Second Thoughts
chivalric29 Reviews | 29 Ratings, 0 Likes, 35 Favorites )
One night of passion is a nice thing to have, but what happens the next morning, when each one is ignoring the other? This is a sequel to "Detention".
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Second Thoughts
This is begging for a sequel! Hope it happens. :D Loved both instalments of this gorgeous little story, please write more!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Thanks for reading and reviewing and liking, of course. Once I have time (not anyimte soon) I might think about a sequel, too.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Thanks for reading and reviewing and liking, of course. Once I have time (not anyimte soon) I might think about a sequel, too.
Lovely! Am glad they worked out their misunderstanding. Thank you!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
That's it? Wow. There seems to be room for a third part, though. (Will probably eat my words, because I've learned to fear your "thirds".)Thank you!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Usually, my cruel stories are one-shots, dear. I rarely write them anyway; Journey's End was a rare exception. So if I ever write a third part to that one, it won't be nasty.Thanks for reviewing!
yay! i love it when they get together in the end. thanks so much
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
My pleasure. I am working on the sequel, and there they will wake up together ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
My pleasure. I am working on the sequel, and there they will wake up together ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
This was just perfect! The sense of being hurt, for both of them, was quite palpable. I'm glad they managed to solve things, in spite of the misunderstandings.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I decided to write a sequel, it will be called "Rumours" and should be up lets say before October. Thanks for reviewing this one anyway - I wasn't sure if it works out, with the hurt and musunderstandings after the more sweet first part.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I decided to write a sequel, it will be called "Rumours" and should be up lets say before October. Thanks for reviewing this one anyway - I wasn't sure if it works out, with the hurt and musunderstandings after the more sweet first part.
I read Detention last night and this one tonight, i simply love them both. It was complete brilliance. Well done.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
*g* I'm working hard on the sequel. Hope you will like that one, too.Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
*g* I'm working hard on the sequel. Hope you will like that one, too.Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Gah! Gryffindors never notice the movements and actions of Slytherins until it is nearly too late. Hermione almost ruined it.
I'd love to hear Ron's reaction to finding out Hermione wasn't lying to him about being interested in Snape. LOL
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I'm very affraid to tell you that you will be going to beta the sequel ;-) And hey, it is usually Snape who ruins things, so I considered it fair that for once, she messes things up.Thanks for revieiwing, dear!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I'm very affraid to tell you that you will be going to beta the sequel ;-) And hey, it is usually Snape who ruins things, so I considered it fair that for once, she messes things up.Thanks for revieiwing, dear!
What a story - claps and cheers - I loved it. It was so passionate and so emotional - great job. I loved the way you wrote Severus - great character developement.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Glad to hear that - I'm always relieved when someone tells me he is recogniseable as the Snape we know.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Glad to hear that - I'm always relieved when someone tells me he is recogniseable as the Snape we know.Thanks for reviewing!
Detention was wonderful. Second Thoughts is perfect!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Thank you very much - I wasn't sure if I should post the sequel, but it seems I made the right choice.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Thank you very much - I wasn't sure if I should post the sequel, but it seems I made the right choice.
I love this sequal to Detention! You have written them perfectly. I would also love to see this story expanded. In his position as Headmaster, there are many opportunities for problems to creep into their relationshop: (1) Professor McGonnagol maybe as Severus' friend, and then her beginning to suspect that they had started their relationship before Hermione had graduated. (2) The whisperings of other staff members to rumors. (3) Hermione's friends shock at learning that she had fallen in love with Snape, the Evil Potions Master.(4) The two of them having to learn how to communicate with each other without misunderstandings, learning how to apologize -- especially with all of the tension in the air what with everyone wondering just when their relationship had started.(5) Severus meeting Hermione's family.(6) And, of course, lots of good loving!Second Thoughts is a thoroughly delightful story.Beth
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Hi, Beth, and thanks for your input. I will give the sequel some serious thinking soon, and I will definitely credit you if I use some of your ideas. Again - thanks!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Hi, Beth, and thanks for your input. I will give the sequel some serious thinking soon, and I will definitely credit you if I use some of your ideas. Again - thanks!
That was quite angsty and hot! Well done :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I like them act human, and I especially think that Hermione is not an angel, enduring everything. She can be mean, but she loves him. Solution: she gets him ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I like them act human, and I especially think that Hermione is not an angel, enduring everything. She can be mean, but she loves him. Solution: she gets him ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Great work, of course coming from you!!! Looking forward to the next one!!Gewitter-Grüße, gab
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Now as you thr third or fourth who requires a sequel, I will seriously think about it!Thanks for reviewing! Grüße aus dem brütendheißen Texas!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Now as you thr third or fourth who requires a sequel, I will seriously think about it!Thanks for reviewing! Grüße aus dem brütendheißen Texas!
