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Scampi And Cherry Cream
chivalric56 Reviews | 7.68/10 (56 Ratings, 0 Likes, 38 Favorites )
After suffering from illness and depression, Snape is finally feeling better and willing to get his life back and his job and maybe have a little fun, too. This is a sequel to "Truffles and Strawberries".
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Scampi And Cherry Cream
awww.... is this all? i came from the prequel. what's the sequel after the sequel called?
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Yep, sorry, those two (Scamp and Truffles) are the only two in this series, if you want to call it that. Thank you for liking and reviewing!
what a wonderful nightcap.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Thanks so much, dear!
ah, what a coincidence that I need a new cloak and can accompany them!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Glad you found the sequel - I think it is the first one where I put a bit more attention to Snape/Lupin ;-)
haha, a Spanish winegrower...a man named Carlos who lives near the beach, perhaps? ;)You should write an 'm' rated sequel all about the fun that Severus, Hermione and Remus have =D
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Hon, I'm on it - give it another week, and I'm done. And as I am in need for a beta for Snupins/Snupin threesomes, are you interested? Send me an owl if yes, and anyway, thanks for reviewing!P.S. You read too many of my stories, dear *is pleased*
Response from hermione278 (Reviewer)
Sure, I'd love to beta :)My email is hermionie278@yahoo.com(hermione is spelled incorrectly, it's not a type lol)can't wait for that sequel ;D
Anonymous
Lovely chapter!
Seeing Hogwart's damage must have been a truly shocking view and quite hard to take for Snape. Meeting the wrath of Minerva really made my day - wonderful, how you draw her here, and so logical! Lovely, too, what happened afterwards - though I'm quite surprised that Hermione doesn't seem to mind a threesome... I never would have taken her to be so openminded... ;o)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, dear! I wanted a lighthearted ending for a story that started (with the prequel) quite dark. And then... Hermione is an open-minded witch, eager to try out new things. A threesome with Snape and Lupin... Yummy!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
*FG* It's good to see him loosen up so readily...
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
*g* Took him long enough. Though a few massages might have helped!Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
*g* Took him long enough. Though a few massages might have helped!Thanks for reviewing!
oh my, an amusing tale. I had to laugh at Hagrid's reaction, and your sly references to your other story, At the Beach. Thanks for contining this. I really enjoy Severus softening up and his thoughts. Well done!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Thanks, dear! I wrote a few too many dark tales lately and wanted something light-hearted for a change ;-) A losened up Snape is truly something I like to write about!Thanks for reviewing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Thanks, dear! I wrote a few too many dark tales lately and wanted something light-hearted for a change ;-) A losened up Snape is truly something I like to write about!Thanks for reviewing.
i loved this installment! you had me laughing out loud many times - not least with the Spanish wine-grower references. i loved the castle recognizing him, and i loved how he was so distraught because people were being ... nice to him and he didn't know how to handle it. and - well, cherries and cream and severus and remus. oh, yeah, hermione, too. i'm really looking forward to the next.
i hope you don't mind, but i noticed a few little things: "Getting though the school" should be "through"; "I was at in his house for a few weeks" should be either "at" or "in"; and "Draco, Harry, and the matron where outside" should be "were" :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Thanks a lot for pointing out the mistakes, I corrected them immediately. *hugs you*Thanks for reviewing as well. I'm glad you liked the ending (because an ending it is) and you even caught the winegrower reference... Couldn't resist it *g*Will write a sequel to Cold Moon which could easily fit this story, too. Threesome... Now that's something I look forward writing to!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Thanks a lot for pointing out the mistakes, I corrected them immediately. *hugs you*Thanks for reviewing as well. I'm glad you liked the ending (because an ending it is) and you even caught the winegrower reference... Couldn't resist it *g*Will write a sequel to Cold Moon which could easily fit this story, too. Threesome... Now that's something I look forward writing to!
Oooh. Yummy.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
*lol* Thanks!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
*lol* Thanks!
Severus' return to Hogwarts was touching. I could picture his relief at the school's recognition and acceptance of him, and even though it took Harry some little time to believe his eyes and ears, his regard for Severus was always clear.I thought it was fun how the students who were rebuilding Hogwarts patted him on the back when they saw him walking about the school. Minerva had him going there for a few minutes. She was so put out that he had neglected to tell her he had survived, but I think that was a manouver to get him to pay attention to what she had to say about running the school. No fool, she.
