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Beyond All Doubt
dolefully desired682 Reviews | 7.59/10 (682 Ratings, 0 Likes, 482 Favorites )
An unusual request by the Wizengamot leads Hermione to witness a side of her professor she never imagined could be real.
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University student and science geek, 20, who spends far too much time reading fanfiction and far too little time focusing on future career.
Reviews for Beyond All Doubt
Dang... that is cliffy... you leave me waiting anxiously for the continuation. Great story, great plot... can't wait for more. PLEASE!!!! Don't leave me hanging here... PLEASE!!!!
So the attraction is there. I like the way you unfold the events so far, and the UST as well.
I bet it would be easy to get addicted to watching someone's memories. Interesting that he has her schedule jotted down (with that picture). I think he made that connection, too (the similarities)! LOL
I started feeling sorry for Hermione when she was comparing herself to the witch, but it all worked out in the end
I wonder how isolated she'll be once she helps exonerate him- even then, it can't be too bad since we all know she'll have Severus with her. He was probably betting that she'll be the one to look at his pensieve to begin with.
WOW!! I'm sort of out of words for how much I love this chapter. It's pulling at my heart very much. I really am speechless. I'll just say I love it and can't wait for more and leave it at that. ^.^
Response from dolefully desired (Author of Beyond All Doubt)
Aw. I can't tell you how much that means to me. Thank you! ^^
Interesting start... more soon?Just one little quibble though. The Unbreakable Vow that Albus extricated from Snape... there should be a wizard or witch that was the 'bonder' for the ritual itself. Who is it? (In canon, Bellatrix did the bonding between Narcissa and Severus when they did it.) Just a question I had, i've seen this scenario used a few times and writers forget this element to the Unbreakable Vow.Hope to see more soon... Cheers!
Response from dolefully desired (Author of Beyond All Doubt)
Dumbledore would naturally have chosen another Order member, and while some people assume he would turn to McGonagall, I personally think he would be unlikely to pick someone at Hogwarts who would have close contact with Snape on a regular basis. It would only cause a rift between them, and I personally don't believe McGonagall would ever have consented to bond such a Vow. I've always imagined her insisting that risking both their lives simply would not be worthwhile.I feel that he would be far more likely to ask Shacklebolt, as he is both an Order member and a very discreet and powerful Auror. And, as you'll recall, Shacklebolt died in the final confrontation, so Snape would have been unable to call upon him to act as witness. Claiming to the papers that Shacklebolt witnessed the Vow would only seem desperate and contrived. But that is simply how I envision it. I'm sure other people feel Dumbledore would have acted or chosen differently.
Response from mmesnape (Reviewer)
That's cool... I have no problems with your vision. Thanks for clearing that up for me. Most appreciated. :)
this story is a must-read, "beyond all doubt."
oooh this story looks promising! cant wait!
Great start. I can't wait for an update
This looks to be an especially promising story.
Very promising start! I'm looking forward to reading more chapters.
Intriguing. Looking forward to the ride.
very interesting beginning. I guess Severus' memories won't be like having a stroll in the fields on a sunny Spring day.
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I enjoyed this immensely. Having previously restricted myself to PWP, I'm beginning to embrace plots! Good job.
Can't wait for the rest!!
you've got me on the edge of my seat--thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to update. *wants to transfigure Umbridge /permanently/ into toad form*
You are cruel. Only the first chapter and I'm already wanting more.
Response from dolefully desired (Author of Beyond All Doubt)
It certainly wasn't my intention to be cruel... but thank you. :)
Just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this. It's an incredibly compulsive read.
intriguing:-)
wow
What a fascinating beginning! I can't wait to read more. And now I want lowlights and black framed glasses.
Excellent court examination and cross.
Wonderful story, thank you!
The ending did seem a bit abrupt to me, but I think you are right about anything more being stale. I liked the story overall, especially the beginning chapters where he is still at Azkaban and his fate is undecided.
Ugh. The man is his own worst cock block lol. I really like the story so far, can't wait to see where it will go in later chapters.