Flowing Gems of Purity
Chapter 10 of 10
DarkFateHermione makes an interesting discovery.
ReviewedThank you to my wonderful beta, AmyLouise!
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot
The day started out blissfully quiet in the sixth-year girls' dormitory. For once, Hermione was free of the incessant chatter that spewed like an endless stream from the mouths of the other girls. Refreshed by this, Hermione went about with her usual morning routine and went for a quick jog before returning to shower. Once these morning rituals were over, she noticed it was already time for lunch and made her way down to the Great Hall. Upon entering, she couldn't help but notice the remarkably few number of students present for the holidays at Hogwarts this year. It seemed that Professor Dumbledore was of the same opinion and had decided to move all the house and staff tables, choosing instead to have one single table for all the students and teachers to share. It was strange to see the Great Hall so empty, occupied with nothing more than one large table and a Christmas tree. Hermione made her way over to the table slowly, noticing that it was already occupied by several students and teachers.
"Ah, Hermione, do come and join us for lunch, my dear," Professor Dumbledore exclaimed in a jovial manner.
"Thank you, Headmaster," she replied, nodding slightly at him.
As she went to take a seat she noticed that there was a rather large gap between the students and Professor Snape, while there was no such distance between any of the other teachers and students. Hermione decided that instead of squeezing between the other younger students or teachers, she could just as easily sit near the Potions master.
As she sat down, she received startled looks and curious glances from both the staff and students. The only people who did not seem surprised by her choice of seating were the Headmaster and Professor Snape himself. Nevertheless, lunch was a quiet affair. Most of the students remaining this year were in fourth year or below, with a few fifth, sixth and seventh years scattered in between. The students all seemed too nervous to talk as they normally would: likely a result of their close proximity to the professors. Granted, their strange silence could also be attributed to the harsh glares they were periodically receiving from Professor Snape. Hermione, however, was not fazed by sitting so near the staff, nor was she discomforted by her close proximity to the fearsome Potions master; in fact, she was quite pleased with the sudden and rare quiet that encompassed the Great Hall.
The meal passed in blissful silence, and the students scurried off as soon as was acceptable. Hermione found this amusing and thought reminiscently back to those blissful years when she too had naïvely idolized, worshipped, and even feared her beloved professors. Perhaps it was the odd feeling of being alone at Christmas that caused all of her recent nostalgia. It seemed as though the world had changed so drastically during those months she was gone, when in reality the world at large had not been altered at all... no, the change she felt came from within. It was as though the Death Eaters had, while sparing her life, killed the joyful, carefree spirit she once had, leaving behind an empty shell, one with no other goal than pure, sweet revenge.
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Hermione spent the afternoon wandering along the hallways in a somewhat dazed manner. She was caught in a sudden bout of nostalgia and found herself reminiscing about all the relatively carefree times she had spent in the school while trying desperately not to let her thoughts drift to the darker recesses of her mind. She wandered aimlessly, letting her feet guide her, only to find herself some time later in strange hallway, deep in the depths of the school dungeons. Not entirely sure how she had come to be there, she decided to explore.
The corridor seemed long deserted, as if no one had ventured there in years. It was dark, like many of the underground tunnels of the school, but had an eerie glow that seemed to emanate from the walls, which were jagged and well worn, yet the stones below her feet were smooth, evenly cut, and polished like marble. The effect was interesting, like a cross between old and new.
There were no portraits adorning these halls, and upon looking up, she noticed strange patterns on the ceiling. There were intricate designs that vaguely resembled Celtic knots. In fact, upon closer inspection, she noticed that the walls did not exactly glow per se but had tiny well-like holes that were filled with some kind of glowing blue substance, enough to light the way in an eerie glow.
Intrigued, Hermione continued down the hallway, which seemed to beckon her. The corridor appeared to stretch endlessly, and the patterns from the ceiling bled down over the walls the farther she walked along the hall. Hermione lightly trailed her finger tips along the wall, tracing the designs with her fingers as she walked. What she failed to notice, however, was that every time she touched a line, it would flare a brilliant emerald green, glowing much like the blue substance in the walls.
A little way down, Hermione stopped abruptly at the sight of a massive arch. It was here that she noticed the glowing green substance as the colour seeped in, filling the carvings and winding its way around the archway. Hermione stepped back in shock. The glow faded when it completed its course around the arch, only to flash silver. Then, like an overflowing river, molten silver poured from the carvings, coating the wall under the arch in shimmering silver fluid.
