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Chapter 17 of 25
averygoodunAU. Fatigued, Snape makes a mistake that could cost the wizarding world everything.
AN: In honor (and preparation for) what will be Tropical Storm Irene, I am posting this chapter early. Should I still have power on Monday, then I will post the next chapter in celebration. If not, well... *shrugs* ;-)
Thanks as always to Ayerf and Septentrion for their eyes and advice.
Snape watched with concern as Hermione left for bed. It had been a long and tiring day, to be sure, but he was surprised by her pessimism. She hadn't seemed so invested in the potential of the Grey Lady's knowledge to account for such an uncharacteristic display.
His gut twisted when it occurred to him that he might be rubbing off on her.
Snarling whether at himself or at Hermione he was not sure he got up and grabbed his cloak. It had been too long since he'd roamed the castle grounds. While his skin itched for the freedom of the dark halls and empty corridors, his soul sought the solace of fresh air.
He made it out the front doors unpestered, though he'd seen the Bloody Baron hovering near the dungeon's stairs. He was glad the Baron had kept his distance, though it would have surprised him had the ghost actually approached him. The Baron only talked when there was an emergency; the students were all too wary of the Carrows nowadays to require the Baron's assistance.
He took a deep breath and let it out slowly, trying to release thoughts of the students as he did so. It didn't work. It never did. He slowly walked down the front steps, heading toward the lake, trying, once again, to find ways to subdue the Carrows.
Alecto wasn't too bad. Her curses were nastier than Amycus', but she preferred to use the children's imaginations against themselves. She terrified the children with her sociopathic spells, but she only used the physically taxing curses on the older ones.
Severus knew the psychological scars the children bore were terrible, but it was easier for him to bear if only because he couldn't see them. The children had always looked terrified around him anyway. However, he couldn't erase the memories of the children screaming under the Cruciatus from his mind, especially when the scars from the curse formed on their faces.
Snape shuddered, and took another long, deep breath. The wind picked up and pressed his clothes against him, sneaking through the layers and reminding him that winter hadn't let go just yet. He looked around. The lake was beautiful in the moonlight, but so dark and bleak under the clouds that covered the sky now. It looked like a void in space and time. He almost wished it were, as then it would be easy to solve his problems.
He sneered at himself. His time would come soon enough. No need to rush things. Especially since Hermione's fate was in his hands alone. The thought of what would happen to her without his guardianship was enough to make him shudder again and look back toward the castle.
His eyes were drawn to his tower. It was one of four lit windows throughout the entire castle, so it was easy to distinguish. He hoped that the ever burning light wasn't drawing suspicion, but decided it didn't matter if it was. No one would question him to his face, and even if they did, they wouldn't ever think of the right questions to ask. No one would suspect him of chivalry.
He scowled, but his eyes soon softened, thinking of Poppy, Minerva and Hermione. No, there were a few people who just might believe in him. There was even one who believed the best of him, as silly and foolish as it was of the girl.
His heart clenched with emotion as he let his feet take him back to the school. He figured he might as well start searching for the diadem, though he still had no idea where the Dark Lord might have put it. Hogwarts hid so many secret spots, and Snape was afraid that only Dumbledore had a better knowledge of them than Voldemort. But the sooner he started looking, the sooner he could set Hermione free.
No one sentient was around as he entered the castle, much to his satisfaction. He let his body go on autopilot as he prowled the corridors, wand in hand, stretching his senses to pick up magical signatures beyond those that belonged to Hogwarts.
He was relieved that as he reached the halfway point of his patrol, not one student was lurking out of sight. He was especially relieved because as he came to the kitchen's entrance, he met Amycus coming out.
Amycus raised his brows as he looked at his outfit, and Snape inwardly cursed his lack of foresight. Stashing his cloak somewhere would have been intelligent, but it was too late now.
"Night, Severus."
"Good evening, Amycus. Have your patrols been fruitful?"
Amycus looked back at the painting of the fruit bowl and started laughing. He found the pun a little too funny, wearing on Snape's patience, so he started walking away. He wasn't surprised when Amycus followed. "It would have been more fruitful if you'd been that Longbottom brat, but I suppose this snack will have to make up for it."
"It's a shame we don't always get what we want, isn't it?"
Amycus gave him a sly look. "You did."
"Mmm. And it only took twenty years to get it."
Amycus raised his brows and tried to be witty. "You been lusting over the Mudblood that long?"
Snape rolled his eyes. "Don't be disgusting, Amycus. I was talking about the headmastership."
"But the Mudblood is what I was talking about."
