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Chapter 12 of 25
averygoodunAU. Fatigued, Snape makes a mistake that could cost the wizarding world everything.
Hermione had felt rather useless at the planning session, seeing as it was obvious that Snape didn't need her there. When they'd called it quits for the night, she'd sarcastically asked if that was all he needed of her, and she was surprised when he'd looked at her intently, replying snidely, "Do not underestimate your usefulness, Miss Granger. I may not have asked your opinions, but that is simply because you couldn't hide them if you tried."
Hermione didn't know whether to be flattered that her opinions counted, or offended at his phrasing. She decided, as she snuggled under the covers, that it didn't matter one way or the other what she felt. She just hoped his plans panned out.
Fortunately, her mind was so focused on that hope that she forgot about what the morning was to bring.
She was woken up quite early by a gentle hand on her shoulder.
"Miss Granger," Snape's quiet voice said. "We cannot delay any longer."
Her eyes shot open, and she found Snape watching her with an almost apologetic expression.
"I can't do this," she whispered. Snape's face grew hard, but before he could snap at her, she added, "They're going to kill you."
Snape's face relaxed in shock, but then the harsh look came back. "Your confidence in me is touching."
Hermione opened her mouth to protest, but he held up his hand. "We have no time for this. Dress yourself and meet me in the office in five minutes."
He turned and left before she could even nod. She sat staring at the door for a few moments before recalling that she was supposed to be getting dressed. She stretched, yawning, and then reluctantly got up, dressing in the plain brown robes Snape had provided. She was trying to tame her hair when he knocked on the door, letting her know her time was up.
She walked into the office, parting her hair so as to braid it at the same time. He watched her with a peculiar expression on his face, one that she couldn't quite decipher. He didn't say anything, however, until she'd finished plaiting her hair and waved her wand at the ends to hold them together, and then it was simply, "Your wand."
She handed it over with a frown, hating that she had to be so defenseless, although she trusted Snape to keep her safe. She also knew, rationally, that she was not the one in danger for this meal the majority of the staff wouldn't be after her blood but she still felt nervous being wandless.
Snape seemed to sense her anxiety, and he made sure she saw in which drawer he placed her wand. When he was done, he paused before pointing his wand at her.
"I'm sorry."
She nodded, biting her lip nervously. He flicked his wand and suddenly there was a weight around her neck, much like the night they came to the castle, only this time, it was softer and far more comfortable.
She put her hands up to feel the shackle, but it felt like hard steel to her light touch. She looked at Snape in query, and he rolled his eyes at her.
"There is no reason we need to add injury to indignity. Besides, chafing paste is a tedious potion to brew."
She smiled, swallowing the tears of fear and gratitude that were threatening her. "Thank you, sir."
She didn't know whether he looked offended or pleased. She supposed he could be both.
He motioned for her to exit the office, and she took in a big breath. She knew they had to do this, but she was finding it difficult to leave the safe haven the office had become.
"We need to leave now, Miss Granger," Snape said softly, sympathetically.
She nodded and stepped forward, knowing this must be as hard for him as it was for her. She wouldn't make it any harder on him than it needed to be.
They made their way quietly down the spiral staircase, but just before they reached the door, Snape touched her shoulder, making her stop.
"Why didn't you braid your hair magically?" he asked.
She choked back a laugh. "My hair doesn't react well to that spell. It... it sort of has a will of its own and doesn't take being forced well at all."
Snape smirked and reached out to tug on a stray lock of hair before tucking it behind her ear. "Not surprising."
He turned and the door opened, but Hermione stood there, shell-shocked and wondering what had just happened. A slight tug on the chain reminded her that she was supposed to be moving, but she walked in a bit of a daze, trying to figure out Snape's motivations.
By the time they reached the doors of the Great Hall, she figured he must have done that just to provoke that reaction from her. When he looked down at her before opening the doors, she glared at him. His smirk was all the confirmation she needed.
"That was horrible of you!" she whispered.
His smirk grew and he opened the doors. "I'm so glad you appreciate my kindnesses, my dear."
The sound of a utensil hitting a plate drew her angry gaze off Snape and into the room at large. Everyone at the head table was staring at them, and all but two of them wore expressions of shock and dismay. McGonagall looked like she was about to faint.
