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That Quidditch Afterglow
dmf19847 Reviews | 8.57/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
Filius and Pomona are late for the Saturday Quidditch match. Again.
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My computer, and my seven-year old son sit down here in sunny Florida with me. When they or any of the three cats gives me permission to do so, I write fan-fic for things like Harry Potter, CSI and Dalziel&Pascoe! My main 'ships are ADMM and JimBrass/Sofia (from CSI-LV). Andy Dalziel doesn't really strike me as too shippy...*snerk*. So there you go.
**A woman uses her intelligence to find reasons to justify her intuition**GKChesterton
Reviews for That Quidditch Afterglow
Not a couple I typically consider, but they are delightful here, with a hint of naughty. I love it!
Oh, my, that Quidditch afterglow, indeed! A wickedly hot and spicy story, but sweet, too! I liked the juxtaposition of the two couples.Nice tangible details for the various sensations that Pomona experiences. (Funny how I can write a lemon and I can read a lemon, but I get all blushy and tongue-tied when reviewing a lemon!!!)I'd been meaning to read this for a while, and now I'm sad that it's over. I enjoyed it! (And I was glad I had the ceiling fan on! LOL!)I liked it a lot!CFP! (Yep, turn-about-is-fair-play! )
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
CFR and right back atcha, Sis!Please don't be sad. I have a few more FFPS lemons outlined for various stories here and there. I find their physical differences lots of fun to think about and write about.Plus they are so over-looked and under-estimated as characters, aren't they? Must fix that!Thanks very much for your encouraging words. My Muse is getting all happy-footed right now and may let me write more before the Fall term rapidly approacheth...
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Definitely over-looked and under-estimated! I can easily imagine how their differences in height could be quite . . . stimulating for Pomona! And for him!!!
*Sigh* You know, it is wonderful reading this again. I love it, and you certainly know how to woo a witch. (er, or Filius does...) Yes, I would have to admit, an afterglow would definitely add some spark. I am thinking of making an improvment to my shower, thanks to you, lol.Lovely, and steamy, shower scene, my dear.Bravo!Go 'Noles!!~~Stef
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
Steamy is good for the skin. And yeah, that Filius has QUITE the imagination *sigh* I hope the Noles at least try to do well this year...Thanks very much for the review!
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
Steamy is good for the skin. And yeah, that Filius has QUITE the imagination *sigh* I hope the Noles at least try to do well this year...Thanks very much for the review!
LOL, obviously Quidditch is responsible for a lot of lovin'!
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
*snerk* Afternoon delight, indeed. There are quite a few parallels to College football season, not least of which are horny students and faculty!Thanks very much for reviewing. As long as the hurricane behaves, my plot bunnies should come through safe and sound.
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
*snerk* Afternoon delight, indeed. There are quite a few parallels to College football season, not least of which are horny students and faculty!Thanks very much for reviewing. As long as the hurricane behaves, my plot bunnies should come through safe and sound.
Di, you know how much I enjoy this story and I am excited for the opportunity to leave you another review!I read Arabella Bloodgood's review and really agreed with it. I like the fact that in your story they are who they are, height and weight included, and they use that to their advantage. :) Well done and well written! Thanks for the shout out! :)happy writing,Sprinks
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
Hi Sprinks! In honor of the new College football season, I just had to dust this story off. Fresh starts for all of our teams.Glad you still enjoy the story...FFPS plot bunnies may continue to leap at me as the weeks go by. Thanks very much for the review at its "new" location.
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
Hi Sprinks! In honor of the new College football season, I just had to dust this story off. Fresh starts for all of our teams.Glad you still enjoy the story...FFPS plot bunnies may continue to leap at me as the weeks go by. Thanks very much for the review at its "new" location.
Finally a story with a heavier woman in it. Thank you from all of us big girls. This is magnificent. I don't think I have ever read this pairing before. Very well done.
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
As a not-so-petite chica myself, I am very glad to know you enjoyed the story! I'm not sure why, but these FFPS plot-bunnies are serious when they do hit me about the head and shoulders. There are more fics lurking around, not easy to find, mind you, but I hope you will enjoy them too.Thank you very much for reviewing this one; as RL permits, Filius and Pomona are just too cute to leave all by their lonesome.
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
As a not-so-petite chica myself, I am very glad to know you enjoyed the story! I'm not sure why, but these FFPS plot-bunnies are serious when they do hit me about the head and shoulders. There are more fics lurking around, not easy to find, mind you, but I hope you will enjoy them too.Thank you very much for reviewing this one; as RL permits, Filius and Pomona are just too cute to leave all by their lonesome.
I admit, I never thought of this pairing. However, he really does have a height advantage in this situation, doesn't he? The way you wrote this scene made reading this pairing pleasurable, whereas if someone would have asked me before what I would have thought of Pomona/Filius, I probably would have said I wouldn't prefer it. Great job!
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
This time last year, I would have said the very same thing. With their physical differences, and their lack of "screen time", it took a while for this cute couple to grow on me. It was both actors, in other roles, that clinched it (e.g., "Willow" from eons ago).Thanks so very much for your kind words of encouragement. I hope additional stories will also be fun to read...these FFPS plot-bunnies are rather, erm, insistent when they do finally visit!
Response from dmf1984 (Author of That Quidditch Afterglow)
This time last year, I would have said the very same thing. With their physical differences, and their lack of "screen time", it took a while for this cute couple to grow on me. It was both actors, in other roles, that clinched it (e.g., "Willow" from eons ago).Thanks so very much for your kind words of encouragement. I hope additional stories will also be fun to read...these FFPS plot-bunnies are rather, erm, insistent when they do finally visit!