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Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

karelia

477 Reviews   |   477 Ratings, 0 Likes, 114 Favorites )

Romance Action/Adventure post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 52,624 Words 20 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape Harry Potter Hugo Weasley Rose Weasley

Hermione accepts a career offer she can't resist only to find out she's been set up. Two unlikely men offer help.

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Chapters (20)

Chapter 1: One

Chapter 2: Two

Chapter 3: Three

Chapter 4: Four

Chapter 5: Five

Chapter 6: Six

Chapter 7: Seven

Chapter 8: Eight

Chapter 9: Nine

Chapter 10: Ten

Chapter 11: Eleven

Chapter 12: Twelve

Chapter 13: Thirteen

Chapter 14: Fourteen

Chapter 15: Fifteen

Chapter 16: Sixteen

Chapter 17: Seventeen

Chapter 18: Eighteen

Chapter 19: Nineteen

Chapter 20: Twenty


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karelia

Member Since 2005  |  83 Stories  |  Favorited by 232  |  666 Reviews Written  |  2,343 Review Responses

Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.

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Reviews for Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

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0/10

phoenix

I bet she never thought that getting involved with Lucius would be so complicated. LOL

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Well, her relationship with him isn't complicated. LOL

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Well, her relationship with him isn't complicated. LOL

0/10

phoenix

Poor Hermione, though she is handling it very well. :) I love the magic flaring, nice touch.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you!

0/10

phoenix

Glad to see they were successful with their magick. :) And that is interesting with the day off and I do have to wonder if that's what it was. I hope so. And no on to see what Hermione thinks of Earth's other residents. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yeah, magick rocks *grins*Thanks for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yeah, magick rocks *grins*Thanks for reviewing!

9/10

phoenix

A very nice welcome home for both of them. I can't wait to hear more about the plan and how things are going to play out.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

:) Thanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

:) Thanks!

9/10

phoenix

Oooh, this is getting deeper and deeper. I like brining in the whole idea of a few controlling the world and that there are folks living inside the earth. I would be as curious as Lucius is. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

One doesn't have to look far if one looks with eyes wide open. ;)Thanks for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

One doesn't have to look far if one looks with eyes wide open. ;)Thanks for reviewing!

9/10

phoenix

Dang, poor wizarding Britain. I wonder if they'll let Hermione back into the country and if she will be able to make good on her promise to the kids. I hope that Hermione takes her 'civil disobedience' idea to heart. They were good at that at Hogwarts. And yay for Harry realizing that Ron is an arse and not blindly standing up for him.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

They've all grown up, I guess, like normal people tend to do. And Harry might have been hot-headed in his youth, but he surely grew into a responsible man. At least that's my take. :)Thanks for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

They've all grown up, I guess, like normal people tend to do. And Harry might have been hot-headed in his youth, but he surely grew into a responsible man. At least that's my take. :)Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

phoenix

Ooooh, love it. the conspiracy is growing deeper. I wonder if her clarity is coming from her using the conditioner? LOL I really love how this is unfolding with all the layers. Poor Ron is probably being played the utter fool.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

She does have brainpower. So glad you like it, and thanks for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

She does have brainpower. So glad you like it, and thanks for reviewing!

9/10

phoenix

Interesting twist on the Lucius/Severus relationship. And how shocked is Hermione going to be now. And to learn that Severus is a computer hacker at that. LOL You are really weaving the romance and the plot very well.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you for your kind words!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you for your kind words!

0/10

phoenix

Ah, Hermione, she what you could have had if you had gone for the blonde? And oh, yes, there was plot in there with the lemon. LOL It's interesting how everyone seems to be missing out on the implications of this new technology. And interesting that Lucius is leading the fight against it. Wonder what the Wilsons have to do with this? Can't wait to read more.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yes, looks like she made a mistake mating with Ron *snorts*Thanks for the review!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yes, looks like she made a mistake mating with Ron *snorts*Thanks for the review!

0/10

phoenix

Nice set up. I have a guess at who Ron has been seeing. I wonder what Lucius is up to. There must be something for him to gain.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I guess your ponderings are resolved by now. LOL

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I guess your ponderings are resolved by now. LOL

10/10

luvsev

I eagerly await the epilogue. This has been a great story and I have truly enjoyed reading it!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

The epilogue will be up soon after voting finishes. It is written. :)Thank you for reading my tale, thank you for reviewing so enthusiastically and thoughtfully, and thank you for all the stars you bestowed on it! It was wonderful waking up to so many reviews!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

The epilogue will be up soon after voting finishes. It is written. :)Thank you for reading my tale, thank you for reviewing so enthusiastically and thoughtfully, and thank you for all the stars you bestowed on it! It was wonderful waking up to so many reviews!

10/10

luvsev

*mini dance* You are awesome!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*joins in the dance*Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*joins in the dance*Thank you!

10/10

luvsev

Ooh, the bed dipped. Could our other guest be the delicious Sev?

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins* Couldn't it just...Thanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins* Couldn't it just...Thanks!

10/10

luvsev

I love how up-front Lucius is. He just puts everything out there, doesn't he? :) I also am glad that Wilson was caught... yipee!!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Evil never wins in the long run. :)Thanks for reviewing and the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Evil never wins in the long run. :)Thanks for reviewing and the stars!

10/10

luvsev

That is great that dear Draco has a crush on the Potters--I never saw this twist coming, but I appreciate it. You certainly keep me on my toes!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Teehee! So glad you like it!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Teehee! So glad you like it!

10/10

luvsev

This story gets more interesting with each chapter, dear. Keep up the excellent work!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*beams* Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*beams* Thank you!

10/10

luvsev

Oooh, interesting. I am so glad that everyone got back and that they will soon be safe.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I, too, was relieved once they were back to safety!Thanks for the review and the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I, too, was relieved once they were back to safety!Thanks for the review and the stars!

10/10

luvsev

Wow, Hermione's foreboding feeling was right on the target. I am willing to bet that Rose and Hugo's disappearance has something to do with that Wilson woman, after all, she does seem the type.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Doesn't she just! LOLThanks for reviewing and the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Doesn't she just! LOLThanks for reviewing and the stars!

10/10

luvsev

I wonder what Wilson is up to... something evil seems to be afoot

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yeah. That woman is up to no good...

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yeah. That woman is up to no good...

10/10

luvsev

Hermione got a nice little surprise there at the end.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh yes!Thanks for reviewing! *pats the shiny stars*

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh yes!Thanks for reviewing! *pats the shiny stars*

10/10

luvsev

A computer hacking Snape is a lovely and naughty idea.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Teehee. He made good use of his time to learn interesting stuff.Thanks for the review and the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Teehee. He made good use of his time to learn interesting stuff.Thanks for the review and the stars!

10/10

luvsev

I like the hotel that you created... too bad that all hotels are not like that one.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Well, now that the idea is out there, maybe some wizard or witch somewhere will take it up and design a hotel like it. :)Thanks for the review and the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Well, now that the idea is out there, maybe some wizard or witch somewhere will take it up and design a hotel like it. :)Thanks for the review and the stars!

10/10

luvsev

People living beneath the surface of the earth? A little odd idea, but a cool on all the same.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

It's a very old idea, actually, and one that surfaces every now and then. If you google "hollow earth" you'll find a lot on the subject. :)Thanks for reviewing and the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

It's a very old idea, actually, and one that surfaces every now and then. If you google "hollow earth" you'll find a lot on the subject. :)Thanks for reviewing and the stars!

10/10

luvsev

good chapter

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you!

10/10

luvsev

lovely chapter as always.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

:) Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

:) Thank you!

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