The Scientist
Chapter 2 of 6
neelixA short account of how Hermione became aware of Severus.
ReviewedWhen he looked back, years later, Severus was hard pressed to pinpoint the change in his relationship with Hermione. He did remember that when she had started as his apprentice, it had been against his better judgement. Minerva had put him over a barrel because he had told her the month before that his workload was too great. Rather than reducing his working hours, she had thrust Hermione in his direction, and he was forever indebted to her.
After the war and the subsequent celebrations, most of which he managed to ignore, Severus Snape had returned to Hogwarts with the intention of making just enough money to retire on comfortably. He had had his eye on a Spanish villa, or perhaps a cottage on one of the smaller Greek islands. He just wanted somewhere to hide out indefinitely, and to live out his days in peaceful anonymity.
Minerva had badgered him about it no end. She pleaded with him to live his life and not let it peter out into a lonely, isolated existence. She had been right, much to his chagrin, and she would often remind him of how she saved his life while bouncing his youngest on her knee. Severus would curse his bad luck that he was surrounded by women who loved to prove him wrong.
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Hermione's scent lingered long after she had left the room, and it was this that first alerted Severus to her charms. A mix of vanilla and roses, sometimes with a hint of musk, it had taken Severus some time to realise where the aroma was coming from. Then one day he had walked past her to reach the shelf of ingredients behind the workbench, and the had scent assailed his nostrils, teasing him and tempting him to inhale deeply. His mouth had started to water slightly, and his eyes had fallen on her in amazement when he realised that such a wonderful fragrance was coming from his apprentice.
It was also at that moment that he had noticed her hair was no longer bushy, but rather silky and wavy. The colour had surprised him, too. In his mind he had remembered her as being quite mousey, not chestnut with copper highlights and golden shimmers as the light hit it. It was quite a surprise.
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After their wedding, Hermione teased him mercilessly about the summer in the Potions store, when he had almost seduced her by stripping off in the summer heat. Severus humoured her, but his memory was somewhat different. He recalled that she had practically fainted in the heat until she had finally requested to remove the ridiculously thick robes. Why she hadn't just removed them he couldn't imagine, but as she shrugged them from her shoulders, her blouse had gaped open slightly at the front, and he had been treated to a view of her creamy breasts, encased in simple white lace. She had breathed out a relieved gasp, and he had caught a hint of peppermint mixed with her usual scent. The combination of aroma and the view of her body had forced him to retreat up the ladder to hide his slightly growing erection, and he had chastened himself for entertaining impure thoughts of her. This was Hermione Granger, ex-student and now his Apprentice. Anything else would have been highly inappropriate.
The heat in the potions store had affected him eventually, and he had followed her lead, removing his heavy jacket and hanging it beside her robes on the hook on the back of the door. Her scent had permeated the fabric of the robes, and he had pretended to take his time hanging his jacket, just so he had more opportunity to inhale deeply. He had closed his eyes and allowed himself to indulge for a moment, then brought himself back to the present. He had turned to ask her about the origins of the fragrance, but she was staring at him, with her breath coming in short bursts, causing her breasts to rise and fall. His erection had started to grow again as he stared at her, and he had to climb up the ladder without asking his question so that she wouldn't notice his arousal.
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She kept staring at him. He didn't know how long she had been doing it, but on more than one occasion he had glanced up at her to find her staring straight at him, sometimes with her mouth slightly open and her cheeks a little flushed. And so he had decided to test her by looking at her more often. She really should have been concentrating on her work, but every single time he looked up, her eyes had been on him. He had challenged her on one occasion, asking if everything was well. She had stammered a little and stumbled over her words, shocked that he had spoken to her. Afterwards, she had averted her eyes, and he had noticed that she stopped staring as often. He had been shocked to realise that he was disappointed.
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They had shared a dance at the Yule Ball, a tradition that Minerva had insisted on after the war. He could still feel her in his arms when he closed his eyes, and he knew he was smitten.
Then she had left him at Christmas to visit her parents. That was what it had felt like, that she had left him. He knew she would return, but as she bade him goodbye, he had continued to stir his potion, raising his hand in a non-committal wave, so that she wouldn't see the emotion etched on his face or recognise the gut-wrenching pain that was gripping his stomach.
The door had closed with a soft click, and he had dropped the ladle, turned out the fire beneath his cauldron and walked to the Floo. Minerva had listened with patient attentiveness to his mumbled musings about his Apprentice. To his shock and delight, she hadn't beaten him around the head with her broom, but had encouraged him to pursue matters. Whatever they may be.
