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Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

karelia

477 Reviews   |   477 Ratings, 0 Likes, 114 Favorites )

Romance Action/Adventure post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 52,624 Words 20 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape Harry Potter Hugo Weasley Rose Weasley

Hermione accepts a career offer she can't resist only to find out she's been set up. Two unlikely men offer help.

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Chapters (20)

Chapter 1: One

Chapter 2: Two

Chapter 3: Three

Chapter 4: Four

Chapter 5: Five

Chapter 6: Six

Chapter 7: Seven

Chapter 8: Eight

Chapter 9: Nine

Chapter 10: Ten

Chapter 11: Eleven

Chapter 12: Twelve

Chapter 13: Thirteen

Chapter 14: Fourteen

Chapter 15: Fifteen

Chapter 16: Sixteen

Chapter 17: Seventeen

Chapter 18: Eighteen

Chapter 19: Nineteen

Chapter 20: Twenty


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karelia

Member Since 2005  |  83 Stories  |  Favorited by 232  |  666 Reviews Written  |  2,343 Review Responses

Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.

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Reviews for Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

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10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

I love this! Yes, I can see that this kind of magick requires a lot of practice *snigger*
And now I want a holiday, on a beach, with Lucius *wistful sigh*
Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*smiles goofily* You're so kind to me! Oh, yes, this kind of magick requires much practice. We wouldn't want the results to fall into the wrong hands, now, would we?I, too, want a holiday with Lucius. Beach or whirlpool, on the surface of the planet or inside, who cares, as long as it's with Lucius and his luscious hair. *grin*Thank you so much for your lovely review! It inspired me to write plenty today. The housework can wait.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*smiles goofily* You're so kind to me! Oh, yes, this kind of magick requires much practice. We wouldn't want the results to fall into the wrong hands, now, would we?I, too, want a holiday with Lucius. Beach or whirlpool, on the surface of the planet or inside, who cares, as long as it's with Lucius and his luscious hair. *grin*Thank you so much for your lovely review! It inspired me to write plenty today. The housework can wait.

10/10

snitchette

I too want to know about this perfect world. That sounds a bit irreal and I would say a little boring. A place where everyone agrees to everyone? No bickering, no revenge, no schadenfreude? I hope this sex magick is worth it.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I suspect it depends how you look upon such a perfect world. It does not mean there is no disagreement, it simply means there are no power struggles. Bickering? Oh, I'm sure neither Lucius nor Hermione could live entirely without bickering, LOL.Thank you for your review and the stars.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I suspect it depends how you look upon such a perfect world. It does not mean there is no disagreement, it simply means there are no power struggles. Bickering? Oh, I'm sure neither Lucius nor Hermione could live entirely without bickering, LOL.Thank you for your review and the stars.

9/10

HannahSmith

Ah, sex magick, magical sex... whatever it takes to keep Lucius where he is right now: horny and interested, at the office or in the bath, or on the beach under a nearly full moon, the sea splashing softly on the shore; what more can a girl want. And anticipating some Severus doesn't hurt either. Love this!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! It is reviews like yours that make me write faster!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! It is reviews like yours that make me write faster!

0/10

signofthetimes

I like this, with the conspiracy it's got an X-files vibe to it as well, I'm interested to see how this turns out. 

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Teehee, an X-files vibe, eh? I rather like that idea! Thank you for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Teehee, an X-files vibe, eh? I rather like that idea! Thank you for reviewing!

0/10

elsolel

Neat, neat, neat, neat!  I'm glad that Hermione is about to meet Lola.  I wish I could stay in a wizarding hotel.  I guess I'm lazy!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins widely* I'm so glad you think it's neat! Yes, that wizarding hotel is rather awesome, isn't it? Thanks very much for your lovely review.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins widely* I'm so glad you think it's neat! Yes, that wizarding hotel is rather awesome, isn't it? Thanks very much for your lovely review.

10/10

Valady

This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I'm very happy you like it. Thank you for telling me so! And thank you for the stars, too!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I'm very happy you like it. Thank you for telling me so! And thank you for the stars, too!

10/10

blue artemis

That was cool.  I would love to practice with Lucius. 

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I think you'd have to get into the rather growing queue with regard to practising with Lucius. ;)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I think you'd have to get into the rather growing queue with regard to practising with Lucius. ;)

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Sex on the Beach. A very good drink. And a very good fantasy. I shall have to try it. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yeah, baby. Definitely worth a try. And thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yeah, baby. Definitely worth a try. And thank you!

0/10

sunny33

that sex magick is powerful stuff indeed

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, it is. Amazing what can be done with it.Thanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, it is. Amazing what can be done with it.Thanks!

