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Chapter 16 of 25
averygoodunAU. Fatigued, Snape makes a mistake that could cost the wizarding world everything.
Thanks to Ayerf and Septentrion! *smooches*
Both Snape and Hermione were fully ensconced in their research when the fire flared green. The two raised their heads in unison, and Hermione shrank out of the fireplace's line of sight. Snape waved his wand, lowering the ward he'd placed on the Floo, and McGonagall's head appeared.
"Headmaster," she said, sounding primmer than usual. "I have the Transfiguration curriculum you demanded to see."
"Excellent. You may bring it through."
Hermione came out of hiding, still gripping her book to her chest as the fire twirled and Minerva stepped out, brushing her robes automatically while looking around. She visibly relaxed after her cursory inspection and offered the other two a tight smile.
"It took a bit of searching, but the Grey Lady should be visiting you after the Carrows have gone to bed."
Snape nodded. "Thank you, Minerva. I trust there were no issues in receiving the message?"
"Fortunately, the Carrows aren't in the habit of taking evening tea with me anymore."
Hermione fought showing her surprise when Snape sniggered. "No, I imagine they aren't fond of what you served."
McGonagall's eyes twinkled merrily. "Kibble isn't to everyone's taste, I grant you, but it was the finest kibble in Scotland!"
She and Snape shared a look before breaking down in laughter.
"Oh, Severus, it is so good to have you back."
Snape leaned back in his chair. Hermione couldn't quite read his expression, but it seemed guarded again. "I'm surprised you missed me at all. I was gone hardly a week before you yourself left."
McGonagall waved his comment away. "You know very well what I mean, young man. I am glad our faith in you - our prior faith in you," she added at a sour look from Snape, "was merited. It hurt terribly to think the headmaster had been fooled."
"And it didn't hurt to think you'd been fooled?"
"Severus Snape..." McGonagall pursed her lips with a huff. "Of course it hurt personally, but it hurt far more to think that we had placed our trust in Dumbledore if he could be fooled so easily."
Snape snorted. "Trust me, Minerva, there is nothing easy about deceiving."
"No, I imagine there isn't," she said softly.
A stubborn silence descended before Hermione lost patience and moved toward her chair. She placed the book on the desk, making McGonagall twitch visibly.
"Sorry if I startled you, Professor."
McGonagall shook her head. "I owe you an apology, Miss Granger. Severus and I have been carrying on as if no one else was around. Please do come join us."
Hermione saw Snape raise his eyebrow at McGonagall. "I believe it is my office, Minerva. I should be the one offering the invitations."
McGonagall waved his words aside again. "Yes, but we both know you're hopeless when it comes to social graces with the students."
Snape opened his mouth to retort, but closed it again when Hermione said, "He's been very gracious to me, Professor."
McGonagall opened her mouth, looking flustered, when Snape, surprisingly, came to her rescue. "Ah, but you aren't a student right now, are you Miss Granger?"
Both women nodded in concession, rather sheepishly.
Hermione thought Snape looked amused, but his voice betrayed nothing when he switched topics and asked McGonagall whether she'd had any luck talking with the rebelling students.
"I had a quick word with Mr. Creevey, but I didn't have time for much warning or instruction. I did suggest that careful planning would be advisable."
Snape's mouth twisted. "I suppose that's all that can be expected. I assume they've all disappeared?"
McGonagall nodded. "The dormitories are empty."
"Good."
Hermione looked between the two teachers, confused.
"The students are gone?"
"In hiding, yes," McGonagall said distractedly.
"But... where?"
Snape grinned. "I have not tried to confirm it, but my guess is the Room of Requirement?"
McGonagall nodded. "I believe so." She saw Hermione was still confused and explained. "The Carrows have brought with them a rather barbaric standard for punishing children. After the first serious hospital visit a first year Hufflepuff who nearly died the students began hiding each other. I believe Mr. Longbottom is the official leader of the rebellion, but I think it was Miss Weasley who thought to use the Room as a sanctuary. Mostly it's used by those students who are particularly active in the rebellion, as they are the ones at most risk now. Needless to say, most of the students who take refuge there are either Gryffindors or Hufflepuffs."
