Potions and Plotting
Chapter 2 of 4
DoomsparkSequel to Invictus, with more puzzles, problems, solutions, and such. Rated "M" for safety's sake.
NOTE: Not compliant with Canon after GoF.
ReviewedChapter Two Potions and Plotting
"You're going to do what?" Snape asked incredulously. "Have you lost your mind?" Only previous experiences with the blinding headaches caused by the Amorata if they quarreled too loudly caused him to moderate his tones.
Hermione sighed inwardly. "Think about it, Severus. It separates the two. Once I'm Soulstruck, Bill can break the physical part of the compulsion. Then I can drink a Mens Sana potion to complete the cure after I'm restored. Soulstriking didn't exist when Borgia modified the Amorata potion. It should work!"
"I was right," Severus told Gingersnap. "She's lost her mind. Entirely." Then, to Hermione. "Do you truly, honestly, think that I'm going to allow myself to be Soulstruck again? You have no idea what it was like!"
"I don't see any other way," she grumbled in reply. "How else can we separate the two pieces of it?"
"We'll come up with something else," he answered. "Anything else. We have time to work on it. In fact..." He leaned back in his chair and stared at the ceiling, absentmindedly petting the kneazle who purred and then fell asleep in his lap. His book lay forgotten next to him.
Hermione knew that he'd had the glimmering of an idea, and he'd voice it when he was ready and not before. She picked up her periodical again and found her place. If nothing else, she could Floo Harry the following day and discuss her idea with him.
"Everything we've tried has been thwarted by the interaction between both parts of the compulsion," Snape said half an hour later. "The mental part of the Amorata works on emotions, would you agree?"
"Yes, I think that's obvious."
"Then I postulate that a double-strength Heliax potion might suffice to suppress emotions to the point where a curse-breaking spell could remove the physical compulsions. Then a Mens Sana potion, taken after the Heliax wore off, would complete the cure."
Hermione opened her mouth to tell him that it wouldn't work, and then thought about what he'd said. "We've got both potions on hand. We really should get Bill to teach us his curse-breaking spells so we don't have to keep bothering him."
"Agreed," Snape replied, shifting the kneazle to the sofa and rising. "I will send Mr. Weasley an owl and arrange a time for him to meet us."
~*~
The following morning, Snape strode into the Great Hall for breakfast in an uncharacteristically good mood. For the first time in far too long, he felt that there was an honest chance of breaking the compulsion of the Amorata potion. Taking his usual seat next to Minerva, he speared three slices of dark pumpernickel bread and began coating them with a thick layer of Marmite.
"You appear somewhat mellow this morning, Severus," the Headmistress said as she buttered a scone. "Does teaching Defense Against the Dark Arts agree with you so well?"
"I refuse to be baited until after breakfast," he replied. "But to answer your unasked question, o' curious one, I've had a thought that may allow me to complete my current research project."
The other staff members were trickling in and sitting down with their morning tea or coffee according to taste as he spoke. Minerva had made it clear that she preferred for the entire faculty to be present at meals. This display of unity encouraged similar behavior in the students. Poppy Pomfrey made a beeline for the empty seat next to Snape, getting there three steps ahead of Harry Potter. The Quidditch coach caught Snape's eye and rolled his eyes before sitting down on the other side of Madame Pomfrey. Hermione came in and sat down next to Harry.
The mediwitch gave Snape's breakfast a disapproving look. "Is that all you're going to eat, Severus? You're far too thin." She patted his arm.
Snape raised an eyebrow. "Poppy, you've been saying that since I was fifteen. I like pumpernickel with Marmite for breakfast." He carefully removed her hand from his person squelching a desire to wreak havoc.
"It's not healthy!" She was going to say more, but Harry distracted her with a question about renewing the Cushioning charms on broomsticks. With a silent sigh of relief, Snape turned back to the Headmistress who smirked just slightly at him.