Hermione had bought him a Christmas gift of a book and a small marble pestle and mortar, which had been delivered by Shinty, his house-elf, first thing on Christmas morning. Neatly packaged and wrapped with green and silver paper, a hand-written gift tag showed a smiling Santa Claus. It had been the only indication that Christmas had arrived in the dungeons. He had stared at it for some time, running his fingers lightly across her writing. He had liked the way she had written his name, her softly rounded letter 'S', and the small kiss she had placed after her own name. He had taken the tag from the parcel carefully and tucked it into the pocket of his jacket, and then painstakingly unfastened the sticky tape.
She had thought about him, he had said over and over to himself. She had thought about him.
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He couldn't contain his happiness to see her back in the lab. She had smiled at him, and he had smiled back at her, making stilted conversation just so he could hear her speak. She hadn't fully responded to him, and had seemed distracted. But she was staring at him again, and Minerva had assured him that this was a good thing.
She looked lovely, he had mused as he stared at her. He had been so tempted to walk over and take her in his arms, to inhale the scent he had longed for and missed so much. He had been at a loss.
'I am going for tea, Hermione. I shall return shortly,' he had murmured, needing to get away from her before he lost his head.
He had paced his sitting room for a while before finally Flooing Minerva for advice. The direct approach had been suggested, yet Severus hadn't felt so scared in his life. What if Minerva was wrong?
He had waited almost all afternoon, gathering his courage and watching her. The tension in the lab had been palpable, and as his eyes met Hermione's for the umpteenth time, he had known. He had seen it in her face. Her eyes had been wide and her pupils large, her breathing had been laboured, and she had run her tongue prettily across her bottom lip. He knew, and so he had asked her. He had shocked himself, and startled her, because she had dropped her ladle and stared at him open-mouthed.
But thank the gods; she had wanted him to kiss her. He remembered it, even now. Her lips had been soft and warm under his, and her mouth had opened gently to let his tongue probe her sweet wetness. She had tasted delicious, the kiss had been heady, and he had held her gently, burying his fingers into her curls. His nostrils had been assaulted by her enticing perfume, and he had realised it must come from something she was using to tame her chestnut locks.
And as they had finally come up for air, she had smiled at him dazzlingly, and he had felt the world shift beneath his feet.
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A/N: This was meant to be a one-shot but it's become a tad more than that. Reviews are always welcome. thank you!
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88 Reviews | 6.94/10 Average
I'd say that NSS's attempts to make you a better writer have succeeded, you're one of those authors i always stop to read, no matter what the description of the story is, because I've enjoyed everything you've written. This was no different, and I loved the wedding scene at the end. So sweet.
Baaha ha ha, he caught her out! Kiss please!!
So beautiful!
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! I adored seeing the way Severus was with Ceris on her wedding day, ‘Just remember what I said, Ceris. You will always have a home here, whatever happens.’ My father told me the same thing on my wedding day.I'm so glad that he could identify with the look on Albus' face when he saw how he looked at Ceris as her father walked her down the aisle. He knew by the tears in Albus' eyes that his precious daughter would be in good hands.
At the wedding reception, a slightly drunk Severus was clearly still enamored of his bride. I'll bet some of the guests suspected what was on their minds... all that hip grinding would not go unnoticed. And if they hadn't noticed the growing ardor of Severus and his wife, they certainly did when the Snapes shared a searing kiss. All the catcalling and yahooing didn't faze them... they had other things on their minds.I chuckled when Carly winked at her mother when told that she and her father were leaving... and that she and her siblings did not need to hurry back.Thank you for such a happy and heartwarming story. I must have needed some "happy thoughts" this afternoon because reading your tale has really put a smile on my face.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Bless you. You write very nice reviews and make me smile a lot!
Real Life had got in the way of my reading this and then I did the unthinkable and forgot about it! What a fool I am. When I stumbled upon this again today, the first thing I did was kick myself in the arse, and then I started over at chapter one!This is such a lovely chapter. It has made me smile and thank God that I found the story again. Your Severus is the most wonderful husband and father anyone could have!His reactions to his adored wife as she carried their children were perfect, and I liked bath time and the way they would watch for the baby to move a foot or an arm.
