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Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

karelia

477 Reviews   |   477 Ratings, 0 Likes, 114 Favorites )

Romance Action/Adventure post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 52,624 Words 20 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape Harry Potter Hugo Weasley Rose Weasley

Hermione accepts a career offer she can't resist only to find out she's been set up. Two unlikely men offer help.

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Chapters (20)

Chapter 1: One

Chapter 2: Two

Chapter 3: Three

Chapter 4: Four

Chapter 5: Five

Chapter 6: Six

Chapter 7: Seven

Chapter 8: Eight

Chapter 9: Nine

Chapter 10: Ten

Chapter 11: Eleven

Chapter 12: Twelve

Chapter 13: Thirteen

Chapter 14: Fourteen

Chapter 15: Fifteen

Chapter 16: Sixteen

Chapter 17: Seventeen

Chapter 18: Eighteen

Chapter 19: Nineteen

Chapter 20: Twenty


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karelia

Member Since 2005  |  83 Stories  |  Favorited by 232  |  666 Reviews Written  |  2,343 Review Responses

Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.

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Reviews for Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

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10/10

keske

hmmmmm ~digs around in some of her characters and pulls up her poor little werewolf and shakes him awake~ ok bud, we got two missin kids, a jackass ex and several other important things...you get to find the kids and then kill, maim or otherwise render useless the ex! also, you can watch more CSI when you get back ~nods and scoots him on away then sits back and whistles innocently~ whut? o.o; ah didn do NUTHIN! lol

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins* no werewolves here.Thanks for reviewing and the stars. Lucius is ecstatic; he loves them.

Response from keske (Reviewer)

aww no werewolves? but they're so useful! like...k-9 cops! ^.^ all rolled into one!~gives Lucius (and Sev) a pack  of gold and silver star stickers!~ ^.^ooo guess whut! i turned 21 yesterday yay! lol

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Aw! Happy Belated Birthday!!!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins* no werewolves here.Thanks for reviewing and the stars. Lucius is ecstatic; he loves them.

Response from keske (Reviewer)

aww no werewolves? but they're so useful! like...k-9 cops! ^.^ all rolled into one!~gives Lucius (and Sev) a pack  of gold and silver star stickers!~ ^.^ooo guess whut! i turned 21 yesterday yay! lol

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Aw! Happy Belated Birthday!!!

10/10

irishredlass

Well duh of course she is going to join them, but I bet she has an entourage...even if no one else sees them. Irish

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yes.Thank you for reviewing. And the stars. Lucius so loves them.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yes.Thank you for reviewing. And the stars. Lucius so loves them.

10/10

sunny33

Lucius, I think you should broach the subject of a threesome with Hermione. You never know, she may be more interested than she you think.I wonder what the magick did?

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Sunny33,Worry not. We'll get there. Eventually. But first, there is offspring to be retrieved, verbal sparring with Edwina to be had, and plans to be made for the immediate future.The magick, ah, finally, someone picked up on it. I hope the writer will be able to convey the intricate, subtle shifting of energies to a more balanced form on this planet.Thank you for your review.Yours, Lucius Malfoy

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Sunny33,Worry not. We'll get there. Eventually. But first, there is offspring to be retrieved, verbal sparring with Edwina to be had, and plans to be made for the immediate future.The magick, ah, finally, someone picked up on it. I hope the writer will be able to convey the intricate, subtle shifting of energies to a more balanced form on this planet.Thank you for your review.Yours, Lucius Malfoy

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

Ooh... the plot thickens!Excellent chapter - perfect balance of personal, relationship stuff with the mystery of the evil technology that's threatening to overtake their world.  I really like that!!And a hell of a cliffhanger!!!!!!!  Well done!!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Miss F,I am, indeed, mightily pleased that you have finally decided to read this account of Hermione, Severus's, and my life together.I furthermore thank you for recommending our little tale on your livejournal. You will probably find that we here are rather fond of cliffhangers. I'm so relieved you like them.Now, kindly finish reading and get on with your exchange duty!Yours,Lucius Malfoy

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Miss F,I am, indeed, mightily pleased that you have finally decided to read this account of Hermione, Severus's, and my life together.I furthermore thank you for recommending our little tale on your livejournal. You will probably find that we here are rather fond of cliffhangers. I'm so relieved you like them.Now, kindly finish reading and get on with your exchange duty!Yours,Lucius Malfoy

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

"Good riddance"... LOVE it!