"Hufflepuffs?" Hermione said in surprise, before she could stop herself.
"Fierce loyalty is not something to be trifled with, Miss Granger," Snape said with a wry smile.
"Of course. I just..."
"Was overwhelmed with Gryffindor superiority? I know."
Hermione and McGonagall both huffed, though rather half-heartedly.
"So, do the students come out at all?"
"A few don't dare anymore. Mr. Longbottom, for example, is supposed to be brought before Severus for immediate and severe punishment should he be captured. I dare say he wouldn't survive the encounter, as there's no political merit to his survival, unlike with Miss Lovegood."
Hermione looked at Snape in time to see him wilt just a little. Not much, but the burden became obvious, and it was heartbreaking to see.
"How do they do it?" Hermione mused, as much to herself as to the teachers.
"The castle was built with sieges in mind. I do not doubt there is an emergency exit hidden nearby, or possibly even within, that room."
"But food?"
Snape smiled with what looked like true satisfaction. "The house-elves take orders from me, not the Carrows."
Hermione blinked. She then shook her head slowly. "Amazing. And yet, I imagine that every single one of them hates you more than they hate Vo-- Snake Face."
"Which is as it should be. They have been carefully trained to see me as the villain. I do not want them seeing me as anything else."
Hermione accepted this, but still looked down with a frown. "Still," she said to her hands, "it must be terrible living that role."
"Sentimentality, Miss Granger."
She snorted, but nodded and looked up, meeting his eye with a wry smile. "Yes. Can't forget you truly are a bastard, can we?"
"Never."
They shared a smile, though soon remembered they had an audience, an audience who looked terribly intrigued, though slightly suspicious.
Snape rolled his eyes. "You can relax, Minerva. I have not touched your cub, nor do I plan to."
"And has she touched you?"
Snape and Hermione both gaped, wide-eyed at the old witch. "NO!" they cried in unison.
She chuckled. "That's good, then."
"Minerva, so help me..."
"Oh, save it for the Death Eaters, you scoundrel," she replied with a soft smile.
Snape shook his head, looking disgusted, though Hermione couldn't tell if he was disgusted, or merely trying not to smile.
She didn't really have time to think about it, however, because in the next moment the ghost of a beautiful woman slipped into the room, curtseying to all of them.
"You wished to see me, Headmaster?" she said stiffly.
"Yes. Thank you for coming, my lady."
McGonagall stood. "Should I leave?"
Snape thought for a moment before shaking his head. "You are my eyes and ears now."
Minerva smiled, and Hermione noticed her eyes had a rather misty look to them as she sat back down and turned her attention to the Grey Lady. Hermione tried to give the ghost her attention, but found her eyes kept veering back to Snape.
"My lady, I was wondering if you might be able to help us. We are looking for Ravenclaw's diadem and thought perhaps you might know of its whereabouts."
The Grey Lady paused a fraction too long before saying, "I cannot help you."
"Cannot or will not."
"I have no knowledge of where it now resides."
"So you once knew?"
A cold, bitter smile crossed the lady's face. "Yes."
Snape took a breath in and released it slowly. "My Lady, it is imperative we find the diadem. Without it, the war is lost."
"I care not whether your lord wins."
"Do you care if he is defeated?" Hermione cut in, seeing Snape's face grow taut.
The Grey Lady looked down at her, and Hermione was forcefully reminded of Narcissa Malfoy. She fought the urge to sneer back.
"I would like nothing better than to see him suffer for all he has done."
"Wonderful! Then please tell us what you know of the diadem. We need it to help destroy him."
"The wisdom it bestows is unlikely to help you win a war."
Hermione shook her head impatiently. "We don't want to use it, but it's essential that we find it."
