I see that notsosaintly did indeed help with some translating.  :-)  I think this is a really fun chapter.

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Wow!  You've improved it even more since I saw it last.  Very nice translation indeed!

Hmmm...I wonder what will happen next.  Lily is setting herself up to get in a lot of trouble.  And where was James anyway?I can see that translating this involves dealing with a lot more colloquialisms than "Being the Godfather" does.  For the most part, I think you're doing a good job with that.

A very good beginning to the story, although we have that hint of doom already at the end of the first chapter.  I like the character of Jackie.  It will be fun to see the next chapter!

It's good to see you back!  This was a fun chapter because of the progression of James/Lily and Sirius/Jackie.  This author does a good job of capturing the nuances of their thoughts and moods.  And you do a good job of translating them!

I just checked out this story for the first time and I'm enjoying it very much. Especially the potshots at Sirius' overblown ego. I think James gets it, but Sirius still has a ways to go, I think.

Oooh, Lily, watch out!  This was a fun chapter.  The only thing I didn't like was calling the dignified and revered Prof. McGonagall "Gonny."  LOL!

Lily is becomeing very brave to take on the Maurauders.  I wonder how long she will be able to continue palying her pranks before she is found out.Jackin is a good character, and I hope she gathers the courage to soon to be able to talk to Sirius.Beth

A good chapter, setting the scene for plenty of interactions between Lily and James.  It will be interesting to see how everything plays out.The end of the chapter is pretty ominous, making me wonder how Voldermort will be involve and which Death Eaters will be doing his bidding.I'm on to the next chapter.Beth