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Interesting chapter. I look forwrad to more.  This is one of my favorite stories in the challenge.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! Your kind words made my day, and I surely love those shiny stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! Your kind words made my day, and I surely love those shiny stars!

9/10

Shadow

Oooh yes. Sex Magick. Sounds like it is going to get very interesting from here!Nice to see Lucius had a few doubts of his own.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! Yes, Lucius is, after all, human, so he does have doubts occasionally.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! Yes, Lucius is, after all, human, so he does have doubts occasionally.

10/10

LoveFenrir

lol, very cute =)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you!

10/10

irishredlass

Hmm sex magic  sounds like fun.  Can I join in?  I am sorry the name of Severus' friend just continues to remind me of an old Barry Manilow song.."Her name was Lola, she was a show girl with faded feather in her hair and a dress cut down to there..."  Please tell me there are no feathers. Well done.  Irish

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dunno about that; it's worth a try. ;)Oh, no, not Barry Manilow! *shudders violently* The inspiration came from a Sarah Voughan and Gotan Project song, Whatever Lola Wants. Definitely better than the Copacabana, and certainly no feathers!!!Thanks for reviewing! *pats the shiny stars*

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dunno about that; it's worth a try. ;)Oh, no, not Barry Manilow! *shudders violently* The inspiration came from a Sarah Voughan and Gotan Project song, Whatever Lola Wants. Definitely better than the Copacabana, and certainly no feathers!!!Thanks for reviewing! *pats the shiny stars*

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh, yes! That could make any girl love hot tubs! The undregound world is weird - so lets see what you do with that idea.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yeah, people tend to be scared of the unknown...

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yeah, people tend to be scared of the unknown...

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Looking forward to seeing how the three tie together and what they will do. Also enjoying the "other land."

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

We'll be getting to that shortly. :)Thanks for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

We'll be getting to that shortly. :)Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

pookah

The neatest thing about fan-fiction is the stuff each writer adds to canon.  Your interesting land (literally) down-under is a great addition to this tale.  I love the politics and humor, too. 

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I'm very happy you like it.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I'm very happy you like it.

0/10

elsolel

Very neat.  I like the idea of layers of uncorrupted people in the world.  Lola sounds very pretty. 

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

As do I. It makes a refreshing change, I think, to imagine a world without corruption.Thank you for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

As do I. It makes a refreshing change, I think, to imagine a world without corruption.Thank you for reviewing!

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Lovely chapter, I like the world beneath the earth very much, and your description of Lucius's hair made me want to run my fingers through it immediately. But, just when we get to the interesting bit, the chapter ends *pouts* ;)
Looking very much forward to more.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! You always leave such kind reviews, I really appreciate that!!!Next chapter won't be long; it's written and will be typed up tonight, and then off to the beta. Who is very fast. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! You always leave such kind reviews, I really appreciate that!!!Next chapter won't be long; it's written and will be typed up tonight, and then off to the beta. Who is very fast. :)

10/10

Gardengirl

Curiouser and curiouser! Glowing people who live underground - how perfectly fascinating.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! :)

0/10

klschmidt

And I thought we already had some juicy parts, but it looks like more are on the way.  Great job!  :-D

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, definitely more on the way. :)Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, definitely more on the way. :)Thank you!

0/10

klschmidt

So Severus is alive and well, and living inside the earth at the south pole.  Hmmm.  Very interesting.  :-D

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

He is indeed. ;)Thanks for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

He is indeed. ;)Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

braye27

The hallmark of a good story is that the end of each chapter leaves the reader a little satisfied, but with new questions and a desire to know more. Consider your story "hallmarked."  Beth

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Wow. Now, this is one of the most awesome reviews I've ever received! Thank you very much!!!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Wow. Now, this is one of the most awesome reviews I've ever received! Thank you very much!!!

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Very nice chapter - I can't wait for more.  You have me sucked in!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! And here I was, thinking that someone with the name of Hermione Weasley would absolutely not be into Lucius, let alone threesomes.... *pets the shinies*

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! And here I was, thinking that someone with the name of Hermione Weasley would absolutely not be into Lucius, let alone threesomes.... *pets the shinies*

8/10

la Chatelaine

I just got comfy and it's over?More, more, more!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Lucius is very demanding when it comes to writing him. So... each chapter has to be crafted carefully and according to his standards. However, there have been and will continue to be regular updates, so fret not.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Lucius is very demanding when it comes to writing him. So... each chapter has to be crafted carefully and according to his standards. However, there have been and will continue to be regular updates, so fret not.

0/10

sunny33

I'll bet his hair is like silk.. I want some!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

'Tis indeed! Feels lovely between my Hermione's hands!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

'Tis indeed! Feels lovely between my Hermione's hands!

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