As if in a trance, Hermione reached her hand out towards the shimmering wall, throwing caution to the wind as she was lured towards the molten arch. The instant her fingers touched the silver, she pulled back, her fingertips coated in thick silver fluid, not unlike Unicorn blood. Though it looked like molten silver, in reality it was not hot at all; on the contrary, it was actually rather cool. She passed her hand along the wall again, relishing the feel of the smooth silver liquid. It was refreshing, much like a cool spray of water on a hot summer's day. Drawn to the arch, Hermione stepped closer, reaching out to the wall which seemed to call to her longingly. This time, when her fingers touched the liquid, they passed through, as though a passageway had opened behind the waterfall of liquid silver. Hesitantly, she passed her arm through the sheet of silver, a flicker of doubt passing through her mind for the first time. Taking a deep breath, she closed her eyes, plunging through it.
She stepped through and opened her eyes, only to find herself in an elaborate-looking circular room. The room was large, with a massive domed ceiling and floors of brilliant white marble with emerald green and sapphire blue swirls embedded in it. There were majestic columns entwined with lush green ivy lining the room.
Hermione turned to look behind her and saw that the passageway looked the same as it did from the other side. Satisfied that she could still get out, she started walking along the perimeter of the room. In one corner there was a long mirror which caught her eye. It was not the mirror itself that caught her attention, it was the reflection that met her eyes. There she stood, her reflection the same as it had always been, except she noticed that her hair was now coated in the thick silver at the ends. The droplets slid slowly down her shoulders, shimmering softly before disappearing. It cast a glow around her, giving her an ethereal appearance, purifying her in a way she had not felt for many months.
Tearing her glance away from the mirror, Hermione continued her explorations. There was not much in the room, but the designs from outside adorned these walls as well, leading her to believe there could be more rooms and doors hidden amongst the carvings. Hermione was so entranced with her new discovery that she hardly noticed how much time had passed. Only the sudden pang from her stomach reminded her that perhaps she ought to leave her explorations for another day.
Sighing, she stepped back through the archway, retreating back along the way she came. The doorway disappeared after she walked away, the silver turning back into green and retracting as though it were following her. Upon reaching the beginning of the hallway, Hermione turned and looked back at the hall. Now it only had a faint blue glow to it, as though someone had lit their wand with a lumos at the end of the corridor. Turning once again, Hermione retraced her steps through the dungeons back to the main part of the castle, deep in thought.
So engrossed was she in her thoughts, she hardly noticed the looming figure of the Potions master, who was fast approaching her.
"Miss Granger," came the sharp voice of her professor.
"Hmm? What... Oh, good evening, Professor; how can I help you?" Hermione replied calmly.
He merely quirked an eyebrow at her, before enquiring accusingly where she had been at dinner.
"Is dinner over already? I'm afraid I lost track of time, sir," she replied coolly.
"Indeed. Do you have any idea what time it is, Miss Granger?" he asked, the smug demand clear in his tone.
"Seven, sir?" Hermione wagered casually, not having the slightest clue as to what time it was.
"Hardly. It might interest you to know that it is currently 12:30, over two hours past your curfew," he sneered.
"I beg your pardon, sir?" Hermione asked, shocked from her half-dazed state upon hearing the time.
"Twenty points from Gryffindor; get to your dormitory now before I remove any more," he barked.
"Yes, sir," she replied demurely, still surprised that so much time had passed without her noticing.
Had she been that preoccupied, that she failed to notice ten hours pass her by? That corridor had entranced her so much that the time literally flown by, yet she wasn't tired in the least. On the contrary, she felt energetic and oddly enough, peaceful for the first time in months.
Thoroughly astonished by the events of the day, Hermione returned to her tower, following the same route she had for the past five years. Upon reaching her room, she got ready for bed, feeling strangely relaxed. Not five minutes after she lay down, her eyes drifted closed, and she slipped away into a deep, peaceful, and blissfully dreamless sleep.
