Watching and Being Watched
Chapter 5 of 12
whimbleyWe meet Philippe, Khai and a mysterious dark wizard.
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Thanks as always to my wonderful Beta June!
And thanks also to ancientgirl and bekbek01 for your encouragement and advice
Chapter 5 - Watching and being watched
The little blue fish didn't fully understand what had happened. The merman and mermaid were getting ready to kiss, and then suddenly the black-tailed merman was pointing his trident-wand at him.
"I swear to Merlin, if I catch you, fish, you will be mine for breakfast!" he yelled.
The blue fish swam as fast as he could, eager to be away from the angry merman behind him. He'd be lucky if he didn't get his tail fins sizzled tonight. He swam quickly to the middle of the lake, as his master had told him to. 'Where is it?' he thought to himself, searching the lake surface for a sign. 'There it is!' He moved quickly upwards towards the silvery circle of light on the lake's surface and broke through.
~*~*~*~*~*~
Albus Dumbledore was woken by a slight splashing sound. He hadn't even realized he had fallen asleep. He'd been up worrying about Hermione and Severus, among other things. The persistent splashing sound brought his thoughts back to the present. It could really only mean one thing. Philippe was back. Albus slowly stood and moved to the magical watery basin beside him.
"How goes it, Philippe?" he asked tiredly.
"What a merman you have me chasing about," the blue fish exclaimed. "Nearly got my tail fins singed by that one."
Dumbledore chuckled. "Well, Severus does have a temper," he said sagely. "Where are they?" he asked, suddenly changing the subject.
"On the far side of the lake," Philippe said. "They missed the merpeople's village by a mile."
"Hmmm... This is most unlike Severus," said Dumbledore, tugging on his beard as he gazed at the little fish.
"I watched them. He spent too much time guiding his mermaid and the baby through the underwater caverns," said Philippe. "He lost all track of time and where they were going."
"I see," said Dumbledore. "That is more like the Severus I know, protecting the ones he is guarding. But, they are safe?"
"Yes. They are for now," said Philippe.
"And how is our other project going down there?" asked Dumbledore, his eyes twinkling.
Philippe grinned proudly. "Well, coming along fine now that I intervened."
"You intervened? What did you do?"
"I had to tell him to talk to her. He seems a bit nervous, that merman of yours."
"Can I assume then that it was your intervention that nearly got your fins hexed off?" Albus asked, quite amused.
"Yes, it was as a matter of fact." Philippe said. "He didn't seem to like my encouragement."
Albus laughed. "Well, for your sake, Philippe, I would leave well enough alone. How did you last leave them?"
"They were about to kiss when he stopped and chased me off," said Philippe. "It won't be long now before they do kiss."
"One can only hope," sighed Dumbledore. "Any more news on the merbaby?"
"Well, it's all quite odd, Headmaster. There is a merfamily missing their baby, but no one knows how she disappeared. This was no mere accident. Whoever took this child snatched her from her home." Philippe's eyes took on a serious look. "I suspect there is something evil at play here."
Dumbledore sat back, clearly upset by this news. "And the other inhabitants of the lake?" he asked. "Do they know anything of this?"
"No, that's the curious thing," said Philippe. "Whoever took this merbaby did so quite secretly. I've questioned dozens of my fellow lake dwellers, and none have ever heard of such a thing happening. I fear for the worse."
"Are there no other leads then?" Dumbledore asked.
"Well, there are the grindylows," said Philippe. "They're a tricky bunch. I'm not looking forward to questioning them."
"I'm afraid I shall have to ask you to do just that, Philippe," Dumbledore said sadly. "Much depends on this and the safety of those I love in the lake."
"Yes, sir, Headmaster. I will get right to it," said the little fish quite seriously.
"Thank you Philippe," said Dumbledore graciously. "And please keep a watch on my little ones in the water. They are like my own children. I do not want to see them harmed."
"Then I shall leave at once," said Philippe. "It will be my honor to guard ones you love so much tonight. And in the morning I shall see what those grindylows have to say."
"Thank you, Philippe, I am in your debt," said Dumbledore.
"No, Headmaster, it is I who is in yours," said Philippe. "It's an honor to serve you."
And with that he turned tail and splashed back into the water.
Dumbledore stared for several minutes at the magic basin beside him.
"Be safe, my friend," he said, "Be safe."
~*~*~*~*~*~
Deep in the murkier waters of the lake a grindylow swam quickly. He too was late meeting his master; only unlike Phillipe, he feared this confrontation. Khai neared the lake's surface and swam to its edge. His master stood in the dark shadows just out of sight.
