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Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

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18: Eighteen

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20: Twenty

Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

karelia

477 Reviews   |   477 Ratings, 0 Likes, 114 Favorites )

Romance Action/Adventure post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 52,624 Words 20 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape Harry Potter Hugo Weasley Rose Weasley

Hermione accepts a career offer she can't resist only to find out she's been set up. Two unlikely men offer help.

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Chapters (20)

Chapter 1: One

Chapter 2: Two

Chapter 3: Three

Chapter 4: Four

Chapter 5: Five

Chapter 6: Six

Chapter 7: Seven

Chapter 8: Eight

Chapter 9: Nine

Chapter 10: Ten

Chapter 11: Eleven

Chapter 12: Twelve

Chapter 13: Thirteen

Chapter 14: Fourteen

Chapter 15: Fifteen

Chapter 16: Sixteen

Chapter 17: Seventeen

Chapter 18: Eighteen

Chapter 19: Nineteen

Chapter 20: Twenty


About karelia

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karelia

Member Since 2005  |  83 Stories  |  Favorited by 232  |  666 Reviews Written  |  2,343 Review Responses

Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.

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Reviews for Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

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0/10

FruGal

I'd love to see a short side-story about Edwina being questioned by Harry while her "retard shag buddy" was in the room. How did she ensnare Ron?

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I doubt it'll happen, but I'll keep it in mind.Thanks for reviewing.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I doubt it'll happen, but I'll keep it in mind.Thanks for reviewing.

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elsolel

Quite a beautiful ending to the story.  Thank you so much for sharing it!  (I voted for it!)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you for reading, for reviewing, and for voting for it!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you for reading, for reviewing, and for voting for it!

10/10

gabi1791

Loved the tale!!! Thank you so much!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

So glad you liked it! Thank you for your lovely reviews and the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

So glad you liked it! Thank you for your lovely reviews and the stars!

10/10

luvsev

I have loved this tale since you began it. You have done so well, dear!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you very much! :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you very much! :)

10/10

snitchette

I was thinking exactly the same thing as Levanah a couple of paragraphs earlier. *grin* This was a fantastic story all along that I will read again over the time. I'd like to add that IMHO you deserved to win this challenge.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you very much for all your kind reviews! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you very much for all your kind reviews! I'm glad you liked it. :)

10/10

keske

yaaaaay!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

LOL! Thank you for sticking with the story until the end, and thanks for all your stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

LOL! Thank you for sticking with the story until the end, and thanks for all your stars!

10/10

Muggline

I love happy endings – and this one in particular, as it includes not only one or two couples but heavenly bliss for the whole wide world... *Sigh* Reminds me of that old Supertramp song: "Dreamer... I know you are a dreamer..." Thank you for sharing your dreams with us!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

"What a day, a year, a life it is."Indeed!Thank you for your kind words.As to heavenly bliss for the whole wide world, we could do it, if only enough of us envisage it. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

"What a day, a year, a life it is."Indeed!Thank you for your kind words.As to heavenly bliss for the whole wide world, we could do it, if only enough of us envisage it. :)

10/10

Gardengirl

I have been enjoying this all along, and am especially pleased to find it it's YOUR fic, Lady! Great fic, original, creative, fun to read. Well done!!!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Aw, thanks so much! Your kind words made my day!It's been quite a journey, and I can only hope that any future endeavours will live up to the expectations... :)Lucius sends his thanks for the stars. He absolutely loves them.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Aw, thanks so much! Your kind words made my day!It's been quite a journey, and I can only hope that any future endeavours will live up to the expectations... :)Lucius sends his thanks for the stars. He absolutely loves them.

10/10

kittylefish

a lovely ending to this tale. i appreciate so much the new world you created here; it puts a happy grin on my face to spend a little time there. :D

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins widely*Thanks, love.Wanna start planning a trip to Antarctica with me? ;)

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

you know, antarctica is one of very few places i've never really thought of going - so bloody cold.  *starts thinking about it*  :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins widely*Thanks, love.Wanna start planning a trip to Antarctica with me? ;)

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

you know, antarctica is one of very few places i've never really thought of going - so bloody cold.  *starts thinking about it*  :)

10/10

pyjamapants

Bravo! Bravo!I shall miss this Trio. Reading their adventures has been quite enjoyable indeed. Well done!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you so much!Yes, I will miss them, too. This was by far the most involved fic I've ever written, and somehow, I have an idea that there'll be a few one-shots in this universe... Must.Get.Lucius.Out.Of.My.Head. Not. LOL

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you so much!Yes, I will miss them, too. This was by far the most involved fic I've ever written, and somehow, I have an idea that there'll be a few one-shots in this universe... Must.Get.Lucius.Out.Of.My.Head. Not. LOL

10/10

sunny33

Nice wrap up, Possum!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Ta, luv!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Ta, luv!

10/10

irishredlass

Woo Hoo loved it and loved the name Levanah. So few people bring Hebrew to life.

