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Chapter 4 of 25
averygoodunAU. Fatigued, Snape makes a mistake that could cost the wizarding world everything.
Thank you again, Septentrion and Ayerf, for the alpha and beta reads.
Snape Apparated into his sitting room noisily, startling Hermione out of her light sleep. Her eyes snapped open to find Snape kneeling beside a still, prone figure whose robes were drenched in blood.
It only took a second before Hermione realized it was Ron.
Letting out an inarticulate cry, she lurched off the sofa, scuttling along the floor desperately until she reached Ron's still form. He was as pale as death and unconscious, but she could see his chest rising ever so slightly for quick, shallow breaths.
She looked to the Professor for reassurance, but his face was unusually grim as he silently summoned more and more bottles to his side. Her attention was diverted when Snape's hand moved toward Ron's middle, and she gasped as he applied dittany to a seeping gash in Ron's stomach. Her stomach rolled over several times, and she fought the urge to gag. Taking quick breaths, she finally managed to control herself, and she tore her eyes away from Ron's stomach and looked to Snape.
"What can I do to help?"
Snape shook his head suppressively. She thought that was all the answer he was going to give until he shook his head again with a mild oath.
"Damn!" he growled. "She poisoned the blade."
He looked up at her then, his eyes hard and narrow. She didn't have time to come up with a question before he said, "Go to the kitchen and fetch a clean cauldron. We need to clean his wounds."
She was on her feet before he finished, pausing only to look around for the most probable door to the kitchen. His quick tilt of the head in one direction gave her all she needed to know, and she sped off. It didn't take long before she found the cauldron and heaved it back to Ron's side. She saw her wand sticking out of Ron's robe pocket. Grabbing it, she did a quick sterilizing charm on the cauldron before filling it with a quick Aguamenti.
"Hot?" she asked, looking to Snape.
"Warm. Body temperature." He was too busy with the wound to look up.
She tapped the cauldron twice, muttering a warming spell, then tested the water.
"Cloths?" she asked, hoping she wasn't distracting Snape from anything critical, as he muttered charm after charm at the hole that refused to close.
He pointed his wand at the bookshelf, which promptly moved aside. "Top drawer of the hallway dresser."
Again, she was on her feet before he finished, this time without the need to pause. It took only about thirty seconds for her to find the dresser, grab everything the drawer held and return to the sitting room, but it felt like it was taking much, much longer. Every second was drawn out to thrice its length.
When she got back to the sitting room, Snape was adding something to the water. It took only a moment to realize that it was Ron's blood, and she resisted the urge to gag again. She knew he was probably testing to see what poison had been used, but she still felt, deep down, that blood belonged inside a person, not in a pot.
She dropped down beside them, and before she could ask what came next, Snape said, "Clear Weasley's abdomen of clothing."
She laid the cloths down, careful to only let one or two touch the floor, then set to unbuttoning Ron's robes. She had fantasized about doing this before, but never under these circumstances. She tried to withhold a sob, but a muffled noise escaped her anyway.
"If you're going to be sick, move away!" barked Snape, grabbing her shoulder, prepared to pull her back. She shook her head, continuing to unbutton Ron's still form. Snape hand relaxed, but his touch lingered. She wondered if he was trying to offer her comfort. She wondered what had happened to the world for Snape to give her comfort, and for her to be so very grateful for it.
Snape withdrew his hand after a few more seconds, only to use it to nudge her aside as soon as she peeled the last of the blood soaked clothing away. She moved so that he could dab the first cloth on Ron's skin, washing the blood away.
"Soak the clean cloth for five seconds in the brew, then copy what I'm doing," Snape ordered.
Hermione didn't even feel the bite of his tone, she was so intent on observing his motions. It was Ron's life on the line, nothing else mattered.
Once she was sure she knew what he was doing and would be able to replicate it, she took a cloth, and as soon as Snape was finished rubbing, she moved in. For the first couple of rounds there was a little awkwardness, but they soon found a rhythm that worked for them.
When Ron's wound was weeping a little less vigorously, Hermione let her mind wander onto other subjects, like Harry.
"Sir," she said tentatively, "What happened? Is Harry..." She couldn't finish the thought. Knowing that Ron might die was hard enough without asking if Harry was dead as well. Ron held her heart, but Harry held her hope.
