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Malfoy Manor No Looking Back
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No Looking Back

nastygrl

101 Reviews   |   101 Ratings, 0 Likes, 59 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Romance Malfoy Manor 35,669 Words 14 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy

Lucius stood in his study with no memory of the last five years of his life. In his hand was his one clue, a scrap of parchment with a name scratched on it. Hermione Granger.

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Chapters (14)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: 2

Chapter 3: 3

Chapter 4: 4

Chapter 5: 5

Chapter 6: 6

Chapter 7: 7

Chapter 8: 8

Chapter 9: 9

Chapter 10: 10

Chapter 11: 11

Chapter 12: 12

Chapter 13: 13

Chapter 14: 14


About nastygrl

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nastygrl

Member Since 2008  |  10 Stories  |  Favorited by 77  |  56 Reviews Written  |  372 Review Responses

I've been a fan of JK Rowling for a long time, but only turned to fanfiction after DH - read it in one day, cried for three, turned to the internet the day after for more.  I favor Severus/ Hermione pairings, especially those with lots of chapters and lovely smut scenes - sex by association, pathetic, isn't it??  I've posted a beta profile, if you'd like to check it out.

In real life I am a single mom living in a small town.  Rewarding and boring and the same time.  Lucky me ;)

Author Website
www.daria67.blogspot.com; www,dari-67.livejournal.com/

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10/10

severuslover

Aww...that was both touching and slightly sad (in a frustrating way). I'm glad he's letting her know that she is worth something to him; if only in his gestures for the moment. Wonderful chapter! Can't wait to read the next one. ~Jen

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Ah, Jen, thanks!  I think you're going to enjoy what comes up next, lol.As always, thank you so very, very much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate both!Dari

0/10

rhiannon113

It's all to complex, I read it twice.  LOL I'm anxious to hear what Gobby has to say.  Exciting!

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

LOL, Hermione doesn't know simple.  I'd have said, "Some a** is f**king with you.  I think you need to kill him." :DI love Gobby!  He's coming up!As always, thanks for reading and leaving a review, I appreciate both!Dari

Response from rhiannon113 (Reviewer)

I suppose you could have done, but then I'd be whinging that it's too short a chapter. The complexity was fascinating - that was a complement, fyi. =] 

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Well, that's even better! :D But wait, there's more...  

10/10

Muggline

Oh dear, this must be terrible – to have your loved ones awaken after a memory loss and they don't recognize you...

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

It is terrible for everyone!  Lucius is stressed, his heart and his head are at odds with each other.  Hermione is stressed, too, between what was and what is going on.  Lots of answers in the next chapter!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review, I really appreciate your kind words :)Dari

10/10

beaweasley2

Wow, I'll say he was responding to her. and she to him! Will she tell him about their relationship or is he supposed to find out from his bboks?Hummmm

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Hmmm indeed!  Answers to TWO big questions are on the way.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it :)

10/10

severuslover

Wow! Intense chater! I can't wait to see what happens next! Wonderful job! Keep up the suspenseful writing. ~Jen

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

I'm so glad your enjoying the story! Answers to two BIG questions are on the way :)As always, thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means an awful lot :)

0/10

rhiannon113

Lucius is amazing. The journals gave a good peek at his superior attitude. His snark is part of what makes him so yummy (Jason Isaacs doesn't hurt either).

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

*big smiles*  Thank you! God yes, he is truly yummy! Bad boy personified :DI really appreciate you reading and leaving a review, it means a lot!  More, much, much more is on the way! A BIG question is answered. Okay TWO big questions are answered, lol.

10/10

sherrithewriter

What a story! Incredible writing. I love the way you have played out the story through the journals. They're obviously made for one another. Will there be more soon?

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Oh, thank you *hugs*  Answers to major questions are on the way!  I see roughly four more chapters, give or take one, lol.Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I truly appreciate it!Dari

10/10

June W

gads, will someone tell me and Lucius just WHY he is not yet divorced from Cissa???  thanks for updating!

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

LOL..Funny you should mention that... :D   More information to come :)Thank you for reading and reviewing, I truly appreciate it! 