"I cannot help you."
"I understand you don't know where it is, but anything you can tell us could be of use. I mean, where did you last see it?"
The Grey Lady looked down at all of them, then said, keeping her eyes on Hermione, "He," she flicked her hand toward Snape, "wears the mark of his lord. I will not tell you."
"Why? He is loyal to Dumbledore. And to us."
"I will not tell him."
She turned to leave, when Hermione sprang up and shouted, "Stop!" The ghost paused. "Please, will you tell Professor McGonagall and me?"
The Grey Lady paused before looking over her shoulder and saying, "You are wasting your time." She then disappeared through the stone wall.
Hermione gaped at the wall, irrational anger rising in her. "Of all the unhelpful... just..." she spluttered, becoming incoherent. A light touch on her fist brought her attention back to the room in general, and Snape in particular.
"It is to be expected, Hermione," he said, withdrawing his hand. "She is just trying to protect Hogwarts."
"From you, you mean." Hermione didn't know whether she was angrier at the Grey Lady for her attitude of superiority or at Snape for his blithe acceptance of everyone's expectations of villainy.
She shook her head and tried to breathe through the anger, though she felt her face take on a pugnacious look.
"She knows something. I know it."
"But whether that information would be of use to us is another matter," Snape pointed out caustically. "We know several things, after all, but none of them is the location."
Hermione pursed her lips and leaned back in her chair. "Fair enough. But surely the more information we have, the clearer the picture?"
She noticed Snape and McGonagall sharing a look and pressed herself further back into the chair, unamused.
McGonagall got up. "I can't think of anything to offer at the moment, so I will hie myself away to bed. Should you have any tasks, please let me know," she said to Snape. She rested a hand on Hermione's shoulder for a moment, saying, "We will prevail."
Hermione clenched her jaw to prevent herself from saying anything she might regret. As it was, she was rather overwhelmed with disappointment.
She did not look up to watch McGonagall disappear through the Floo, though she heard the flames roar to life then quieten. She instead sat and stewed
She had been so certain that the ghost would be the key to locating the diadem, but instead, it was another dead end. It was almost more frustrating than running around with no leads whatsoever. Almost.
With that perspective, she took another deep breath and raised her head.
"Done sulking?" Snape asked sarcastically.
"No, but I can put it off till later."
"Good." Snape hesitated. "Minerva may be right, for all her idiotic Gryffindor sentimentality. We are close to the end."
Hermione smiled bitterly. "Yes. So very close."
Snape handed her book back to her, but she shook her head. "The answer isn't in there. I think Professor McGonagall has the right idea. I'm going to go get some sleep."
She felt Snape's eyes on her as she made her way to the bedroom, but couldn't bring herself to look at him. She couldn't bear even one more dram of disappointment from the day.
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177 Reviews | 7.21/10 Average
Beyond awesome!!
I really liked the gradual shifting of Severus & Hermione's emotions & perceptions of each other, thank you for sharing!
Whew! What a battle scene - I'm still catching my breath! And while my inner fangirl was looking for a kiss between our protagonists, my inner critical reader realizes that this is the best way to end the story. Hermione's need for shelter is over, and they can leave the future to another day. :D
Absolutely top-notch story!
With apologies for not posting a review until this far along, I just have to say how much I love this story, the way you've rewritten DH, and the pacing that seems very, very right.
I've been moved to laughter and tears so many times already. But this chapter and the last, where Snape and Hermione have begun to realize the changes in their relationship, and just how important they are to each other, have simply been joys to read.
And those cliffhangers you keep insisting on inserting at chapter end - I'm so glad I'm reading this as a completed work!
Congratulations, by the way, on being featured on the SSHG Quiz as a prolific author - that was my impetus for looking through your stories. I know I read Marry a Choice and Dying in the Cold in my lurking days, and I'm sure I've read others, but it's so wonderful to find some really high quality sshg stories that are still new to me, like this one. :D
Excellent story! I was hooked from the first sentence. Please, please! Sequel! Glad I found the story on the SSHG Quiz. Love your work.