"I arrived just in time to see Potter Disapparating from the Manor alongside a house-elf and what looked like a goblin. From what I could see, he was fine when he disappeared. Weasley took the dagger for him."
Hermione bit her lip, looking at Ron. Snape was still wiping, so she gently ran her fingers through Ron's hair. "Oh, Ron, you wonderful, stupid prat." Blinking back tears, she smiled at his unconscious form.
She thought she heard Snape snort, and turned to him, but his face was blank and his attention was still on rubbing the potion on Ron's stomach.
"While I was there," Snape continued, to Hermione's surprise, "Bellatrix and Narcissa came up with an interesting story. They claimed you were not with your friends, but that your friends came after you'd gone, looking for you."
"What a load of rubbish!" Hermione exclaimed, taking over for Snape and applying the warm cloth with care.
"When next the Dark Lord summons me, which I suspect will be soon, I will need to tell him about this evening."
Hermione looked up at Snape curiously. His face was still a blank mask.
Hermione waited for him to finish his thought, but it seemed he had finished. She mulled it over for a moment, and came to the obvious conclusion.
"Will it be permanent?" she asked in a tiny voice.
"No." He sounded relieved. "Only until after he interviews you."
"What about Ron?" Hermione whispered, even more quietly.
"As I told Bellatrix, it is imperative that Weasley be kept alive for information on Potter, as you are regrettably not a good source."
"But if Vol -- he looks in Ron's mind..."
"He will see nothing more than a drug induced fog. He is far from being in stable condition, Miss Granger. I will warn you now that I do not believe his chance of survival is very high. I believe it will be best to keep him in a state of vegetation until he has stabilized."
Hermione nodded, hearing both the truth and the deception. She couldn't help but feel, once again, an overwhelming sense of gratitude for Snape.
Suddenly, Snape hissed and clutched his left forearm with his right hand. Hermione immediately took up his place wiping Ron, but she kept her eyes on Snape.
He compressed his lips together, but looked at her steadily. "I do not know how much time I have, so I will need to do this now and bind you."
"But... Ron!" Hermione protested.
"I will explain to him the necessity of getting back immediately. It should not hurt him much. As it is, the bleeding has stopped."
Hermione looked at the wound, and, sure enough, while the wound still gaped, blood had stopped flowing out. Ron's breaths were also a little less shallow and fast, so she could hope that he would survive.
She looked back at Snape to find him looking at her with an unusual expression. If it had been on anyone else's face, she might have called it pity, but that didn't quite fit. She nodded.
He took the washcloth from her hand and banished it along with all the other used rags. He suggested she make herself comfortable on the wingback chair by the fire and then pointed his wand at her. Without a word, he summoned her wand and then bound her. She was pleased to note that the ropes weren't too tight, and also to find that the fire kept the air around the chair quite comfortable. She hadn't realized how chilled she'd become on the floor.
"Did you place a warming charm on Ron, sir?" she asked as he raised his wand at her. He paused briefly and then flicked his wand at Ron. When his wand was aimed at her again, she swallowed.
"Be safe, sir. And... and thank you."
He raised his eyebrow at that, smirking ever so slightly. She closed her eyes and he muttered something under his breath.
Hermione opened her eyes to find Snape, the murderous bastard, smirking down at her. The last thing she could remember was his voice at Malfoy Manor, and then the absence of pain.
"I see you're awake, at long last," he drawled, tilting his head slightly to one side. "'Tis a shame the Dark Lord is calling right now. However, I suggest you not get too comfortable. I shan't be long."
He gave her an evil smile and then Disapparated with barely a sound.
Hermione sat frozen in place, terrified that she had gone from the proverbial frying pan straight into the fire.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Shelter
177 Reviews | 7.21/10 Average
Beyond awesome!!
I really liked the gradual shifting of Severus & Hermione's emotions & perceptions of each other, thank you for sharing!
Whew! What a battle scene - I'm still catching my breath! And while my inner fangirl was looking for a kiss between our protagonists, my inner critical reader realizes that this is the best way to end the story. Hermione's need for shelter is over, and they can leave the future to another day. :D
Absolutely top-notch story!
With apologies for not posting a review until this far along, I just have to say how much I love this story, the way you've rewritten DH, and the pacing that seems very, very right.
I've been moved to laughter and tears so many times already. But this chapter and the last, where Snape and Hermione have begun to realize the changes in their relationship, and just how important they are to each other, have simply been joys to read.