0/10

rhiannon113

Lucius is just yummy, even clueless. I like that he's a hero!! You won't take away to much of his nastiness will you? LOL

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Oh no, he's still a right bastard!  But, you know, it's hard work being a bastard ALL the time, lol  He's slowing getting his bearings, so I expect him to be back to his (more or less) usual ways.  But you know, he's had a life altering event, is anyone EVER the same?Thanks for reading and leaving a review!Dari

9/10

severuslover

I can't wait to see what Lucius discovers in his journals! Very good chapter. Keep up the wonderful work. ~Jen

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Thanks Jen!Ah, what does Lucius discover?  More than is written in his journals, that's for sure :)Thanks for reading and leaving a review, I appreciate both :)

10/10

sherrithewriter

I'm looking forward to seeing what information the journals hold.

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Hmmm, those pesky journals, LOL.  Lucius DOES find out more information :) More answers and a juicy lemon on the way :DThanks for reading and leaving a review, I appreciate both!Dari

10/10

beaweasley2

So he is finally piecing together the pieces of his past. Good.

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Yes, things are slowly coming together.  He'll find, I think, that some things are more important than others. There are things he'll lt go of, and others he'll hold close.  Thanks so much for taking the time to read and leave a review, I appreciate it!

0/10

Terab

Looking forward to finding out what is written in the journals.  Still waiting for a little HG/LM romance :-)

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Journals are on the way!  So is a little romance!  I just couldn't jump these two together, and I appreciate everyone waiting as these two took their time :)Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave a review, I appreciate it!Dari

10/10

severuslover

I liked the relationship you wrote for Draco and Lucius...very nice. I'm really excited to read the conversation between Hermione and Lucius. Update again soon. Wonderful job! ~Jen

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

I like their relationship, too :) Lucius was very nervous...The conversation with Hermione may only be the beginning of his troubles, lolThanks for taking the time to read and review, I appreciate it!

0/10

peppermint

I love that she just shows up, steals his tea, and makes like she belongs there. Looking forward to the mystery unraveling!

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

LOL, Lucius gets pretty pissy about that, too!To be honest, I'm looking forward to it, too :DThanks for taking the time to read and review!

10/10

ladylynne9

Awesome story!  Lucius is one of my favorites, and it's fantastic to read such an intriguing story from his point of view.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Keep up the great work :)

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Thank you!  I adore Lucius, and I'm so glad to hear you like reading from his point of view :)Thank you for taking the time to read and review, I appreciate it!Dari

10/10

Muggline

Mess continued... something makes me think that Hermione might have been the affair he is wondering about, but that still doesn't explain his memory loss. I am looking forward to their "talk".

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Their talk is only the tip of the iceburg, I think.  Lots more to unravel!Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!Dari

10/10

Muggline

A mess indeed. Can't wait to know what happened...Merry Christmas!

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Yes, Lucius has quite a mess on his hands, lol.Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.Merry Christmas!Dari

10/10

severuslover

Nice chapter! I can't wait to hear his conversation with Hermione, but I have a feeling I'll have to wait a few more chapters for that. Keep up the good work! ~Jen

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Yes, you will have to wait, but not so very long.  Then again.... :DI am thrilled that you are enjoying the story, it is very new for me to be writing a story, instead of oneshots!  Thank you for your encourgement and for taking the time to read and review.Merry Christmas!Dari

0/10

shellsnapeluver

Wow babe! This is a great mystery! I hope it contiunes to be like this--I am on edge, wondering what in the world happened to him! And then to leave it off with a parchment simply stating, "hermione granger" oh. bloody hell. hahaahahhahah. This is great!

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Squee!I'm so glad you like it! I wanted to start off with not your typical Lucius :D  And it would appear that I like cliffies~ never knew that about myself, lol.Thanks for reading and reviewing, you know I love you!

10/10

aura

Okay...  I'm completely confused but very intrigued! 

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Much like Lucius :)  Answers are on the way.Thanks for reading and reviewing!Dari

10/10

severuslover

Interesting start. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work. ~Jen

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Thanks for the encouragement :)  More is on the way.Thanks, too, for reading and reviewing!Dari

10/10

Muggline

This is all very mysterious (thanks for stating the obvious. my dear...). I am eager to know where you will lead us!

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

LOL!  I've always liked mysteries!  I'm so glad you are enjoying it so far :)Thanks for reading and reviewing!Dari

10/10

karelia

You surely have me hooked here! *wants more*

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Thank you, more is on the way!Thank you, thank you for reading and especially reviewing

10/10

RedsAttic

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!

Response from nastygrl (Author of No Looking Back)

Thank you!! So happy you found it. :)

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