"It's really not funny anymore, Minerva," he said quietly. "In fact, it's becoming downright annoying. Isn't there anyone I can foist her off on?"
Minerva carefully brushed the crumbs from her muffin into a neat pile. "If I think of something, I'll let you know." She cleared her throat, catching the attention of the entire table. "Just one brief announcement. I received an owl last night from the board of governors confirming Professor Snape's appointment as Deputy Headmaster." She smiled and returned her attention to her breakfast.
~*~
"I'm going to murder Poppy," Severus announced that evening as he threw his teaching robes into the hamper. The mediwitch had managed to sit next to him at all three meals that day, and made disparaging comments about his choice of food. At least she'd kept her hands to herself for lunch and dinner.
Hermione laughed as she set a dish of sardines on the floor for Gingersnap. "Is it just me or is she getting worse? I thought you were going to have an apoplectic fit when she patted you this morning."
"She's getting worse. At least it was just my arm she touched." His white linen shirt followed the robes. "I wish I knew what she saw in me! I'd remove it post-haste!"
"Poppy has a mother-complex, Severus."
"A what? Is that a Muggle term for being a congenital pest?"
She went over to him and pushed him gently into his favorite chair, enjoying the feel of his skin under her hands. "She took care of you for so many years, she feels in some ways like you're her son," she explained. "At the same time, she recognizes that you're not her son and that you're a grown man and she's attracted to you in that way as well. The two attractions are all mixed up with each other, much like how the Amorata works."
Snape gave her an evil grin and pulled her onto his lap. "I wonder if I can get the house elves to spike her meals with Heliax."
"That actually might be a good idea," Hermione replied. "Once she's able to view her actions rationally, she may be able to control them better." While she spoke, she traced the heavy black stubble on his jaw. "You forgot your shaving charm this morning."
He exhaled slowly, the tension in his neck and shoulders easing. "Mr. Weasley replied to my owl. He said he can come this evening if we're both available, but otherwise it will be several weeks apparently Gringotts is opening up new branches in America and he is required to be there. I told him tonight would be fine." He rasped his fingers along his chin. "I'm thinking of letting my beard grow out."
"Tonight is definitely fine," she said. "While I enjoy your company, Severus, I hate the idea of being made to enjoy it. What time is Bill coming?" She traced his jaw again. "I think you would look dashing with a beard."
"I suggested 8pm in my reply," he said. "And I spent my free period this afternoon brewing up a double-strength batch of Heliax. It's in the cabinet in the lab along with the Mens Sana." He shifted under her. "And if you keep doing that, we will be late."
"It's your fault for tossing your shirt in the laundry," she replied. But she took the hint and rose. "Do we need anything else?"
"Luck is fickle. Let us hope for success."
~*~
The Crystal Dragon was closed for the night. Growling under his breath, the man turned his back on the pub and headed for Diagon Alley. He could get a drink in the Cauldron even at this unholy hour. Slamming open the door, he took a seat in a corner and began drowning his sorrows with the bottle of Firewhiskey that Tom brought him.
Some time later, he was aware that he was no longer alone at his table. Another man sat there with him. A wizard. This one made no offer of conversation but simply matched him drink for drink, even paying for a second bottle. Halfway through the bottle, the wizard looked over at him rather owlishly. "I should let you know who you're drinking with. I'm Aberon McGaven."
"Macavity Leech," the other man replied. "Heard your name somewhere, but can't remember where."
"Probably best," McGaven replied. "I'm not well liked."
Leech snorted. "Know that feeling, I do. I usually don't drink here. Too many people know me."
"But the Cauldron is always open," the wizard said glumly. "I know. I don't usually drink here either." He took another look at the man. "I've seen you before."
Now Leech raised his head and looked at McGaven carefully. "Yeah, I know. I worked for Minister Fudge until he died. You came 'round to his house a few times."
"I remember that much," the wizard muttered. "They Obliviated me, you know. The Wizengamot. I know I did something terrible, but I can't remember what."