His insistence that he would be in the room when his wife gave birth to his children just melted my heart, and I laughed out loud when Hermione winked at the mediwitch when Severus wasn't looking. Seeing how the new father responded when he held his son for the first time warmed my heart.All four of their children were completely loved, and they knew beyond a shadow of a doubt that they were the center of their parent's world. The new home that Severus and Hermione found on the outskirts of Hogsmeade became a place filled with joy. It was a very special moment for Severus when he realized that his wife had unconsciously used Legilimency to let him know that she was "glad I found you, too." It doesn't get any better than this!Beth
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
There is something amazing that happens inside a reader when they find a story that suits them. I am very glad that for you, one of them was written by me!I loved writing The Scientist - It was inspired by the Coldplay song, and intended as a one-shot, but it just grew. I esescially love writing Severus with children, too. Thank you so much for the loevly comments x
I've only just come across this and really loved it - it's adorable! How lovely to find something that's truly 'romantic' and gives Severus not just a little bit of love but a whole lifetime of the happiness he deserves!Well done for writing and sharing :-)
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thank you so much. I am very glad you enjoyed it!
Perfect ending. Lovely, I enjoyed this story a lot!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Sorry I am only just responding! Bad neelix... But anyway, thank you for reveiwing, I am very happy you liked it!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Sorry I am only just responding! Bad neelix... But anyway, thank you for reveiwing, I am very happy you liked it!
I liked this. Write more. *purrrrrr*~Lotm
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
I have been remiss and am so late replying to your lovely comments...forgive me. RL gets in the way sometimes. And thank you... x
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
No worries, you'll get around to it when you get around to it. *purrrrpurrrrrpurrrr, attempts to trip you into your keyboard, purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*~Lotm
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
lol... mad woman! I am posting 'darkness within' presently, although the queue is taking some time.... ! and I do have a new story brewing... but it's a little complex, so it will be a while before it see's the light of day. Thanks for the encouragement!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
I have been remiss and am so late replying to your lovely comments...forgive me. RL gets in the way sometimes. And thank you... x
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
No worries, you'll get around to it when you get around to it. *purrrrpurrrrrpurrrr, attempts to trip you into your keyboard, purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*~Lotm
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
lol... mad woman! I am posting 'darkness within' presently, although the queue is taking some time.... ! and I do have a new story brewing... but it's a little complex, so it will be a while before it see's the light of day. Thanks for the encouragement!
what a lovely ending! thank you so much for sharing you time, talent, and vision.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Sorry for the late response! Thank you for your kind words.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Sorry for the late response! Thank you for your kind words.
This was a really nice story. I especially loved this chapter; I think it was my favorite. Wonderful job and keep up the good work! ~Jen
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thank you so much - apologies for the late response (I have a load of reveiws that I didn't see!)
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thank you so much - apologies for the late response (I have a load of reveiws that I didn't see!)
My grandparents had that kind of relationship, even at the end of their lives. I think we all envied it, in spite of the smirks. Thank you for this lovely story and the nice memories of my own that it produced.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks for the review... I love to see people who are passionate about each other, and I think my SS/HG always are!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks for the review... I love to see people who are passionate about each other, and I think my SS/HG always are!
Steamy!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
ha... thanks!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
ha... thanks!
I L.O.V.E. this story! A wonderful break from the heart-wrenching, trying-to-read-through-tears stuff. You got the characters spot on... well spot on according to what's in my head at least. And their kid marrying Harry's kid... in any other story it would have been terribly cheesy, but here, it's perfect!:D Keep up the excellent work
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks! It was just a little thing buzzing around my head and intended as a one shot... trouble is it ran away with me and even I wanted to know...what happens next? lol... thanks for reviewing.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thanks! It was just a little thing buzzing around my head and intended as a one shot... trouble is it ran away with me and even I wanted to know...what happens next? lol... thanks for reviewing.
Aww, that was a sweet ending all the way around.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
ahh thankyou! I am very glad you enjoyed it!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
ahh thankyou! I am very glad you enjoyed it!
Aww i love drunk Severus lol
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
mmmm...me too! makes me want to take him home and get him into bed. Just so he's safe, of course!!!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
mmmm...me too! makes me want to take him home and get him into bed. Just so he's safe, of course!!!
*sniffles* That was so beautiful! From Severus almost crying in front of his daughter (makes me think of my wedding and my own sniffling father) to the perfect end, in which you can just feel how much they love each other. This was a wonderful story, from start to finish. Do you have any plans for writing any more sshg?
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
ahhh thanks! I loved writing this you know. I do love a bit of warm and fuzzy. I have written quite a few ss/hg stuff and most of it is posted on aff.net because I dont have an active beta. However, I do intend to post more here. Thanks for asking :)
Response from kizzy7 (Reviewer)
Is aff.net fanfiction.net? Alas, I have yet to venture into ff.net. I mostly just read here and ash and owl. Maybe I'll go look, however...