And those cliffhangers you keep insisting on inserting at chapter end - I'm so glad I'm reading this as a completed work!
Congratulations, by the way, on being featured on the SSHG Quiz as a prolific author - that was my impetus for looking through your stories. I know I read Marry a Choice and Dying in the Cold in my lurking days, and I'm sure I've read others, but it's so wonderful to find some really high quality sshg stories that are still new to me, like this one. :D
Excellent story! I was hooked from the first sentence. Please, please! Sequel! Glad I found the story on the SSHG Quiz. Love your work.
Excellent story babe. Thank you so very much for writing it.
Loves you, Sonia :)
p.s. I told you I would get to reading this eventually, and today seemed like the perfect day!
Ah! A lovely story. I've been away from reading it for a few months as I worked my way through life and the Exchange. It's great to be back, and to see updates to my favorite fics. This is such a well written story. The characters really have life to them. And watching them as they change is great. Thank you for sharing.
I really enjoyed reading this story - a true alternate universe with believable characters. Your writing was excellent and just drew me in from the beginning. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story.
I waited until the end to review, mostly because I waited til the end was posted before I read...but I'm regretting that wait. I think it ended wonderfully, what a lovely story and alternate to the actual book. Thank you for sharing!
I've really enjoyed this story. I like how you developed Hermione and Severus' relationship. Interesting battle scene. Thank you for a wonderful story.
This is such an enjoyable take on the story. I am wishing this was the true story. I like these people all working together. Amazing work!!!
An epilogue, please? If not, thank you soooo much for sharing Shelter with all of us. It has been an intense ride, but each update has been such a joy to read. I really loved how you handled the developing relationship between SS and HG, which is full of possibilities for the future, but based on a very solid, mutual trust and (perhaps) reliability. I will miss this very much.
Very nice tale about deception all in the name of trying to do what is right while placating the wrong.
You had me a bit worried there at the end with the Dementors, but all worked out ok. I kind of like the open ending. All I needed to know was that they lived and remained friends. Nicely done.
What a great story! You definitely have a way with words and descriptions.
I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you continue to write more stories.
Thanks for sharing your work!
Am I terrible to say that I'll take the loss of Hagrid over Severus any day? Nicely done there, even if they still have to look for the stupid snake. A boar is a good choice and it is better than a hedgehog, LOL!
Epilogue,please?
Another wonderfully written and plotted story from you. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it! I think the ending was very true to the burgeoning friendship between Snape and Hermione -- here's hoping for a continuation! Keep up the great work.
Well done! I'm sorry Minerva died, but she was always a brash Gryffindor and she died fighting baddies and protecting her cubs. Snape's new Patronus is interesting -- a wild boar, a dangerous fighter. Very impressed that Severus was first to launch his Patronus, leading the others in casting theirs. Yay for the victory! And yay for Severus and Hermione having an open ending. THANK YOU for writing. Happy Thanksgiving!
That was a good ending. It's too soon for them to be anything but friends, but you left it open for our imagination. :)
Definitely left open for a sequel. Is that what you had in mind?
Most of the deaths you left rather ambiguous which I like (that way I can pretend they were just hexed unconscious).
I thought the new patronus was appropriate. After all, the boar is Hogwarts mascot and Severus had become the students protector with Albus gone.
A good read. Thanks.
Merci beaucoup. Félicitation pour la scène finale . J'ai toujours été frustrée que Severus ne donne pas la pleine mesure de son talent sur le champps de bataille.
Quite a realistic ending, actually. For a moment there, I was afraid you were going to have them all killed off by Dementors. I prefer what you actually did.
I am exhausted. There were so many things happening at the same time that I'm in awe that you were able to write it so well that it made sense. Well done!
I was so worried when Severus wouldn't wake up. Thank goodness that he finally did. I don't think I could have stood it if anything had happened to him or Hermione.
Go, Neville! Bellatrix got exactly what she deserved.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out, but I've enjoyed reading it so much that I'm not looking forward to the last chapter.
Beth
I like a strong Molly who isn't a cariacature of everyone's worst in-law nightmare. That was a brilliantly bloody battle. Whoo, I'm alliterative tonight. Good chapter, I am both looking forward to and dreading the end.
LUNA!!!! Ack!!! And what was that spell that knocked Severus for a loop??