That was quite steamy and lovely  I'm glad she has an ally in Lucius, as I don't trust that bitch Edwina at all!

(I love how I'm glad she's rid of Ron, but I still despise the woman that took him.  Quite hypocritical of me; I suppose I should be thanking her, but I still think she's a bitch!)

Another excellent chapter.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins**remains silent**loves you*

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins**remains silent**loves you*

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

Ooh - I like this Hermione!  Tough and confident... excellent.  And having lived in PHX for 10 years, your descriptions of the Valley of the Sun were spot-on and made me so glad I'm no longer there, LOL!  Except the Superstition Mountains were gorgeous...Excellent chapter!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dearr Ms FunnyName,I am ever so relieved you like my Hermione. Of course she is tough. She spent the better part of twenty years in law enforcement. Wouldn't you be tough by then, too?I, too, am rather fond, to this day, of the Superstition Mountains, and we visit occasionally from where we are now, for there is an entrance right there, did you know?I thank you for your kind words and will pass them on to the writer as soon as she's done with the next chapter.Yours,Lucius Malfoy

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dearr Ms FunnyName,I am ever so relieved you like my Hermione. Of course she is tough. She spent the better part of twenty years in law enforcement. Wouldn't you be tough by then, too?I, too, am rather fond, to this day, of the Superstition Mountains, and we visit occasionally from where we are now, for there is an entrance right there, did you know?I thank you for your kind words and will pass them on to the writer as soon as she's done with the next chapter.Yours,Lucius Malfoy

9/10

Maddie

Lucius's relationship with Hermione puzzles me. Here he says and he seems giddy with love for Hermione. So what is his relationship with Severus? The feelings between the two men were implied in the last chapter (or was it the one before) to possibly be deeper than anything Lucius could have with Hermione.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Ms

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

,Men are, indeed, fickle creatures, are they not? At least that's what Hermione likes to imply.My relationship with Severus, not that it's any of your business, is intense. As is my relationship with Hermione. Not that that is any of your business either. It takes work and time to get both of them to the point where they are willing to enter a relationship between us all, wouldn't you think?The entire "story" or maybe I should say account, for that is what it is, really, is about human relationships in very tough times. Getting into each other's sack so to speak is not something done and dusted over the course of a day. Really, it isn't. Emotions, that fickle feeling of mental pain, are involved. Greatly so. Consequently, such are depicted as perceived by whoever's point of view is portrayed.I thank you for your review and hope you'll continue to read to find conclusion.Yours,Lucius Malfoy

Response from Maddie (Reviewer)

Dear Mr. Malfoy: Thank you for confirming my suspicions.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Ms

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

,Men are, indeed, fickle creatures, are they not? At least that's what Hermione likes to imply.My relationship with Severus, not that it's any of your business, is intense. As is my relationship with Hermione. Not that that is any of your business either. It takes work and time to get both of them to the point where they are willing to enter a relationship between us all, wouldn't you think?The entire "story" or maybe I should say account, for that is what it is, really, is about human relationships in very tough times. Getting into each other's sack so to speak is not something done and dusted over the course of a day. Really, it isn't. Emotions, that fickle feeling of mental pain, are involved. Greatly so. Consequently, such are depicted as perceived by whoever's point of view is portrayed.I thank you for your review and hope you'll continue to read to find conclusion.Yours,Lucius Malfoy

Response from Maddie (Reviewer)

Dear Mr. Malfoy: Thank you for confirming my suspicions.

0/10

tonksinger

OMG intenseness!!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

It is? OMG!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

It is? OMG!

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, those poor children. 

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Indeed! Thankfully, Severus is there... *grins*Thank you for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Indeed! Thankfully, Severus is there... *grins*Thank you for reviewing!

