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Chapter 5 of 25
averygoodunAU. Fatigued, Snape makes a mistake that could cost the wizarding world everything.
Thanks again (and still) to Septentrion for the alpha read, and Ayerf for the betaing.)
Voldemort was at the gates of Hogwarts, waiting for Snape to let him in. It was rare to surprise the Dark Lord, but Snape seemed to have managed it, as Voldemort swung around from the gates, wand raised.
"My Lord," Snape said, bowing quickly.
"Severus!" Voldemort replied, annoyed. "What are you doing on this side of the gate?"
Severus straightened, brushing off his robes as he did. "There was an incident, my Lord." He brought out a large key and unlocked the wards keeping them out. "I was called to Malfoy Manor to collect your gift."
Voldemort raised his brow. "The girl?"
"Yes, they caught Granger."
Voldemort looked pleased. "Why did you not return here with her?"
"I'm afraid Bellatrix found the temptation to play with a Mudblood too much to bear. I walked in to find the girl in a damaged condition."
Voldemort stopped, looking at Snape in surprise. "Bellatrix? I must confess that I am surprised she would dare disobey my order."
"She says that she didn't recognize the girl."
"Was the Mudblood damaged beyond repair?"
"Thankfully, no, my Lord. I took her home and was able to heal her in only a few minutes. But that is inconsequential, my Lord, for when I went back to the Manor to question everyone more thoroughly on their behavior, I arrived to find Potter Disapparating. Bellatrix waylaid Weasley with a well aimed knife, but Potter escaped. They claim that Potter and Weasley showed up after I left with Granger, and, to be fair, I did hear a noise in the cellar just before I left the first time. It could have been the boys Apparating in."
Snape braced himself for the Dark Lord's fury, and, sure enough, the Dark wizard seemed to swell with anger. Voldemort wasn't moving, but the air around the two of them swirled in agitation.
"Do you believe them?" Voldemort hissed.
"Although I find it difficult to believe, when I looked in Granger's mind, her memories confirmed the story. It seems she has not been traveling with Potter for some time now."
Voldemort clenched a fist in a show of agitation. "This is unacceptable, Severus. This is twice they have let Potter slip through their hands."
Snape bowed his head in acknowledgment, and his thoughts drifted to Draco. "Master, although it is unacceptable on the part of the adults, I beg for your lenience on Draco. He was the one who alerted me that Granger had been captured."
Voldemort waved his hand distractedly. "I have no intention of doing serious harm to the boy, Severus. You need not fear."
"Thank you, my Lord."
They stood there for a few moments in silence. Snape didn't dare to interrupt Voldemort's thoughts.
"You said that Potter escaped, but not Weasley?"
"Correct. Weasley is currently decorating my sitting room floor. I have been trying to heal him, although it seems Bellatrix used one of her special blades, and the wound is proving difficult, even with my special collection."
Voldemort nodded. "After I have finished here, I shall stop by to see if I can gather any information from the boy."
"Of course, although I had to give him the Draught of Living Death, so there may be nothing to find at this time."
Voldemort nodded again, this time with impatience. "Very well. Go see to him, and I shall be by later."
Snape bowed and retreated through the gates. He didn't dare let his relief show until he was safely home again, and by then he had other things on his mind, such as the sobbing girl tied up in his chair, and the boy who lay dying on his floor.
When he looked at Weasley, he swore. The wound had started bleeding again.
He turned to Granger and freed her, though he didn't lower his wand. "You will follow my directions exactly. You will not try to attack me; you will not try to escape. If you do not obey me, Weasley will die. Do you understand?"
The girl nodded mutely, still sniffling, but quickly regaining the resolve and composure he'd been impressed by earlier. She didn't move except to wipe her nose with her sleeve, which seemed to disgust her as much as it did him. He conjured a handkerchief and tossed it to her. "Clean yourself up quickly then kneel beside Weasley, beside the cauldron."
He wasn't surprised when she complied without hesitation. He knew by the way she looked at Weasley that there was nothing she wouldn't do for him. He understood that feeling; he found himself sympathizing.
He knelt on the other side of the boy. He instructed her again on how to clean and treat Weasley, and soon they had fallen into the same rhythm they'd had before he'd been summoned. It would have been almost relaxing if the situation hadn't been so urgent.
"Sir?" Her voice startled him, even though it was so quiet as to be almost inaudible.
"Yes?"
"Why am I here?"
Snape stiffened, but quickly forced himself to relax. "The Dark Lord gifted you to me."
He heard a tiny 'oh' and then nothing. He tensed for the following 'why', but it didn't come. As the minutes passed, he kept half expecting her to say something else, but she never did. She just did as she was instructed and gave Weasley mournful glances. He was surprised she didn't ask more questions, although he was more than grateful she hadn't. He had a difficult line to tread until the Dark Lord had come and gone.
And, truth be told, he hoped she never did ask why. He wasn't sure he could explain without coming off as a gushing fool. Or a dirty old man.
They worked in silence, trying to regain the ground lost during his Summons, but it was slow going. Just as the wound was starting to knit together, there was a knock on his door. Biting back a curse, he instructed Hermione to continue while he rose to get the door.
