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Potions Under Duress Breathing Love
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Breathing Love

1: Chapter 1: A Ghost

2: Chapter 2: I'm Not Crazy

3: Chapter 3: John

4: Chapter 4: An Inquisition

5: Chapter 5: Teacher's Pet

6: Chapter 6: Fritz's Blood Thinner

7: Chapter 7: Anything

8: Chapter 8: Returning

Breathing Love

anogete

207 Reviews   |   207 Ratings, 0 Likes, 230 Favorites )

Drama Romance compliant post-DH/DH Potions Under Duress 21,765 Words 8 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lavender Brown Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Spoilers for DH!!! Hermione has problems of her own, but she can't resist trying to track down the man she saw in a small cafe just down the street from her new flat. He couldn't possibly be Severus Snape, could he?

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Ghost

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: I'm Not Crazy

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: John

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: An Inquisition

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Teacher's Pet

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Fritz's Blood Thinner

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Anything

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Returning


About anogete

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anogete

Member Since 2005  |  6 Stories  |  Favorited by 258  |  8 Reviews Written  |  655 Review Responses

I'm a 26-year-old Accounts Payable manager for a construction company.  Basically, I'm paid to write checks and intimidate the menfolk around here.  I live with my boyfriend and our dog.  I wasn't sucked into the HP fandom until just after the release of HBP.  So, I'm a newbie compared to most of the fans out there.  I've written in several other fandoms (under different pennames) - Anita Blake, Buffy, X-Files, etc.

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http://anogete.livejournal.com

Reviews for Breathing Love

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0/10

sumomo

Ohhhhh!!!!  Just 4 chapters now but I'm loving this story so far.  You don't know how much I feel for the Snape in your fic.  ^_^

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

10/10

Akkadian

Oh, this is absolutely wonderful!  I really like your characterization of Snape.  I can't wait to read the rest!

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thank you!

10/10

blue artemis

Yeah, the epilogue was not my favorite.  That and a dead Snape, although that was not as apparent, he might actually still be out there.  I like this, though.

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thanks!  Glad you're enjoying it so far.

10/10

Angie_Scarlet

Once again, great chapter! Poor Snape. And Hermione´s sick? Oh my. Hopefully, one very qualified Potions Master will be able to help. ;) Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

She'll have to pull him kicking and screaming back into the wizarding world.  ;-)

10/10

June W

ACK!!!  He needs money, clothes, food, everything - and she needs medical help.  ACK!!!  And can't she lend him her wand for a bit?  THis is no way for a hero to end up....

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

I promise I'll make it better for him.  I would never leave poor Snape in the middle of a Muggle city in a state of squalor.  He'll be confessing his love to Hermione and telling his story to Harry in a few short chapters.

Response from June W (Reviewer)

(snuggles up to anogete) you is my hero, miss!

0/10

septentrion

Will Severus save Hermione's life? How will he find out about the curse that had hit her?

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Of course he'll save her!  He's a hero.  ;-)  I swoon at the thought of him.  As for how he finds out--Hermione will camp out on his doorstep again, but this time she'll make a mistake.

Response from septentrion (Reviewer)

You're such a tease! My consolation is to know that the story is complete.

10/10

DeepShadows

WOW!

I can't wait to read more of this, and you explination on how Snape lived, is just, awesome. Kudos to you.

Toodles,

Deep Shadows 

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thank you!  I'm very happy that you're enjoying the fic.

10/10

sshg316

Another great chapter.  Very intriguing!  As always, you leave me wanting more! 

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thank you!

0/10

Mint Stick

Very nice! Poor Snape. With no qualifications suited for the muggle world, I imagine he didn't have much chance for a well-paid job (or alternatively he might have chosen to have as low-key existence as possible?).

I suspect, somehow, that this was not their last meeting. ;-) Especially as Hermione is going to be in need of a potions genius (and one most familiar with treating dark curses) very soon.

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Oh, no... it won't be their last meeting.  Hermione will be her persistant self and make him like her in the next chapter.

