The Scientist
neelix88 Reviews | 6.94/10 (88 Ratings, 0 Likes, 80 Favorites )
A short account of how Hermione became aware of Severus.
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Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.
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Reviews for The Scientist
Sweet!
This is wonderful.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks for the kind comment!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks for the kind comment!
Nice to see his POV as well.
this is so touching and lovely and i am so enjoying it. thanks so much
I like that you went back and added Severus perspective. Wonderful job. I also liked how you hinted at them being married and have at least two kids. Great story!~Jen
You are always welcome to add more chapters to sweet things like this one...
This is lovely...more please
This is going to make me walk around with a huge smile for the rest of the day :-)Cheers. /M
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thats so nice! I am happy you enjoyed it!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thats so nice! I am happy you enjoyed it!
Do I ever know how one-shots end up morphing into more... It's happened to me on more than one occasion. This was really nice. I enjoyed getting Severus' POV. I also enjoyed how this second chapter was very different from the first, telling the same story yet feeling like it was a completely different one. That doesn't always happen when an author tackles a second chapter with the other person's POV, so I just wanted to congratulate you on a job well-done. 
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thank you so much... for the lovley comment - and for all your help! 
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thank you so much... for the lovley comment - and for all your help!
lovely and touching. of course, one would follow the other for severus. thanks so much
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Mmmm... Severus and Touching do seem to go togather! Thanks for the kind comment!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Mmmm... Severus and Touching do seem to go togather! Thanks for the kind comment!
So wonderful and so very sweet! I love a happy Severus and Hermione especially together. All really good relationships are like this one, I know, I'm in one!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
You know, so am I, and that's what prompts me to be so warm and fuzzy with them. I mean, they are allowed to be happy, right? Thanks for the review!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
You know, so am I, and that's what prompts me to be so warm and fuzzy with them. I mean, they are allowed to be happy, right? Thanks for the review!
Awww...this was a cute chapter. You do a great job with this story. Keep up the good work!~Jen
Yes Severus hurry up!!Love this! x
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
I'm glad you like it. Thank you for the review!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
I'm glad you like it. Thank you for the review!
Na, levitating sex. Isn't that cute?The whole story is cute. You might just have made me re-think my whole SS/HG-attitude.I love to see Severus happy for a change.Ha, I'm going to walk around with a sill smile on my face all day. I swear.Cheers. /M
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Ahh, bless you!! The way I see it, if they're in love, it's gotta be fun, don't you think? Even though I love a grouchy grumpy Severus, I also love him to be happy.... *drifts off thinking of a happy Sevvy...*
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Ahh, bless you!! The way I see it, if they're in love, it's gotta be fun, don't you think? Even though I love a grouchy grumpy Severus, I also love him to be happy.... *drifts off thinking of a happy Sevvy...*
I like seeing it from his POV in this chapter It's hard to do that, without making it boring. you've done a good job, and I love MInerva!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks so much for the postive feedback - I really loved writing this story actually, although it was hard with the tense I used.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks so much for the postive feedback - I really loved writing this story actually, although it was hard with the tense I used.
Your story has charmed me, and I have fallen in love with your Hermione and Severus. Yes, they have a few dust ups every so often, but their joy in each other has such a loving and fun and passionate nature about it, that I find myself moving right along with them... a harmless voyeur, if you will.‘I love you,’ he had murmured.‘When we are married we can expand our quarters, and your clothing can be stored more appropriately.Their eyes had met, and not for the first time that Christmas, the sound of laughter had bounced around the walls of the dungeons.This is so beautifully written. Thank you.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thank you! I have re-read this chapter a couple of times and found myself tearing up, then I remember that I wrote it! lol...I love the joy they find in each other - I think all good relationships have that, if they're lucky!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thank you! I have re-read this chapter a couple of times and found myself tearing up, then I remember that I wrote it! lol...I love the joy they find in each other - I think all good relationships have that, if they're lucky!
It's nice that everything's not always perfect for them. He finally got up the nerve to share his feelings. Yay. Now he needs to officially propose.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Ha... don't hold you're breath re: the proposal thing - that was it! You know what he's like - he's stated his intentions and I think if hermione waits for the 'down on one knee' moment, she'd still be waiting!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Ha... don't hold you're breath re: the proposal thing - that was it! You know what he's like - he's stated his intentions and I think if hermione waits for the 'down on one knee' moment, she'd still be waiting!
What a brilliant way for him to propose – without even realizing it!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks! Yes, I think for hermione thats as good as it's getting in this story. And she's happy with that too!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks! Yes, I think for hermione thats as good as it's getting in this story. And she's happy with that too!
Well, that's one way of proposing!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
lol... exactly! No romance or candles or flowers... just a grouchy Severus telling her how it is. Imagine the fall out if she refused?
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
lol... exactly! No romance or candles or flowers... just a grouchy Severus telling her how it is. Imagine the fall out if she refused?
So Joyful!!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it!
What a wonderful story!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thank you so much!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thank you so much!
That was a great chapter, i can't wait to read more!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks for reviewing - two chapters left!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks for reviewing - two chapters left!
I love this story. I love rereading it all everytime you update! :)
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks! I re-read it too and found myself smiling - then I remembered it was written by me! lol....
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks! I re-read it too and found myself smiling - then I remembered it was written by me! lol....
love that image of minerva righting his hair! lovely update. thanks so much
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
hahaha... me too! I love showing Severus's human side. Thanks for commenting.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
hahaha... me too! I love showing Severus's human side. Thanks for commenting.
Bedroom hair! That's genius!I love this story. You have me giggle quite a few times.Hope you'll continue it.Cheers. /M
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
I'm so glad people are finding this amusing - I think falling in love should be fun, especially for Severus and Hermione! There are three more chapters, I hope you enjoy them.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
I'm so glad people are finding this amusing - I think falling in love should be fun, especially for Severus and Hermione! There are three more chapters, I hope you enjoy them.