Snape raised his brow. "You seem very interested in her."
"I'm more interested in why you wanted her, her being a Mudblood and all."
"She was also one of the banes of my existence, and seeing as she was the only female bane..."
"Alecto says it's transference."
Snape snorted. "She would."
Amycus was silent for a while, seeming to sense the conversational dead end he'd reached. He wasn't completely done with the subject, however.
"I'm surprised to see you out and about, though. It seemed like you were in for a good night."
Snape twisted his lips up. "I had a good night. And then when she was worn out, I found myself missing the solitude of my evening walks. I've been rather neglectful of them the last week or so."
"But... Do you think it's a good idea to leave her by herself? What if she tries to escape?"
Snape didn't hide his scorn as he said, "Do you really think I would leave her alone if she were conscious?"
Amycus took it the way he would, and he broke out in a lascivious grin. "You lucky bastard."
"Yes. Yes, I am," Snape agreed with a smirk.
Snape had been subtly steering them toward Amycus' quarters, and as they reached them, he stopped. Amycus looked around in mild surprise.
"I'll take over your shift, if you don't mind, Amycus. I have a yen for patrolling tonight."
Amycus looked pleased. "Sure thing, Snapey. I'll warn you, though, it's a really slow night. Haven't even seen any familiars about."
Snape nodded gravely. "Yes. I imagine it's the calm before the coming storm."
Carrow nodded thoughtfully, suddenly tense. "Imagine it is. Well, well... Maybe your gift will give the rest of us something, too. Maybe it'll draw out those lousy kids once and for all."
"I think it will indeed. But not tonight, I think."
"No, probably not. Not if they have any brains, anyway," Amycus agreed, relaxing again.
Snape nodded at him with a smirk. "And I believe a few of them do. Good night, Amycus. Sleep well."
"Night, Severus." Amycus entered his quarters while Snape continued on his way, hoping that would ease Alecto's suspicions of his duplicity once she heard it. He didn't really want either of them on guard for attack, but he was pretty sure Alecto already was expecting it. He was also convinced she wasn't keeping an eye on just the students.
Snape continued through the castle, probing for magic as he went. When he came to the seventh floor, his skinned crawled as he felt something different. The Room of Requirement was along here, but that wasn't what he was sensing.
His heart sped up in excitement; could it be this easy? Could the Horcrux really be here somewhere? Could he go back to his room and wake Hermione to triumphant news?
And then he heard the whispers.
"What are you doing here? Do you have any idea what danger you're in?"
"Don't make me hex you, Malfoy. Just run back to your dungeon where you belong."
"Potter, I... you never know who will come by. Granger's not worth"
"Expelliarmus!"
Snape groaned to himself as he felt his Oath twitch. There really was no way to win. He walked toward the whisperers, making no effort to mask his footsteps. He found it interesting that Draco was warning Potter, though. Very interesting.
"Someone's coming! You need to get out of here!"
Snape heard footsteps, and rounded the corner just in time to see Potter disappearing around the other end of the corridor. He lowered his wand and stared at the frightened blond boy who stood before the absurd tapestry.
"Professor Snape!" Draco exclaimed, paling even further.
Snape waved his wand, binding Draco so he couldn't do the runner he was thinking of doing.
"Well, well, well. Aiding and abetting, Mr. Malfoy?"
Draco's skin turned ashy as he gulped, but Snape was proud to see that his mouth snapped shut. He wasn't going to talk willingly. He also remembered Occlumency existed.
"Good boy," he said with his nastiest smile, feeling a little sorry for the boy, but not willing to risk anything at this point.
He looked around him already knowing there was nowhere nearby to safely stow the boy while he went after Potter. He was glad there were no witnesses, however, as he flicked his wrist and levitated Draco through the hallway to the nearest empty room.
Plopping Draco down on one of the chairs, he reinforced the bonds and applied a powerful Silencio for good measure.
"I will deal with you after I have found and dealt with Potter."
He swept out of the room, taking care to close and lock the door behind him. He took a step away, paused and then cast another, more dangerous, ward around the entire room. Thus reassured of Draco's safety and silence, he set off for his office and Potter.
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177 Reviews | 7.21/10 Average
Beyond awesome!!
I really liked the gradual shifting of Severus & Hermione's emotions & perceptions of each other, thank you for sharing!
Whew! What a battle scene - I'm still catching my breath! And while my inner fangirl was looking for a kiss between our protagonists, my inner critical reader realizes that this is the best way to end the story. Hermione's need for shelter is over, and they can leave the future to another day. :D
Absolutely top-notch story!