The response of the house-elves to his arrival in the kitchens was a hoot! "Master should leave kitchen," the house-elf said, nodding so eagerly that his big ears flopped. "Master should not come back here ever again." Severus' "Don't count on it" was typical of the old Headmaster.But the bestest part of all was the end of the chapter when Severus decided After all I have gone through, I deserve a bit of fun, he thought. Or even a little more than that.Well done! Beth
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Hi, Beth,and thanks so much for your detailed review! I wrote this one in between projects, but couldn't leave my fingers off it. I liked the thoughts of a losened up Snape, a Hermione who clearly states what she wants, and Lupin sort of in the middle *smirk* A little fun and maybe a little more - exactly what Snape earns after that nasty attempt to kill him!Will write a threesome sequel, in case you are interested...
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I'll be watching for it!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Hi, Beth,and thanks so much for your detailed review! I wrote this one in between projects, but couldn't leave my fingers off it. I liked the thoughts of a losened up Snape, a Hermione who clearly states what she wants, and Lupin sort of in the middle *smirk* A little fun and maybe a little more - exactly what Snape earns after that nasty attempt to kill him!Will write a threesome sequel, in case you are interested...
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I'll be watching for it!
This is AWESOME! Great ending. Wonderful chapter. I do have to say that my fave part was the references to At The Beach. OMG, I almost fell over. Now I am eagerly awaiting updates there. Thanks so much for sharing your awesome talents with us!Hugs, Muggle Mom
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
My dear, I have to hug you for your willingness to read and review my stories! Without reviews, there would be a lot less motivation for me to write; I am depending on each of you and especially on the ones who leave lots of reviews ;-)Will write a threesome story sometime soon, and I will update At the beach this week. Couldn't help but putting the reference in!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
My dear, I have to hug you for your willingness to read and review my stories! Without reviews, there would be a lot less motivation for me to write; I am depending on each of you and especially on the ones who leave lots of reviews ;-)Will write a threesome story sometime soon, and I will update At the beach this week. Couldn't help but putting the reference in!
that was great! I hope there's more!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
This story is finished, but that doesn't mean I won't write a threesome sequel that could easily fit into this storyline. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
This story is finished, but that doesn't mean I won't write a threesome sequel that could easily fit into this storyline. Thanks for reviewing!
So we will get more details next chapter? I'm always a little sceptical of threesomes-- seems someone might get left out. Thanks for the fun chapter.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Oh, no, dear, this story is finished. I will write a story with a HG/SS/RL threesome, though. It might even fit this timeline, but will be in fact a sequel for Cold Moon.BTW - in my threesomes no one gets left out ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from makaem (Reviewer)
I missed that it was completed, saw that just a minute ago when I checked something else. Oh, well. Glad you don't leave anyone out.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Oh, no, dear, this story is finished. I will write a story with a HG/SS/RL threesome, though. It might even fit this timeline, but will be in fact a sequel for Cold Moon.BTW - in my threesomes no one gets left out ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from makaem (Reviewer)
I missed that it was completed, saw that just a minute ago when I checked something else. Oh, well. Glad you don't leave anyone out.
Mmm, now that's what I call DESSERT!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
I assume you are not referring to the cherries...Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
I assume you are not referring to the cherries...Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Absolutely delightful and just what I needed before going to bed. Now I'll have sweet dreams about all three of them together *very large grin*. Thanks for the lovely story and the mouth watering...
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Right, it seems I have to hurry up with the sequel for Cold Moon, which will be a threesome RL/HG/SS one-shot. It easily fits this storyline here as well. In case you are interested, I will try to post it before Christmas, which is depending on the queue and the availability of my betas ;-)Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
You're most welcome. I'm not sure I've read cold moon because lately RL has been hard on me but I'll be sure to read it soon so I can enjoy the sequel better. Thanks for letting me know of things to come. I'll have a close watch on TPP.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Right, it seems I have to hurry up with the sequel for Cold Moon, which will be a threesome RL/HG/SS one-shot. It easily fits this storyline here as well. In case you are interested, I will try to post it before Christmas, which is depending on the queue and the availability of my betas ;-)Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
You're most welcome. I'm not sure I've read cold moon because lately RL has been hard on me but I'll be sure to read it soon so I can enjoy the sequel better. Thanks for letting me know of things to come. I'll have a close watch on TPP.