0/10

mock_turtle

oh shivers.  this is great, more please!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! More coming soon, is mostly written.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! More coming soon, is mostly written.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I love espionage.  Oh and the banter between them is profound.  I can't wait to see how Lucius got his information.  I know his a Slytherin but it could be useful in the real life you never know. lol

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins widely*Next chapter is up, and the following is more than half written.Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins widely*Next chapter is up, and the following is more than half written.Thank you!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Have I told you I love your work lately well I still do even if you did leave me hanging with the evil chiffie.  I forgive because I know I have another chapter to read.  I really do love your work though.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Ms Bloodgood,I'm responding to reviews tonight because the writer is busy crafting the next chapter.I am ever so pleased you love the work, and although I'll admit that a few chapters end with a cliffhanger, you'll never have to wait for long before it is resolved in the next chapter, for the writer updates rather frequently.Thank you for your kind words.Yours,Lucius Malfoy

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Ms Bloodgood,I'm responding to reviews tonight because the writer is busy crafting the next chapter.I am ever so pleased you love the work, and although I'll admit that a few chapters end with a cliffhanger, you'll never have to wait for long before it is resolved in the next chapter, for the writer updates rather frequently.Thank you for your kind words.Yours,Lucius Malfoy

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

sex magik of any kind sounds like fun  is there any three-way magikal sex in there or is that too powerful   i know it would blow my mind  you go girl

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yes, it will appear. Eventually. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yes, it will appear. Eventually. :)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

You have yourself a winner here.  Sex on the beach is a delicious drink.  You have my vote.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*Duly noted*Thank you for your consistently kind words!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*Duly noted*Thank you for your consistently kind words!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

hot tubs lucius and severus hmm i think i have had this dream many time before  now its in type your my idol my hero

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I think you're not alone here *grins*Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I think you're not alone here *grins*Thank you!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Duh, because Lucius was hiding Severus and hopefully healing him.  You are a genius because story rocks.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Why, I thank you for you kind words!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Why, I thank you for you kind words!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

~fans self~  what is this story about again  something to do with Lucius and sex was there anything else lol

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

There is plot there somehwere *tries to find it*:) Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

There is plot there somehwere *tries to find it*:) Thank you!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I can't wait for Severus to enter the picture and see how he feels about everything.  This government is so screwed up.  I wonder how you are going to have these three take it down.  Intriguing story.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Not that you don't know already, but he'll turn up soon. :)Thanks bunches for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Not that you don't know already, but he'll turn up soon. :)Thanks bunches for reviewing!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

wow i can just imagine all of this amazing  if only it was possible

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, it's perfectly possible. We do create our own reality, after all. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, it's perfectly possible. We do create our own reality, after all. :)

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

And the plot thickens. Looking forward to more. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins* You know more than anyone else, you know?*pats the shinies* You spoil me. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins* You know more than anyone else, you know?*pats the shinies* You spoil me. :)

10/10

snitchette

I love spying fiction (you know like James Bond) and this is probably the best I've read so far. You're doing a very great job.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, do I know James Bond... or Ian Fleming...I'm honoured you like it so much, thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, do I know James Bond... or Ian Fleming...I'm honoured you like it so much, thank you!

10/10

braye27

I know Edwina Wilson is a conniving scumbag.  But what I'm wondering now is whether Ron is a conniving scumbag as well, or is he just stupid.I'm glad Hermione and Severus have the makings of a good friendship -- or more.  It should be interesting to see how the relationship goes among the three of them.Hermione has begun to realize how close to home the conspiracy has come, and I'm betting she is going to make it a point to make our dear Edwina pay, and pay, and pay before all is said and done.Great chapter!Beth

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Ms Braye,Being a Malfoy, I have no doubt you can imagine my response to your pondering Ronald Weasley. The writer, unfortunately, is insisting I point out that Ron is not a conniving scumbag, as you put it so well. There. I've done my duty.I, too, am glad Hermione and Severus get on well. I assure you there will be a relationship between the three of us. After all, I had to restrain the writer as well as Hermione physically when my witch set sight on Severus and me on the bed.Poor Hermione will realise the extent of the conspiracy even more. She can thank Merlin and the stars that I and Severus are there for her. But I mustn't give away more.I thank you for your correspondence and appreciate the shiny stars especially.Yours,Lucius Malfoy

