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Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

karelia

477 Reviews   |   477 Ratings, 0 Likes, 114 Favorites )

Romance Action/Adventure post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 52,624 Words 20 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape Harry Potter Hugo Weasley Rose Weasley

Hermione accepts a career offer she can't resist only to find out she's been set up. Two unlikely men offer help.

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Chapters (20)

Chapter 1: One

Chapter 2: Two

Chapter 3: Three

Chapter 4: Four

Chapter 5: Five

Chapter 6: Six

Chapter 7: Seven

Chapter 8: Eight

Chapter 9: Nine

Chapter 10: Ten

Chapter 11: Eleven

Chapter 12: Twelve

Chapter 13: Thirteen

Chapter 14: Fourteen

Chapter 15: Fifteen

Chapter 16: Sixteen

Chapter 17: Seventeen

Chapter 18: Eighteen

Chapter 19: Nineteen

Chapter 20: Twenty


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karelia

Member Since 2005  |  83 Stories  |  Favorited by 232  |  666 Reviews Written  |  2,343 Review Responses

Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.

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Reviews for Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

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10/10

mick42

Thank you,for a wonderful journey, and a blissful ending. 

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank YOU for your lovely reviews! It was a pleasure "watching" your reading progress as I read the review alerts. I'm very late in replying because at the time, I was in the middle of writing for the SSHG Exchange. Thanks again!*adores the stars*

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Thank you, for taking the time tor respond. I enjoy your wor, very much.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank YOU for your lovely reviews! It was a pleasure "watching" your reading progress as I read the review alerts. I'm very late in replying because at the time, I was in the middle of writing for the SSHG Exchange. Thanks again!*adores the stars*

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Thank you, for taking the time tor respond. I enjoy your wor, very much.

10/10

mick42

How lovely.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed it!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed it!

10/10

mick42

What will happen after full moon?will Rose and Hugo go back to school? Will Severus move in with Lucius and Hermione, or will they move in with him?

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Did the remainder of the fic answer your questions?Thank you!

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Yes thanks,

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Did the remainder of the fic answer your questions?Thank you!

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Yes thanks,

10/10

mick42

Interesting day all round, can't wait untill morning.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I'm glad this little tale is enjoyable to you!Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I'm glad this little tale is enjoyable to you!Thank you!

10/10

mick42

The father,son talk between Lucius and Draco, was priceless.And I think Harry is a little shocked ,by Lucius comment{shocked, but interested}.  Edwina is about to see justice done,not before time.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins* I'm glad you enjoyed!Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins* I'm glad you enjoyed!Thank you!

10/10

mick42

Severus and Hermione ,alone and talking has to be a good thing. did not see Draco and "the Potters" coming, add UFO's and crop circles, things are getting interesting.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

A spiritual philosophy says 'as above, so below,' so I figured it stands to reason to have a union of three on the earth's surface as well. It establishes balance. :)Thanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

A spiritual philosophy says 'as above, so below,' so I figured it stands to reason to have a union of three on the earth's surface as well. It establishes balance. :)Thanks!

10/10

mick42

More things in heaven and earth, yes indeed Lucius. Merlin the dragon is a wonder, so beautiful. Is the "Magick" draining Hermione?

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I became rather fond of Merlin, too. Thanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I became rather fond of Merlin, too. Thanks!

10/10

mick42

So glad that they are almost there. Small folk?

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Little people. Not children, but a different species altogether. Usually unseen, as they live in a dimension slightly higher than ours. :)Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Little people. Not children, but a different species altogether. Usually unseen, as they live in a dimension slightly higher than ours. :)Thank you!

10/10

mick42

Thank goodness the children are safe, and Hugo seems to have taken a shine to Severus, {Ron would choke} I'm not one for revenge, but justice, would be nice.Maybe just leave Edwina alone in a room, with Hermione, for five minutes.   P.S.The stars are for Lucius, he enjoys them so much.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Justice is on its way. :DLucius thanks you for all the stars. He adores them!I thank you for reviewing.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Justice is on its way. :DLucius thanks you for all the stars. He adores them!I thank you for reviewing.

10/10

mick42

I almost, almost, feel sorry for Edwina, no one has ever told her what happens when you get between, a lioness and her cubs    ,a lioness with friends.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I would feel sorry for her, but she's what I would term a parasite. I'm not even sure she has a soul...Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I would feel sorry for her, but she's what I would term a parasite. I'm not even sure she has a soul...Thank you!

10/10

mick42

The plot thickens.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

It had to eventually, no? ;)Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

It had to eventually, no? ;)Thank you!

10/10

mick42

Mmmmm, interesting, I wonder if the "Magick" is going to be tripled.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins*Thanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins*Thanks!