Snape strode through the room to his seat in the center of the table, and Hermione followed reluctantly, moving just before a tug on the chain was required.
She felt everyone's eyes on her. Everyone but the two Death Eaters were unnaturally still. She wanted to send them a smile, let them know she was okay, but that was not an option. Not with the Carrows watching.
Mindful of the Carrows, she turned her eyes to the floor, and followed Snape meekly. When he reached his seat, he motioned for her to stand against the wall, as they had planned. She was about to take her place, when Amycus said, "Now, Severus, don't be churlish! If she's standing against the wall, we can't see her. That's not fair at all."
Snape's mouth thinned. "She was not gifted to you, Amycus. I shall do with her as I please."
Hermione heard several gasps, and felt the tension at the table increase.
"I don't know why you want to look at her, Amycus," Alecto said. "Let Severus put her where he will. I certainly would be more comfortable knowing she wasn't behind us, but I don't really relish the idea of looking at her, either."
Hermione peeked at Snape again and saw a muscle in his jaw twitch, though he was wearing a slight smile.
"I hadn't thought of her as a threat, but if it would make you more comfortable..." Snape motioned for Hermione to move to the front of the table, holding the chain up as she walked around it. "And since you would prefer not to see her, she can sit."
Hermione sat down with relief; she hadn't been sure her legs would have held her up for much longer. She decided to look out at the empty tables rather than face the teachers, but she could still sense how upset they all were. Conversation was nonexistent. She didn't know how Severus was going to stage any conversation. But just as she wondered that, Amycus said, "So, the Dark Lord said you've got the Weasley boy. Any luck with him yet?"
Once again, all movement stopped at the table.
"I had thought the Dark Lord meant to keep Ronald's captivity a secret," Snape replied coolly. "But, since you so blithely bring up the subject, he is still unconscious and showing no signs of regaining consciousness." He paused as if to take a sip of pumpkin juice. "I don't have much hope of his recovering consciousness, actually, though judging by the way my pet keeps talking to him, you'd think he was alert all the time."
"You let her around him? Isn't that..."
"She's not going to harm him. Besides, if she expends all her verbal energy on him, I don't have to deal with casting silencing charms ad nauseum."
Alecto and Amycus both gave appreciative chuckles, though the rest of the table remained in stony silence. Hermione tried not to feel hurt. She knew he was just telling them that to stay in character. She hoped.
"Still, don't you think it's a bit risky?"
"I think the known benefits outweigh the possible risks."
"But what if she decides to put him out of his misery?"
Snape snorted. "As amusing as that would be, I don't think my pet's up for that. It's not the done thing in Gryffindor, and believe me, she is a Gryffindor through and through."
Hermione heard McGonagall choke and start coughing, while most of the other teachers rustled uncomfortably at the innuendo.
"Does the Dark Lord know about your arrangement?"
Hermione smiled when she heard Snape's long suffering sigh and could almost hear him calling Amycus a dunderhead in his head.
"Of course he knows. He has seen and approved of everything. If he had taken issue with it, the boy would be locked up in the hospital wing, as Madam Pomfrey requested he be. Instead, the good woman has trained my pet to be his nurse, and Weasley and his memories remain secure."
No one said anything else, as it had been clear by Snape's tone alone that he was finished talking about the subject. It wasn't long after that Snape stood and yanked on Hermione's chain, indicating it was time to go. Hermione stood and, as meekly as she could, followed Snape out the giant doors of the Great Hall. She hadn't dared look at the table, fearing she would give everything away if she did.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Shelter
177 Reviews | 7.21/10 Average
Beyond awesome!!
I really liked the gradual shifting of Severus & Hermione's emotions & perceptions of each other, thank you for sharing!
Whew! What a battle scene - I'm still catching my breath! And while my inner fangirl was looking for a kiss between our protagonists, my inner critical reader realizes that this is the best way to end the story. Hermione's need for shelter is over, and they can leave the future to another day. :D
Absolutely top-notch story!
With apologies for not posting a review until this far along, I just have to say how much I love this story, the way you've rewritten DH, and the pacing that seems very, very right.
I've been moved to laughter and tears so many times already. But this chapter and the last, where Snape and Hermione have begun to realize the changes in their relationship, and just how important they are to each other, have simply been joys to read.