Is there going to be some third thoughts because this is too good to end now.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I'm affraid I will have to write a sequel. Don't know about what and when and how, but I will seriously think about it. Which means I will start writing soon ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I'm affraid I will have to write a sequel. Don't know about what and when and how, but I will seriously think about it. Which means I will start writing soon ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
What a perfect happy ending!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Thank you!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Thank you!
Very nice, I loved how Hermione mishandled the situation and how she had to recover it. She appeared more real for it especially since she doesn't have all that much experiance.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
And hearts of certain Potions masters can break so very easily. Luckily she is not only a very friendly person, but bright as well. And brave. A scary Snape isn't easy to handle ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
And hearts of certain Potions masters can break so very easily. Luckily she is not only a very friendly person, but bright as well. And brave. A scary Snape isn't easy to handle ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Love the story! 
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Thanks!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Thanks!
I loved it! I "liked" that for once it was Hermione who made mess of things, usually Severus gets to play that part. Luckely she showed her self not only as the smartest student in her year, but also with the necessary Gryffindor courrage to admit her mistake and fixing it! Very well done as usual:-))
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I found I like to twist what seems common knowledge. As soon as something appears obvious, I write it the other way round. And thank you so much for liking this special twist. After all, she is still a very young young woman, and anyone that young tends to mess things up out of carelessness and because they simply don't know how easily hearts can break.Not talking out of personal experience here, of course ;-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I found I like to twist what seems common knowledge. As soon as something appears obvious, I write it the other way round. And thank you so much for liking this special twist. After all, she is still a very young young woman, and anyone that young tends to mess things up out of carelessness and because they simply don't know how easily hearts can break.Not talking out of personal experience here, of course ;-)
Nice little interlude - chivalric at her best!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Danke!Deine Geschichte ist unterwegs zu meinen betas ;-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Danke!Deine Geschichte ist unterwegs zu meinen betas ;-)
Really liked this one even though she was his student - I hope you do decide to continue on because the fall out would be 'interesting'. Teacher is bad enough, but Headmaster? As flammable as Fawkes!Cheers,Rita.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Now then, please do explain yourself! You want me to write a sequel where they fall out with each other, meaning where they split up? Just a clarification, as I am not a native speaker...Give me an idea for a sequel, I beg you!
Response from reets67 (Reviewer)
Sorry I was not clear. By fall out I mean the reactions of those around them to their relationship which I think will not be pleasant. Considering the ages and that he is in a position of power (over her as a student) plus his Death Eater past will make for some very dissapproving comments.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Now then, please do explain yourself! You want me to write a sequel where they fall out with each other, meaning where they split up? Just a clarification, as I am not a native speaker...Give me an idea for a sequel, I beg you!
Response from reets67 (Reviewer)
Sorry I was not clear. By fall out I mean the reactions of those around them to their relationship which I think will not be pleasant. Considering the ages and that he is in a position of power (over her as a student) plus his Death Eater past will make for some very dissapproving comments.
*purrrrrrrrrr*~Lotm
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
:-)I think I have to write a cat-story for you... Many thanks for reviewing!
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
Ooh! Squee! *kneadkneadknead (clawlessly, of course...)*~Lotm
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
:-)I think I have to write a cat-story for you... Many thanks for reviewing!
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
Ooh! Squee! *kneadkneadknead (clawlessly, of course...)*~Lotm
nice little happy ending to a one night stand
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Happens rarely, I do admit, but this time, it seemed to fit.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Happens rarely, I do admit, but this time, it seemed to fit.Thanks for reviewing!
Lovely! And now that Hermione is finished with school?
*sits back to wait for the next installment*
So, what happens next?
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I know, I know - your are not the only one who asked for a sequel. Promise, I will think about it.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
I know, I know - your are not the only one who asked for a sequel. Promise, I will think about it.Thanks for reviewing!
That was really hot. I'm glad they got over being idiots.
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Sometimes, miracles happen :-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
Sometimes, miracles happen :-)
Very nice! I liked the intense discussion about Lily and what they both wanted.Livvy
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
As Lily was in the first part, and as he confessed he had made love to her, I couldn't let her out in the sequel. Thanks for liking this bit and leaving a review!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
As Lily was in the first part, and as he confessed he had made love to her, I couldn't let her out in the sequel. Thanks for liking this bit and leaving a review!
She nearly put her foot in it, but a lovely happy ending after all !
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
:-) I like happy endings. And falling in love with Snape certainly is not an easy thing to find out...Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Second Thoughts)
:-) I like happy endings. And falling in love with Snape certainly is not an easy thing to find out...Thanks for reviewing!