10/10

mick42

Is Ron in on this, or just dumb as a brick, being lead around by his bits? I wouldn't want to be Wilson, when Hermione gets her hands on her, she has violated her twice, first wiht Ron{no big loss, but still...} now at work.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I suspect the latter. It's Ron...Yeah, being a Wilson definitely stopped being fun.Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I suspect the latter. It's Ron...Yeah, being a Wilson definitely stopped being fun.Thank you!

10/10

mick42

Lola and Karl seem to be quite well known,in this area.Looking forward to seeing Severus again.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yes. Compared to the surface, it's a very small community, and anonymity simply doesn't exist. Like I would imagine an ideal world, one with no wars, no control issues, and an overall community spirit. :)Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yes. Compared to the surface, it's a very small community, and anonymity simply doesn't exist. Like I would imagine an ideal world, one with no wars, no control issues, and an overall community spirit. :)Thank you!

10/10

mick42

Let the Magick begin.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yes. The time for Magick is always perfect!Thank you!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, yes. The time for Magick is always perfect!Thank you!

10/10

mick42

What a wonderful hiding place. I love the relationship between, Lucius and Severus, it seems very loving, and gentle.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

They certainly are comfortable with each other; I would imagine in a way similar who's been in love with each other for many years. :)Thanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

They certainly are comfortable with each other; I would imagine in a way similar who's been in love with each other for many years. :)Thanks!

10/10

mick42

I like the way you show,the MoM's slow erosion of human rights. And love the way the rlationship is heading, it's good to se that Lucius is being honest with Hermione, after what she went through with Ron, she would be very sensitive to lies, even a small lie could hurt very baddly. Harry and Hermione went to muggle school untill they were 11, they did ok.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yeah, I couldn't resist showing that. Kind of looked eerily familiar to our world, lol.I can't imagine Hermione putting up with dishonesty for long, especially not after she was hurt by Ron, so Lucius graciously decided to leave his old ways behind. ;)Thanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yeah, I couldn't resist showing that. Kind of looked eerily familiar to our world, lol.I can't imagine Hermione putting up with dishonesty for long, especially not after she was hurt by Ron, so Lucius graciously decided to leave his old ways behind. ;)Thanks!

10/10

mick42

I knew it, who but a wizard could build "Falling Waters". Severus lives!!!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

LOL! Reason for celebrating, right? :PThanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

LOL! Reason for celebrating, right? :PThanks!

10/10

mick42

Ron is in BIG trouble, the Wilsons sound very dark  . Hermione is finding out what seh has been missing .

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Spot on!Thank you for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Spot on!Thank you for reviewing!

10/10

mick42

Great start, Just how up tight do you have to be, to make Percy look rebellious? I may be wrong, but I don't think Hermione Likes being called Mrs Weasley, just a hunch

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Heh, you have a point here. :PThank you for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Heh, you have a point here. :PThank you for reviewing!

0/10

jectex

This was an absoultly wonderful story.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! (And my apologies for taking so long in replying; I was busy writing exchange fic.)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! (And my apologies for taking so long in replying; I was busy writing exchange fic.)

0/10

Madame DeFarge

Oh my!  I have been reading my way through TPP, and I have noticed a similarity between most stories.Not this one!!  Absolutely fantastic ... and if it were only true.Thank you so very much

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins happily* Thank you!

0/10

Bambu

Wow! This is an absolutely epic story, filled with magic, technology, love, and light. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and especially seeing Hugo and Rose as three-dimensional characters.You write Lucius and Hermione quite well, so I can see why you've no compunction about the lumione exchange, and I thought you build on subtle canon clues beautifully in the Draco, Harry, Ginny triangle, as well as the Lucius, Severus, Hermione triad.Thank you. 

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I think I've just died and gone to heaven. I couldn't believe you'd started reading it, and I was absolutely squeeing when you continued. Thank you! Your words absolutely made my day.

10/10

beaweasley2

This has been such a unique and interestig piece. I'm so glad I followed this through to the end. You have quite the imagination.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Aw, thank you muchly for your kind words!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Aw, thank you muchly for your kind words!

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

In order to catch up with your story I started again from the beginning, and I've enjoyed it all the way through. I'm very much in love with your Lucius and your Snape is quite irresistible, too. Like Hermione, I'd take both. *g*
The conspiracy plot and the romance are nicely interwoven with a very clever resolution. I also liked the second trio and the little glimpse into the future. Needless to say, I've become rather fond of Merlin. All in all a brillant story!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Aw, thanks, your kind words made me blush!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Aw, thanks, your kind words made me blush!

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