what was in Fudge's house. How much did the wizarding public learn about the soulstruck?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
You'll see... you'll see...
When the pieces are moved into place, the game becomes really interesting. I understand her motivation, but I still can't imagine wanting to rid myself of the compulsion to such a man. Yummy!! LOL (Okay, free will is important. And one could never trust their feelings under the influence of chemicals, but still!! Please don't make them do something daft, like deciding that their feelings post-Amorata are residuals, and therefore not genuine! I would think Hermione was utterly daft!) Have I thanked you for this sequal, BTW? So glad!!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
Oh I'm definitely trying to make this story interesting. Glad you're enjoying the story!
Seeing as I don't like Dumbles, the idea of him being a scapegoat is fun. Glad to see you back!
The plot thickens...I do think that Lucius knows more about the souljars and Fudge's plans on splitting off parts of souls than he's letting on right now. And Argus Filch is helping him! Has Lucius promised him some of somebody else's magic so that he'll no longer be a Squib? It is what he's always wanted, after all.McGaven is wise to want to sell the books and equipment slowly, but I suspect that he wants to draw things out so that he has more opportunity to remember what he was doing, and not so much fear of Azkaban. Lucius will almost certainly wind up purchasing the pertinent equipment, and may even promise to undo the Obliviate if McGaven agrees to assist him. Poor McGaven--he just seems to make a bad habit of falling in with the wrong crowd, doesn't he?And what does the puzzle Albus sent mean? I must know!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
5 points to the House of your choice.
Ooooh...I can't wait to find out what will happen when McGaven sees some of the jars and things! While I don't think something so simple could break an Obliviate spell cast by the Wizengamot, McGaven may have left some notes in his usual "puzzling" style that he will be able to read and discover some of what he was doing before. I'm anxious to see what comes of his visit to Fudge's old house.
And what of Lucius Malfoy? I know Fudge was wanting to transfer his soul to another's body, and pretty Lucius was probably going to be the "lucky" recipient. Is there already a small piece of Fudge inside of him? Hmmm...
I am so thrilled to see this sequel! I saw that you were starting it and had to go back to do a re-read of Invictus, which I enjoyed just as much the second time around.
All I have to say is, "Is she crazy???"
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
Gryffindor enthusiasm getting the better of her, no doubt.