"Master, I have news of the merbaby," said Khai.
"And what do you have to tell me, Khai?" asked the dark stranger. Khai had never seen his face; he only knew that all grindylows feared him.
"A wizard and witch have found her, sir." The water demon cringed, waiting for a beating. When none came, he continued. "They transformed themselves into merpeople, in order to return her to her family, but have gotten lost along the way."
"They have her?" he asked. "Where?"
"At the bottom of the lake," said Khai, his pale green skin turning even paler with fright.
"Bring her to me now," demanded the wizard. "I will not tolerate any mistakes like last time," he growled.
"Yes, Master," said Khai, bowing away from him. "I will bring back the merbaby for you."
"You'd better," said the dark man. "Oh, and Khai?" he said to the retreating grindylow.
"Yes?" said Khai.
"Crucio!"
Khai fell back into the water, his cries of pain muffled as the water surrounded him.
On the shore, his master laughed manically.
As soon as the pain subsided, Khai swam off into the deep darkness of the lake. He knew he'd better do the job right this time. There would be no second chance if he failed again. He had to find his accomplices, Boris and Monito.
~*~*~*~*~*~
Severus's eyes scanned the distant horizon. Movement of the living things around him had settled now. Much like the inhabitants on land, the ones in the water seemed to be sleeping too. Every now and then there was movement in the water, but nothing had seemed threatening.
He was very thankful for Dumbledore's underwater lantern right now. Its light illuminated an imaginary boundary he had forged in his mind. It also comforted him to know he was able to see that far. At one point during the night, he had seen a huge mass floating by. He was very relieved when it didn't come any closer, and hoped that it was simply the giant squid floating by for a good look.
The hours of swimming earlier that day and the relaxing movement of the plant he was anchored to were tempting Severus to sleep. Just as he felt he might, a movement to his left brought him around. He heard a whimper and a struggle, and suddenly he saw Coral floating nearby. He reached out and pulled her closer to him.
She reached out and patted his nose fondly.
"What are you doing out of bed, young lady?" he asked sternly, looking down his nose at her adorable little face.
Coral looked up at him sweetly and smiled.
"Couldn't sleep, eh?" he asked.
Coral cooed.
"Well, don't let Hermione know you got loose from her plant," said Severus. "She'd be quite upset to see you were able to get free."
Coral smiled at him and snuggled into his arms.
"Ah, very well," he said. "You can stay with me for a while."
He took this time to examine the merbaby a bit more. She had tiny little fingers, which Severus found quite fascinating. He couldn't remember the last time he'd spent this much time with a baby, perhaps when Draco was born. Severus remembered staring at him in wonder such tiny little fingernails that seemed impossibly small to him. He wondered what her parents were thinking of right now, and he thought of how he would feel if something so precious was ever taken away from him.
"Where are your parents, Coral?" he asked out loud. "How could they ever have let you go? If you were my daughter, there is no way on earth I would ever let you leave or get hurt."
Coral looked up at him and curled her tiny little fingers around his long thin one.
"I suppose," he said rather sadly, "that you shall be the only thing I have close enough to be a daughter. I do not expect anyone would want to have a child with me."
Coral gave a cry of protest and looked towards Hermione.
"Hermione?" he questioned. "Well, erm... I'm not sure."
Coral gave him an odd look and an unhappy cry.
"Well, I suppose I could be wrong," he said. "Perhaps if I..."
But what Severus was about to say was never heard. Swooping in from all sides were grindylows.
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160 Reviews | 7.21/10 Average
Ohh! This was fun! I hope this will get finished one day.
i was so impressed by the previous chapter where u so successfully moved the story along by having hgss stumble upon dmhp in the room of requirement. hope you will remain joyous regardless of your health prognosis. Jesus loves you! i also had a couple of scares, myself!
a very very merry tale!
I think you should do a spin off of this fic as if they stayed and they became merpeople and had a merbaby. That would be an interesting birth. Lol. How did serafina's mom give birth to her?
I'm excited to see this story back. It's always been one of my favs. Suprising twist with a centaur of all things being the villian. I hope we get to see Hermione and Severus go back to visit their Mer-friends. It was good to see so much acceptance for those two.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! I'm so glad this is one of your favorites! I'm hoping to get back to work on this story soon!
LOL, nice chapter! Love the trident-wand knocking Ron out, too funny! And then Hermione and Severus breaking down the door in their "knocking"... Just brilliant!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yay! Thank you!