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

My dear Lucius, may I call you Lucius?You are welcome for the shiny stars especially.  You earned them.It is as I thought, Ron is stupid.I, too, am glad that, thank Merlin and the stars, Hermione has both of you.  As the conspiracy becomes more invasive, I know she will realize her good fortune at having come to such a fortuitous relationship with two of the most powerful Wizards on earth.I remain your loyal servant,Ms Bray (no "e")

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Ms Braye,Being a Malfoy, I have no doubt you can imagine my response to your pondering Ronald Weasley. The writer, unfortunately, is insisting I point out that Ron is not a conniving scumbag, as you put it so well. There. I've done my duty.I, too, am glad Hermione and Severus get on well. I assure you there will be a relationship between the three of us. After all, I had to restrain the writer as well as Hermione physically when my witch set sight on Severus and me on the bed.Poor Hermione will realise the extent of the conspiracy even more. She can thank Merlin and the stars that I and Severus are there for her. But I mustn't give away more.I thank you for your correspondence and appreciate the shiny stars especially.Yours,Lucius Malfoy

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

My dear Lucius, may I call you Lucius?You are welcome for the shiny stars especially.  You earned them.It is as I thought, Ron is stupid.I, too, am glad that, thank Merlin and the stars, Hermione has both of you.  As the conspiracy becomes more invasive, I know she will realize her good fortune at having come to such a fortuitous relationship with two of the most powerful Wizards on earth.I remain your loyal servant,Ms Bray (no "e")

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Hermione's and Severus's parting was very sweet. I like the way they're slowly becoming aware of each other
I have to admit that I love the conspiracy plot of this almost as much as the developing threesome, so it was very intriguing to see more of that as well!Great chapter, I look foraward to see what happens next :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Dreamy,I normally detest having the word sweet associated with my persona in any way. However, as you have been very kind and thoughtful in all your reviews, I find it within my heart that to this day is rumoured to not exist to forgive you.I furthermore must thank you for pointing out your love of the conspiracy plot in such a public setting. It is a relief to still find readers with braincells aplenty in this day and age. Although, thankfully (and with the utmost hope), this will change soon.I will tell the writer to hurry up. I heard her mumble excuses such as "housework." Simply preposterous.Yours,Severus Snape 

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Dear Dreamy,I normally detest having the word sweet associated with my persona in any way. However, as you have been very kind and thoughtful in all your reviews, I find it within my heart that to this day is rumoured to not exist to forgive you.I furthermore must thank you for pointing out your love of the conspiracy plot in such a public setting. It is a relief to still find readers with braincells aplenty in this day and age. Although, thankfully (and with the utmost hope), this will change soon.I will tell the writer to hurry up. I heard her mumble excuses such as "housework." Simply preposterous.Yours,Severus Snape 

10/10

irishredlass

I am glad Severus was finally able to tell Hermione that he had held her in high regard.  The emotional departure between the two was very satisfying.  I like that Severus is still snarky, but you have found his heart.  And the intrigue continues.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Not entire ic, but Lucius insisted.Thanks for the lovely review! *fondly pats the shinies*

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Not entire ic, but Lucius insisted.Thanks for the lovely review! *fondly pats the shinies*

10/10

keske

stupid edwina! ~mumbles something about nightmares and tom cruise....~ oh I know!...oops now i forgot it ~snickers and slides edwina's purse behind hermione's desk for Lucius to find?~great chapter

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I wish you'd given me that idea before I wrote that scene, that was an excellent idea!Thank you for reviewing and the stars!

Response from keske (Reviewer)

what? the hiding of edwina's purse or giving her nightmares involving tom cruise and possibly brangelina? ~shudders at the very thought...then decides to give ron nightmares involving ben affleck and matt damon~

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I wish you'd given me that idea before I wrote that scene, that was an excellent idea!Thank you for reviewing and the stars!

Response from keske (Reviewer)

what? the hiding of edwina's purse or giving her nightmares involving tom cruise and possibly brangelina? ~shudders at the very thought...then decides to give ron nightmares involving ben affleck and matt damon~

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