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Latest 25 Reviews for What Lingers In The Dark
72 Reviews | 6.38/10 Average
what facinating images! and what a wonderful update. thanks and many smoochies
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
I'm glad you liked it, I know it was a bit strange, but I am pleased to know it was enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing! :)
I'm deadly curious about this strange arch. I have a feeling that she shouldn't get there too often.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
Perhaps, perhaps not :p But it is a magical school so anything is possible! You'll find out about the arch soon enough... well eventually anyway. Thanks for reviewing! :)
It was as though the Death Eaters had, while sparing her life, killed the joyful, carefree spirit she once had, leaving behind an empty shell, one with no other goal than pure, sweet revenge.
Love that line...
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked this chapter :)
That was a little frightening, actually.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
Haha frightening?? Oh no! Well I hope it didn't scare you away from the fic lol! Anyway, thanks for taking the time to review, hopefully next chapter won't be so creepy to you :p
Wow! Where that reaction to Ron'words comes from? Of course she has a right to be angry, but the violence is just not in her nature. And I'm so curious about what will happen next.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
Heh, yeah, Hermione kinda lost it there... I think it's the first time Ron realizes just how different she is now from the girl he knew before. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Ooo, looks like we're getting somewhere. Very disturbing her reaction to Ron. Poor thing. What a horrible thing to have gone through. Obviously, she won't get over it for a long time, but hopefully she will eventually.
I can't even begin to understand what she's going through. Fortunately Severus was there, this time. I pray for better days and I wonder if maybe a memory charm wouldn't be better for her.
Is she really thinking that physical exhaustion will help her deal with her psychological turmoil. She needs to talk to a therapist and quickly. And I don't mean Snape here.
Shame on me! I seem to have forgotten to read this chapter, and I'm terribly sorry about it. I also pity poor Draco as he must trend on a dangerous line. After all if Lucius could kill his wife, surely he could do the same wih his son, were he to displease him.
It's probably good he's not letting her wallow. You can't wallow in the middle of a battle.
many people turn to physical exertion to sublimate emotional pain. wonderful update. thanks and mucho smoochies
poor draco, but i think hermione's right. it is cowardly to defend his murdering father. superb update. thanks so much
great update! i am looking forward to see how she'll train herself. thanks so much
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
Thanks for the awesome review! Glad you are liking this fic so much :) More training to come, I promise!
This chapter could have been plumped out a bit if you had written in bits about what Severus encountered in Hermione's mind. I know she told the professor that she had cleared her mind, but you indicated that she hadn't actually done that. I should think that the road to become the 'most dangerous woman alive' should be a little more ... scenic. Though I appreciate what you have written, the story is worthy of more development than expressed in this one chapter.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
thank you for taking the time to review. I think I understand what you mean by making the scene more "scenic". In one of the later chapters (I think chapter 6 or 7, I can't remember exactly) Severus does see more into Hermione's mind and see some of her experiences through her eyes. The decision not to show what happened in this chapter was actually quite deliberate because I didn't want to rush the Hermione/Severus relationship and I want to approach the issue of what happened to Hermione more carefully and slowly. I think that Severus finding out more about what happened to her is very crucial to their relationship, and so I don't want that to be revealed so close to the beginning. I'm not sure if that explanation helps at all, but that might give you an idea of what I was thinking. Thank you for the critisism because it helps me to know how the chapter is perceived and also it gets me thinking more about why I approach things a certain way. didn't mean to write you a novel with this reply lol! Anyways, thanks again for reviewing (if you have any more suggestions or want more clarification, feel free to email me!)