Ooh, poor Severus and Hermione - thwarted by Hagrid! Oh well, for their own good I guess. ;)
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Well, Hagrid's timing was either very good or very bad, depending on how you look at it. Severus certainly wasn't happy. LOL!
The Merfolk really do whant Severus and Hermione to stay don't they? Now, does Severus know what will happen if they mate in this form (or does he even care)?
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yes, the merfolk really do like having them around. Severus's mind was very clouded and overwhelmed by the merman instincts taking over him. The idea of staying there was appealing to him, and in the end his instincts took over the rest.
Interesting that Hermione and Severus are now married because they completed the mating ceremony. That sort of explains the mermen at the window (not that they're not a voyeuristic lot anyway). ;) Can't wait to see Ron's reaction.Cleverly done with having Bane the centaur as the "dark wizard."
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! I thought Hermione and Severus deserved some happiness. And Bane always seemed rather shifty to me. He's got the beginnings of the perfect villain.
Sweet reunion. Can just imagine Severus being hugged and not let go - poor guy! Devious Murcus trying to get them to remain merfolk forever, we'll just have to wait and read what happens next.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!
Nice little side-story of Harry and Draco. Too funny on Dumbledore turning them into Hippogriffs!Interesting that Dumbledore never mentioned to Severus and Hermione that if they mate in mer-form they'd be stuck like that forever, so that possibly explains further on Phillippe...
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Awww... I love Draco and Harry. I think it explains so much of the tension between them. And Dumbledore seems to have forgotten that important piece of information about mating in mer-form. Maybe it's just old age.
Hmm, interesting on Phillippe being a former Hogwarts student - strange with the book. Does that have something to do with the Grindylows and the Dark Wizard?Sweet of Severus with the black pearls for his "girls."
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
That book is probably going to come back up again in this story. And that was very sweet of Severus.
This is so neat. I love that Bane's the evil one.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! I'm so glad that you like it!
Interesting the Phillippe's a servant of Dumbledore's and the Grindylow are serving a dark master, but what nefarious plan have they for the merbaby?Aw, poor Severus wanting children...perhaps he'll get his wish.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Severus might just get that wish, if he follows his heart.
Hmmm, poor Severus and his "scale" issue... Very subtle in their interest in one another.Is the "talking fish" Dumbledore? - the meddler!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Severus was very curious about how his new body functioned. He didn't think he'd stay that way for as long as he did.And, Dumbledore is definitely involved with that talking fish!
“We are not lost!” Severus said grumpily. “Maybe, just a little off-course.”
Hmm, if you say so...
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Even wizards don't like to admit when they are lost. :)
“Hey, want to go see a Quidditch game?” They walked off together, Hermione and the merbaby temporarily forgotten.Typical guys oggling her boobs as if they've never seen boobs before and then easily distracted yet again by Quidditch! Too funny!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Hee! Glad you liked it!
Cute, maternal instinct kicks in for Hermione and all the men seem a bit agog about it.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
They weren't sure what to do, were they?
Welcome back! :) xoxoxooxx
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! It's good to be back!
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more, dammit!~LotmI have a whole bunch of to sic on you, if you don't comply!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Sorry, sorry, sorry!!!
The latest chapter is up now. I hope you enjoy!
And can I just grovel at your feet and tell you how much I enjoyed "The Song"
*grovels*
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
--No groveling! (Especially not when you should be writing, *harrumphf*...)
*hug*
~Lotm
I love your creativity and passion you have shown in this story. I also loved The Incredible Mr. Limpet. Keep up with the good work!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you so much!
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Havent I read this chapter b4...? mmmm well you better put the next one up real quick for confusing me in such a manner....
please...lol
-karlamarie
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yes, you're eyes arent' deceiving you. You've read this one before. I took it down to make a few changes to the rating and other things and then re-posted it.I'm at work on the next chapter. I had a few health set backs, but, I'm at work once again. Glad you're still enjoying the story!
Brilliant, please give us the next chapter soon!!!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you!I'm working on it!
I'm sure I've already read this... kind of confused now...
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yes, you have read this one before. Sorry for the confusion. I made a few changes to the ratings and other things and had to re-post it.I am at work on the next chapter. I've had a few health set backs, but am at work again.I hope you continue reading!
Ok, I know I've read this chapter before....Sev and hermione need nookie! LOL....Can't wait for moremarti
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL!Yes, you've read it before. Sorry about the confusion. I took it down to make a few changes and had to re-post it. Working on Sev and Herione nookie as we speak.:)