"There's times I'm grateful for being a Squib," Leech answered. "The Wizengamot didn't have much use for me when they investigated the Minister's death just a few questions and then thank you very much. Now go find another job. Ha! Not many jobs for Squibs."
"How did the Minister come to die?" McGaven asked softly. "No one would tell me."
"It were an accident." The Squib drained his glass and refilled it while gathering his thoughts. "See, he got himself another servant some months back. A man named Sisyphus. Old Sissy that's what I called him was dumb as a brick and mute. I think he was a Squib too. Fudge treated him like a house-elf, always ordering him around. Anyway, the night he died, the Minister went out and took Sissy with him. Didn't tell me where he was going, not that he ever did. Said he'd be back late." He swallowed. "Next thing I know, the Aurors come by and tell me that Sissy had accidentally tripped him and he broke his neck in the fall."
"Accidentally?"
"That's what they said," Leech replied. "I've wondered if Sissy just got tired of being treated bad. Fudge never treated me like that in all the years I worked for him. Haven't seen Sissy since then, and I'm guessing the Aurors think the same thing and put him somewhere they can watch him."
"Wouldn't put it past them to do just that," McGaven said a bit sourly as he refilled his glass. "That damned Obliviate spell turned my life upside-down. I lost my job because of it apparently, and I can't find a new one. They took nearly six months of my life away. Six months where I can't remember anything."
"Huh." Leech scratched an ear thoughtfully. "Listen, McGaven. When Fudge died, he left his house and everything in it to me. There's a lot of magic stuff that I can't use locked up in the cellar. The Aurors didn't bother with it when they searched the place. I was going to sell it all, but I don't know what it's worth. I don't even know what some of it is. But you might. You could at least make a better guess. If you help me get a fair price, I'll split it with you."
Interested in spite of himself, McGaven asked, "What sorts of things?"
"Lots of books, a couple of cauldrons, a set of scales, and dozens of jars of I-don't-know-what."
"Sounds like a research lab." The wizard propped his chin in his hands. "I used to do research for the Ministry. I'll come take a look and see what you've got there."
They shook hands to seal the bargain, and agreed to meet the following evening.
~*~
The headline for the Daily Prophet the next morning read as follows:
Lucius Malfoy escapes from Azkaban!
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38 Reviews | 8.03/10 Average
Uh, oh. Trouble looms on the horizon. So many tangled webs in this one. There are some really good mysteries afoot.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
Glad you're enjoying it. I'm working on the next chapter.
I'm so thrilled to discover that you've started a sequel to Invictus--I just finished re-reading it so that everything would be fresh in my mind before starting this tale, and I'm already hooked! I gotta say, though...what happened to Hermione's brain??? She's supposed to be brilliant, what is she doing coming up with a hare-brained idea like that? Shouldn't that be Harry's job? I like the little touches placed throughout the chapter, such as the Scottish song title used for the password to the Headmistress' office and the name for Hermione's new Kneazle kitten. Our orange kitten was a shoulder climber as well, and I hated breaking her of the habit but it had to be done for our own safety (there's nothing quite like an adult cat attempting to scramble up your body)...More puzzles! Excellent! I'm crap at puzzles, but I love reading them anyway. Great chapter, and I'm off to the next one!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
I have three cats, so yeah, I know about shoulder-climbers. My tomcat weighed nearly 20 lbs at his heaviest.Glad you're enjoying the story.
Yet another intriguing tale from Doomspark. I take it you are one of the few males that write for this site. How brave of you. I like romance as much as the next lady, but a good mystery always gets me hooked.
Thanks for sharing your stories with us.
Hello, It's Shivette from PI. I have read your work before! You're quite an excellent author! Keep on writing, and I'm glad to know there are other people with as wide and crazy interests as I have.
Interesting turn of events. I am not suprised Hermione and Snape are still attracted to each other. Hopefully, there will be more from that corner.