Excellent story babe. Thank you so very much for writing it.
Loves you, Sonia :)
p.s. I told you I would get to reading this eventually, and today seemed like the perfect day!
Ah! A lovely story. I've been away from reading it for a few months as I worked my way through life and the Exchange. It's great to be back, and to see updates to my favorite fics. This is such a well written story. The characters really have life to them. And watching them as they change is great. Thank you for sharing.
I really enjoyed reading this story - a true alternate universe with believable characters. Your writing was excellent and just drew me in from the beginning. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story.
I waited until the end to review, mostly because I waited til the end was posted before I read...but I'm regretting that wait. I think it ended wonderfully, what a lovely story and alternate to the actual book. Thank you for sharing!
I've really enjoyed this story. I like how you developed Hermione and Severus' relationship. Interesting battle scene. Thank you for a wonderful story.
This is such an enjoyable take on the story. I am wishing this was the true story. I like these people all working together. Amazing work!!!
An epilogue, please? If not, thank you soooo much for sharing Shelter with all of us. It has been an intense ride, but each update has been such a joy to read. I really loved how you handled the developing relationship between SS and HG, which is full of possibilities for the future, but based on a very solid, mutual trust and (perhaps) reliability. I will miss this very much.
Very nice tale about deception all in the name of trying to do what is right while placating the wrong.
You had me a bit worried there at the end with the Dementors, but all worked out ok. I kind of like the open ending. All I needed to know was that they lived and remained friends. Nicely done.
What a great story! You definitely have a way with words and descriptions.
I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you continue to write more stories.
Thanks for sharing your work!
Am I terrible to say that I'll take the loss of Hagrid over Severus any day? Nicely done there, even if they still have to look for the stupid snake. A boar is a good choice and it is better than a hedgehog, LOL!
Epilogue,please?
Another wonderfully written and plotted story from you. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it! I think the ending was very true to the burgeoning friendship between Snape and Hermione -- here's hoping for a continuation! Keep up the great work.
Well done! I'm sorry Minerva died, but she was always a brash Gryffindor and she died fighting baddies and protecting her cubs. Snape's new Patronus is interesting -- a wild boar, a dangerous fighter. Very impressed that Severus was first to launch his Patronus, leading the others in casting theirs. Yay for the victory! And yay for Severus and Hermione having an open ending. THANK YOU for writing. Happy Thanksgiving!
That was a good ending. It's too soon for them to be anything but friends, but you left it open for our imagination. :)
Definitely left open for a sequel. Is that what you had in mind?
Most of the deaths you left rather ambiguous which I like (that way I can pretend they were just hexed unconscious).
I thought the new patronus was appropriate. After all, the boar is Hogwarts mascot and Severus had become the students protector with Albus gone.
A good read. Thanks.
Merci beaucoup. Félicitation pour la scène finale . J'ai toujours été frustrée que Severus ne donne pas la pleine mesure de son talent sur le champps de bataille.
Quite a realistic ending, actually. For a moment there, I was afraid you were going to have them all killed off by Dementors. I prefer what you actually did.
I am exhausted. There were so many things happening at the same time that I'm in awe that you were able to write it so well that it made sense. Well done!
I was so worried when Severus wouldn't wake up. Thank goodness that he finally did. I don't think I could have stood it if anything had happened to him or Hermione.
Go, Neville! Bellatrix got exactly what she deserved.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out, but I've enjoyed reading it so much that I'm not looking forward to the last chapter.
Beth
I like a strong Molly who isn't a cariacature of everyone's worst in-law nightmare. That was a brilliantly bloody battle. Whoo, I'm alliterative tonight. Good chapter, I am both looking forward to and dreading the end.
LUNA!!!! Ack!!! And what was that spell that knocked Severus for a loop??