As expected, the Dark Lord was waiting on the other side. Severus opened the door wide and bowed him in. Voldemort looked around the room, although his eyes seemed to remain on the boy and girl on the floor.
"Is he ready?"
"No, my Lord. As you can see, his wound is still fragile. I dare not revive him until the skin doesn't want to split apart anymore."
Voldemort nodded, not looking surprised. "I paid a visit to the Manor on my way here. Bellatrix admitted that the poison is one of her newer inventions. She hasn't yet developed an antidote."
Snape snorted. "Has she ever?"
Voldemort's mouth quirked up. "She does tend to lose her drive once she gets what she wants. I suppose her experiments are no exception."
Voldemort's eyes were fastened on Hermione, and Snape didn't like the hungry expression.
"You said you have looked in the Mudblood's mind?"
"Yes, Master, although you are free to look for yourself."
Voldemort nodded, but made no move to reach for Hermione. She was tense; Snape could see she was listening to them, but she kept her eyes down and continued working on Weasley.
There was a moment of silence before Snape realized Voldemort was waiting for something. Mentally cursing, he outwardly apologized and offered the Dark Lord a seat and some wine. Voldemort immediately took the chair Hermione had been in, but declined the wine.
Conversation didn't seem to be in keeping with the Dark Lord's mood, so Severus stayed silent. He maintained his obedient facade, although the way Voldemort's eyes never left the girl made him very nervous. Soon enough came the words he was dreading.
"I am afraid I do not understand your taste for Mudbloods, Severus."
"And I am afraid I can not readily explain it, my Lord."
"The Potter girl I could almost understand. You had been friends with her before entering Hogwarts, is that not so?"
"Yes, my Lord."
"And I could see she was a fiery sort, the kind to bring passion to the bed. Not to mention that bedding your enemy's wife must have been extremely tempting for you. Yes, I could see why you would have wanted her."
Voldemort paused, running his bony fingertips along his mouth for a moment, while still gazing at Hermione's back.
"This one, I am having more trouble understanding. Tell me, what was she like as a student?"
Snape glanced at Granger. Judging by her posture, she was as uncomfortable with this conversation as he was. "She was an overachiever. Always doing three times the amount of work required, always striving to be the very best."
Voldemort chuckled softly. "Yes, I can see how that could be appealing."
Snape smiled his greasiest smile, though he was feeling rather ill. "And, as you noted for Lily, Miss Granger has the added benefit of being close to our enemy. Close enough to hurt."
Voldemort nodded approvingly. "Yes. Bellatrix mentioned that she told him of the girl's fate. I hear he didn't take it very well."
Snape chuckled. "No, I imagine not. In fact, I expect this will tear him apart more thoroughly than even Black's demise did."
Snape was surprised to see Voldemort flinch just slightly, although he wondered if he had imagined it when Voldemort started smiling.
"Yes. I imagine this will hurt him even more."
Voldemort lapsed into silence which Snape did not dare break, though he was itching to know what punishment the Dark Lord had meted out. They both watched Hermione work, mesmerized by her rhythmic motions. Suddenly, Voldemort stood and strode over to Hermione to observe her motions more closely.
He inspected Weasley's wound from behind her, and Severus was impressed that she paused only a fraction. He wondered if it was courage or love that kept her going. He didn't stop to think that it could have been courage borne of love.
"It seems the boy's wound has finally closed. Stand up, girl."
At that, Hermione paused, the cloth in her hand dripping potion into the cauldron. Snape stood to force her up, but before he could reach her, she had discarded the cloth and stood up, looking directly at Voldemort's shoes.
"Look at me, girl," he said.
She obeyed and then tensed as Voldemort plunged into her mind. Snape waited, forcing himself to breathe normally and to suppress any fear he felt. The Dark Lord held her in his gaze for so long, Snape was starting to get nervous, though he kept his mind from wandering toward his doubts. Finally, after several more minutes, Voldemort withdrew, looking intrigued. Hermione immediately looked away, biting her lip as if to keep from crying.
"Bellatrix's story seems to be true, except for her fib about not recognizing the girl. Potter refused to tell the girl what he was planning, so one day, she left. I should warn you, Severus, she is a fiery one. She intends to fight you every step of the way."
Snape smirked. "Ah, but that is part of the fun, my Lord. And, if it grows tiresome, there is always Imperio."
Voldemort chuckled again, this time with less tension. "Yes."
He looked down at Hermione, who had taken up her post again as Weasley's wound was starting to reopen.
"It seems that Weasley was in on whatever Potter was plotting. Your potion is obviously only delaying the inevitable, though. Take him to Hogwarts. Pomfrey should be able to mend him well enough for our purposes in no time."
Snape bowed his head, not knowing whether he was relieved or worried.
"Of course, my Lord."
Voldemort smiled and put his hand on Severus' shoulder. "I am sorry you have to put work first yet again."
Voldemort made to leave, but Snape stopping him with a quick, "Master..." Voldemort turned back, curiously. "I know it is not in my place to ask, but has Bellatrix been punished for seeking revenge on me through the girl?"
