The Mermaid and The Prince
whimbley160 Reviews | 159 Ratings, 1 Like, 97 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione discover a lost and injured merbaby and must return it to its rightful family, but along the way they run into a "fishy" situation.
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Just wanted to say that I do like this. It's original and am looking forward to seeing what happens.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you so much! That means a lot to me, coming from you! I should have more soon.
thank you for a funny chapter. loved the bobbly bits part.. ;oD
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
I'm so glad you liked it. I thought "bobbly bits" sounded like something Ron would say. :-)
bobbly bits...lol Ron is so immature.
Interesting story tho I never read anything like it on fanfiction before.
KarlaMarie
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL! He is, isn't he?I'm glad you're finding the story interesting. I hope to have more up soon.
Boys. They're out of Hogwarts but they're still boys.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL! Yes they are.
A great start to the story! They are in for an interesting time ahead, I guess. Looking forward to the next.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. I should have more up soon.
I'm a bit envious at Hermione, I've always wanted to try out being a mermaid. LOL! And your transformaiton of Severus, very nicely done.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
I've always thought it would be neat to be a mermaid too. That's part of what inspired this story. I know if I were at Hogwarts one of the first things I would do is find out all about the mermaids. Glad you liked Severus's transformation. I thought he would appreciate the tail. :-)
Still enjoying the story
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yay! I'm glad you are enjoying it.
I'm glad to see another chapter up. I'm looking forward to reading about their journey.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thanks! I'm working on more as we speak, or type. :-)
More soon please.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! There will be more soon.
i hope the merpeople do try and hurt hermione and severus.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
There are a lot of other things in the lake they are going to have to worry about before they even find the merpeople.
bloody brilliant! more please?
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Oh thank you!More to come soon. 
eh oh... poor Severus and Hermione dont know that if they get together they will be very stuck!!
i wonder if they do or not... i cant wait to find out!
-karlamarie
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yeah, that was a small, yet important bit of information Dumbledore left out. I'm so glad you liked the chapter!Thanks!
oooohhh... im so excited!
cant wait for what happens next!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
I'm so glad you liked it! I'll do my best to update soon.
What a twist at the end! After an very emotional chapter.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! It was hard for them to let Coral go. They had gotten very attached to her. But I think they know she's going to be okay.I hope you like the next chapter too.
oh my.... watch out Sev/Hermione. Granted I think they like their current situation for the time buy I don't think they want to be permanent merpeople. Then again this is your story to weave as you wish. Waiting for more. p
ps if they stay in present form forever no worrying about wardrobe...
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yeah, they're pretty happy right now. I'm pretty sure Dumbledore will keep his promise to Minerva though.
ps if they stay in present form forever no worrying about wardrobe...LOL! This is true.
I'm glad you got this up. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thanks! I really appreciate your help with the names.I'm working on the next chapter already.
If you don't update A LOT SOONER than you did this last time...you'll not only be sleeping with the fishies, you'll be feeding the fishies. And scraping the algae off their tank walls, and filtering the water, and....~Lotm
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL!I'm hoping with the holidays I'll have a lot more time to work on it and get the next chapter up sooner than this last one.Thanks!
What a horrible thing to do to them! I am so not pleased! Will Severus be able to control himself since he doesn't have the baby to be responsible for anymore? Oh, you have to update soon. This is just too mean to leave us here. It was a great chapter, but evil cliffy!!!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
*evil cackle* I guess it was pretty evil of me. But it is in the mermish fashion. Most merfolk in folklore try to persuade people to stay with them.I'm glad you liked it despite the cliff hanger.I'll do my best to update soon.
And for goodness sakes, cover your bobbly bits!” yelled Ron. “Find some seashells or something!” he shouted.That line made me laugh out loud!!!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL!
It sounded like something Ron would say.
I'm so glad you liked it
When Hermione waved her wand I thought she was going to start lactating herself! HA! We need more mermaid stories
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL!
I agree. More mermaid stories are in need.
I'm so glad you like mine.
Thank you!
Loved this story! Poor Ron though lol.
Another great chapter! The whole scene with Draco/Harry being discovered by Hermione/Severus was so funny...you had me LOL! Can't wait for the next chapter...QUICKLY! ;-)
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you, and sorry the next chapter wasn't up as quick as I had hoped!
I do hope you will enjoy it!
I have to admit that I was shocked when I read this. I had to make sure it was the same story. LOL. Very unexpected.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Well, I hope you enjoyed it.I felt I needed to go back to what was happening on land with the others.We'll be back with Severus and Hermione in the next chapter.Thanks for reading!
bloodly hell woman... that was unxpected...
Whats happening with Severus and Hermione...
_karla
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Sorry if I shocked you too much there. I felt I had to cover a little bit of what was going on, on land.We'll be back with Severus and Hermione in the next chapter, I promise. They'll be entering the mervillage and attempting to return Coral to her family. Thanks for reading!
excellent
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.