And those cliffhangers you keep insisting on inserting at chapter end - I'm so glad I'm reading this as a completed work!
Congratulations, by the way, on being featured on the SSHG Quiz as a prolific author - that was my impetus for looking through your stories. I know I read Marry a Choice and Dying in the Cold in my lurking days, and I'm sure I've read others, but it's so wonderful to find some really high quality sshg stories that are still new to me, like this one. :D
Excellent story! I was hooked from the first sentence. Please, please! Sequel! Glad I found the story on the SSHG Quiz. Love your work.
Excellent story babe. Thank you so very much for writing it.
Loves you, Sonia :)
p.s. I told you I would get to reading this eventually, and today seemed like the perfect day!
Ah! A lovely story. I've been away from reading it for a few months as I worked my way through life and the Exchange. It's great to be back, and to see updates to my favorite fics. This is such a well written story. The characters really have life to them. And watching them as they change is great. Thank you for sharing.
I really enjoyed reading this story - a true alternate universe with believable characters. Your writing was excellent and just drew me in from the beginning. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story.
I waited until the end to review, mostly because I waited til the end was posted before I read...but I'm regretting that wait. I think it ended wonderfully, what a lovely story and alternate to the actual book. Thank you for sharing!
I've really enjoyed this story. I like how you developed Hermione and Severus' relationship. Interesting battle scene. Thank you for a wonderful story.
This is such an enjoyable take on the story. I am wishing this was the true story. I like these people all working together. Amazing work!!!
An epilogue, please? If not, thank you soooo much for sharing Shelter with all of us. It has been an intense ride, but each update has been such a joy to read. I really loved how you handled the developing relationship between SS and HG, which is full of possibilities for the future, but based on a very solid, mutual trust and (perhaps) reliability. I will miss this very much.
Very nice tale about deception all in the name of trying to do what is right while placating the wrong.
You had me a bit worried there at the end with the Dementors, but all worked out ok. I kind of like the open ending. All I needed to know was that they lived and remained friends. Nicely done.
What a great story! You definitely have a way with words and descriptions.
I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you continue to write more stories.
Thanks for sharing your work!
Am I terrible to say that I'll take the loss of Hagrid over Severus any day? Nicely done there, even if they still have to look for the stupid snake. A boar is a good choice and it is better than a hedgehog, LOL!
Epilogue,please?
Another wonderfully written and plotted story from you. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it! I think the ending was very true to the burgeoning friendship between Snape and Hermione -- here's hoping for a continuation! Keep up the great work.
Well done! I'm sorry Minerva died, but she was always a brash Gryffindor and she died fighting baddies and protecting her cubs. Snape's new Patronus is interesting -- a wild boar, a dangerous fighter. Very impressed that Severus was first to launch his Patronus, leading the others in casting theirs. Yay for the victory! And yay for Severus and Hermione having an open ending. THANK YOU for writing. Happy Thanksgiving!
That was a good ending. It's too soon for them to be anything but friends, but you left it open for our imagination. :)
Definitely left open for a sequel. Is that what you had in mind?
Most of the deaths you left rather ambiguous which I like (that way I can pretend they were just hexed unconscious).
I thought the new patronus was appropriate. After all, the boar is Hogwarts mascot and Severus had become the students protector with Albus gone.
A good read. Thanks.
Merci beaucoup. Félicitation pour la scène finale . J'ai toujours été frustrée que Severus ne donne pas la pleine mesure de son talent sur le champps de bataille.
Quite a realistic ending, actually. For a moment there, I was afraid you were going to have them all killed off by Dementors. I prefer what you actually did.
I am exhausted. There were so many things happening at the same time that I'm in awe that you were able to write it so well that it made sense. Well done!
I was so worried when Severus wouldn't wake up. Thank goodness that he finally did. I don't think I could have stood it if anything had happened to him or Hermione.
Go, Neville! Bellatrix got exactly what she deserved.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out, but I've enjoyed reading it so much that I'm not looking forward to the last chapter.
Beth
I like a strong Molly who isn't a cariacature of everyone's worst in-law nightmare. That was a brilliantly bloody battle. Whoo, I'm alliterative tonight. Good chapter, I am both looking forward to and dreading the end.
LUNA!!!! Ack!!! And what was that spell that knocked Severus for a loop??