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Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

karelia

477 Reviews   |   477 Ratings, 0 Likes, 114 Favorites )

Romance Action/Adventure post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 52,624 Words 20 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape Harry Potter Hugo Weasley Rose Weasley

Hermione accepts a career offer she can't resist only to find out she's been set up. Two unlikely men offer help.

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Chapters (20)

Chapter 1: One

Chapter 2: Two

Chapter 3: Three

Chapter 4: Four

Chapter 5: Five

Chapter 6: Six

Chapter 7: Seven

Chapter 8: Eight

Chapter 9: Nine

Chapter 10: Ten

Chapter 11: Eleven

Chapter 12: Twelve

Chapter 13: Thirteen

Chapter 14: Fourteen

Chapter 15: Fifteen

Chapter 16: Sixteen

Chapter 17: Seventeen

Chapter 18: Eighteen

Chapter 19: Nineteen

Chapter 20: Twenty


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karelia

Member Since 2005  |  83 Stories  |  Favorited by 232  |  666 Reviews Written  |  2,343 Review Responses

Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.

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Reviews for Travel, Conspiracy, and Men

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10/10

luvsev

I just knew that evil woman was behind the kidnapping.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yup, nicely figured out!Thanks for the review! *admires the shiny stars*

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Yup, nicely figured out!Thanks for the review! *admires the shiny stars*

10/10

luvsev

I would love to live in one of Frank Lloyd Wright's designs. He is by far my favourite architect. To say that the man was anything less than brilliant would be a travesty. I can totally see Lucius being bi and having a thing for the snarky Severus, but I never really thought of Sev taking a male lover... I kind of only pictured him straight; this has interesting possibilities. I do like your story so far :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I absolutely agree on your take on FLW! Yes, it must be absolutely awesome to live in a house he designed!Thank you for your kind words and the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I absolutely agree on your take on FLW! Yes, it must be absolutely awesome to live in a house he designed!Thank you for your kind words and the stars!

10/10

luvsev

Wow! Hermione's time with Lucius was hot.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

So glad you liked!Thank you for reviewing and the stars.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

So glad you liked!Thank you for reviewing and the stars.

10/10

luvsev

I love Lucius. I bet he knows who Ron is seeing.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

He's a wonderful character, isn't he? LOLThanks for reviewing and the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

He's a wonderful character, isn't he? LOLThanks for reviewing and the stars!

10/10

oohdear

wow, sex,break-ins,kidnapping, this story is really lighting up

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

LOL!Thanks! *pats the shiny stars*

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

LOL!Thanks! *pats the shiny stars*

10/10

oohdear

can't wait!! getting better and better

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

So glad you approve!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

So glad you approve!

10/10

oohdear

i like the endings, they ask more questions then they answer, teasing is good, you are raising it to an art

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

You think so? *looks pleased*

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

You think so? *looks pleased*

10/10

oohdear

the plot thickens! or is it something else!!!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*snicker* Is it? Naughty!Thanks for the review. And the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*snicker* Is it? Naughty!Thanks for the review. And the stars!

10/10

oohdear

neat, sex magik, wow!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins*Thanks!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

*grins*Thanks!

10/10

oohdear

gets more and more interesting, the writing is getting better and better, and the plot! good, very good

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

So glad you like it!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

So glad you like it!

10/10

oohdear

someone is watching! someone is watching!!!!call it Big Brother, call it the Ministry, call it what you will. the reality is beginning to sink in for people.rock on

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I wish more people would see it... But I can hope.Thanks for the review and the stars!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I wish more people would see it... But I can hope.Thanks for the review and the stars!

10/10

oohdear

getting better and better, i like the political pointers, good to see someone poiniting out what is happening behind the scenes. and the s*x...... ah well that is a bonus

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you, kind

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you, kind

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

!

0/10

CharmedForce

I imagine learning not only a whole new world, but a whoel new perception of the world she already knows would make Hermione wonderfully happy.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I wholeheartedly agree with that.Thanks for reviewing! :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I wholeheartedly agree with that.Thanks for reviewing! :)

0/10

CharmedForce

It seems like Hermione and Severus had a pleasurable and productive day together. Though I am rather curious about why she is so tired.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Strong emotions can be rather exhausting, I'd say.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Strong emotions can be rather exhausting, I'd say.

0/10

CharmedForce

Oh, a Draco-Ginny-Harry sandwich sounds tasty! I love the way the stupid woman lost her own control and sabotaged her plan to control the world. Silly thing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Evil never wins. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Evil never wins. :)

0/10

CharmedForce

Severus and Hermione are getting closer, and she is obviously trusting him more. It's awesome that the animals can communicate, and that there are no predators.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

It is a nice world down there, isn't it?Thank you for reviewing!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

It is a nice world down there, isn't it?Thank you for reviewing!

0/10

CharmedForce

Oh goodness... is she pregnant? And what is Severus up to?

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Nah. LOL.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Nah. LOL.

0/10

CharmedForce

At least they get to see some truly amazing places in their flight. I love how patient Severus is with Rose and Hugo.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

And I bet they missed most of the scenery, being in flight...I'm glad you approve that Severus has mellowed somewhat. He'll always be a teacher, though, I guess... :)

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

And I bet they missed most of the scenery, being in flight...I'm glad you approve that Severus has mellowed somewhat. He'll always be a teacher, though, I guess... :)

0/10

CharmedForce

Such descriptions put into the kidnappers that I suspect we will be seeing them later. Hopefully it is as Lucius eviscerates them.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

The question is: will there be revenge? *grins*

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

The question is: will there be revenge? *grins*

0/10

CharmedForce

Oh, no! That's the worst thing possible that can happen to a mother.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I agree. That wasn't actually easy to write...

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I agree. That wasn't actually easy to write...

0/10

CharmedForce

Gah.... the whorebag came into hermione's office? I can't wait to find out how Lucius knew!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Ha, your name for her just about describes her perfectly!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Ha, your name for her just about describes her perfectly!

0/10

CharmedForce

*gets up to get a cold beer* What an absolutely perfect scene! It's a mental picture I will always treasure.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Did you enjoy the cold beer? :)I'm so glad you're enjoying the fic, and even more so for letting me know.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Did you enjoy the cold beer? :)I'm so glad you're enjoying the fic, and even more so for letting me know.

0/10

CharmedForce

Oh, naked in a room with Severus and Lucius. What a dream come true! I am really enjoy the level of attention you've put in teh details of the story – the clans struggling to take power quietly, the small rules and laws sneaking on people, the travel that is being made. It shows you truly care deeply about the quality of the story.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I guess many of us would wish for Severus and Lucius in a room naked. ;)Thank you for your kind words!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

I guess many of us would wish for Severus and Lucius in a room naked. ;)Thank you for your kind words!

0/10

CharmedForce

Oh, another twist! I can't wait to learn about "these people" Severus is discussing.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! So glad to keep your interest!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Thank you! So glad to keep your interest!

0/10

CharmedForce

Gosh, it's starting to be like Big Brother! I like the direction you are taking things.

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, I am glad you see the parallel here!

Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)

Oh, I am glad you see the parallel here!

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