With apologies for not posting a review until this far along, I just have to say how much I love this story, the way you've rewritten DH, and the pacing that seems very, very right.
I've been moved to laughter and tears so many times already. But this chapter and the last, where Snape and Hermione have begun to realize the changes in their relationship, and just how important they are to each other, have simply been joys to read.
And those cliffhangers you keep insisting on inserting at chapter end - I'm so glad I'm reading this as a completed work!
Congratulations, by the way, on being featured on the SSHG Quiz as a prolific author - that was my impetus for looking through your stories. I know I read Marry a Choice and Dying in the Cold in my lurking days, and I'm sure I've read others, but it's so wonderful to find some really high quality sshg stories that are still new to me, like this one. :D
Excellent story! I was hooked from the first sentence. Please, please! Sequel! Glad I found the story on the SSHG Quiz. Love your work.
Excellent story babe. Thank you so very much for writing it.
Loves you, Sonia :)
p.s. I told you I would get to reading this eventually, and today seemed like the perfect day!
Ah! A lovely story. I've been away from reading it for a few months as I worked my way through life and the Exchange. It's great to be back, and to see updates to my favorite fics. This is such a well written story. The characters really have life to them. And watching them as they change is great. Thank you for sharing.
I really enjoyed reading this story - a true alternate universe with believable characters. Your writing was excellent and just drew me in from the beginning. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story.
I waited until the end to review, mostly because I waited til the end was posted before I read...but I'm regretting that wait. I think it ended wonderfully, what a lovely story and alternate to the actual book. Thank you for sharing!
I've really enjoyed this story. I like how you developed Hermione and Severus' relationship. Interesting battle scene. Thank you for a wonderful story.
This is such an enjoyable take on the story. I am wishing this was the true story. I like these people all working together. Amazing work!!!
An epilogue, please? If not, thank you soooo much for sharing Shelter with all of us. It has been an intense ride, but each update has been such a joy to read. I really loved how you handled the developing relationship between SS and HG, which is full of possibilities for the future, but based on a very solid, mutual trust and (perhaps) reliability. I will miss this very much.
Very nice tale about deception all in the name of trying to do what is right while placating the wrong.
You had me a bit worried there at the end with the Dementors, but all worked out ok. I kind of like the open ending. All I needed to know was that they lived and remained friends. Nicely done.
What a great story! You definitely have a way with words and descriptions.
I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you continue to write more stories.
Thanks for sharing your work!
Am I terrible to say that I'll take the loss of Hagrid over Severus any day? Nicely done there, even if they still have to look for the stupid snake. A boar is a good choice and it is better than a hedgehog, LOL!
Epilogue,please?
Another wonderfully written and plotted story from you. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it! I think the ending was very true to the burgeoning friendship between Snape and Hermione -- here's hoping for a continuation! Keep up the great work.
Well done! I'm sorry Minerva died, but she was always a brash Gryffindor and she died fighting baddies and protecting her cubs. Snape's new Patronus is interesting -- a wild boar, a dangerous fighter. Very impressed that Severus was first to launch his Patronus, leading the others in casting theirs. Yay for the victory! And yay for Severus and Hermione having an open ending. THANK YOU for writing. Happy Thanksgiving!
That was a good ending. It's too soon for them to be anything but friends, but you left it open for our imagination. :)
Definitely left open for a sequel. Is that what you had in mind?
Most of the deaths you left rather ambiguous which I like (that way I can pretend they were just hexed unconscious).
I thought the new patronus was appropriate. After all, the boar is Hogwarts mascot and Severus had become the students protector with Albus gone.
A good read. Thanks.
Merci beaucoup. Félicitation pour la scène finale . J'ai toujours été frustrée que Severus ne donne pas la pleine mesure de son talent sur le champps de bataille.
Quite a realistic ending, actually. For a moment there, I was afraid you were going to have them all killed off by Dementors. I prefer what you actually did.
I am exhausted. There were so many things happening at the same time that I'm in awe that you were able to write it so well that it made sense. Well done!
I was so worried when Severus wouldn't wake up. Thank goodness that he finally did. I don't think I could have stood it if anything had happened to him or Hermione.
Go, Neville! Bellatrix got exactly what she deserved.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out, but I've enjoyed reading it so much that I'm not looking forward to the last chapter.
Beth
I like a strong Molly who isn't a cariacature of everyone's worst in-law nightmare. That was a brilliantly bloody battle. Whoo, I'm alliterative tonight. Good chapter, I am both looking forward to and dreading the end.
LUNA!!!! Ack!!! And what was that spell that knocked Severus for a loop??