I have loved watching this tale evolve.  You have surpassed your own brilliance with this one!

Now can you please go back to WM?

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

So glad you liked it! Yes, I've returned to WM. :)Thanks so much for your enthusiasm and your kind words about each chapter! *hugs*

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

So glad you liked it! Yes, I've returned to WM. :)Thanks so much for your enthusiasm and your kind words about each chapter! *hugs*

10/10

lyn_f

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and congrats on third place!  This was also a nice way to end it as well.  Thanks for sharing this gift of a story with us!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked the ending, too!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked the ending, too!

10/10

Unknown RoSe

I have truly enjoyed this story.  If only you could see my happy dance each time a new chapter was posted.  Thank You

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! Your kind words made my day!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! Your kind words made my day!

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

Whew!  You had me worried there, and all for naught!  Ron is not with Draco.  :)  And isn't Lucius the dish!  Good for Hermione - she certainly traded up.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

My apologies for not replying earlier! I totally missed this review somehow!Thank you! No, Ron isn't with Draco *gigglesnort* :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

My apologies for not replying earlier! I totally missed this review somehow!Thank you! No, Ron isn't with Draco *gigglesnort* :)

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rhiannonofthemoon

Errr... Ron isn't seeing Draco is he?  Noooo!  Draco would have much better taste than that!Great start - you have me hooked.  I'm a sucker for the Malfoy men.  :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

LOLOLOL Noooooooo! Indeed, Draco does have better taste than that. *snickers*I'm so glad you like it so far. Plenty of Malfoy action is the one thing I can promise you throughout the fic. :)Thank you for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

LOLOLOL Noooooooo! Indeed, Draco does have better taste than that. *snickers*I'm so glad you like it so far. Plenty of Malfoy action is the one thing I can promise you throughout the fic. :)Thank you for reviewing!

10/10

phoenix

I love how folks in the wrong dimension are out of sorts and can't see folks. :D That's a nice touch. I look forward to the epilogue. There really has been a lot to consider, hasn't there?

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you for all your reviews and kind words. Yes, it's been an intense journey writing it, and I'm in two minds of it being over. LOL. I guess I got very used to having Lucius whisper into my head all the time.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you for all your reviews and kind words. Yes, it's been an intense journey writing it, and I'm in two minds of it being over. LOL. I guess I got very used to having Lucius whisper into my head all the time.

0/10

phoenix

Nice to see that the revolution was non-violent. Of course, that should be expected given the reason for the revolution. And it will be interesting to see what the magick really does.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yes. I'm not fond of violence at all.Thanks for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yes. I'm not fond of violence at all.Thanks for reviewing!

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phoenix

I can completely imagined being completely overwhelmed. thank goodness kids are so pliable. :) Let's see how quickly Hermione adapts. Though I can imagine returning to the surface would be very difficult at this point.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yeah, it is easier for the kids I think!Thanks for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yeah, it is easier for the kids I think!Thanks for reviewing!

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phoenix

Yay!!! Wilson's getting some of her own. And I wonder how things with go south with her husband without her there to manipulate things? Harry's reaction to Lucius's statement about Draco was priceless. LOL I loved that. And as much as I think Ron is a git, I can feel sypathetic enough to let him find out he was being used.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I do firmly believe that service-to-self people always go belly-up. At least eventually.Thanks for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I do firmly believe that service-to-self people always go belly-up. At least eventually.Thanks for reviewing!

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phoenix

This is all really fascinating and engrossing. You are doing a wonderful job highlighting the wonderful world beneath the earth and one can only home that some aspects of it could leak into the surface world. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Wow, thank you!Yes, wouldn't it be wonderful if humankind on the surface strived for a better world?

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Wow, thank you!Yes, wouldn't it be wonderful if humankind on the surface strived for a better world?

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phoenix

Yay!!! They are safe, though there are still problems abounding in the world to be solved.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

:) Thanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

:) Thanks!

0/10

phoenix

Nicely done. Poor Hermione really has been through the wringer, hasn't she? She's handling it better than a lot of folks who just would have curled up and freaked out. Hopefully they can make it safely inside.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yes, I could imagine that many a woman would have totally panicked.Thanks for the review!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yes, I could imagine that many a woman would have totally panicked.Thanks for the review!

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phoenix

Thank goodness the children are fine, that Severus could get to them first. I hope that Lucius and Severus aren't walking into a trap and that recruiting Harry to help will bring them closer to their goal.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Hee. At this point in the story, you probably had no idea just how Harry was going to help. LOL.Thanks for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Hee. At this point in the story, you probably had no idea just how Harry was going to help. LOL.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

phoenix

I'm glad Hermione took Lucius's protection well. Though oh, the poor children. At least Ron had the sense to owl her. I hope that they can be rescued safely and that Hermione is not walking into a trap, though something tells me that at least Lucius if not Severus will be looking out for her.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

You surely have it figured out right!Thanks for the review!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

You surely have it figured out right!Thanks for the review!

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