Voldemort looked at Snape with an inscrutable expression for a long moment before responding, "She has been punished. However, she has yet to feel the brunt of my disappointment."
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177 Reviews | 7.21/10 Average
Beyond awesome!!
I really liked the gradual shifting of Severus & Hermione's emotions & perceptions of each other, thank you for sharing!
Whew! What a battle scene - I'm still catching my breath! And while my inner fangirl was looking for a kiss between our protagonists, my inner critical reader realizes that this is the best way to end the story. Hermione's need for shelter is over, and they can leave the future to another day. :D
Absolutely top-notch story!
With apologies for not posting a review until this far along, I just have to say how much I love this story, the way you've rewritten DH, and the pacing that seems very, very right.
I've been moved to laughter and tears so many times already. But this chapter and the last, where Snape and Hermione have begun to realize the changes in their relationship, and just how important they are to each other, have simply been joys to read.
And those cliffhangers you keep insisting on inserting at chapter end - I'm so glad I'm reading this as a completed work!
Congratulations, by the way, on being featured on the SSHG Quiz as a prolific author - that was my impetus for looking through your stories. I know I read Marry a Choice and Dying in the Cold in my lurking days, and I'm sure I've read others, but it's so wonderful to find some really high quality sshg stories that are still new to me, like this one. :D
Excellent story! I was hooked from the first sentence. Please, please! Sequel! Glad I found the story on the SSHG Quiz. Love your work.
Excellent story babe. Thank you so very much for writing it.
Loves you, Sonia :)
p.s. I told you I would get to reading this eventually, and today seemed like the perfect day!
Ah! A lovely story. I've been away from reading it for a few months as I worked my way through life and the Exchange. It's great to be back, and to see updates to my favorite fics. This is such a well written story. The characters really have life to them. And watching them as they change is great. Thank you for sharing.
I really enjoyed reading this story - a true alternate universe with believable characters. Your writing was excellent and just drew me in from the beginning. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story.
I waited until the end to review, mostly because I waited til the end was posted before I read...but I'm regretting that wait. I think it ended wonderfully, what a lovely story and alternate to the actual book. Thank you for sharing!
I've really enjoyed this story. I like how you developed Hermione and Severus' relationship. Interesting battle scene. Thank you for a wonderful story.
This is such an enjoyable take on the story. I am wishing this was the true story. I like these people all working together. Amazing work!!!
An epilogue, please? If not, thank you soooo much for sharing Shelter with all of us. It has been an intense ride, but each update has been such a joy to read. I really loved how you handled the developing relationship between SS and HG, which is full of possibilities for the future, but based on a very solid, mutual trust and (perhaps) reliability. I will miss this very much.
Very nice tale about deception all in the name of trying to do what is right while placating the wrong.
You had me a bit worried there at the end with the Dementors, but all worked out ok. I kind of like the open ending. All I needed to know was that they lived and remained friends. Nicely done.
What a great story! You definitely have a way with words and descriptions.
I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you continue to write more stories.
Thanks for sharing your work!
Am I terrible to say that I'll take the loss of Hagrid over Severus any day? Nicely done there, even if they still have to look for the stupid snake. A boar is a good choice and it is better than a hedgehog, LOL!
Epilogue,please?
Another wonderfully written and plotted story from you. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it! I think the ending was very true to the burgeoning friendship between Snape and Hermione -- here's hoping for a continuation! Keep up the great work.
Well done! I'm sorry Minerva died, but she was always a brash Gryffindor and she died fighting baddies and protecting her cubs. Snape's new Patronus is interesting -- a wild boar, a dangerous fighter. Very impressed that Severus was first to launch his Patronus, leading the others in casting theirs. Yay for the victory! And yay for Severus and Hermione having an open ending. THANK YOU for writing. Happy Thanksgiving!
That was a good ending. It's too soon for them to be anything but friends, but you left it open for our imagination. :)
Definitely left open for a sequel. Is that what you had in mind?
Most of the deaths you left rather ambiguous which I like (that way I can pretend they were just hexed unconscious).
I thought the new patronus was appropriate. After all, the boar is Hogwarts mascot and Severus had become the students protector with Albus gone.
A good read. Thanks.
Merci beaucoup. Félicitation pour la scène finale . J'ai toujours été frustrée que Severus ne donne pas la pleine mesure de son talent sur le champps de bataille.
Quite a realistic ending, actually. For a moment there, I was afraid you were going to have them all killed off by Dementors. I prefer what you actually did.
I am exhausted. There were so many things happening at the same time that I'm in awe that you were able to write it so well that it made sense. Well done!
I was so worried when Severus wouldn't wake up. Thank goodness that he finally did. I don't think I could have stood it if anything had happened to him or Hermione.
Go, Neville! Bellatrix got exactly what she deserved.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out, but I've enjoyed reading it so much that I'm not looking forward to the last chapter.
Beth
I like a strong Molly who isn't a cariacature of everyone's worst in-law nightmare. That was a brilliantly bloody battle. Whoo, I'm alliterative tonight. Good chapter, I am both looking forward to and dreading the end.
LUNA!!!! Ack!!! And what was that spell that knocked Severus for a loop??