I think my issue with this story and its prequel is the lack of dramatic tension. All the problems are just solved so very easily, really. In the first one, for some inexplicable reason, there was almost no one guarding the Ministry. And instead of dealing with Fudge, he just gets easily offed, and that's that. The Amorata is taken care of off-handedly as though it was never a problem at all. Everything works the first time. The puzzles are actually pretty obvious and once solved they make a relatively simple plan and it works every time without a hitch. I have no reason to be emotionally invested in a story where I know ahead of time that nothing bad is going to happen and it'll all work out too easily. I mean, it's vaguely interesting in a bland sort of way, but it's all too coincidental and just very, very easy.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
In the four years since Invictus was written and posted (here and on Ashwinder), you're the first person to ever say that my puzzles were "pretty obvious". The Amorata isn't central to the plot of Golden Gain, so I didn't give it center-stage treatment. I'd also like to point out that quite some time has passed since the end of Invictus and beginning of GG - and they make references to at least one failed attempt to break the compulsion.All that said, I do appreciate your opinion. Politely phrased concrit is always welcome even if I don't agree with it.
Response from michiruwater (Reviewer)
That's just the thing, though - they make a reference to a failed attempt, but we don't see it. We just see the one that does work, so, therefore, no real dramatic tension.That said, I appreciate your equally polite response. And I will probably keep reading; it's interesting to see, at least, what sort of puzzle you choose to introduce next, even though I do think Severus, Hermione, and Minerva especially would be able to figure them out in about 30 seconds each ;)
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
I'll see if I can invoke more dramatic tension in GG. It's a somewhat more involved tale than Invictus.
Well, it seems that the Amorata is broken. That's a good thing, especially since Severus and Hermione still want to spend time with each other. Argus was a surprise. Can't wait to see where that's going. Now, McGaven is being smart in wanting to sell everything slowly. I wonder how much of his mind will be jogged by all of the things he uncovers.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
I'm glad you're enjoying the tale and I'm working on the next chapter.
And the plot thickens! I can't wait to see what else you have planned. :)
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
puzzles, potions, prophecies, problems, plausibile plotting, and poisons...
a wealthy dark wizard - as wealthy as Lucius? and then there is the greedy Filch; I only hope Severus has warded his rooms against Filch, whose usefulness to Lucius is limited and thus his days are numbered. can I blame part of this on Albus? thanks for the new chapter!!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
*grin* Lots of questions! You'll have to wait and see!
Severus' and Hermione's reaction to the " breaking of the Amorata" compulsion made me laugh. I'm so happy they still want to spend time with each other.With Lucius Malfoy's escape from Azkaban, the Order will be on high alert and very busy.As for Lucius' new found freedom, I was totally shocked to find out that it was Argus who helped him. I did NOT see that coming! Oh Lordy! And Argus is going to get an unregistered wand for him... after that, it's only a matter of time before Lucius won't need him anymore. What will happen to Argus then?And something tells me that Leech and McGaven are going to end up in trouble if not dead. Hummmm... Maybe Lucius will figure into their attempts to sell Fudge's Dark Magic paraphernalia.Great chapter! Beth
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
I'm glad you're enjoying the tale. I'm working on the next chapter.
Filch? Why would he help Malfoy? And what's Dumbledore planning? Can you tell I'm ready for your next chapter?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
Very good questions! Let's just say that Lucius made Filch an offer he couldn't refuse... and Dumbledore is being a meddling old codger.
Leech. Good name! :)
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
Thanks! Glad to see you're still reading!
Uh oh... on a couple of fronts. I do hope that Severus and Hermione are successful. As she said, it would be nice for her to not HAVE to spend time with him.
Lucius has escaped?!?! So that's where the Ministry put him after Fudge died. I wonder if his Soulstriking punishment was somehow weakened after Fudge was dead. I don't remember reading anything that would make me think that Fudge had restored his soul to him... but with Fudge, you never know...