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
ahhh thanks! I loved writing this you know. I do love a bit of warm and fuzzy. I have written quite a few ss/hg stuff and most of it is posted on aff.net because I dont have an active beta. However, I do intend to post more here. Thanks for asking :)
Response from kizzy7 (Reviewer)
Is aff.net fanfiction.net? Alas, I have yet to venture into ff.net. I mostly just read here and ash and owl. Maybe I'll go look, however...
This was very, very sweet. The perfect ending to this adorable little story.Thanks for sharing. /M
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thankyou for your kind review! I have been overwhelmed by the positive responses!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Thankyou for your kind review! I have been overwhelmed by the positive responses!
Great chapter. I thought it was really cute. Keep up the good work!~Jen
This story is a nice sweet balance to the other dark, melodramatic stories about our favorite pair (don't get me wrong I like melodrama too!) It is just so Disney sweet I want to sing ...and they lived happily ever after!! Yay.I love, love, love it!!!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Oh good grief... you'll be getting them singing that annoying song from High School Musical next!! I know it's fluffy but Disney?? arrrghhhhh..... *ponders whether to include a kidnap scene in next chapter*
Response from geomancer (Reviewer)
Sorry, it was wrong of me to compare to Disney, there was plenty of lovely sex that would never be found in that kind of story.Hey, though, wouldn't it fun if there was a High School Musical kind of challenge? You know, Magical European Boarding School Musical! Could be a fun thing!!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Don't apologise! Your review made me laugh out loud... but that challenge.... Harry and Ginny dueting beneath Hogwarts Tower... Severus and Hermione avoiding each other until they realise they're in love... It might have legs! lol
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Oh good grief... you'll be getting them singing that annoying song from High School Musical next!! I know it's fluffy but Disney?? arrrghhhhh..... *ponders whether to include a kidnap scene in next chapter*
Response from geomancer (Reviewer)
Sorry, it was wrong of me to compare to Disney, there was plenty of lovely sex that would never be found in that kind of story.Hey, though, wouldn't it fun if there was a High School Musical kind of challenge? You know, Magical European Boarding School Musical! Could be a fun thing!!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Don't apologise! Your review made me laugh out loud... but that challenge.... Harry and Ginny dueting beneath Hogwarts Tower... Severus and Hermione avoiding each other until they realise they're in love... It might have legs! lol
I like the pregnancy bit where she would go into his classroom for a cuddle. Can just see the glare!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Ha! I liked that bit too - I had to draw on my own experience of pregnancy, where sometimes the only thing that works is reassurance from your man!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Ha! I liked that bit too - I had to draw on my own experience of pregnancy, where sometimes the only thing that works is reassurance from your man!
so warm and touching. i'm curious where you're going from here, tho. thanks so much!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Aha! Next chapter, we are suddenly thrust into the present day. Thank goodness too, because writing in this tense has really made my brain ache! Thanks for the nice comment!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Aha! Next chapter, we are suddenly thrust into the present day. Thank goodness too, because writing in this tense has really made my brain ache! Thanks for the nice comment!
awww so sweet! I want to be hermione! lol x
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Mmmm yes... me too!!! I sometimes think Hermione is my Mary Sue!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Mmmm yes... me too!!! I sometimes think Hermione is my Mary Sue!
Oh, I simply love this story! You have such a wonderful, beautifully elegant way with words, neelix. I absolutely adore happy, fluffy stories, that just focus on severus and hermione, happy and together without some gruesome, unfortunate twist! And I always feel that there are not enough of these types of stories around. Happy, happy fluff!!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
oh wow! What a nice review! Thank you so much. I agree with you, Hermione and Severus deserve to be happy... why should some grumpy old hard done by ex-Death Eater come along and spoil it? Glad you're enjoying this - the last chapter will be up very soon!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
oh wow! What a nice review! Thank you so much. I agree with you, Hermione and Severus deserve to be happy... why should some grumpy old hard done by ex-Death Eater come along and spoil it? Glad you're enjoying this - the last chapter will be up very soon!
Oh, that was so sweet! I love happy endings and they are truly enjoying life.
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Ahh thanks for reviewing! One more chapter, hope the ending doesn't disappoint!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
Ahh thanks for reviewing! One more chapter, hope the ending doesn't disappoint!
This is the Fluffiest, sweetest, wonderfulist (is that a word) that I have ever read....thank you!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
You know, I don't think wonderfulist is a word, but in this case it should be! Thanks for the kind comments - one more chapter to go, hope you enjoy it!
Response from neelix (Author of The Scientist)
You know, I don't think wonderfulist is a word, but in this case it should be! Thanks for the kind comments - one more chapter to go, hope you enjoy it!