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Severus' parting words made me ache for him more than I did before he said them.  Regret, and honest self-analysis are very painful, and even more painful to witness in another.  Nice writing.

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thank you!  He's sadpuppy!Snape right now, but I promise to turn him into a happier man quite soon.  Well, at least after I try to pull him over the bump in the road (Lily) since I'm trying to be semi-canon after all.

10/10

maria

LOVE this - excellent, excellent story so far.  He's definitely no Heathcliff - Healthcliff had *zero* redeeming qualitites, in my opinion.  Snape has a few.   Looking forward to more, especially reading how the romance fits in ;-)

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thank you!  I agree!  I hate Heathcliff.  I actually made a shirt that says, "Heathcliff was a prat."  No one knows what it means except for English teachers and other nerds like me.

9/10

carley9

I've really enjoyed this story since the beginning and I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thanks!

9/10

chyara

awww!  Damn!  lol!update soon please....

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

I will, promise!

10/10

Elisabeth

Great stuff as the plot thickens. I like the scenario of how Snape survived the Shrieking Shack and the way it segued neatly into a Muggle existence for him. But poor Hermione -- sounds like she needs a Potions expert to come out of retirement...

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thank you!  I'm glad you like my little explanation.  I didn't want to go too crazy with it because then I'd get all wrapped up in magical theory and such.  And magical theory just confuses the heck out of me.

8/10

mekareami

I applaud your ignoring the epilogue. I think we should all collectively ignore that it existed and move on with what makes us happy. I am enjoying your tale and hope the next chapter comes soon. Thank you for writing

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thank you!

0/10

gah_meep

oooooo I like the plot twist thrown in about Hermione...Of course the only one to come up with a potion like that would be snape! wOOt. I'm excited to see where this goes.

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

When I started this fic, I didn't write anything about Hermione's condition.  Then, when I got to this chapter, I realized I needed something to lure Snape back to the wizarding world.  So, I went back in and sprinkled a couple hints about Hermione's condition in earlier chapters.

10/10

Anonymous

Oooh, nice. Drama up ahead, methinks ;-)

Author's Response: There will be angst and drama and eventually... *lurv*...  :sigh:  ;-)

10/10

onecoppercent

I just KNEW Severus lived. :) Amazing story...I can't wait to see what happens next!

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thank you!  Glad you're enjoying it.  Severus lives on in our minds.  JKR can never kill him!

7/10

Anonymous

I'm not sure I would have had Margaret attend the first meeting. It's a little uncomfortable to have her watch a violent and puzzling scene and then just shrug it off. Still, there is the promise of secrets, which tempts ;-)

Author's Response:

Margaret's nephew will be keeping an eye on Severus and Hermione.  ;-)

0/10

sumomo

Very interesting.  Can't wait for your next chapter.  ^_^

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thanks!  It should be uploaded soon.

10/10

BrenaMarie

Ooooh I love that this is a DH story that ignores the epilouge!  Thanks for posting, and I hope to read the next chapter soon!  ~Brena

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

I should have the next chapter up sometime this week.  Glad you're enjoying the fic thus far!

0/10

Kailin

Severus' secrets?  Oh, boy!  *hopping up and down*

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

How could our master spy who thinks of everything not anticipate a bite from Nagini?  ;-) 

Response from Kailin (Reviewer)

I doubt if he'll have a mongoose in his pocket, but hopefully the antidote!

10/10

barbied011

Great story.  Can't wait for the next update.

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Thanks!

0/10

Kismet

Well she's tracked him down, but how to get him to speak.  Will her missing a dose of her potion (and I don't think you've yet explained why she needs it) have something to do with it?  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

Yes, Hermione's potion will be explained shortly.  She takes it every other day, and she can't miss a dose.  However, things might get a little crazy with Snape soon, and she just might forget.  ;-)

0/10

chaosrachel

Just found this story and read it.  Want more now please!

Response from anogete (Author of Breathing Love)

More coming soon.  Chapter 4 should be up by the end of the week.

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