So if our heroes and heroine find Lucius, they could break the Soulstriking curse and restore his soul, but he would be slightly more powerful restored than he was before being Soul struck. If I remember correctly, Not was not a very powerful wizard.
Maybe Lucius just found a way to "walk-away" from Rastaban.
Poppy is beginning to get on Severus' nerves sooooo bad! I have to laugh about it. I think she may feel embarrassed by her behavior of late if she is dosed with some of the Heliax potion. Hee hee!
The meeting between McGaven and Leech was kinda creepy. What will happen when he sees the lab in Fudge's home? Will his memory be jogged? Will he remember what he had been forced to do by Fudge?
I can't wait to see how all this works out. Great story, BTW!
Beth
Oops. Not the stuff to get into the wrong hands!
Anonymous
Wonderful chapter! It's nice to see Snape unwind, and the both of them obviously getting along. The McGaven-part gives a good, skin-crawling supsense to it - it would have been too nice without some doom behind the horizon, wouldn't it? ;o)
argh!!! doesn't the Ministry have folks watching the baddies? what else do the Aurors do - play Tetris?? well, at least Gingersnap is happy. thanks for the new chapter!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
HINT: go reread Invictus and look for what happened to Lucius.
ooo... interesting stuff! I loved Invictus and I'm so glad you haven't left it hanging. I admit to pondering why Hermione and Severus want to break their bond... unless they want to just be together because they want to be, not because they have to be (sounds like a reason not to marry, actually!) Anyway - love it so far.
I can't wait to see what was in Fudge's house. How much did the wizarding public learn about the soulstruck?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
You'll see... you'll see...
When the pieces are moved into place, the game becomes really interesting. I understand her motivation, but I still can't imagine wanting to rid myself of the compulsion to such a man. Yummy!! LOL (Okay, free will is important. And one could never trust their feelings under the influence of chemicals, but still!! Please don't make them do something daft, like deciding that their feelings post-Amorata are residuals, and therefore not genuine! I would think Hermione was utterly daft!) Have I thanked you for this sequal, BTW? So glad!!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
Oh I'm definitely trying to make this story interesting. Glad you're enjoying the story!
Seeing as I don't like Dumbles, the idea of him being a scapegoat is fun. Glad to see you back!
The plot thickens...I do think that Lucius knows more about the souljars and Fudge's plans on splitting off parts of souls than he's letting on right now. And Argus Filch is helping him! Has Lucius promised him some of somebody else's magic so that he'll no longer be a Squib? It is what he's always wanted, after all.McGaven is wise to want to sell the books and equipment slowly, but I suspect that he wants to draw things out so that he has more opportunity to remember what he was doing, and not so much fear of Azkaban. Lucius will almost certainly wind up purchasing the pertinent equipment, and may even promise to undo the Obliviate if McGaven agrees to assist him. Poor McGaven--he just seems to make a bad habit of falling in with the wrong crowd, doesn't he?And what does the puzzle Albus sent mean? I must know!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
5 points to the House of your choice.
Ooooh...I can't wait to find out what will happen when McGaven sees some of the jars and things! While I don't think something so simple could break an Obliviate spell cast by the Wizengamot, McGaven may have left some notes in his usual "puzzling" style that he will be able to read and discover some of what he was doing before. I'm anxious to see what comes of his visit to Fudge's old house.
And what of Lucius Malfoy? I know Fudge was wanting to transfer his soul to another's body, and pretty Lucius was probably going to be the "lucky" recipient. Is there already a small piece of Fudge inside of him? Hmmm...
I am so thrilled to see this sequel! I saw that you were starting it and had to go back to do a re-read of Invictus, which I enjoyed just as much the second time around.
All I have to say is, "Is she crazy???"
Response from Doomspark (Author of Golden Gain)
Gryffindor enthusiasm getting the better of her, no doubt.