He does indeed deserve more than a little fun. He deserves quite a lot! Simply delicious and very cute :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Completely my opinion, dear ;-) In my world, he gets a lot, too!Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Completely my opinion, dear ;-) In my world, he gets a lot, too!Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Snape knows just how to handle Miss Umbrige, a little bit of finesse, and a lot of downright courage. I take it now the school is undeniabley his, and she has made an Unbreakable Vow to Severus.Wonderful chapter! I'm looking forward to much more!!!Beth
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Not that much more, dear - two more chapters to go before he gets what he wants (or maybe gets what he wants although he doesn't know yet that he wants it ;-))Thanks for reviewing. Next chapter will see a bit of swooning Harry...
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Not that much more, dear - two more chapters to go before he gets what he wants (or maybe gets what he wants although he doesn't know yet that he wants it ;-))Thanks for reviewing. Next chapter will see a bit of swooning Harry...
That was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more. I hope you find your friend.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Next chapter will get polished up tonight and should go into queue in a couple of days. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Next chapter will get polished up tonight and should go into queue in a couple of days. Thanks for reviewing!
great chapter! oooh, so remus is offering severus a "release," is he? what a good ... friend. ;) your scenes with umbridge were brilliant and funny, and i am even enjoying your chapter titles.as for rl, i'm so sorry you still have not heard from your friend. i hope someone who sees your note has news of her. *hugs*
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
I like chapter titles, dear ;-) The next chapter will be up soon, and I think I might keep Lupin for a little while *g*Dreamy has vanished from planet earth, it seems. I'll continue searching!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
I like chapter titles, dear ;-) The next chapter will be up soon, and I think I might keep Lupin for a little while *g*Dreamy has vanished from planet earth, it seems. I'll continue searching!
I'm amazed Sev let Remus touch him after knowing the "cudling like a child" thing. Bt they seem to got along well. I wonder from the beginning <ho be the third part of the threesome. Now I think I've just guessed. That's another great chapter.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Thank you so much! And well, Snape is in pain, Lupin offeres release - what would you do as a sensible Potions master?I think you guessed correctly, btw. Next chapter will go into queue soon.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Thank you so much! And well, Snape is in pain, Lupin offeres release - what would you do as a sensible Potions master?I think you guessed correctly, btw. Next chapter will go into queue soon.
yes! take that, umbitch! love this story! thanks so much for the lovely update.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
The woman's history, dear, although she didn't end up in Azkaban. Thanks for reviewing and the next chapter is already written and (partly) betaed.
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
The woman's history, dear, although she didn't end up in Azkaban. Thanks for reviewing and the next chapter is already written and (partly) betaed.
Great story... I know you like Remus and Severus as friends, you mentioned it in a review response somewhere recently... ;)I hope Dreamy contacts you soon!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
I like them as friends, I love them as lovers... Well, this is a harmless little story. Don't expect more than a kiss ;-)Thanks for reviewing, dear!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
I like them as friends, I love them as lovers... Well, this is a harmless little story. Don't expect more than a kiss ;-)Thanks for reviewing, dear!
I am so sorry to hear about your friend! God bless her, where ever she may be, and God bless you! This is a wonderful story, but that pales in comparison to your friend going missing. Blessed be!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
I sort of feel strange that I have mixed fanfiction with Real Life, but I didn't know what else to do. She's dear to me, and it bothers me profundly that I have no way of just calling and asking what's wrong. The curse of pennams, I guess. Thanks for reviewing. Thanks much more for your good wishes!
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
I sort of feel strange that I have mixed fanfiction with Real Life, but I didn't know what else to do. She's dear to me, and it bothers me profundly that I have no way of just calling and asking what's wrong. The curse of pennams, I guess. Thanks for reviewing. Thanks much more for your good wishes!
Anonymous
Great chapter! The surviving Snape you draw is truly interesting, and the story develops well.
Best wishes for your friend!
Author's Response: Dank Dir! Fürs review und die guten Wünsche. Ich verfluche gerade die Tatsache dass ich nichmal ihren richtigen Namen weiß...
What a pity – I thought they would play some more...
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Who - they? Snape playing with Umbridge or Lupin playing with Snape?
Response from Muggline (Reviewer)
I thought they would "play" with Umbridge some more. (Get your mind out of the gutter, girl ;-) )
Response from chivalric (Author of Scampi And Cherry Cream)
Who - they? Snape playing with Umbridge or Lupin playing with Snape?
Response from Muggline (Reviewer)
I thought they would "play" with Umbridge some more. (Get your mind out of the gutter, girl ;-) )