i thot that was quite typical of the headmaster. terrific update. thanks so much
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
Thanks for the lovely review! I'm glad you liked this chapter and I am also happy to know that you felt that Dumbledore sounded realistic/in canon. Thanks again for reviewing! :)
Whatever is to be said about revenge, I do like a Hermione who doesn't let those DE who hurt her make her a victem. It is said that what doesn't kill you, make you stronger, and so far this Hermione is a perfect example for that saying. I love Hermione, which means that I hate it when she gets hurt, and I want revenge issued on those who hurts her. It is also said that the best sort of revenge is to live well, but I do hope that you will let the DE that killed her mother and sister, and hurt her so badly, at least feel some fear of what she would do to them? Maybe Severus can show her that revenge doesn't make it better, but I hope you will make him do so with some respect. I am not to fond of plots where he belittles her into "admitting" that he is the sole owner of truth, the one who knows everything the best, and as soon as she realise and admit to that fact, the sooner she will be "happy ever after". Maybe revenge won't make her any better than them, but she does deserve to terrorize them some....:-))
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
Thank you for taking the time to review! I'm happy to know that you are enjoying this story. I agree that the best sort of revenge is to live well and be successful, whether or not that will hold true for Hermione is yet to be seen... I'm not certain myself how all this will end! I do want Severus to sort of mentor her, show her that she need not let the revenge and hate consume her. I agree that I don't like it much when Sev bullies her into seeing his way of thinking, besides he too is flawed. But I do want him to help her, and perhaps they can together grow to understand that hate need not consume all. And don't worry, the DE's will definitely be on the receiving end of Hermione's wand; they will most certainly pay for their crimes.Anyways, I'm very happy to receive such long and thoughtful reviews, so I am grateful! Hope you continue to enjoy reading this story! :)
A vengeful Hermione trained by Severus will certainly be a force to be reconned with! It will be interesting seeing Sev attempt to temper Hermione's need for vengence!What a perfect teacher for control and self discipline...Looking forward to more!
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
thank you for the wonderful review! I'm glad you like it so far, and there is much more to come! And if anyone can show Hermione that revenge doesn't solve all, I think it would be Severus :)
The most dangerous woman alive. It certainly has merit for her to react, but this strongly. What will happen when she realized that revenge doesn't bring the relief she crave for. I hope these lessons, and Snape in particular will help make her think differently.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
Thank you for reviewing! I think Snape is the perfect person to mentor her through this kind of tragedy as he has suffered so much himself. I'm not sure what will happen to Hermione when she realizes that the act of revenge won't ease her pain... but for the sake of her and my readers I hope she can get through it! :)
i am enjoying your story. as always (i say as always because it's just ron's personality to not to be able to deal with the hard things: ie, him running away in the Deathly Hallows) i think that ron will have the hardest time coping with hermione becoming withdrawn and intent on revenge. i also think that snape will the best to, if not draw her out of herself, but to help her. i also wanted to ask because you did not mention it, but is hermione's face scarred?
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
I quite agree with you. Ron is a bit dense when it comes to emotions. He tends to speak before thinking, so I anticipate some difficulty with him and Hermione. Hermione's face is not scarred, though most of her torso, back and portions of her arms and legs are severely scarred. The torture they inflicted on her would not have affected her face. Anyways, thanks so much for reviewing, it's always nice to hear what readers think! Also, feel free to ask any more questions, I would be happy to answer them :)
Take the "brightest witch of her age" with Gryffindor courage and determination, add in Slytherin-taught mental discipline and top it off with a grief-driven thirst for bloody vengeance ...Ron once called Hermione "brilliant, but scary". Prophetic words, much?Lucius Malfoy, be afraid. Be very, very afraid.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
haha yes, if Lucius Malfoy had any brains he would run and hide lol! Come to think of it, Ron's words are oddly true, even more so now I think. Although I don't think he'll be quite so nonchalant about her "scariness" now. Thanks for reviewing, it's always lovely to hear what readers think! :)
I was thinking about that myself, Hermione seems just a little too obedient to Prof Snape. Poor thing, life is hard for her right now. Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
thanks for the review! I'm so glad you are enjoying this story :) Life is very hard on Hermione now, but hopefully it will get better soon. Luckily she has one hell of a mentor ;)
If anyone can help her it's Snape. And maybe by seeing glimpes of what she went through and may understand her a bit better.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
thank you for reviewing! I hope that Severus can help her, because out of everyone, I think he is the one with the most realistic viewpoint on life and understanding of her situation in general. Anyways, glad you like the story so far! :)
Will there be hope in her life again? Poor thing.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
I sure hope there will be hope in her life again! I would hate for her to die a tragic hero who found no joy in life. Anyways, thank for the review, hope you like the chapters to come! :)
Severus is the only one that realizes how fragile yet dangerous she is.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
Thanks for the review! I think Severus is the only one who understands her burning rage but can also appreciate her delicate mental state. Hopefully he can help her :)
Poor Hermione. So much to overcome! And her desire for revenge, while very understandable, will not help her healing.
Response from DarkFate (Author of What Lingers In The Dark)
So much to overcome indeed. Maybe she will realize the futility of revenge? maybe, or maybe not! Unfortunately, even I don't know that yet ;)Thanks for reviewing, I am always happy to hear what my readers think!